im kinda dissappointed bud i was thinking u were gonna make a story rap for this beat u know some voice acting maybe throw in some adlibs to compliment wat u were spittin but it seemed like u collaborated and all of u guys started rappin in circles wat u hear in a typical song. this beat goes hard as fuck so with that said u gotta go hard 2 but on a good note ur lyrics are on point ur flow is rock solid and u guys got good voices. think outside the box a bit more and ill hear u on the radio soon
@Beholdendamage thanks for the constructive critism. our goal was to keep the whole futuristic space theme but it didn't work out with all of our verses. i feel you though
im kinda dissappointed bud i was thinking u were gonna make a story rap for this beat u know some voice acting maybe throw in some adlibs to compliment wat u were spittin but it seemed like u collaborated and all of u guys started rappin in circles wat u hear in a typical song. this beat goes hard as fuck so with that said u gotta go hard 2 but on a good note ur lyrics are on point ur flow is rock solid and u guys got good voices. think outside the box a bit more and ill hear u on the radio soon
Beholdendamage 1 month ago
@Beholdendamage thanks for the constructive critism. our goal was to keep the whole futuristic space theme but it didn't work out with all of our verses. i feel you though
SmileyNahsaVotV 3 weeks ago
@SmileyNahsaVotV its all good bro thats the beauty of rap u only get more better with it as u go
Beholdendamage 3 weeks ago
First dude was good
tubeddup 1 month ago
@tubeddup thanks brah
SmileyNahsaVotV 3 weeks ago
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724lilman 1 month ago
This is pretty good.
ImMakingThisForShits 1 month ago