Pretty good shit... I was like prepared to just put garbage but giving it a thorough listen was well worth it.... And as for the next Eminem... do any really listen to some of his Lyrics (Eminem) like the song "3 A.M." WTF you just forget about killing people... garbage writing. This shit makes more sense than most of eminem's lyrics
your actually good..i thought this was going to be some whack shit for me to laugh at but you're pretty good..better than i expected and better than some of the rappers in the game..did you make the beat as well as write your lyrics and mixed and produced it? your definitely better than the other youtube white guy "grimyghost" lol
Your voice is good, and your lyrics are fine, but you're out-of-sync with the beat. Your timing fluctuates too much. Other than that, you aren't totally shitty.
ya ya thats my boy ghost FREE ACAL
markmats22 1 year ago
great song!
madeleine189 2 years ago
keywords: "outside of philly"
bobadankfett 2 years ago
this is fuckin straight man. put this into an mp3. i want it on my ipod. u can go far with what your doin.
nice shitt
dlohin4224 2 years ago
nice. life in ccprison sucks. celly to me remember spittin nasty shit people shittin.
N-block wassup.
wokeymcsmeedness 2 years ago
nice
ThePlaymaker15 2 years ago
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6Sparkz 2 years ago
try n get this shit on iTunes
Vash2192 2 years ago
ur sick as hell
JiMMyJaM08061991 2 years ago
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2036133 2 years ago
this is good man i like it.
Vash2192 2 years ago
u got it...now you just need to make a club banga and push it to the stations.
dlaun15 2 years ago
pretty sick thought it would be crappy but gudd job bud
pacizbak 2 years ago
some HIP HOP right here man u spittin it ... wish rap was still like this now days
leathaface22 2 years ago
this is hot. ima promote you all over myspace and FB. you got talent. you cant even be compared to eminem.
MrProductionzZ 2 years ago
goob job man
qwertypunkrock 2 years ago
this is some sick shit
mouse3e 2 years ago
love da hook
chuckleztbrennan 2 years ago
Pretty good shit... I was like prepared to just put garbage but giving it a thorough listen was well worth it.... And as for the next Eminem... do any really listen to some of his Lyrics (Eminem) like the song "3 A.M." WTF you just forget about killing people... garbage writing. This shit makes more sense than most of eminem's lyrics
BlikerBlah 2 years ago
nice cut boy
birdass32 2 years ago
Damn.
your really good :]
KOORiiCHiiCK 2 years ago
wow thas some dank shit yall the next eminem maybe
MrMcmancool 2 years ago
reminds me of Eminem... no offense? but yeah youre pretty good. I like the saying in the beginning, nice. I hope you get far.
Spankztah 2 years ago
pretty good, i subscribed.
goblue10nis 2 years ago
hey nice man! nice saying too..the shadow thing!
zachmoore123 2 years ago
holla at me, I got beats for ya.
trahouston 2 years ago
ikilledsanta123 fuck off thats some good shett ....keep it gooing
Nebuncugerean 2 years ago
That was fucking good !
Keep it up!
TheThirdGerman 2 years ago
you gonn make it in the gamee
iight keeep it up dog
tgrazbaseball93 2 years ago
You're horrible. Stop rapping and get a job at McDonald's. With luck, you may be able to become assistant manager before you retire.
ikilledsanta123 2 years ago
your actually good..i thought this was going to be some whack shit for me to laugh at but you're pretty good..better than i expected and better than some of the rappers in the game..did you make the beat as well as write your lyrics and mixed and produced it? your definitely better than the other youtube white guy "grimyghost" lol
michaelfrancais 2 years ago
he didnt make the beat, its a Mister KA freebeat
dakachronic 2 years ago
your good x :)
Superbabelove 2 years ago
keep practicing u ite though pretty good actually try and make your lyrics very meaningful
skillage444 2 years ago
Your voice is good, and your lyrics are fine, but you're out-of-sync with the beat. Your timing fluctuates too much. Other than that, you aren't totally shitty.
AHarris128 2 years ago
U just as fly as EMINEM 50 cent Asher Roth Young Buck 2pac and too $hort
rab396 2 years ago