Could I grab your attention for 4 minutes, please? If you enjoyed this short film, I would like you to check out my short film as well. I am a young artist from London, and my short film 'Ashes' is available to be viewed on my channel. It is the first video that comes up.
Please view it and tell me what you think - I appreciate each comment, each view, each feedback.
Glad to see there are still gentlemen out there who believe in, "ladies first." If I had produced this clip he would've gone in the water first. Instead of a concrete block, she would've sat on him to hold him underwater. Finally he would've decided not to die and there would be a happy ending LOL.
She couldn't lift that little block off herself??? Lame. Needs more gym membership. Also, the dude looked way too calm. I had a hard time figuring out the plot. Was there a plot? Otherwise, good cinematography. Hope you won he contest!!
Wow that was very impressive, I definitely should have read the info first tho. I thought this was a sex game some reason! lol but still its very good film when I understood it properly.
Ok, wtf LOL . I dont understand why you handcuff someone, make them drown then they die, and you recussatate them WTF? WHY is this based on a film!? EXPLAIN PWEASE
i like the video, just a few points that i think could use a little improvement (very minor)
when the video starts, there is like 1-2 seconds till the guy says something, i think it shoudl just be a little longer.. and its unclear (to me) what he said..
i do like the use of the warm/cool colors to indicate a change
Good job babe. I think that the cinder block is heavy because you can see the male actor (Erica) sort of straining to put the cinder block on top of her.
The only thing I didn't like, was the CPR. His hands should have been further down to really sell it.
Maybe he didn't know how to do CPR which is why she didn't come back to life.
holy crap bro, that was intense and trippy as hell... Loved the quality and the shots and the style....awesome...wish ya the best of luck in the contest... thats got winner written all over it.
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Could I grab your attention for 4 minutes, please? If you enjoyed this short film, I would like you to check out my short film as well. I am a young artist from London, and my short film 'Ashes' is available to be viewed on my channel. It is the first video that comes up.
Please view it and tell me what you think - I appreciate each comment, each view, each feedback.
Thank you so much ♥
ArlaAabbaOfficial 5 days ago
Glad to see there are still gentlemen out there who believe in, "ladies first." If I had produced this clip he would've gone in the water first. Instead of a concrete block, she would've sat on him to hold him underwater. Finally he would've decided not to die and there would be a happy ending LOL.
offtheshoulderpro 5 days ago
a bit brutal but yeah, breathless :)
talashtv 1 week ago
pretty good, she should do a parody of the shower scene from psycho
RCS0388 3 weeks ago
Shot brilliantly and colour corrected nicely. Didn't quite understand it, i assumed a magic trick gone wrong perhaps. Girl looked hot too.
BRAKEPK 1 month ago
does anyone else remember seeing a vid kinda like this before? Only it was real and he had a small camera crew to bring him back later... creepy
VikiIsAwesome 2 months ago
wow. NICE.
Lovely ending, I need to know what said "you sure" !!!
Great sound btw, works beautifully.
LukeEarnshaw 2 months ago
She couldn't lift that little block off herself??? Lame. Needs more gym membership. Also, the dude looked way too calm. I had a hard time figuring out the plot. Was there a plot? Otherwise, good cinematography. Hope you won he contest!!
cpo2u 2 months ago
why has no one commented on the tits?
MegaphoneDub 2 months ago
Wow that was very impressive, I definitely should have read the info first tho. I thought this was a sex game some reason! lol but still its very good film when I understood it properly.
SardonicFilms 2 months ago
GUYS CHECK OUT MY 3 MINUTE VIDEO ON MY CHANNEL, VERY POWERFUL AND EMOTIONAL.
filmster6989 2 months ago
this is great make more drowning clips
AnimeUW 2 months ago
i think the guy was looking too cool about the whole thing.. He is not convincing.
Other than that, camera, your script, everything is so so cool....
sujatatibre 2 months ago
This is good work. Love the struggle scene in the tub. That was well done.
cscdigitalgraphics 2 months ago
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I actually held my breath with her....this film was well executed. Good work.
alvaburroughs 2 months ago
I actually held my breath with her....this film was well executed. Good work.
alvaburroughs 2 months ago
not bad
SicPuppyPro 3 months ago
I feel like Im choking! oh god :-&
Youre a brilliant movie maker but for god's sake change the subject for your future works!
GTheBlackElk 3 months ago
The CPR was ridiculous. Far too high on the chest and not enough pressure. You need to make it more realistic.
ryanhaart 3 months ago 2
Ok, wtf LOL . I dont understand why you handcuff someone, make them drown then they die, and you recussatate them WTF? WHY is this based on a film!? EXPLAIN PWEASE
KrazieSpazz 3 months ago
I am not a big horror film fan. That said this short film is very cool as it gets the point across fast and realy scary. Cheers! Good job!
blackhawkphotos 6 months ago
Loves it! Good job Lewis
niomi513 8 months ago
wow that was pretty good
jessicaH5140 1 year ago
that was very well done!
kiksogue 1 year ago
Very nice and more than worth the watch!
Judae 1 year ago
Great work
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MEOSHABEAN1 1 year ago
This was McFfin wonderful!
mysninjadoll 1 year ago
stirleen mama! you were great! -Felicia Nicole
ricannicole 1 year ago
i like the video, just a few points that i think could use a little improvement (very minor)
when the video starts, there is like 1-2 seconds till the guy says something, i think it shoudl just be a little longer.. and its unclear (to me) what he said..
i do like the use of the warm/cool colors to indicate a change
maybe put the handcuffs behind her next time? lol
thats all :)
lighthalo 1 year ago
@lighthalo
Yeah, the contest only allowed us 3minutes. That's why it just starts off very quickly. lol I really wanted it to be longer.
And we tried the handcuffs behind her back, it just looked very awkward and wasn't as visually impressive as having it in front.
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!! : )
switch1386 1 year ago
Eric*
chrstnkimb 1 year ago
Good job babe. I think that the cinder block is heavy because you can see the male actor (Erica) sort of straining to put the cinder block on top of her.
The only thing I didn't like, was the CPR. His hands should have been further down to really sell it.
Maybe he didn't know how to do CPR which is why she didn't come back to life.
chrstnkimb 1 year ago
holy crap bro, that was intense and trippy as hell... Loved the quality and the shots and the style....awesome...wish ya the best of luck in the contest... thats got winner written all over it.
mdrproductionz 1 year ago
@mdrproductionz
Thanks alot!! I really appreciate it ^_^
switch1386 1 year ago
dude you are soooo worth the subscription!
SuperiFox 1 year ago
@SuperiFox
Thanks! Spread the word. I can use more subscribers : ) Appreciate you watching!
switch1386 1 year ago
@switch1386 welcome. what ever happened to that zombie movie a while back? i really want to watch that one!
SuperiFox 1 year ago
Intense!
AnnyaMoon 1 year ago
wow
Rohizzle13 1 year ago
Whoa!
RenderingGlintFilms 1 year ago
nice
walk888 1 year ago