Great Song, and an ok video narrative. I would try an unplugged version of the song, with Brian playing the guitar with angst as well. Him just singing while the young woman is displaying emotional issues is disconnected. If Brian is also is playing, singing and showing the same angst as her then both meld better in my opinion. One additional thought. Change the word "she in the song to "HE".
AWESOME !!!
mikiehuffman 2 months ago
@mikiehuffman Thanks Mike!
brianeldermusic 2 months ago
I'm in it so is my dad it me hunter
peaves22 3 months ago
@peaves22 Oh Ok..Hey Hunter. Thanks for being a part of it!
brianeldermusic 3 months ago
Great Song, and an ok video narrative. I would try an unplugged version of the song, with Brian playing the guitar with angst as well. Him just singing while the young woman is displaying emotional issues is disconnected. If Brian is also is playing, singing and showing the same angst as her then both meld better in my opinion. One additional thought. Change the word "she in the song to "HE".
obew0n2 3 months ago
@obew0n2 Hey Oliver, Thanks for the post and for listening!
brianeldermusic 3 months ago
This, just like the others got me to the core. Big props Brian!!
MSBluewings31 3 months ago in playlist More videos from brianeldermusic
@MSBluewings31 Thanks Christina!
brianeldermusic 3 months ago
its really good how many days of recording did you guys do i cant remember what my dad said
peaves22 3 months ago
@peaves22 Hey! Thank you! It took about a weeks worth of 10 to 12 hour days of recording. The editing and planning is what took the longest.
brianeldermusic 3 months ago