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  • your awesome dude. keep it up :D

  • I LOVE THIS!

  • Hey, can you send me the link? i clicked on it and it said the song was removed. can yu help a brotha out?

  • Many parts to my broken heart

    From the day when it felt apart.

    My whole world came crashing down

    But its fell with out a sound.

    All the love that u stole

    Left me standing in a hole.

    From the day my world fell apart

    I'm standing here with a broken heart.

  • I love this song! End of.

  • THIS IS NOT INSTRUEMTAL! ITS KARAOKE!

  • what iss the hook?

  • @747lolman i was thinking about her thinking about me thinking about us what we gonna be open my eyes it was just a dream

  • because I'm tired of falling and crying til my eyes are swollen.

  • Against my better judgement I tried to make it work again, I tried to prove that I Was a better man, it was cool when we started talking and hanging out again, I thought I was helping and healing, but turns out I was like a fish being reeled in, didn't listen to a damn word being said, so now to you and yours, I'm officially dead and it kills me to go to that end, becaue I don't know if we can ever make amends, but for now I'll just pretend like none of this ever happened, and keep on walking

  • nice beat by the way i think ill use this also for my mixtape if it sounds koo wit u bro?

  • Hey bro. Thanks for this man. Now i can do my remix's to this. many props to ya

  • lol. im currently singin this with any rap :D .. thanks bro :D suscribed :D

  • thanks for the beat!!! check my remix i made with it!!!

  • stuck in a daze, mind on the past, when i had sumone share my pad,make smile when im mad,bout u i wud brag to my boiz,they tell me stut up wit all da noise, seem like every slow song i listen to remind me of u.i messed up when i left u,now i regret steppin out on u

  • if u Ever Loved SomeBody Puht Yhur Handsz Uhp ,

    iCant Belive im Sitinq Here Wising it Was Just a dream

  • id put mine on but it might stolen -_-

  • IM TRYIN 2 MAKE SENSE OF ALL THE NONSENSE, THE THINGS U SAID I DID WAS OUT OF CONTEXT, DIDNT REALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT U MEANT, U FLIPPIN THE SCRIPT GOT THE TRUTH BENT, SAYING I WAS CHEATIN, ALWAYS LEAVIN, NEVER EVEN TALKED JUST FIGHTING SCREAMING, NEVER WAS PROUD OF ANYTHING I COMPLETED, BUT I EVERYTHING I DID WAS 4 US, AND ITS SAD BCUZ WHAT I WANT, U DONT GIVE A, I AINT EVEN GOTTA FINISH THE SENTENCE, USE UR IMAGINATION NOW WHATS OUTTA CONTEXT, IT WAS ALL JUST A DREAM AND MY BEST ONE YET

    *J-Roc*

  • hey what's up my brother is good your mixtape you're Hispanic you would like to leave my messenger I'm MEXICAN featurin make if you're interested eskl_hh@hot ... this is my msn we are in contact

  • This is so not instrumental.

  • @lulubellisawesome what's ur problem? . . it just has a HOOK!.. . . can't you READ????

  • @deejayextee Hey!!!! don't need to be so rude you know!!

  • @lulubellisawesome instrumental with hook, listen at 0:45

  • @slister006 sorry my mistake

  • Can I use this for my mixtape? If I give You Props?

  • @BrandenGuerra

    yea bro i dnt mind its not my beat i just added the hook onto it

  • @sbtaktikz THEN IMMA USE THIS FOR MY MIXTAPE THEN THANKS FOR PUTTING THE HOOK ON IT FOR ME

  • @BrandenGuerra your gay

    

  • @BrandenGuerra your gay

    

  • @McAwesome5540 Just a question bud your hung

  • dont use it its sucks

    listen to chorse its cuted ...

    take somthing else...

    i know my english suck...

  • WHEN SHE'S NOT WITH ME I FEEL SO ALONE, LIKE WHY AM I EVEN DOING THIS SONG?, I WOKE UP IN THIS DREAM WHERE I WAS THE BEST MAN I COULD BE, BUT ITS LIKE IM NOT BEING THE LEAD, TRYING TO UNDERSTAND THE LIFE THAT I LIVE, BUT HELL IM JUST A KID, 17 YEARS OLD AND TRYING TO REACH THE BIG DREAMS, NEVER THOUGHT YOU WERE GONNA BE THE ONE TO ACTUALLY LEAVE ME,

  • IM TRYIN TO FIGURE OUT WHAT I'D DO WITHOUT YOU IN MY LIFE THOT IT NEVER END I THOT YOU BE MY WIFE NOW I'M SITTING HERE & MY HEARTS OUTTA PLACE LOOK AT THE PICTURES THE MEMORIES & I SEE YOUR FACE AS MY HEART STARTS TO RACE I CANT SIT SO I PACE NOW THE EYES START TO BURN LIKE I TOOK A SHOT OF MASE. NOW IM TRAVELING DOWN THIS ROAD AS I TRY TO FIND MY WAY BACK HOME HOW I WISH I DIDNT HAVE TO DO THIS ALL ALONE. WHAT ID DO TO STILL SAY YOUR MY LADY. BABY WITHOUT YOU LATELY MY DAYS GOING CRAZY

  • Verse 1: This world we live in, it’s cursed Love is like a bomb waiting to explode That’s why every time we lock eyes I look away because I don’t want to get hurt So girl, please understand where I’m coming from I aint trying to avoid you, I aint no common son People telling you that I secretly like you, I aint gonna lie to, cause I do Yeah, I wrote these bars just for you: and on Valentine’s Day I might as well give you a clue Which is just in 7 days, known as a week to, so be patient...
  • i downloaded your mixtape gee coz your sick and i wanted to give you support coz your good enough to make it big :D

  • @JacKkasSTVoO0

    thanks alot bro i appreciate sub if you havent

  • @sbtaktikz yh mahn i did

  • Obviously, one person had a bad dream.

  • this is a dedication of realization of the pain and suffering that sweeps across the nation when the walls are closing in and ya feeling embracive hold ya head high even when it feels evasive never let go even if you cant take it when you ask yourself how can I escape this just keep pushing forward have faith even tho true grace is sometimes late never give up just correlate thru whats real and fake listen to ya heart it always leads us to fate in tha end so tell where do I begin
  • @MikeyBoy0991 ok

    

  • @antbanks415 you st8 wildin lol

  • she was licking my nuts

    eating my skeet

    now im locked up

    beating my meat

    open my eyes yeah

    she was only 17

  • @antbanks415 You st8 wildin but forreal whats up with a collab

  • @MultiJKilla : nah, truth be told, i got this frm someone else!!

  • @antbanks415 haha

  • @antbanks415 rucka rucka ali

  • @antbanks415 I don't care who you are, if you have a sense of humor, that's funny right there!

  • @djcrater068 lol that came from a just a dream parody video

  • @antbanks415 nastyyyyyyyyyyyyy :D HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

  • i stay steady tossin and turnin in my bed lookin at the clock its a quarter to ten dont know what these feelings are about dont even know how this situation will turn out all i know is that i love you and i miss you im quick to think about you and i just wana kiss you i guess i never loved you the right way or maybe your feelings for me werent the same dats why u up and left u went ur own way feels like a 1000 pound weight got dropped on my chest hurts so much i cnt think of the rest!
  • thought it was just a dream but now i realize

    after all the fights now ive opened my eyes

    sorry for times u cried for times I lied

    sorry for the pain u felt u were my ride or die

    but that’s over now  putting it all aside

    ill make it up 2 u no more taking sides

    you truly are one of a kind

    alot fish in the sea but your all mine

  • Im sitting in this house and im feeling all alone Im just sitting her waiting by the tellephone for you to call , or even txt thinking to my self what the hell is gonna happen next the only one thing i know for sure is there is no one that loves you more then i did; then i do thats why im just sitting here waiting on you wanting you to come back into my life promise this time you'll be my wife im tired of living life through these dreams i need some reality...
  • start on last post and come up, start after chorus. first rap verse ends after "they just wont go away"

    \/------- Please respond what you think!

  • Around through the town I wont do it again please come back very least be my friend

    At least that aspect of the connection wont end

    Ill move on since you have now just listen up please

    I love you my baby im fallin down on my knees

  • And forgive me and kiss me and say its ok

    Cause all these thoughts of you they just wont go away

    I really cant take it the way you left me alone

    I ‘pologized to you baby look at me come back home

    Cause I need you and need you bit more with each day

    And I die every minute of time your away

    It’s a heartache all day through the dark its nightmares

    The thought of whats going on it just scares. Me

    Cause all the time I had you I just took you for granted I started to screw

  • Where do I start baby where do I begin?

    I need you so bad baby wont you let me in?

    I deserve all the pain the way I caused you to feel

    But cant we drop this shit and just let it all heal?

    Ya I lie awake through the night

    The way we both laid in this bed one time holdin tight

    But now its over the whole thing tossed in the trash

    And nobody is here when I wanna just smash

    Something or someone I wont put down this gun

    Till you drop what you doin break the web that ive spun

  • how can 1 person dislike this :( 1 person we dislike you

  • nice

    

  • yo I'm a hopeless dreamer staring through divine light suffering from hind sight this is the assigned fight, your bars are beginnin while I resite right sign; you're just a fleabite I'm on my feet like a feline rollin in the twilight; the limelight, I designed the guidlelines you cant live on the sidelines This rap is like a shakspearian bloodstain inane pain my lyrics restrain for my homies peer my melodies regain, damn it I'm insane take away the pain, the game is about fame dont flame my name

  • its like every single dream is a dream about you

    i'm in love with you, and you really love me too

    but then i wake up and realize that our love was never true

    and now i'm stuck here thinking if you ever loved me too

    coz at that time it just felt so right

    when your sitting down with my arms around you tight

    and when people told us that we would never ever last

    we just didn't believe em and we pointed and then laughed

  • some heartless person clicked dislike....hmmm... i think thier finger sliped....

  • I remember the times/ When I would wipe the tears frm ya eyes/ Now all thatz left is for us/ To despise/ Each other/ U were my best friend and closest lover/ I put u before no other/ But we had is gone/ Thought we were strong/ But I waz wrong/ So now Im all alone/ On my own/ But I still hope its U/ Whenever I pick up tha phone/ But no wishes are granted/ Had my head in the clouds/ But now my feet are planted/ Im jus tryna understand it/ DAMN IT!!!
  • it was only yesterday/ when i saw you didnt know what to say/ wanted to tell you how i felt but didn't have it in me/ saw you with another guy and that was killin me/ from then on i thought of differently/ pictured us together visually/ knowing we werent meant to be/ always thought about you consistenly/ wishing you were missin me/ havin a epiphanny

  • last half to my verse

    no jealousy issues cause i know i mean more

    then these transparent dudes ever could before

    they were only gentlemens cause they held the door

    but i respect you for you and more

    

  • i tend to visualize the shit i cant have sit here at midnight tryna develop a plan it murks me that i cant understand the concept us,almost unknown like its anonymous regardless of how hard i fall im tryna stay glorious and play it smart for the both of us its cause of you that i notice much like how most girls are just a fckk but trust that i want your touch
  • @CheyenneElana Yes I did!

  • who clicked the dislike button!!!

  • it was all a dream what we had was my fantasy what i thought we had made me laugh made me be the man that i knew i needed to be showed me who i was showed me how to live and grow up i thought she was wonderful the one that i knew would be around for the ride a long time even though she left i know it was her who saved me but now all i can do is sit and remember all the times we shared all the times we would just lay and talk until we would fall asleep

  • I gotta do this INstrumental

    i just lostt My girll

    & i wishh when it happened that it was just a dream

  • @DreyFBGang sad ass shit man but watever, there are about 70.5 billion actioal fish in the sea and 3.5 billion of them on land... :) ull find sumone new bro

  • thumbs up if you have ever done or will do this

    don't you think it's strange how you fall asleep and wake up forgetting you ever went to sleep, at night any second you could fall asleep but wouldn't even know, in your sleep your brain takes over and dreams what ever you have stored back in your sub- concious mind. what if one night you got stuck in that dream, but you wouldn't know..... if you thought about my comment thumbs up :) x

  • It surely is hard not to break the replay button.x

  • i cant download it coz its a weird file!! :'(

  • @TaylorLovesTWxx download winrar 

  • You broke my hearts chasin waterfalls like 90s

    It blinded me Im beggin you turn off the high beams

    The lesson is that your love had me head over heels

    I got a 10 when I was shootin for the million dollar deal

    Because the hindsight is my only constellation

    I wish I could persuade you but im outta demonstrations

    So I sit on this hill and overlook the city we conquered

    The pain is real i don't just write for the thumbs up on the moniker

  • Here we go again, now we arguing again. I didn’t mean it, I love you so, But you just left me in the end. You were once my angel, got me feeling so fly. So happy, you got me hooked like a red bull high, but now I (in between) Came back down, you got me feeling this crash. Life goes on, but you got me stuck in this past. I guess it’s really true that nice guys finish last. But it amazes me how days without you can turn into months this fast. ....(etc)
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  • love the bass mannn sounds deeper..

  • OMG i love this song at least 85 people know what music is :)

  • i wish the hurt would end oh no here i go again,

    defenseless from your charm back on my arms,

    love the way you flirt i really want it to work,

    your someone that i love someone i cant stop thinkin of,

    i always saw us getting back thought of wedding plans,

    visions of our life together wishing things are gonna get better,

    i just wanna tell ya how i feel but somethings tellin me this isnt real,

    i will love you forever and i aint lying then things got strange and i wake up crying,

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  • I KNOW I HAD MADE SOME MISTAKE.

    CRYING MYSELF TO SLEEP US IM RUNNING OUT OF BREATH.

    WE WERE KISSING THEN I WOKE UP NO ONE WAS ON THE BED

    LOOK LIKE ANOTHER DAY ANOTHER PAIN.

    MY LFE IS ALL AOUT PAIN NOTING WILL CHANGE

  • i love the music..

  • this goes out for all the disc makers

    who want to achieve

    this goes out for all the wrist breakers

    wanting to bleed

    this is what makes us

    this is what makes us

    want to believe

    so we take it where it takes us

    and youll see... what it wants you to see

  • check out my two tracks up on my channel!!!

  • Ironic he writes bars t'get him outta this prison./

    He'd be lyin' if he said that he didn't wish she missed him./

    Tries to stay strong 'cause his mission ain't bitchin'./

    He's just tryin' to alter y'fuckin vision on his position./

    Hopes the doctors made a decision on his condition./

    But the kind of pain he feels can't be healed by a perscription./

    He needs subtraction, division, multiplication./

    And a whole lotta time to ever solve this equation./

  • brus u wanna make a song togeter?

  • @narutoscj u a rapper

  • @jayemoney101 yuh i am. New to da seen but u no how hard it is to get tha cake for rapping.

  • OMG DIS LIKE DA 20TH TIME I LISTENED TO THIS IT NEVER GETS OLD

  • @jordyneal1 wdf u listened to an insturmental 20 times 0.o

  • @jordyneal1 i think its the 100000000th for me..dam

  • im bumpin the mixtape

  • @OfficialRayzorMusic really? this is not an eminem style beat AT ALL. i mean im one of the biggest em fans but this is not his style

  • Get my turntable, start scratchin', then i heard the fable, of us back in love again,never went out, but I could see it in your eyes, cleverly clouded in disguise, tryin' to hide, It'd be right, but that's when I fucked up, tempermental, handcuffs being able to talk to you was just my damn luck good and bad, I yelled at you cussed you out..you never loved me, hell I went through when you said those three words were lies, And yet, I'm in disbelief when I see the look in her eyes. Am I dreaming?
  • This is going to be the song of the summer haha (for the southern hemisphere)

  • you gotta keep your chin up,

    you fight to be a winner but it ain't happening for ya, and you don't wanna be a sinner,

    and you wonder why the pain inside

    is attacking at your mind and you just want to let goo and let loose,

    to be honest you need the strength,

    to set a bench mark and watch your pad and pen spark,

    stand tall like braveheart beneath your head,

  • instrumental is well good im like it

    im gunna remix it man this will be my new song out soon so just listen out :)

  • king grogan, check him out

  • alright, im on writing something for this

  • it was a dream this whole team tour i was to plugged in like usb ports needed support not jus hate cuz ima blow up jus like grenades no fuckin grapes when i squish ya ass u fuckin with the greats so u stayin in last hard time sleepin, always fussed wit it never goin no where like no bus tickets see im eatin rappers like its lunch time and u aint ever kick me down(s) like its punt time erybody knows im the best in my time bra and u aint ever eat me out like vagina 
  • DAMN MADPROPS USING FL KUZ DISS SHIT SOUNDS GOOD DAWG IM USING THIS 4 A REMIX

  • Thinking about the day before you left,

    All the thing's i could have said but instead i kept,

    Buried inside along with the lie's,

    I should have kept my eye on the ball & more on the prize,

  • In all reality we all go through changes,

    You broke my heart as if you cut my wages,

    The only way to express my true feeling's,

    Is through blank pages though i should be neeling,

    At your feet begging for forgiveness,

    As god as my witness i did all i could,

    Though i never showed you all the love that i should,

    Have been by your side through the bad & the good.

  • check out the rap i put to this and tell me what you think!

  • love this song

  • cmon ma, we should really go slow infancy, but im so into you, n' feel you're so into me, easy as adding water, no flags or borders, so...watch it grow instantly... everyone braggin sorta so in an instant, lead, when everyones caught up, take an instant lead, with u by my side, i take your side, n' everyones the infantry, for instance see, I dont know how to friggen' explain it, I bought a blank canvas, met you n' came home, ..............n' the picture was painted, (it was all just a dream)
  • Let me tell you a story about a young little girl , she was my life but now she`s outta my world . And now I cant believe that you aint around , would you be here when i`m down ? Now you left me all alone , I dont wanna do this sh*t on my own . But I guess I have to now , knowing that you aint wearing my crown . Now I feel like i`m lost in my world , like I said you were my world . But now look at us girl , not ever close to each other no more . You was here but now you not no more . - <\3
  • This story began when i was a freshman I was so stupid, didnt kno what love was then But then came this girl. She put me into submission She was so fine. Perfect was her definition Caught my eye like Nikes I was brainwashed. she messed with my psyche Quickly became close friends that year Like a story written by shakespeare I immediately thought bout becomin a duet Want her on my arm like a bracelet But all of a sudden outta the blue She turned to another guy, said "I love you"
  • the life that im living seems like a dream,

    but when i wake up what could this mean?

    it seems we were going good

    go back to what i said,

    yu replay in my mind like my name was iyaz,

    tried to find that road we was on,

    cuz yurr stuck on my mind just like my favorite song,

  • feeling i get when ur far away is the same when ur cuddled next to me, i cant even start my day or even start to say but then it starts unexpectedly, i think of you n' its hard to say that i could be what you expect of me, i just know that when im with you i still miss you, n' it feels like ecstasy, sorry if i go overboard i just want you to smile n' laugh, im lookin at style n' class, no music on but i hear miles and jazz, you in a slip on n' im recitin the past, im likely to crash....

  • im finna do my version to this song

  • this is verse two and i still feel the pain, its crazy but because of you im lyrically insane, maybe if you were here i could hold you in my arms, then once again i play the murphy charm. but why i never did nothing rong, and when you were complaining i just played along. when you needed help i was bye your side , but now you moved on and left me behind. he got 3 girls 5 kids, his lies like a jar he covers with a lid. but i wanted you and you wanted me, but you made a mistake one day youll see

  • you said when i lose you is when i lose myself, but when i see you there's always someone else, maybe i should just put our love on the shelf, but if i did would that really help? i wont let the fear consume my body, especially when you wit somebody. its sad shoudnt i be happy so please tell me why i feel crappy. when i see you too it makes me sick, i wish i could tell you he's just a trip. cheating on you while your being loyal, to him your reusable like aluminum foil

  • Thanks for this!!

  • ummmm whats a hook? plz tell me im tryin tofind a song to spit too but i need the uggh ugh ugh part at the beginning HELP!!!!

  • @overachiever441 A hook is the chorus... The part that Nelly sings in this song is the hook.

  • @overachiever441 A hook is the chorus bro.

  • thanks BRO!!!

  • fuckin shitt! thank u 2 the person tht put this is up...i love this song

    n wanted 2 make a remix! haha

    much love

  • I LOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS SONNNGGG !

  • @hatinc22 its actually 2 wak verses thank you :D and the dl for the intrumental doesnt have my verse lmaoooo thats y thers two links. look first baby :D

  • i love you

  • i posted one an hour before this o.O

  • im gonna use this in a vid

  • thank you man, i have some awsome lyrics to this song and ive been looking every day on youtube for this,

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