okay so i couldnt even finish this. how can you sit there and talk crap about this book. i love all of them and i think they have grown into the characters they are at the end. not just got that way. also you try being a best seller. she is the best writer i have ever read. and i have never met some one who read the whole book and said it was horrible. you just dont know a good book. also you try to sell thousands of books because you are talented at writing. tell me how that works out.
THANKS for talking about your opinions in such detail! I've got a blog and am gathering up "evidence" like this (I'm putting your links RIGHT at the top!); and trying to get yet another STIR going about this subject. I could really use more voices up on the blog and help passing this around - Thanks! Search "ExplainTwilightBreakingDawnEnding" on Blogger
i bet you anything that, that movie will not make 50 million bucks! if that much at all. they is just not enough die hard fans out there that love the books so much to keep that movie in there even a month.
then and only then i bet will stephenie meyers see how terrible that book is once she sees how bad that movie will do.
if they make breaking dawn into two films this is exactly what is going to happen everybody is going to see part one and be pissed and when the second part comes out nobody is going to see it.
i hate to say it but as much as i hate Breaking Dawn i really cant wait for it to come out. why you ask, i want to see the ratings on it and see how much money it wil make.
everything you've said, was pretty much what i was thinking in my head. my god...i dont know where to begin with my problems with the book...
i have a theory that she tried to make the so vague...in order for her to make a spin off... aparently shes already wrote her fave bits for a nessie/jake spin off. i have serious problems on behalf of nessie with the whole jake/bella/edwad demented love triangle. she knew ness was guna be in the plot..and she still went ahead and did all that... wtf?!
Also when they mentioned to Steph that they probubly can't make BD she made the exuse to the fans that, "The movie can't be made because of the expressions Nessie makes, they can't redo a human face to have as compelling expressions as I described in BD" Like WTF are you trying to cover up the fact that the book just sucked balls.
omg Tech, you are my savior! Seriously, everything in all these vids totally makes sense and i absolutely agree with you. I haven't found one friend that disliked the book. They all apparently loved it. You totally rock!!
I don't think the venom eats through stuff, SM said the venom only hurts people if it gets into the bloodstream. Yes, it was OOC that Carlisle didn't think of blood.
I actually have come across the word obsequious before, numerous times, but I didn't get through the whole book, so I would've never come across the word in that book. Not trying to brag or anything...
But I missed their original selves too! I mean, except Bella. She was already annoying, she just got worse.
And I agree with you. Why should we be loyal to Stephenie? She made it clear what she thought of her fans. I hate how she was putting it all on us. Take some damn credit already!!
I actually really liked the HP ending.. lol. Yes, it was incredibly cheesy but after what Harry went through during his childhood I think it deserved a little cheesyness and could still pull it off. The difference between twilight and HP in that respect is that, like you said, in twilight they didn't EARN it. In HP, everyone definitely earned it and some really great characters had to die for that which made it emotionally amazing.
I totally agree with you. my friends keep telling me how stupid I am for feeling betrayed by SM. I don't think i'm stupid... I felt the same with HP...BD made me feel like I was loosing my religion. why do we bitch? because if our friends were this devastated...they would too.
Their is something about the whole series I have always questioned. You know how Edwards mouth produces extra venom when he smells Bella and crap right. Well he swaps spit with Bella a lot, and so if he is sitting their producing all tht venom in his mouth(because he's smelling her scent or whatever) then wouldn't bella have swallowed some of his venom. Shouldn't that have made her a vampire earilier? IDK, tht just one of my many insane thoughts.
i miss them too!!! (sniffle) i want her to continue her story the way she STARTED it, no fanfiction just her original righting! and i agree there is NO way there gonna make this a film tht makes me feel better it ends eith eclipse, good stuff!
haha. i would totally be spitting on EVERYTHING. that would be awesome.
and i love your in bed thing. hahah
and that hunting part was also one of my favorite parts. :]
and garrett was seriously fantastic. i wanted more into his charater really bad.
god, and the whole giving the kid blood thing. right when they said she couldn't keep food down i was like 'then give her blood. are you retarded?' i couldn't beliece someone hadn't already thought of it.
1. I think that Twilight should have been an only book. That was my opinion after reading Breaking Dawn. I didn't think it before reading.
2. I hated the fact that every story had a slow build up, like the pregnancy/birth and where it looked like there would be a fight towards the end of the book, then *POOF* nothing!!!! What a cop out.
I'm kind of dissapointed of Breaking dawn. I'll be an eternal fan of Twilight but not of Breaking Dawn.
You forgot to mention that Esme was never in the book, either, even though she has a whole backstory we never saw in the books. And what with her history with a child, Bella's pregnancy, as cliche as it was, would have affected her. It was because of Esme that Carlisle refused to do anything. But do we hear from her? No! That frustrated me.
Actually, I did know what obsequious meant. I blame watching too many shows of Pinky and The Brain growing up, though... You learned all sorts of insulting but polished sounding words to use.
Venom does indeed eat through things- it dissolved Bella's contacts when she first saw Charlie. But heck, I'd be spitting at everything! Bella just... man, if she's wish fulfillment, she could at least do a thorough job!
I totally agree with you about this book not being film compatible. I was thinking exactly that when I read it. Though, I was furious that Stephenie Meyer staged it out like a huge battle scene was about to commence - and then - nothing happens. They all go home with a hug and kiss. For the film version, they will have to make it more interesting or else I believe no one would watch it.
haha nice tech .. i really enjoyed your review, even though it was mostly negative, but I see your points. I agree with most things you said, but I didn't really let that bother me while reading it. I guess going in into a book with expectations ruins it for some people. I didn't really have any expectations so it was a little bearable for me :P sorry you got let down .. i know how it is to be so obsessed with a book and have all these theories only to find out that you're wrong .. great intview
Wanda and wats his name got together in like five secons and then it ended? I wanted to hear more about wanda and Ian. Love to hear wat you thought about it. If you read it that is.READ THIS PLEASE!! i'll feel like such a loser if i wrote all thin and then you don't even read it. THANKS.
It was such a LET DOWN. And I so wnted to see a gigantic vamp fight as well. All thoes awesome powers lying around and you didnt even see the damage it could inflict on a vamp. WOW! I should stop. And also... did you read THE HOST. because I absolutely loved it! And then it ended?
The HUNT was supposed to be so scary that Bella could never ever see it...I saw it and it wasnt scary at all!! there was no savage Edward and HE didnt attack the human either. And I hated how we didnt get to see any newborn action from bella. i dint expect it of course, but i WANTED it. I wanted to feel her desperatly wanting the human blood. But every time she wanted blood her throat just burned??? WTF!!! I need more details.
and the leah thing?LEAH AND JAKE get all friendly and then nothing happens?!?!?WTF!! i wanted thenm to get together not nessie and jake. WHY??? Why all the LEAH ACTION?? they had to become friends so that LEah could be away from Sam. HELLO!!!! Why does LEAH get a HAPPY ENDING?? I DONT CARE ABOUT LEAH!! well i do but not as much as rosalie. LEAH gets a HAPPY ENDIND and then ROSE GETS DIDDILY SQUAT!!!!!! NO. That was so WRONG.
I knew bella was gonna get knocked up and i knew shes have a girl and i knew jake would imprint on bella's kid. it was so predictable.The second i found out she was surely pregnant i thought up all this crap in my mind.
He lost all his personality the second he saw nessie. I was so pissed. I was loving being in his head during BD and then she went and killed him for me. Also the book was sooo terrible because while i was readin it i already knew what was gonna happen.
Why? Werewolves works fine. What is she gonna make a spin off serise about the wolves oops the shifters? I bet she will. Also I always liked Jacob. I almost wanted him JAKE TO END UP WITH BELLA! I loved him that much.I always saw the sarcastic kid that you said you only saw in the last book. because i was paying extra attention to jake cause i liked his character so damn much. But she friggin ruined jake for me in this book.
So stephs logic on that one makes sense to me, but it should have been IN THE BOOK. we shouldnt have to decifer her insane logic. I bet you anything all her insane logic will be in that guide shit of hers. and i bet her logic wont even make as much sense as mine does. And what on earth was the point of SHAPESHIFTERS?????
About the PREGNANT VAMP thing: I totally got where you were coming from with the whole vamps should be able to have kids BUT THEN I THOUGHT...if its a vamp that dosent change having a baby with a vamp that dosent change then why would a baby vamp change after the moment the sperm or venom met the egg.( the egg that may or may not have been in the vamp girls uterus based on the exact time of the month she died.)
I totally agree that Stephenie didn't think anything through. And the mistakes in content AND in grammar really detract from this book and add to the fanfiction feel, because if you didn't notice the content errors, then you definately see the grammar errors. (2/2)
If vampire saliva is venemous and acidic, wouldn't even just kissing Bella make her mouth burn, turn her into a vampire, and destroy her tongue? Unlike the sperm, which has a teeny tiny bit of compatibility with the story, saliva cannot be venemous otherwise she would have been transformed after the first time Edward and her kissed. (1/2)
i have to agree that this book will probably not be made into a movie. but if(and that's a big if) it were, i can't help but wonder what Rob The Baby Hater thinks about planting his mutant spawn in Kristen. haha
obsequious was a vocab word of mine once, but it wasn't like I was gonna remember the definition. like, "oh yeah, I'm going to need to know this someday." :)
haha Im just curious, if bd does become a movie, would you see it, just to see how crap it is?....I would :)
I guess if they wanted to make it into a movie they might make the voulturi fight all the vampires, like we all wanted. Stuff it if Smeyer doesn't agree, lol we don't agree with more then half of breaking dawn XD
"Jacob could pull it off...he was a beast...in bed." AHAHAHAHA. XD
and YES! the rosalie and jacob moments were probably my favorite! "You. Got. Food. In. My. Hair." BWAHAHAHAH! omg hilarious.
Oh yeah and if they make a Breaking Dawn movie...oh hale no. I'll kill them all. lol. seriously. the twilight fandom will be a joke. how embarassing would that be? for non-fans to go see it and poke fun at our fandom because the movie sucked. but that's just one thing about it that i would hate.
I luv this vid you had me dying laughing. Wait a minute if Edward has venom or whatever, how come its not in his sperm is it like immuned XD now you got me thinking with the saliva. Also I so wanted Jacob and Edward to fight I was dieing for it, and then all of sudden they were all happy and crap, for that they should just start hugging each other, I wanted to burn the book after knowing they so called liked each other, or whatever.
BY FAR! MY FAVORITE VIDEO OF YOURS (out of all the videos of this review). When you started talking about your favorite part, I grew very sad, because I thought THE SAME thing. I know exactly how you feel. Love all you had to say! :D
you must also realise that renesme grew so fast they would have to switch the actor for her like twenty times lol and i do have a little bit of an argument on jake and renesme imprinting, they have the same number of chromosomes so them having children is geneticly possibly even if they will be wolf-vampire-human-tards
"...in bed." Haha. I should so totally do that! :P That scene w/Charlie was adorable! And I want them back, too. :( I noticed a lot of things that were OOC for them. It was really sad. Boo. And ITA about Carlisle & the blood! I was like "WHAT?! Why didn't he think about that before? I mean it's CARLISLE." Gah.
I agree with the naughty thing with Carlisle. xD I laughed so hard. I also agree with him not being on the ball when it came to -as you said- Renes-tard and Bella needing blood. I was mad when he seemed stupid, I was like "Bella needs f-ing blood. Your supposed to be smarter than that!"
The characters were definately OOC, I thought that back in Eclipse.
Thinking about this book being a movie and if they ever make a movie of this book I am definately not seeing it.
real screenwritters wouldn't dare go near this book to make it into a movie. They would have to change tons of things just so it can fit properly. but that would be a waist of time. just like it was a waist of time to write this book. :)
i agree with you on the movie thing, i was thinking that too after i finished reading it. if they did make it into a movie it'd be soo boring, kinda like reading it but this time your eyes would have to suffer too XDD
my cheeks because i was soo disapointed that the book took soo meny turnes. the line was "i was skipping so meny thing now a days like pop tarts and shoelaces." something like that. then she like revved the car and it lurched forward or something. and i completly lost it. haha i am such a crier but i was sooo completly devastated that the charaters were all wrong.
i cried too on page 661. i also cried when she said something about jacob, her, and charlie "being like old times." and as soon as i saw those three words tears started to stream down my face. she also said it again like around the middle-end part of the book. and i was like "where is the old characters? i want them back!"
also when i was reading their first hunt I got bored and went back to like the first chapter and i read one line and i had to put my book down and go wipe my mascara off of
lol i heard that when she was like "i know exactly where they'd stop at one point for the second movie.." as if she actually knows what shes talking about
even in the beginning at the honeymoon, bella didn't seem like bella at ALL. I could barely see the resemblance between the twilight bella and the BD bella. it upset me so much, because i didn't know the characters anymore!
omg! you read my mind about renesmee wanting blood... I thought exactly the same!! it was.... so obvious!, even before jacob said that, i thought the baby was feeding of her blood and bella should need to ingest some...
i know this is from your last review but i forgot to comment it on there. i think that you should take one of your best stories and try publishing them because you seem like you would be an amazing writer :)
Yeah I'm with you on the film thing. There is just no way they could make a movie from BD unless they changed loads. And have you noticed Catherine and Co keep talking about a movie trilogy? Do you think they knew BD was going somewhere weird and tried to give us a hint lol?
I just can't see Bert or Kristen even wanting to try and make it into a movie. There is no way they are into the characters that much to make what would have to be five movies.
i agree with everything you said, your points were all well thought out. i still liked the book though, for what it was worth, a fanfiction that made all my dreams come true. but at the same time im also disappointed that they came true, mostly bc of all the logical points you stated. im just so conflicted, i liked it but i hated it. maybe someone can understand what im feeling. lol
I completely understand what you are feeling theresus44, I think a lot of people do. I'm standing on a fence post wobbling between liking it and hating it.
I'm happy with what happened in the book, (Bella and Edward live happily ever after) but I'm disappointed with how it happened (the out of character personality, Mary Sue Renesmee, the crazy logic). Does that make sense?
Yeah, I agree. I was reading it and I thought as soon as they said that the baby was hungry, "Blood? Duh." and when they finally realized it, I just stopped and stared at the book, amazed. Carlisle should've figured that out from the moment they figured out it was hungry.
k one of the things that bothered me the most in BD waz that once she was a vampire nothing signifigant happened, you preety much had a 4-5 page commentary on how she could hear better and how hot she was, and that was about it, the way the author discribed the changes in the previous books was freakin awsome, and the book just kinda brushed over it for the most part
i got my copy of breaking dawn as a gift because it wasn't available where i live when it came out and i feel so bad for asking my uncle to go through all that trouble to get it for me because i didn't enjoy it at all. i totally agree with everything you are saying in your videos!
you said in one of your vids that you wrote stories (if you've already said this i haven't seen it) where could i find one of them. Im kinda curious to see what you write.
kay, tech u can't say that everybody who had a different opinion on this book has the reading level of a second grader. so much for quietly hating the book...You've really gone from expressing your opinion (as strong as it might be) to insulting all those who actually liked tis book. Not cool. Not cool at all.
i do however agree withthe BLATANT obviousness of the whole Hey-the half-vampbaby-might-need-blood! thing.
ah-ah no I said anyone who cant tell the characters are out of character has the reading level of 2nd grader and sorry but im sticking to that. its so blaringly obvious theres just... no... way
but yeah, I can admit i get angry in my rants lol Im not hiding it. Insults, theyre just a sideeffect of anger.
yeah cause he looks like Twilight movie James in description another tactic like the jumping stuff-- by steph M to keep peeps movie minded in another weird attempt to sync that book with everything. nope ..no.
Edward and Jacob had "brotherly daps." That was phoney. Blonde joke after blonde joke. Lame. The "Fido" bowl. Phoney. And yeah, Carlisle took the initiative to check Jacob's chomosome count, but he didn't know they had sperm or the baby needed blood. Useless doctor. That whole book completely sucked ass.
LMAO the blonde jokes were great. Jacob's part was my favorite. Like I keep saying, he was the only one even REMOTELY in-character for me. I miss the old Edward, too. And OMFG I LOVE GARRETT, HE'S AMAZING. As far as the movie: Am I the only one who would appreciate an 8-hour long youtube video of Rob Pattinson reading BD? LMFAO! His reactions would be priceless. I can just see him cursing Chapter 7...*gigglesnort* I hope they don't make a BD movie. It'd fail epically like the book.
"I have heard that Stephanie Meyer is working on a book about Mermaids. I am hoping that Seth imprints on a shrimp who leads them shape shifters to the land of sea sirens. I don't know about you but that sounds like some damn entertaining possibilities!"
i laughed for ages over that. but the rest was awful.
i have crossed this book out. in my opionin, there is twilight, new moon, and eclipse. nothing else. maybe my own little ending where they get married and kill the volturi but they would NEVER have a kid. lol.
I love your reviews! BD was really bad, I can't see them making a movie unless they change it and have a war - and then kill some poeple. Ugh! One of the best parts of the book thought (one of the only best parts) was on page 674 - "Edward and I had not had a last grand scene of farewell... It would be the same as typing the words The End on the last page of a manuscript." I thought that part was great, because thats what she did at the end of the book.
and don't get me started on that little freakin traitor bitch Seth, i swear his crush thing with Edward just digusted me UGH! "o just break my collar bone it's ok as long as u are fine bella" And poor Leah o now werewolf girls are barren cause the dont get their period anymore which sdosent make any since at all..no...Ugh i can't..nope.
i hated that jacob was hanging out at the house so much like a pet in the first place he would never do that. the fact that he threw the bowel at rosalie's freakin racist head was great but that whole crap-- jake just walkin in and out of that vamp liar like it was nothin playin guard dog around the grounds was sickening, falling asleep in fron t of the door like a big ass dog was vomit worthy, heeling on the floor like a dog again next to bella on couch made me sick. ---
All of the things you said in these reviews are so true. This book was such a disappointment. I want to go back in time and punch Stephenie in the face or something for even thinking that this was the perfect way to end the series. She's lying to herself if she thinks that we're going to get over it.
I have to agree with you on all your reviews....I had been reading fan fiction up until this book came out and it read just like all the other Fan fiction.. sigh.. Keep up the good job!
totally agree, a/w wasnt bella liked freaked out over the sight of blood, and the smell, but she was still human when she was drinking it. that right there seemed way OFC.
Poor letdowns through Harry Potter and twilight. Twilight was a worse letdown I think. I hope they don't make Breaking Dawn a movie. Just leave it at Twilight.
I didn't like Edward in this book much. Which is weird because I didn't like Edward or Jacob. I still liked Jasper. I don't know I always liked Jasper. lol 'Does it eat through things?' HAHAH I laughed a lot on that comment. Jacob is a beast (in bed.) lol I'm going to have to reread the whole book and say in bed.
okay so i couldnt even finish this. how can you sit there and talk crap about this book. i love all of them and i think they have grown into the characters they are at the end. not just got that way. also you try being a best seller. she is the best writer i have ever read. and i have never met some one who read the whole book and said it was horrible. you just dont know a good book. also you try to sell thousands of books because you are talented at writing. tell me how that works out.
mommasgirlkatie 5 days ago
THANKS for talking about your opinions in such detail! I've got a blog and am gathering up "evidence" like this (I'm putting your links RIGHT at the top!); and trying to get yet another STIR going about this subject. I could really use more voices up on the blog and help passing this around - Thanks! Search "ExplainTwilightBreakingDawnEnding" on Blogger
adifferenttwilight 1 month ago
obsequious, lol we all know stephenie had to *rightclicksynonym* for that one.
erinlovesheadbands 1 year ago
that was the longest video EVER. lol. but i enjoyed every min of it. ur a hoot and really cool. i agreed w 99.9% of everything u said.
livihasaname4u 1 year ago
Out of all the characters I miss edward's character the most. And how can you say harry potter was a letdown?
Goshthatsfetch9612 1 year ago
i bet you anything that, that movie will not make 50 million bucks! if that much at all. they is just not enough die hard fans out there that love the books so much to keep that movie in there even a month.
then and only then i bet will stephenie meyers see how terrible that book is once she sees how bad that movie will do.
TheBookwurm82 1 year ago
@TheBookwurm82 i can probs bet that ppl will wanna watch it for the sex. the diehard fans are perverts. LOL
hennaluv 1 year ago
if they make breaking dawn into two films this is exactly what is going to happen everybody is going to see part one and be pissed and when the second part comes out nobody is going to see it.
i hate to say it but as much as i hate Breaking Dawn i really cant wait for it to come out. why you ask, i want to see the ratings on it and see how much money it wil make.
TheBookwurm82 1 year ago
The first 3 books used to be somethine very special to me.
Then, Twitards and BD happened.
The characters used to be so sarcastic! I loved them...even Edward, sometimes. [Except Bella.. even as a Twilight fan I hated her. XD]
SallySonic 2 years ago 7
I have a good blonde joke,but its pretty long.
Invincible5972 2 years ago
fuck i love tech!!!!
brokenxstitches 2 years ago 4
everything you've said, was pretty much what i was thinking in my head. my god...i dont know where to begin with my problems with the book...
i have a theory that she tried to make the so vague...in order for her to make a spin off... aparently shes already wrote her fave bits for a nessie/jake spin off. i have serious problems on behalf of nessie with the whole jake/bella/edwad demented love triangle. she knew ness was guna be in the plot..and she still went ahead and did all that... wtf?!
hennaluv 2 years ago 2
You are really truee dont think that your wrong or a bad fan becos your not you make sense :)
coolchikk1 2 years ago 2
YAYYYY TEAM GARRETT!
chelslynn08 3 years ago
2:15 HAHAHAHAHAH
xxxwaxxxwaxxx 3 years ago
Also when they mentioned to Steph that they probubly can't make BD she made the exuse to the fans that, "The movie can't be made because of the expressions Nessie makes, they can't redo a human face to have as compelling expressions as I described in BD" Like WTF are you trying to cover up the fact that the book just sucked balls.
oxRainingTwihardsxo 3 years ago 17
Tottaly...
And it will be ridiculous, 3 books and than no end. I can only imagine HOW pissed Summit must be
MaryShouldGetALife 2 years ago
haha i saw that. i was like "are you SERIOUS???"
futurecullen123 2 years ago
"Even those without swords can die upon them" (or something). Obviously, Smeyer didn't read LOTR. Or see the movie.
JetPixi 3 years ago
omg Tech, you are my savior! Seriously, everything in all these vids totally makes sense and i absolutely agree with you. I haven't found one friend that disliked the book. They all apparently loved it. You totally rock!!
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HarrysBaby 3 years ago 6
Yeah, me too.
I hve friends tht don't like it but not as strongly as me!!
AlisonTonks 3 years ago
I don't think the venom eats through stuff, SM said the venom only hurts people if it gets into the bloodstream. Yes, it was OOC that Carlisle didn't think of blood.
sorakeyblademaster27 3 years ago 4
I actually have come across the word obsequious before, numerous times, but I didn't get through the whole book, so I would've never come across the word in that book. Not trying to brag or anything...
But I missed their original selves too! I mean, except Bella. She was already annoying, she just got worse.
And I agree with you. Why should we be loyal to Stephenie? She made it clear what she thought of her fans. I hate how she was putting it all on us. Take some damn credit already!!
NiWriRanMo 3 years ago 4
"Well, well, Carlisle. You have been naughty, haven't you?"
Rofl. Rofl. Rofl.
Maggiesfx 3 years ago 12
Hahaha.
You are amazing. :D
sircommadash 3 years ago 2
I actually really liked the HP ending.. lol. Yes, it was incredibly cheesy but after what Harry went through during his childhood I think it deserved a little cheesyness and could still pull it off. The difference between twilight and HP in that respect is that, like you said, in twilight they didn't EARN it. In HP, everyone definitely earned it and some really great characters had to die for that which made it emotionally amazing.
norcalifornia 3 years ago 8
srry i didn't know it and thought i would post it so ppl didn't have to look it up
problemsgotyadown 3 years ago
1. characterized by or showing servile complaisance or deference; fawning: an obsequious bow.
2. servilely compliant or deferential: obsequious servants.
3. obedient; dutiful.
srry it's just to let ya know
i wish my spit was venomus too! =]
problemsgotyadown 3 years ago
HA! i loved Jacobs Blonde jokes!
and shes like "i already heard that one"!!
haha
VamptasticFan 3 years ago 5
i thought the same thing about the leaping omg
Lodat225 3 years ago 2
i empathize completely about the HP thingy. even tho i might not be an "older" fan cuz i'm only 13.
futurecullen123 3 years ago
I love you. =3
xiaoblossom 3 years ago 4
what's ur website?
Supernaturalfan242 3 years ago
I totally agree with you about the HP fans having their hearts ripped out twice.
DeeLamps 3 years ago
HAHAHHAHA I would spit on everything too!!!!
LMAO XD
pinkpanthasandyg 3 years ago 2
i loved the two guys who wanted to fight the voltry(sp)stefan and whats his face. lol Renesmee and jacob... lol..
KoolKat100067005 3 years ago
I totally agree with you. my friends keep telling me how stupid I am for feeling betrayed by SM. I don't think i'm stupid... I felt the same with HP...BD made me feel like I was loosing my religion. why do we bitch? because if our friends were this devastated...they would too.
Celestialheiress 3 years ago
i just loved Garrett
he was like one if not the only character in the book who i really liked
i thought it was kind of weird though how he looked a lot like James does in the movie
*cough blond poinytale *cough
mariyaiscool34 3 years ago 4
Their is something about the whole series I have always questioned. You know how Edwards mouth produces extra venom when he smells Bella and crap right. Well he swaps spit with Bella a lot, and so if he is sitting their producing all tht venom in his mouth(because he's smelling her scent or whatever) then wouldn't bella have swallowed some of his venom. Shouldn't that have made her a vampire earilier? IDK, tht just one of my many insane thoughts.
StrawberryFanatic902 3 years ago
i miss them too!!! (sniffle) i want her to continue her story the way she STARTED it, no fanfiction just her original righting! and i agree there is NO way there gonna make this a film tht makes me feel better it ends eith eclipse, good stuff!
chickie171 3 years ago
and although rowlings ending ending was cheesy, the whole 19 years later thing.
at least it was grotesquly picture perfect! i was dissapionted in Meyer's happy endingness.
bladeofgrass2234 3 years ago
haha. i would totally be spitting on EVERYTHING. that would be awesome.
and i love your in bed thing. hahah
and that hunting part was also one of my favorite parts. :]
and garrett was seriously fantastic. i wanted more into his charater really bad.
god, and the whole giving the kid blood thing. right when they said she couldn't keep food down i was like 'then give her blood. are you retarded?' i couldn't beliece someone hadn't already thought of it.
bladeofgrass2234 3 years ago
Huh, I actually had that exact same thought about the leaping aswell.
stuffedolivia 3 years ago
1. I think that Twilight should have been an only book. That was my opinion after reading Breaking Dawn. I didn't think it before reading.
2. I hated the fact that every story had a slow build up, like the pregnancy/birth and where it looked like there would be a fight towards the end of the book, then *POOF* nothing!!!! What a cop out.
I'm kind of dissapointed of Breaking dawn. I'll be an eternal fan of Twilight but not of Breaking Dawn.
Ok i'm done.
summermadness1 3 years ago
You forgot to mention that Esme was never in the book, either, even though she has a whole backstory we never saw in the books. And what with her history with a child, Bella's pregnancy, as cliche as it was, would have affected her. It was because of Esme that Carlisle refused to do anything. But do we hear from her? No! That frustrated me.
ElysianDreamer 3 years ago 4
Actually, I did know what obsequious meant. I blame watching too many shows of Pinky and The Brain growing up, though... You learned all sorts of insulting but polished sounding words to use.
ElysianDreamer 3 years ago
Venom does indeed eat through things- it dissolved Bella's contacts when she first saw Charlie. But heck, I'd be spitting at everything! Bella just... man, if she's wish fulfillment, she could at least do a thorough job!
ElysianDreamer 3 years ago
forgot to comment on the last one- I want to read your fanfics. Link, please?
ElysianDreamer 3 years ago
I love Garrett - Kate gets to be awesome by extension. He was so awesome.
AngelCleo21 3 years ago
I totally agree with you about this book not being film compatible. I was thinking exactly that when I read it. Though, I was furious that Stephenie Meyer staged it out like a huge battle scene was about to commence - and then - nothing happens. They all go home with a hug and kiss. For the film version, they will have to make it more interesting or else I believe no one would watch it.
EerieAlice 3 years ago
haha nice tech .. i really enjoyed your review, even though it was mostly negative, but I see your points. I agree with most things you said, but I didn't really let that bother me while reading it. I guess going in into a book with expectations ruins it for some people. I didn't really have any expectations so it was a little bearable for me :P sorry you got let down .. i know how it is to be so obsessed with a book and have all these theories only to find out that you're wrong .. great intview
DesertFawn 3 years ago
review^^^
DesertFawn 3 years ago
Wanda and wats his name got together in like five secons and then it ended? I wanted to hear more about wanda and Ian. Love to hear wat you thought about it. If you read it that is.READ THIS PLEASE!! i'll feel like such a loser if i wrote all thin and then you don't even read it. THANKS.
D0357 3 years ago
It was such a LET DOWN. And I so wnted to see a gigantic vamp fight as well. All thoes awesome powers lying around and you didnt even see the damage it could inflict on a vamp. WOW! I should stop. And also... did you read THE HOST. because I absolutely loved it! And then it ended?
D0357 3 years ago
The HUNT was supposed to be so scary that Bella could never ever see it...I saw it and it wasnt scary at all!! there was no savage Edward and HE didnt attack the human either. And I hated how we didnt get to see any newborn action from bella. i dint expect it of course, but i WANTED it. I wanted to feel her desperatly wanting the human blood. But every time she wanted blood her throat just burned??? WTF!!! I need more details.
D0357 3 years ago
and the leah thing?LEAH AND JAKE get all friendly and then nothing happens?!?!?WTF!! i wanted thenm to get together not nessie and jake. WHY??? Why all the LEAH ACTION?? they had to become friends so that LEah could be away from Sam. HELLO!!!! Why does LEAH get a HAPPY ENDING?? I DONT CARE ABOUT LEAH!! well i do but not as much as rosalie. LEAH gets a HAPPY ENDIND and then ROSE GETS DIDDILY SQUAT!!!!!! NO. That was so WRONG.
D0357 3 years ago
I knew bella was gonna get knocked up and i knew shes have a girl and i knew jake would imprint on bella's kid. it was so predictable.The second i found out she was surely pregnant i thought up all this crap in my mind.
D0357 3 years ago
He lost all his personality the second he saw nessie. I was so pissed. I was loving being in his head during BD and then she went and killed him for me. Also the book was sooo terrible because while i was readin it i already knew what was gonna happen.
D0357 3 years ago
Why? Werewolves works fine. What is she gonna make a spin off serise about the wolves oops the shifters? I bet she will. Also I always liked Jacob. I almost wanted him JAKE TO END UP WITH BELLA! I loved him that much.I always saw the sarcastic kid that you said you only saw in the last book. because i was paying extra attention to jake cause i liked his character so damn much. But she friggin ruined jake for me in this book.
D0357 3 years ago 2
So stephs logic on that one makes sense to me, but it should have been IN THE BOOK. we shouldnt have to decifer her insane logic. I bet you anything all her insane logic will be in that guide shit of hers. and i bet her logic wont even make as much sense as mine does. And what on earth was the point of SHAPESHIFTERS?????
D0357 3 years ago
About the PREGNANT VAMP thing: I totally got where you were coming from with the whole vamps should be able to have kids BUT THEN I THOUGHT...if its a vamp that dosent change having a baby with a vamp that dosent change then why would a baby vamp change after the moment the sperm or venom met the egg.( the egg that may or may not have been in the vamp girls uterus based on the exact time of the month she died.)
D0357 3 years ago
I totally agree that Stephenie didn't think anything through. And the mistakes in content AND in grammar really detract from this book and add to the fanfiction feel, because if you didn't notice the content errors, then you definately see the grammar errors. (2/2)
CatsFearMe 3 years ago
If vampire saliva is venemous and acidic, wouldn't even just kissing Bella make her mouth burn, turn her into a vampire, and destroy her tongue? Unlike the sperm, which has a teeny tiny bit of compatibility with the story, saliva cannot be venemous otherwise she would have been transformed after the first time Edward and her kissed. (1/2)
CatsFearMe 3 years ago 2
i have to agree that this book will probably not be made into a movie. but if(and that's a big if) it were, i can't help but wonder what Rob The Baby Hater thinks about planting his mutant spawn in Kristen. haha
lotusblossom15 3 years ago
"I can't teach you to fight..."
"Then I'm gonna die"
LOL
foxmulder61793 3 years ago
The end of deathly hallows seems like genius to me after BD.
Ya that's saying something.
alectoCarrow 3 years ago
obsequious was a vocab word of mine once, but it wasn't like I was gonna remember the definition. like, "oh yeah, I'm going to need to know this someday." :)
EnemysGateIsDown 3 years ago
RIP Edward, Bella, JASPER, ALICE, EMMETT, Jacob, Rosalie etc.
redhot654 3 years ago
garret was the shit i love that guy
Lyndiloo08 3 years ago
This book was too damn happy. End of Story.
WOWretardedfriends 3 years ago
haha Im just curious, if bd does become a movie, would you see it, just to see how crap it is?....I would :)
I guess if they wanted to make it into a movie they might make the voulturi fight all the vampires, like we all wanted. Stuff it if Smeyer doesn't agree, lol we don't agree with more then half of breaking dawn XD
brineyrox 3 years ago
Hell no I wouldnt see it.
Well thats a lie, Id have to wouldnt I? So that I could come back and tell you all how awful it was hahaha
no I wouldnt pay for it, Id wait for it to go to TV and watch it there =] id be in no rush whatsoever to see it.
Touj0ursPur 3 years ago
I cried a little when you talked about the Edward and Jacob original selves. ; _ ;
I miss them all </3
Even Bella... kinda. :/
xuzumakixrasenganx 3 years ago
the venom does eat threw stuff, right? bc bellas contacts kept disolving
DOTHELAWNMOWER 3 years ago
shit i didnt even bother looking obsequious (or whatever). i was like 'i dont know that word. im not even gonna bother.' lol.
kimnerly 3 years ago
"Jacob could pull it off...he was a beast...in bed." AHAHAHAHA. XD
and YES! the rosalie and jacob moments were probably my favorite! "You. Got. Food. In. My. Hair." BWAHAHAHAH! omg hilarious.
Oh yeah and if they make a Breaking Dawn movie...oh hale no. I'll kill them all. lol. seriously. the twilight fandom will be a joke. how embarassing would that be? for non-fans to go see it and poke fun at our fandom because the movie sucked. but that's just one thing about it that i would hate.
chicanaxXxpirate 3 years ago
I felt that they were out of character too. And ya, I couldn't see BD as a movie either.
MelodyMeadowMusic 3 years ago
yeah the whole "obsequious" or however you spelled it pissed me off. she kinda raped a thesauras in this one.
pshdsy 3 years ago
I luv this vid you had me dying laughing. Wait a minute if Edward has venom or whatever, how come its not in his sperm is it like immuned XD now you got me thinking with the saliva. Also I so wanted Jacob and Edward to fight I was dieing for it, and then all of sudden they were all happy and crap, for that they should just start hugging each other, I wanted to burn the book after knowing they so called liked each other, or whatever.
Miyavekuu 3 years ago
BY FAR! MY FAVORITE VIDEO OF YOURS (out of all the videos of this review). When you started talking about your favorite part, I grew very sad, because I thought THE SAME thing. I know exactly how you feel. Love all you had to say! :D
CtheHippy 3 years ago
you must also realise that renesme grew so fast they would have to switch the actor for her like twenty times lol and i do have a little bit of an argument on jake and renesme imprinting, they have the same number of chromosomes so them having children is geneticly possibly even if they will be wolf-vampire-human-tards
MariaVana 3 years ago
Oh my gosh, the spit thing... lol! I liked the book a lot, but I don't think that it would make a good movie either... it's just not going to work.
Patrice565 3 years ago
I am LOVING these reviews. keep 'em comin;! xD
nollikins 3 years ago 2
"...in bed." Haha. I should so totally do that! :P That scene w/Charlie was adorable! And I want them back, too. :( I noticed a lot of things that were OOC for them. It was really sad. Boo. And ITA about Carlisle & the blood! I was like "WHAT?! Why didn't he think about that before? I mean it's CARLISLE." Gah.
misslaura317 3 years ago
I agree with the naughty thing with Carlisle. xD I laughed so hard. I also agree with him not being on the ball when it came to -as you said- Renes-tard and Bella needing blood. I was mad when he seemed stupid, I was like "Bella needs f-ing blood. Your supposed to be smarter than that!"
The characters were definately OOC, I thought that back in Eclipse.
Thinking about this book being a movie and if they ever make a movie of this book I am definately not seeing it.
littlemissbooklover 3 years ago 2
Wow. I agree with your whole review. I defiantly had many of those same thoughts as you did.
At the end when you mentioned Carlisle not knowing to feed the baby blood, even I thought about that even before Jacob thought it.
Sidewalks90 3 years ago
the spit is venomous?
then how did bella & edward make out when she was human? wouldn't her tongue like, burn or somethingg?
ohmyyedward 3 years ago
they dont french.
xRockStarx13 3 years ago
they kissed closed mouth. eddie was sure of that.
pshdsy 3 years ago
i loved garrett too!
and now hes gone
god damn
Ssssophiie 3 years ago
real screenwritters wouldn't dare go near this book to make it into a movie. They would have to change tons of things just so it can fit properly. but that would be a waist of time. just like it was a waist of time to write this book. :)
awsome reviews...... is there more??
RosieGirlRose101 3 years ago
i agree with you on the movie thing, i was thinking that too after i finished reading it. if they did make it into a movie it'd be soo boring, kinda like reading it but this time your eyes would have to suffer too XDD
lol, jk. but it wouldn't make an exciting movie
GiraffeWithStripes 3 years ago
my cheeks because i was soo disapointed that the book took soo meny turnes. the line was "i was skipping so meny thing now a days like pop tarts and shoelaces." something like that. then she like revved the car and it lurched forward or something. and i completly lost it. haha i am such a crier but i was sooo completly devastated that the charaters were all wrong.
Gurlyygirl 3 years ago
i cried too on page 661. i also cried when she said something about jacob, her, and charlie "being like old times." and as soon as i saw those three words tears started to stream down my face. she also said it again like around the middle-end part of the book. and i was like "where is the old characters? i want them back!"
also when i was reading their first hunt I got bored and went back to like the first chapter and i read one line and i had to put my book down and go wipe my mascara off of
Gurlyygirl 3 years ago
he's been naughty XD
kiikat 3 years ago
lol i heard that when she was like "i know exactly where they'd stop at one point for the second movie.." as if she actually knows what shes talking about
xxShadowObscura 3 years ago
even in the beginning at the honeymoon, bella didn't seem like bella at ALL. I could barely see the resemblance between the twilight bella and the BD bella. it upset me so much, because i didn't know the characters anymore!
gigglegirl495 3 years ago 2
omg! you read my mind about renesmee wanting blood... I thought exactly the same!! it was.... so obvious!, even before jacob said that, i thought the baby was feeding of her blood and bella should need to ingest some...
chidarkcy 3 years ago
the ooc annoyed the cra out of me too!
twilighter247 3 years ago
i know this is from your last review but i forgot to comment it on there. i think that you should take one of your best stories and try publishing them because you seem like you would be an amazing writer :)
gigglegirl495 3 years ago
i sooooo agree with you!
I loved Garrett too but then when he was but with Kate i was like "NOOO!!"
ahhh i want to read your fanfictions. please give us your link :)
vizzieduck33 3 years ago
Yeah I'm with you on the film thing. There is just no way they could make a movie from BD unless they changed loads. And have you noticed Catherine and Co keep talking about a movie trilogy? Do you think they knew BD was going somewhere weird and tried to give us a hint lol?
I just can't see Bert or Kristen even wanting to try and make it into a movie. There is no way they are into the characters that much to make what would have to be five movies.
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pfinni 3 years ago
i love watching your vids! you're so funny! :)
i agree with everything you said, your points were all well thought out. i still liked the book though, for what it was worth, a fanfiction that made all my dreams come true. but at the same time im also disappointed that they came true, mostly bc of all the logical points you stated. im just so conflicted, i liked it but i hated it. maybe someone can understand what im feeling. lol
theresus44 3 years ago 2
I completely understand what you are feeling theresus44, I think a lot of people do. I'm standing on a fence post wobbling between liking it and hating it.
I'm happy with what happened in the book, (Bella and Edward live happily ever after) but I'm disappointed with how it happened (the out of character personality, Mary Sue Renesmee, the crazy logic). Does that make sense?
This book really messed with my head lol.
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pfinni 3 years ago 2
XD
I loved the "fido bowl" part too.
unoriginallywitty 3 years ago
i'm totally gona try the "in bed" thing...
JaeAndFarah 3 years ago
Yeah, I agree. I was reading it and I thought as soon as they said that the baby was hungry, "Blood? Duh." and when they finally realized it, I just stopped and stared at the book, amazed. Carlisle should've figured that out from the moment they figured out it was hungry.
KelleyH 3 years ago
k one of the things that bothered me the most in BD waz that once she was a vampire nothing signifigant happened, you preety much had a 4-5 page commentary on how she could hear better and how hot she was, and that was about it, the way the author discribed the changes in the previous books was freakin awsome, and the book just kinda brushed over it for the most part
bleumoon08 3 years ago
i got my copy of breaking dawn as a gift because it wasn't available where i live when it came out and i feel so bad for asking my uncle to go through all that trouble to get it for me because i didn't enjoy it at all. i totally agree with everything you are saying in your videos!
LostMyyMarbles 3 years ago
well, what do you think about stephenie continuing the series from leah's or renesmee's pov?
tech, you're amazing and i love these reviews by the way haha.
kattlu 3 years ago
haha i was just flipping pages trying to find chapter 33 and i ran across this line, "I hope she likes it."
haha in bed!
slimjimjerky 3 years ago
omg, all of my friends loved the books and I was like what?! So I had to explain to them. They sort of understood then I told them to read it again.
I'm a writer too but I don't claim to be good at it I guess I just catch things easily in books.
I thought the book was hilarious because it was so bad. I didn't catch the editing mistakes though so I'll defintately look at those.
SheGiRl 3 years ago
lol, i totally agree with the movie thing. It's not going to work out well. I feel sorry for rob and kristen who have to act it all out.
krystalolive 3 years ago 2
you said in one of your vids that you wrote stories (if you've already said this i haven't seen it) where could i find one of them. Im kinda curious to see what you write.
vanilla0bean 3 years ago
kay, tech u can't say that everybody who had a different opinion on this book has the reading level of a second grader. so much for quietly hating the book...You've really gone from expressing your opinion (as strong as it might be) to insulting all those who actually liked tis book. Not cool. Not cool at all.
i do however agree withthe BLATANT obviousness of the whole Hey-the half-vampbaby-might-need-blood! thing.
LOL
prettyinpunk4 3 years ago
ah-ah no I said anyone who cant tell the characters are out of character has the reading level of 2nd grader and sorry but im sticking to that. its so blaringly obvious theres just... no... way
but yeah, I can admit i get angry in my rants lol Im not hiding it. Insults, theyre just a sideeffect of anger.
TechNBailey 3 years ago
No. Stephenie said it doesn't eat through stuff. It just kills people, but even then it needs to get into the blood stream.
Pentagramy 3 years ago
actually SM didnt betray you
she promissed you absolutely nothing
she didnt go "tech i made this book for you, and you'll love it i promise."
this was for her
so she didnt betray no one
archieis2di4 3 years ago
if it was for her she should've kept that crap to herself instead of putting it up for sale.
nikkio3000 3 years ago
MORE!! D=???
justplainrocks 3 years ago
i actually like what edward is like now.
this is going to sound weird
but i love how he got so much more carefree
but yeah he was lost throughout it.
but when he became so more carefree and not uptight
i loved him more
and i love jacob too
archieis2di4 3 years ago
i didnt look up obseqious because i couldnt even pernounce it.
i just skipped right by it :)
archieis2di4 3 years ago
omg i loved garret to he was my favourite vampire that showed up
PetiteKCullen 3 years ago
yeah cause he looks like Twilight movie James in description another tactic like the jumping stuff-- by steph M to keep peeps movie minded in another weird attempt to sync that book with everything. nope ..no.
nikkio3000 3 years ago
but if edward's spit like burned things what would happen when him and bella kissed it would like hurt..
PetiteKCullen 3 years ago
Edward and Jacob had "brotherly daps." That was phoney. Blonde joke after blonde joke. Lame. The "Fido" bowl. Phoney. And yeah, Carlisle took the initiative to check Jacob's chomosome count, but he didn't know they had sperm or the baby needed blood. Useless doctor. That whole book completely sucked ass.
Graciehz 3 years ago
exactly.
nikkio3000 3 years ago
LMAO the blonde jokes were great. Jacob's part was my favorite. Like I keep saying, he was the only one even REMOTELY in-character for me. I miss the old Edward, too. And OMFG I LOVE GARRETT, HE'S AMAZING. As far as the movie: Am I the only one who would appreciate an 8-hour long youtube video of Rob Pattinson reading BD? LMFAO! His reactions would be priceless. I can just see him cursing Chapter 7...*gigglesnort* I hope they don't make a BD movie. It'd fail epically like the book.
AcTuaLxReaLiTy22 3 years ago
"I have heard that Stephanie Meyer is working on a book about Mermaids. I am hoping that Seth imprints on a shrimp who leads them shape shifters to the land of sea sirens. I don't know about you but that sounds like some damn entertaining possibilities!"
ROFLMFAO.
I don't take credit for that, by the way.
skatergrirl133 3 years ago
lol
nikkio3000 3 years ago
the fido bowl WAS hillarious.
i laughed for ages over that. but the rest was awful.
i have crossed this book out. in my opionin, there is twilight, new moon, and eclipse. nothing else. maybe my own little ending where they get married and kill the volturi but they would NEVER have a kid. lol.
i love your ranting. youre hillarious.
TooVamptastic 3 years ago
I love your reviews! BD was really bad, I can't see them making a movie unless they change it and have a war - and then kill some poeple. Ugh! One of the best parts of the book thought (one of the only best parts) was on page 674 - "Edward and I had not had a last grand scene of farewell... It would be the same as typing the words The End on the last page of a manuscript." I thought that part was great, because thats what she did at the end of the book.
cubyegrl4 3 years ago
If the venom was acid it would have burned bella's face up...when he kisses her...
Fido Bowl! XD.
Benjamin and Garret,ftw!
I don't think I wanna see the BD movie...
I would be curious,but I prob won't see it..
Cept,gory delivery scene,awesomeness!
<3-Britt
PenguinsLovelyEC 3 years ago
and don't get me started on that little freakin traitor bitch Seth, i swear his crush thing with Edward just digusted me UGH! "o just break my collar bone it's ok as long as u are fine bella" And poor Leah o now werewolf girls are barren cause the dont get their period anymore which sdosent make any since at all..no...Ugh i can't..nope.
nikkio3000 3 years ago
i hated that jacob was hanging out at the house so much like a pet in the first place he would never do that. the fact that he threw the bowel at rosalie's freakin racist head was great but that whole crap-- jake just walkin in and out of that vamp liar like it was nothin playin guard dog around the grounds was sickening, falling asleep in fron t of the door like a big ass dog was vomit worthy, heeling on the floor like a dog again next to bella on couch made me sick. ---
nikkio3000 3 years ago
LOL your reviews just get funnier and funnier. Fido bowl. Pricless.
Jacob is a beast in bed. Priceless.
I know people have mentioned those points but they were brilliant. :D
akaisling 3 years ago
what about alistair? how awesome was he!! he was the superstar of the whole book even though he wasnt in much.....
wormtail 3 years ago
i figured out the blood thing once one of em said "bella won't eat any food" and i was like DURDURNURRR blood!
the only parts of this book i will ever reread again are the jacob and rosalie bickering sections.
dinglehopper89 3 years ago
I think they should make Eclipse and change/add stuff to the ending.
filipamd 3 years ago
hopefully. for me, eclipse was the ending.
summzzxoxo 3 years ago 2
yes. me a thousand times over yes.
nikkio3000 3 years ago
what did you think of the last two pages?
stfuarianne 3 years ago
All of the things you said in these reviews are so true. This book was such a disappointment. I want to go back in time and punch Stephenie in the face or something for even thinking that this was the perfect way to end the series. She's lying to herself if she thinks that we're going to get over it.
hazeleyes557 3 years ago
Everything you said was completely true! And the Carlisle impression cracked me up :)
kelfheart 3 years ago 3
I have to agree with you on all your reviews....I had been reading fan fiction up until this book came out and it read just like all the other Fan fiction.. sigh.. Keep up the good job!
leprakans 3 years ago
totally agree, a/w wasnt bella liked freaked out over the sight of blood, and the smell, but she was still human when she was drinking it. that right there seemed way OFC.
ReneeisMee 3 years ago 3
I mean Eclipse.
abbyemarlowx3 3 years ago
Poor letdowns through Harry Potter and twilight. Twilight was a worse letdown I think. I hope they don't make Breaking Dawn a movie. Just leave it at Twilight.
abbyemarlowx3 3 years ago
Jacob was a beast in bed XD That made my day XD
lola72263 3 years ago
OMFG I just remembered the FIDO bowl that was my favorite part (: lol
abbyemarlowx3 3 years ago
I didn't like Edward in this book much. Which is weird because I didn't like Edward or Jacob. I still liked Jasper. I don't know I always liked Jasper. lol 'Does it eat through things?' HAHAH I laughed a lot on that comment. Jacob is a beast (in bed.) lol I'm going to have to reread the whole book and say in bed.
abbyemarlowx3 3 years ago 2
So true!! =D
NicolaKatherine 3 years ago 2