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  • thnx, im crying again, again and AGAIN!!!! why you do this with meeee!???!? in almost EVERYYYY episode I'm crying!!!

    I loooved the end, and i cried too! hahaha

    IM LOVING EVERYTHING HEREEE!!!! really, you rock , you is everything!!!

    LOVED THE END:

    demi- please dont let me go

    joe- i wont , i promise!!!

    OH MY GOOOOOOSH!!!!!! today you will see my death hahahahahalollol (just kidding) wow, you is really A-MA-Z-I-N-G!

  • I betcha David doesn't know Demi has HIV and thats why Courtney is religious abiut her

  • aww so cute sweet adorable warm im sooo gushing over that moment right now!

  • lol sudenly an earthquake!

  • AT the ending I acted like a two year old... litteraly Heres how it went.

    Demi: "Please Dont let me go"

    Joe: "I won't. I promise"

    Me: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *Starts clapping*

  • @TeamJacobBlackWolfie i screamed aw and my dad looked at me like i was dumb lmaoooo0 awww

  • @XoXo2222xo Hey that is perfectly fine lol. If anyone was here I could have got the same look.

  • The ending was adorable! (: 

  • So romantic at the end I live this!!!

  • CUTTEST ENDING EVER!!!!

  • A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E! ooh crap.. an earthquake is so not good.

  • aww, the last part is SO sweet! :)

  • The ending was sweet. :)

    Like they just lost themselves for a while.

  • THATS SO FUCKING SWEET LMFAO!

  • omg perfect song for when miley and nick first kiss luv it very romantic

  • THIS IS MY FAVEROUT!!!

  • aww that is sooooo cute

  • I was like Yes,Haha,Joe is sooooo in there!Hehe..kidding!Or am I?Loved the ep!

    Or did I?

  • Ok ik this is a Jemi story but just wanted to type something my eyes were like wow! at 4:30!

  • CUTEST JEMI MOMENT EVER!!! xD

  • YES A REAL LOVE MOMENT!

    WOO x]

  • i noe this is late but some parts in the hall way where joe said things were missed it went reli fast and and JOE HAS A HEART :)

  • i love this.

  • i swear i ry in lik every epi...im not very sensitive either, u just make very emotinal stories :P

  • the end, was my favorite, so CUTE!

  • me either, it's not aloud in my country :((

  • i couldn´t watch episode 6 & 7

  • I love save you by Simple Plan!

  • very very awsome!!

  • lol an earthquakes a bit much but it fits

  • AWE!!!!

    my eyes watered at the ending!

    oh shit! hahahaha, i love this story

    ive never read one that was so good!

  • the ending was so random dude! lolerz

  • this is such a great series. i also love how joe and demi dont say their in love with each other after like, one week of knowing each other. all the other series do that, but urs is sooo good!

  • OMG Kevins dead?

    I coulden't se episode 6 and 7 so...

    i don't know what happend between so plz someone that saw it plzplzplzplz tell me or even you...The RealTz12895

  • aaaah the last lines

    aaah almost cry

    ok not so much like that

    but aah i love them

  • AWH !

    i thank the earthquake for bringing them close together :3 <3

  • wait didnt he TELL her already ?

  • i loved the end!!!!!

    they are so cute together!

  • the end is like the cutes thing ever

  • the end is so cute

  • please dont let me go

    i wont i promise

    so cute

  • Please dont let me go.

    I wont. I promise. :)

    Jemi <3

  • the earthquake was so unexpected!!!

    i love this series!!

  • aww that was a cute jemi moment so cute  !

  • why cant i see 6 or 7,!! the videos are there but i cant waych them!! what happend through thoose episodes

    can anyone please tell me!!! hahah please im desperate!

  • can someone tell me what happend in ep. 6 & 7?? I can't find it!!

  • 6 & 7 are still there, i read them about 10 mins ago. look again and u might find them :)

  • ahhh!!!!

    I loved the ending saying!! :)

    Demi "please dont let me go?"

    Joe"i promise i wont."

  • ahh i cant find 7 and 6!!

  • OMG the last bit is ssssooooo cute!!

    well done

    =]

  • omg! that was sosososooo cute :) ♥

  • that was so cute!

  • ending.......OMG CUH-YUTE

  • this has 40 play counts on my ipod, the episode, lol(:

  • how did you play it on your ipod?

  • I looked up on youtube "How to get youtube videos on your iPod" ..Its got alot of steps but its worth it. Haha, it took me 3 hours but I have all of em on my iPod.

  • ok like at the ending i like friggin cried!! my mom came in my room and was like r u ok and i was like yeah sorry

  • OMG I love the ending!

    It was so gosh darn cute!

  • OMG

    the last bit is soo sweet

    best jemi story ive ever read!!

  • oh my goodness :)

    this has got one of the best jemi stories...

    lol mine may be made with sony vegas and

    everything fancy... but this is amazing.

    my story is very good so if u guys wanna check it out

    go ahead :) but its probablly not as good aas tanisha's :)

  • i cant watch it =(

  • this is like the best story ever

  • You and RaquelGaspar write the best stories I have ever read! You both rock!

  • Soi just wanna get this staright..Joe walked out of Davids house cuz' he found out demi had lied to him about the whole orphan thing?

    (even though she's not really lying)

  • How many are all the episodes of Fall for you?

  • AWW GOD!! i know i just read this before but i cant help but read the whole thing again... since i lost in track.. BUT AS I SAID!! i REALLY LOVE THE ENDING!! and is it here when miley died or what?!! I REALLY LOVED THE LAST 2 CONVOS here!!

  • omg. love the ending.

    too cute :D

  • JEMi MOMENT. eek!

    :D

  • AWW!!!

    Jemi makes the cutest couple, no questions asked

  • that was totally awesome

  • Oh My GOD!!!!!!!! that ending made me cry for some reason i love it so much its like perfect like idk how to say but it as just.......PERFECT!!!!!!

  • Its very hard to read, but other then that i love it! so good :)

  • aww, the ending was cute!!

    loved it :)

  • same LoVeHuRtS97..HEYY BABES

    LOOL

    best mate <3

    hehehe

  • i cried really bad lol

  • I loved that Jemi Moment it was so awesome!!

  • did you know that marijuana is spanish for maryjane? lol! :D

  • aww, the end was effing cute!

    (:

  • this is the best episode!!!!!!

  • Can't it be Nelena instead? I'm not such a fan of Niley...

  • I totally agree. Lol.

    But anyways, the story is still amazing either way.

  • yeah it is! so awesome!

    I like Miley's music but not the way she acts in real life...I find her annoying smoetimes

  • Totally agree with yahh :)

  • jemiiiii moment:]]

  • the end was so sweet ur a really good writer

  • The ending omg its so good

  • awwh. i think this is my favorite episode yet!! soo cute!!! i really want joe to leave taylor now!

  • aww,

    that was the best ending EVER!

    i'm crying. :')

  • cute ending...i keep crying now! each episode!

  • oh my fucking gawd...that was so cute!

  • OMG the ending = my life.

    yay niley.

    poor taylor

    i hope she finds someone

    and is something going to happen to miley or selena?

  • oh yeah its such a beautiful Niley moment until damn .. you're high ..haha i remeber saying that to my bf before he was kissing me i smelled i was like godfuck you're high he just stared sorry for the little story!!! anyways luv this series & the end was beautiful

  • i wonder if.. joe's mom is gonna come back? to make the dad less... ABUSING?

  • omg

    the ending is

    so BEAUTIFUL

    i love the ending almost made me cry

  • oh my gosh!! this is awesome! Its really sad but good!! And loved the ending so much!! <3

  • One of my favorites by far :)

  • aww the ending made me cry :(

    and i am dead serious I did really cry im crying right now!! no joke I really am!

  • V SOO cute. :D

  • i love it but it isnt even a jemi story

  • it will be

  • i cried in the end when she's like

    "please don't let me go.."

    and he says.

    "i won't.i promise."

    OMG! :,} its so beautiful.

  • casomeone tell me the saddest song from this series they have ever heard?

  • love the ending = )

  • NO MUSIC MAN

  • aw this is soooo gooood!!!!! it makesme cryy <3 poor mileyy. the end was sooo cutee :)

  • aww the ending was cute :)

  • this is my new drugs :)

  • Ugh, I hate Youtube's new copyright thing. Now we can't listen to the awesome audio. =\

    Aww. "Please don't let me go."

    I love that!

  • oh my.... how cute is that!

  • the ending was adorable! haha! i really like your series!

  • i didn't get to see this video!!it's said this video is no longer available

  • it means u have 2 keep refreshing the video and it should work that happens 2 me 2

  • awesome ending i like when you said please don't let me go and Joe says I wont i promise it was so sweet!!! i loved it!!

  • just oh mii gosh!!!!!!!!!i have  maths test tomo and i cudnt care less coz ds series is too addictive!!!!!

  • the sweetest thing ever !

  • music? bit I love your story ! really good job !

  • omg omg omg endings too cute!

    but i do feel a little sorry for taylor

    even though im wayyyyy team jemi!!

  • omg i loved the ending

  • I LOVE THE ENDING! OMG<3

  • love the end <33333

  • Holy crap i love the ending.

    you should be an author,

    you can relate to ppl.

    when you write parts about like

    love and stuff it reminds me of

    Stephanie Meyer.

    You'll make it big

  • I was a bit upset that demi was cutting,

    i couldn't post this on the other one but yea..

    i love the series tho!

  • AHHHH OMG!!! SO CUTE!!!

  • OMG! the ending would be scary but it was really cute!!!! my eyes started watering! GREAT JOB!

  • I'm totally in love with this series! It's way beyond awesome. The end of this one was sooo cute <3

  • Oh my gosh, oh my gosh! (He whispered back: I wont. i promise.) I think i'm going to cry. I have read every single one of these and I stopped at #4 last time cuz I had to go but today, I'm probably going to read the rest. Unless there are like, 30. But I have looked for awesome star stories like this and you are very talented. Im subscribing and adding you as a friend. Now go make a book or something! Wow!

  • the end was awesome.You are an awesome writer.i loved every episode.keep up your awesome work.you leave me amzed every time

  • i loved the last bit :)

    awesome!!

  • I love this story\movie

    what's the first song please ?

  • 6:58

  • love the end!

  • lol! i learn about planets in 5th

  • please get rid of jaylor! it makes me feel sick

  • OH I loved this one sooo far because I just started reading your series

    At the end Loved it

    and In this one it makes me LOVE miley because I like her but now this makes me a real fan because shes good and helping people

  • dont make nick do drugs:(

    this is the saddest story, but i love it.

  • aww the ending was so cute!!!

    and i love how kevin, is like, nick's guardian angel

    this is awesome

  • I feel really sad that Kevin died!!! :(

  • :( i really want nelenaa

    sorry if i sound like a baby

  • totally awsome it's so sweet and romantic.

  • gosh, i almost cried at the ending

    awesome!

  • So Whats Rong Wtih Joe How Come His Ribs Hurt??

  • his dad beats him.

  • why did u make nick do drugs not cool but other than that love it

  • haha that ending rocked! : )

  • Aww. I loved the ending! It was adorable!

    Everyone wants a guy like that!

    Your a great writer.

    Love,

    Bri and Paige

  • the ending of this was amazing.

  • OMG! I Loved the ending!!!

  • aw i love the end

  • the ending was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Omg that was awesome!!!!!!!!!

  • i love how this has an earthquake in it and we jst had one in socal not that long ago...cute ending

  • OMG!! the ending was sooooooo romantic! i thought joe isnt going to hear wht demi said :D ahhh Jemii xD

  • the ending was super cutee!

  • ahhh so sweet!

  • uuuummmmmmmmmmmmm.sum parts r fast like when u show joe sometimes i cant read wat they say cuz they go by so fast i dont get a chance 2 read them.

  • your such an amazing writer and by the way...the ending was just too cute:)

  • When Miley was reading Nick's notebook, did you make that quote or is it an actual song lyric? The ending was really cute, by the way =))

  • AWW!!!! I LOVE THE END

  • Aww.

    The ending just made my day. <3

  • omg!! thats so cute!

  • i love the part at the end!! thats the most romantic thing yet <3

    great job!

  • omg i just started watching these and i love them! the end was super cute!=]

  • You are a really good writer

    and i love your series.

    They always make me cry!!

  • The ending is so sweet.

    <3

    In a awkward situation... xD

    Post more soon.

    Nu rush.

    :]

  • omg i love it  i love the ending .I wish that no thing happens to anyone plisss do the next one fast!!!!

  • ahhhhhhh awesome i wonder if every 1 is gonna b ok loved thay nick and miley kissed

  • so cute!

  • ahhhh... YOU JUST DON'T KNOW IT... but joe and demi love each other deep down.. lol

  • aw.tear.the ending was so cute.=)hurry nd make the next one.

  • omg...the ending was great!