why the hell are you still talking about it HAHA just GIVE IT UP already it was like 4 days ago. no one even cares just shut up lmao god your annoying.
Well, just to set the record straight, i am the second kid at 0:12 :P. And ya know what, my ass is just so damn sexy that everyone except for the the 2 losers that pointed that minor blooper out, missed out on my sexy-ness. A-men
It's a good attempt but this one's not going to win. My friend is working on one and he is a professional at this stuff. It is absolutely flawless, it looks like something you would actually see on TV.
Anyway, what matters is if you had fun or not. At least these guys look like they had some fun.
Oh ya and by the way 00.00 to 55.00 seconds in your video was total shit.
my advice, start from scratch buddy, turn off your computer disconnect your phone lock yourself in your room and take a sheet of paper and a pencil and write your own fucking commercial
hey 4fronator thanks commenting you piece of horse turd. maybe i can give some advice for your own video.
I think that you should come up with your own idea so that next time you dont turn something that was a solid piece of work into something that someone would be embarrased for people to finbd out he made it.
guys! problem. you need to fix the music. you gta watch copywrights...that just took u off the running for the competition...just rethink that part...but other than that and the lighting...good job...ish. and that adamsilvy guy need to loose the 'tude.
if you have to spend multiple minutes defneding a video that is "just fun" whats the point? other than that i think the criticism is fair, i mean why is it public if peopel can';t have there opinions. and does it really matter what sex a person is in order for them to comment your shit? anyway the video is fine. i dont even know what its for.. a compeitition? if soo sweet i hope you win and get money cause money is wicked (Y)
haha matt...u crack me up. and you cant type...but yeh...p.s. we got a call back about our video that was shown at the toronto film festival...and we have a couple more gigs...maybe we should do a vid for the TIFF next year...oh...and the MMVAs i got our passes...we got spot 15 on the red carpet...you in?
maybe you should consider to put your money where your mouth is so that you can back yourself up of your own commetns. id actually llike to see one of your films since you're the king of filming. so maybe you should consider for in the future to not brag about yourself because you're older doesnt generally meen your smarter than everyone else. And im not trying to say to stop cirtisizing...because you can...but next time dont be a dick about it
you stupid piece of shit show us one of ur videos, hahahaa i'll critique it by going to where u live and beating u with a fucking bat which is what im gonna do tonight at 4:43 eastern time...shuit the fuck up...i dont know these people but theyre gonna win.
To be honest with you DF, I didn't know this was your video when I commented. I thought it was AdamS's. I have no problem with you personally, and if you read my posts I never said I was any more intelligent than you. I only commented because of the foolishness that AdamS was spouting about Ashley and since I thought it was his video I wanted to show him he's not the man.
But if you're looking to get into a career of making videos like this then you need to get used to ruthless criticism, because in the industry people don't care about your feelings. They don't care how long you've been in the field. I have no problems with you personally, and if you read through my posts I never said at any point that I was any more intelligent than me. You proved that by attacking me personally with name calling
. It might make sense to you, but from an outside perspective, it doesn't. If you used a tripod then you need some practice, because the camera is shaking everywhere. And if you plan on commenting on someone else's IQ I'd recommend you learn to have a civilized conversation without resorting to name calling.
and yes, we did use a tripod FYI and there is a huge relation from the start to the end....but i understand you have the IQ of a 2 year old...or at least you just act like one
First of all, I'm a marketing student, so I don't make videos or play video games. I hire the people you're aspiring to be. Basically I'm the brains behind the operation. However it IS my job to critique videos and decide whether or not to air them. I see that you say that your video has connection between the beginning and end; however you neglected to explain it.
PS: we're jsut kids we're not 25 year old slobs that make top notch videos and play video games all day. Obviously this home video doesnt suit you so maybe you should stop wasting you time and try to critique an actual movie for once in your life...hack
Im sure you have nothing else better to do than critisize younger kids' videos....maybe you should make your own video with all that bull you mentioned so that it could turn out better than ours. (good luck making it under a minute buddy) Or are you all talk?
(im sure that you wont have enough time to make a movie because of your busy schedule of being a jackass)
Hey MattM252 its nice for you to critique our video and i accept your opinion but maybe you should reealize that we based this whole video on purely having fun and to have a good time....i can see that you've never heard of the word fun before. And yes, you're right, this video was made by a bunch of 15 year olds on a free afternoon because we were bored and we like to do something with our lives.
Ok, Ashleyman you fucking shemale are you a guy or a girl, or both? Why the fuck would you rip on this video. You have nothing better to do in your spare time so you sit at your computer and make music videos? That's fucking pathetic. Go sit infront of your computer and get fat you ugly bitch.
Haha, I think you should get started on another video, this is nothing compared to what friends have made at film school. Goodluck anyways, just givin you a heads up...
I wasn't going to comment on this video, but when I saw you where talking smack and getting as low and childish as to insult someones name, I decided I would. I'm pretty sure that the goal of these videos is to make a professional looking video. This video looks like it was made by a bunch of 15 year olds with a free afternoon. (as I'm sure it probably was)
For starters your lighting is terrible.. you need to light the faces of your actors. You don't even need professional equipment. A simple desk lamp would have done the job. Second, invest in a tripod. And don't tell me you were going for an effect, because it just looks sloppy. Also there's no connection between what happens in the video and the slogan you're using at the end.
A commercial should be circular, displaying your slogan through the actions in the video. When displaying the stores that the card is usable in, make sure it matches the beat of the music or else... again it looks sloppy. While we're on the topic of music, you need to have the music end for a reason. Not just fade out to suit the progression of the video. It just sounds bad. Finally you didn't really give a reason for why the two characters are racing... making the whole video look kinda' dumb.
eww the blonde guy is ugly.
nora309 3 years ago
NICEE COMMERCIALL
YORKDALE (YC XD)
LOLS .. i would want to be one of dem peopel getting off the subway
xSkyPhoenix 3 years ago
bad music mixing
lwengle 4 years ago
lmao yorkdale..
eglinton strip
this vid was prue jokess i liked it guud job
divino27 4 years ago
frade, i think we lost... is there guna b a runner-up? this bullshit
MrOoglePwn 4 years ago
D-Frade and Speig!!!!! Over 3000!!! Congrats guys!!
13aller23 4 years ago
... its not as good as some of the others , but its a great effort .
xlredrum 4 years ago
not bad , guys . (:
xlredrum 4 years ago
hmmmm, this is actually pretty good~!
good luck!
OrangeCherries 4 years ago
2000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
k, in the uncut, behind-the-scenes, extra bonus features... u'll see that i actually run back to my room to get the card. def squad rep.
MrOoglePwn 4 years ago
The guy in the orange shirt left his SPC card on the table and then ran to the mall to shop?
jan1cia 4 years ago
yeeeeeeeee, we closin' in on 2000 views, baby!
MrOoglePwn 4 years ago
wow k just shut up already oh my freaking god why to you have to battle with me WHOOPDEEDOO just stop. Your acting like a fag.
4fronator 4 years ago
why the hell are you still talking about it HAHA just GIVE IT UP already it was like 4 days ago. no one even cares just shut up lmao god your annoying.
4fronator 4 years ago
wow i actually feel really bad for you....your friends must be creeps
I used to think that you were a normal kid but making a commet like that is just pathetic....and no it wasnt 4 days ago it was actually 1 day ago...
nice try buddy you were close, maybe next time.
and you said that no one even cares!?!?
are you referring to his nice ass or to that fact he left the card on the desk
either/or would be nonsense
DFsmooth 4 years ago
Well, just to set the record straight, i am the second kid at 0:12 :P. And ya know what, my ass is just so damn sexy that everyone except for the the 2 losers that pointed that minor blooper out, missed out on my sexy-ness. A-men
MrOoglePwn 4 years ago
thanks man
for being honest i appreciate it
DFsmooth 4 years ago
No hard feelings tho, good work!
GitThatMutha 4 years ago
It's a good attempt but this one's not going to win. My friend is working on one and he is a professional at this stuff. It is absolutely flawless, it looks like something you would actually see on TV.
Anyway, what matters is if you had fun or not. At least these guys look like they had some fun.
GitThatMutha 4 years ago
CONTINUATION
Oh ya and by the way 00.00 to 55.00 seconds in your video was total shit.
my advice, start from scratch buddy, turn off your computer disconnect your phone lock yourself in your room and take a sheet of paper and a pencil and write your own fucking commercial
DFsmooth 4 years ago
Its honestly disgustingly pathetic that your older than us and you cant even think for your self or come up with your own idea
i actually find it pretty funny that you;re erasing every negative comment?
you honestly think that i give a fuck what people think about my video?? Guess again buddy
DFsmooth 4 years ago
hey 4fronator thanks commenting you piece of horse turd. maybe i can give some advice for your own video.
I think that you should come up with your own idea so that next time you dont turn something that was a solid piece of work into something that someone would be embarrased for people to finbd out he made it.
DFsmooth 4 years ago
00:33 it shows you on the train holding both of your cards where at ):12 you can clearly see his card is left on the table. Overall pretty good video
4fronator 4 years ago
oh someone already pointed this out =P sorry
4fronator 4 years ago
us 3
DFsmooth 4 years ago
great job overall you 2
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
you guys are awesome, so many people coopied you hahaha...hop eu win and u definetly should
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
daniel frade is the greatest human being alive
ConwayStreet 4 years ago
guys! problem. you need to fix the music. you gta watch copywrights...that just took u off the running for the competition...just rethink that part...but other than that and the lighting...good job...ish. and that adamsilvy guy need to loose the 'tude.
MaverickProductionsI 4 years ago
AWSOME VIDEO!! you guys did an awsome job!!! i hope you wiN!!
JoanaF88 4 years ago
the 2nd kid on 0:13 left without the card lol..funny vid though
LightUponLight888 4 years ago
okay best one i've seen all day i give you guys 5 stars...
lol you guys have and spcvip :P
i just have the regular one.
ilovethepanicchannel 4 years ago
The final verdict is:
Daniel, Eli and Silvy -1 and MattM252. -0
MrOoglePwn 4 years ago
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
CROSSED A 1000 VIEWS BABY!!!!
DFsmooth 4 years ago
thanks for that H34TH3RH34TH3R
DFsmooth 4 years ago
if you have to spend multiple minutes defneding a video that is "just fun" whats the point? other than that i think the criticism is fair, i mean why is it public if peopel can';t have there opinions. and does it really matter what sex a person is in order for them to comment your shit? anyway the video is fine. i dont even know what its for.. a compeitition? if soo sweet i hope you win and get money cause money is wicked (Y)
H34TH3RH34TH3R 4 years ago
haha matt...u crack me up. and you cant type...but yeh...p.s. we got a call back about our video that was shown at the toronto film festival...and we have a couple more gigs...maybe we should do a vid for the TIFF next year...oh...and the MMVAs i got our passes...we got spot 15 on the red carpet...you in?
ashleyman 4 years ago
alright i guess we're cool now and i guess i went a bit over board, my bad.
I understand where you're coming from
DFsmooth 4 years ago
nice to meet you hot shot
maybe you should consider to put your money where your mouth is so that you can back yourself up of your own commetns. id actually llike to see one of your films since you're the king of filming. so maybe you should consider for in the future to not brag about yourself because you're older doesnt generally meen your smarter than everyone else. And im not trying to say to stop cirtisizing...because you can...but next time dont be a dick about it
DFsmooth 4 years ago
yeah what he said bitch fuck you, FUCK YOU!!!
you stupid piece of shit show us one of ur videos, hahahaa i'll critique it by going to where u live and beating u with a fucking bat which is what im gonna do tonight at 4:43 eastern time...shuit the fuck up...i dont know these people but theyre gonna win.
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
And CV4TJ11, you're an idiot.
MattM252 4 years ago
To be honest with you DF, I didn't know this was your video when I commented. I thought it was AdamS's. I have no problem with you personally, and if you read my posts I never said I was any more intelligent than you. I only commented because of the foolishness that AdamS was spouting about Ashley and since I thought it was his video I wanted to show him he's not the man.
MattM252 4 years ago
But if you're looking to get into a career of making videos like this then you need to get used to ruthless criticism, because in the industry people don't care about your feelings. They don't care how long you've been in the field. I have no problems with you personally, and if you read through my posts I never said at any point that I was any more intelligent than me. You proved that by attacking me personally with name calling
MattM252 4 years ago
than you***
MattM252 4 years ago
Frade Eli and Silvy
DFsmooth 4 years ago
. It might make sense to you, but from an outside perspective, it doesn't. If you used a tripod then you need some practice, because the camera is shaking everywhere. And if you plan on commenting on someone else's IQ I'd recommend you learn to have a civilized conversation without resorting to name calling.
MattM252 4 years ago
great job frade and eli!!!!
you 2 will win forsure!!!
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
great video guys!! youre goonna win theres no comparison !!!!! with the other vids!!!!
especially matt m
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
and yes, we did use a tripod FYI and there is a huge relation from the start to the end....but i understand you have the IQ of a 2 year old...or at least you just act like one
DFsmooth 4 years ago
First of all, I'm a marketing student, so I don't make videos or play video games. I hire the people you're aspiring to be. Basically I'm the brains behind the operation. However it IS my job to critique videos and decide whether or not to air them. I see that you say that your video has connection between the beginning and end; however you neglected to explain it.
MattM252 4 years ago
PS: we're jsut kids we're not 25 year old slobs that make top notch videos and play video games all day. Obviously this home video doesnt suit you so maybe you should stop wasting you time and try to critique an actual movie for once in your life...hack
DFsmooth 4 years ago
CONTINUATION
Im sure you have nothing else better to do than critisize younger kids' videos....maybe you should make your own video with all that bull you mentioned so that it could turn out better than ours. (good luck making it under a minute buddy) Or are you all talk?
(im sure that you wont have enough time to make a movie because of your busy schedule of being a jackass)
DFsmooth 4 years ago
Hey MattM252 its nice for you to critique our video and i accept your opinion but maybe you should reealize that we based this whole video on purely having fun and to have a good time....i can see that you've never heard of the word fun before. And yes, you're right, this video was made by a bunch of 15 year olds on a free afternoon because we were bored and we like to do something with our lives.
DFsmooth 4 years ago
Hey Ashleyman shemale, I saw your "Red DVD" it's shit. So stop being a fucking pig and get a life or get fat infront of your computer.
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
hey bud...u for got a word...it is the S**T! you aint got nothing on me...
ashleyman 4 years ago
It is aweful. You probably used Windows movie maker. I could do that in 5 minutes. Stop bragging. You're a nobody going nowhere.
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
Ok, Ashleyman you fucking shemale are you a guy or a girl, or both? Why the fuck would you rip on this video. You have nothing better to do in your spare time so you sit at your computer and make music videos? That's fucking pathetic. Go sit infront of your computer and get fat you ugly bitch.
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
hmmm...interesting. this is my competition?
HA! i'm laughing. check out my music vidz i've made for clients...
our video is amazing. like GOLD! solid GOLD!
ashleyman 4 years ago
Haha, I think you should get started on another video, this is nothing compared to what friends have made at film school. Goodluck anyways, just givin you a heads up...
Nolanky12 4 years ago
See Ashleyman shemale, Nolanky12 at least can give us constructive critisism. You have shitty videos shemale and you make fun of us?
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
I wasn't going to comment on this video, but when I saw you where talking smack and getting as low and childish as to insult someones name, I decided I would. I'm pretty sure that the goal of these videos is to make a professional looking video. This video looks like it was made by a bunch of 15 year olds with a free afternoon. (as I'm sure it probably was)
MattM252 4 years ago
matts hut the fuck up you stupid fuck!!!!!!!!!!
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
this si a fuckin sick video hey matt when these 2 win youre gonna be laughing right???
got any friends??
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
I'd reply to CB4TJ11, but judging by his posts, it looks like he's hurting enough on his own.
MattM252 4 years ago
For starters your lighting is terrible.. you need to light the faces of your actors. You don't even need professional equipment. A simple desk lamp would have done the job. Second, invest in a tripod. And don't tell me you were going for an effect, because it just looks sloppy. Also there's no connection between what happens in the video and the slogan you're using at the end.
MattM252 4 years ago
A commercial should be circular, displaying your slogan through the actions in the video. When displaying the stores that the card is usable in, make sure it matches the beat of the music or else... again it looks sloppy. While we're on the topic of music, you need to have the music end for a reason. Not just fade out to suit the progression of the video. It just sounds bad. Finally you didn't really give a reason for why the two characters are racing... making the whole video look kinda' dumb.
MattM252 4 years ago
NO COMPETITION!!!! hopefully we got his one in the bag
DFsmooth 4 years ago
its really good :)
roly221 4 years ago
wow i'm thinking of makin one but this is very hard to beat competition! so good job
-from a very jealous competitor
LaundrySucks 4 years ago
yo adamsilvy29 whoever you are im sure youre a sellout or a bust and this video is amazing!!
good job you 2!!
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
great job Frade! I love it
Igli
13aller23 4 years ago
It was my idea Lawrence. Most of the stuff they did was my idea.
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
wow! very good filming silvy....i think it must of been terribly hard filming on a tripod...but sweet job...
lwengle 4 years ago
SOLID!!! pleaase give me your babies
bengottlieb10 4 years ago
this is amazing.. u guys are def. gonna win
vanessa349 4 years ago
lol ya losers!! im in one of these contests. its not on youtube yet but were so gunna win!!
caitlinrox 4 years ago
We're going to win 100%. Every other video already submitted either sucks, or doesn't follow the contest rules.
adamsilvy29 4 years ago
amazing
Hockeynutt 4 years ago
Who ever made this commercial is GOD. I must meet them. I must emerge from my hole and ascend three floors to meet this wise man they call... Joey!
BWMedia 4 years ago
NO COMPETITION!
DFsmooth 4 years ago
wow, this is amazing!!!
CB4TJ11 4 years ago
This is the greatest commercial i have ever seen in my life! You will hands-down win win the $3000!
- a very hard critic
MrOoglePwn 4 years ago