hey dude, i just wanted to know whether or not you do any monologues that you wrote yourself...i'm not saying that you're not good because you are, i just would like to see some of your own work..
this was a good choice for a monologue. i'd never heard it before and i thought u did a pretty good job at it.
a couple things though. let it flow more and have less pauses in your speech. there were some pauses you had that were effective, but if you pause too much it takes away the intensity of the performance and slows it down a little bit.
also i thought your hand movements were VERY good, but when u turn ur body left and right, it can be distracting sometimes.
hey where did you get this from? can i please have it, i love it!!
NestiGee 2 years ago
hey dude, i just wanted to know whether or not you do any monologues that you wrote yourself...i'm not saying that you're not good because you are, i just would like to see some of your own work..
Lachurchboy 2 years ago
hey man, good work! Check out my new scene!!!
Bfolks84 2 years ago
wow that was sooo good!=] lol but...
the guy you were talking to had to be tide down right? lol
RIght?
geeksofthestreet 2 years ago
this was a good choice for a monologue. i'd never heard it before and i thought u did a pretty good job at it.
a couple things though. let it flow more and have less pauses in your speech. there were some pauses you had that were effective, but if you pause too much it takes away the intensity of the performance and slows it down a little bit.
also i thought your hand movements were VERY good, but when u turn ur body left and right, it can be distracting sometimes.
very good otherwise
thereaper21112 2 years ago