The melody is happy and up beat, but perhaps a little too much. Try a lower key or more bass. I feel it would really be awesome, an octave lower and a little slower then. It would be much more dramatic........also, if one varied the tempo
It's just an idea to play around with. Music is so awesome........it's impact can be.........collaboration like The Beatles had
can make it better. Keep up the great work A. Luv ya.........P.
The melody is happy and up beat, but perhaps a little too much. Try a lower key or more bass. I feel it would really be awesome, an octave lower and a little slower then. It would be much more dramatic........also, if one varied the tempo
It's just an idea to play around with. Music is so awesome........it's impact can be.........collaboration like The Beatles had
can make it better. Keep up the great work A. Luv ya.........P.
Paloma88Cruz 2 years ago
okay this is complete shit in my opinion. some of your other stuffs good tho:)
abcYASMIN123 2 years ago
might be too fast?
maybe slow it down a bit, just a suggestion
acuity1980 2 years ago
i thought of that....but i found it that if played slow...its sort of emo:P so i decided to make it happier and fantasy rpg like:)
AirinFong 2 years ago
i understand :)
you´ve got a point ^^
acuity1980 2 years ago
@AirinFong I get the idea. It might work with another melody, but too bad not with Kiss the Rain. I like your Angel('s) Wings though!
bloocoothagirl 2 years ago
nice this song is awesome on piano too.
samsterjamster111 2 years ago