Doc Savage, The Man of Bronze: DETARNISHED! - Trailer #4 - "The Main Event"

[CSavageSr]

Ron Looks just like Doc. George Pal was behind the times here. 

[SuperXAsh]

what this scene needed was a better choreoprapher. i liked the idea of these guys trying to outdo each other in different fighting styles... but it looked so... cheap and poorly done that it took out all the coolness of the concept.

Your editing is pretty awesome.

[FEslark]

@SuperXAsh

Thanks for the thumbs-up!

The fanedit isn't perfect, but the cumulative effect of all the changes is pretty dramatic.

Have you seen the NEWSREEL yet? Check it out(!). (Search "DeTarnished: The Newsreel" here on YouTube.)

[FEslark]

The fanedit is complete and has been released. The second portion of this trailer - labeled "The Main Event. After." - represents the Doc/Seas fight scene as featured in the completed fanedit.

[marcd30319]

Much better, but I hope the awful music is taken out.