the picture of renesmee is cute , you have a good understanding of all the characters and the pictures are all nice . but i wish you would make the changes from text to text longer because i can not read them
Renesmee :" What's so bad about letting daddy read your thoughts?"
Gee Renesmee i don't know ..how about you get back to me on that in a couple of years when you and Jacob will be having sex and your dad can see that in your thoughts!
I love this song, Moonlight Sonata! My cousin used to play this on the piano for me when I went to see him, but he cant play the piano any more. He got into a bad car accident that left him paralized. :(
this is really good. but MusicLibzTwilight is right. the music does make it a little bit hard to concentrate on what's happening in the story. but great vid! keep it up! =]
@MusicLibzTwilight Thanks! I do write fiction as well as lyrics and music in my free time! I hope you're enjoying our series! If you take a look at the rest of the series, you may notice that our music selections for each chapter have improved. Don't forget to subscribe, our next chapter should be released within the next 2 to 3 weeks.
@SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 i was wondering if you could check out my series of these it would mean a lot to me considering you are such a great writer and all and plz comment an tell me what you think
OMG this was SOOOOO nice! omg i LOVE it! really good work! and the idea of nessie go shoping is... sooo nice too! omg i dont undestand that some dont like this?!... ;) i mean if you watch this video then you musk know what it is and if you think fan-fiktion is stupid then dont read it! well.. the point is I LOVE THIS VIDEO! :D
ok seriously nessie does talk u should read ur books again obliviously ur not a twilight fan if u didnt know nessie does talk and she does rather show ppl things i dnt want to pick sides im just saying to point it out
ITS NOT HER FIRST TIME OUT SIDE THEY HAVE TO TAKE HER TO THE COTTAGE AND TO CHARLIE!!!!! the person who did this toatally gets jacob right like him butting in and being pretective of nessie and rosalie wanting...... nessie ......
but u tottaly screwed it over with everybody else i call a redo!!! Thank you for your time, Goodbye
no her first time in public was when she went to charlie and then on her way home with bella bella saw that necklace or breaclet (forgot which one) and bella took renesemee in to the store!! kay?
no her first time in public was when she went to charlie and then on her way home with bella bella saw that necklace or breaclet (forgot which one) and bella took renesemee in to the store
wrong wrong gay what ever that is toatally wrong renessmee wouldnt say / think that and any way it says what happens after chapter 1 not the end of the book!!!!!!!!! God you should redo it and actually get it right!!!!!! besides edward and bella didnt go wake nessie up plus bella would NOT say anything for u that would be said by jacob or edward!!!!!!! NESSIE DOES NOT TALK!!!!! THERE IS NOTHING ABOUT A SHOPPING SPREE U HAV TO BE READY FOR!!!
@coolkids0987 This is a rewrite of Breaking Dawn? This is an AFTERWARD? A fan-fic? And please get your facts straight, Nessie DOES talk. She just prefers to show people things.
Alice cant see Nessie's future cuz in the book Alice says she can see humans cuz shes been one before and she can see vampires since she is one!! find it in the book....i jus read that page last nite so ur rong!
@Rockprincess7478 Ha! I wish!!! But no, this is simply a follow up series to the actual Breaking Dawn, completely fanmade aside from characters, and clearly only a fanfic.
@BellaxEdwardxRenesme Excuse me? WE REALLY ARE twilight fans, and we know that Alice cant see Nessie's future. This is becuase she is so attached to Jacob, however at the moment in the chaper you are reffering to, Jacob isnt around, and if you remember, Alice doesnt tell Rose or Bella and says "Uh, its nothing" becuase she still cant see it clearly.
HOW CAN PPL LIKE THIS SHIT!! THIS VID WAS AWFULL !!!
eger6299 2 months ago
Omg this is soo stupid
Ibeleah 3 months ago
Cool'
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ForeverTwilight64 8 months ago
omg i can play this song on piano!!!! IT'S CALLED MOONLIGHT SINATA!!!!!!!!!!!!!hehehehehe!.....k thanks bye!
tbt1208 8 months ago
Omg IS NUMBER 7 OUT YET I NEED YO WATCH IS JACOB DEAD OR WHAT I NEED TO NO NOOOWWWW
aandlrock123 1 year ago
i love it keep writing
ThevickyXoXo 1 year ago
so good!:)
ouzounitsa 1 year ago
wow awesome i do the same thing. imagine wut happens after breaking dawn i ts really fun right?
JuJuGirl333 1 year ago
Nessie is sooo cute! Love the red hair! Mabey thats coz I have red hair lol
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deonbenedetto 1 year ago 15
very cool
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
the picture of renesmee is cute , you have a good understanding of all the characters and the pictures are all nice . but i wish you would make the changes from text to text longer because i can not read them
thank you for uploading : )
twilightcullen97 1 year ago
@twilightcullen97 can u check out mine plz
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
@xstoriesx1998 of course i will if it will help you what are they called .
twilightcullen97 1 year ago
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xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
bad pic of jacob... need him shirtless ;) haha good job
brookeizthebest1221 1 year ago
Renesmee :" What's so bad about letting daddy read your thoughts?"
Gee Renesmee i don't know ..how about you get back to me on that in a couple of years when you and Jacob will be having sex and your dad can see that in your thoughts!
That won't be awkward at all!!!
red84ro 1 year ago
@red84ro plz check out my series of this plz i really wnat more views
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
I love it great.AAA+++++
twilightgirl96ful 1 year ago
@twilightgirl96ful it would mean a lot to me if u could read my series
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
I love this song, Moonlight Sonata! My cousin used to play this on the piano for me when I went to see him, but he cant play the piano any more. He got into a bad car accident that left him paralized. :(
LaNora13 1 year ago
@LaNora13 Aww, that's very sad. I'm so sorry. Glad you like the music, though. :)
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 1 year ago
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xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
this is really good. but MusicLibzTwilight is right. the music does make it a little bit hard to concentrate on what's happening in the story. but great vid! keep it up! =]
wolfgirl3440 1 year ago
@wolfgirl3440 plz check out my series of this but different
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
@wolfgirl3440 it would mean the world to me if youchecked out my series and commented on them
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
@xstoriesx1998 what kinds of series' do you do? just tell me what to type in and i'll check it out! =]
wolfgirl3440 1 year ago
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xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
You should be a writer but maybe lose the music it's good but makes it hard to concentrate and discribe what's happening other than speech
MusicLibzTwilight 1 year ago 2
@MusicLibzTwilight Thanks! I do write fiction as well as lyrics and music in my free time! I hope you're enjoying our series! If you take a look at the rest of the series, you may notice that our music selections for each chapter have improved. Don't forget to subscribe, our next chapter should be released within the next 2 to 3 weeks.
-Stef
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xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
More please !
sammiou 1 year ago
Haha! More is on it's way, subscribe! We will be uploading Chapter 5 when we reach our next subscriber goal.
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 1 year ago
@sammiou please read mine it would mean a lot and please comment
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
That was amazing. I mean it's kinda weird that they were all talking about shopping. But it was still awsome.
parks246 1 year ago
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SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 1 year ago
@parks246 please read my version of after breaking dawn and comment it would mean alot
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
wow this is interesting
KandyGurl25593 2 years ago
How so?
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 1 year ago
OMG this was SOOOOO nice! omg i LOVE it! really good work! and the idea of nessie go shoping is... sooo nice too! omg i dont undestand that some dont like this?!... ;) i mean if you watch this video then you musk know what it is and if you think fan-fiktion is stupid then dont read it! well.. the point is I LOVE THIS VIDEO! :D
...and sorry for my bad english!
oOtwifieOo 2 years ago
@oOtwifieOo plzzzzz read my series and comment on it it would mean alot
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
@xstoriesx1998 Okay, i will :)
oOtwifieOo 1 year ago
That was kinda lame. I don't really get the point.
Didn't the last page of Breaking Dawn have THE END on it? Big indecation there!
Melodeathmetalhead 2 years ago
yes it did!!!!!!!!!!! look at the last pg when edward and bella r practicing and when it says forever the last word its on the next pg.
jess6527 1 year ago
@jess6527 plzzzz comment on my version of after breaking dawn it would mean a hole lot if u commented too :)
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
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xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
oh man that was awesome.... i really liked it....!!!! congrats....
Mszoey1993 2 years ago 2
@Mszoey1993 plzzz check out my series it would mean alot
xstoriesx1998 1 year ago
Well done, Tommorow I watch part 2
Ekneintje 2 years ago
that does not all happen in chapter 1....?
daisylopez100 2 years ago
@daisylopez100 This isn't Breaking Dawn this is a fan-fic to what happens after the breaking dawn book
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 2 years ago
cool loved it
TheSeptemberbaby95 2 years ago
im rating it 5 stars ur awsum im watching all ov dem i dont care how long it takes
numba1twilighter09 2 years ago
@numba1twilighter09 Thank you so much, it's nice to hear a sweet comment like that like we used to... now we just get comments on the negative things
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 2 years ago
ok seriously nessie does talk u should read ur books again obliviously ur not a twilight fan if u didnt know nessie does talk and she does rather show ppl things i dnt want to pick sides im just saying to point it out
lexi28818 2 years ago
ITS NOT HER FIRST TIME OUT SIDE THEY HAVE TO TAKE HER TO THE COTTAGE AND TO CHARLIE!!!!! the person who did this toatally gets jacob right like him butting in and being pretective of nessie and rosalie wanting...... nessie ......
but u tottaly screwed it over with everybody else i call a redo!!! Thank you for your time, Goodbye
lindsey and becca!!!!! ;P
coolkids0987 2 years ago
@coolkids0987 We never said it was her first time out, it was her first time out in PUBLIC. Kay?
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 2 years ago
no her first time in public was when she went to charlie and then on her way home with bella bella saw that necklace or breaclet (forgot which one) and bella took renesemee in to the store!! kay?
coolkids0987 2 years ago
i agree they didnt mean outside! they meant public jeez USE some commen sense!!!
no offence
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no her first time in public was when she went to charlie and then on her way home with bella bella saw that necklace or breaclet (forgot which one) and bella took renesemee in to the store
coolkids0987 2 years ago
wrong wrong gay what ever that is toatally wrong renessmee wouldnt say / think that and any way it says what happens after chapter 1 not the end of the book!!!!!!!!! God you should redo it and actually get it right!!!!!! besides edward and bella didnt go wake nessie up plus bella would NOT say anything for u that would be said by jacob or edward!!!!!!! NESSIE DOES NOT TALK!!!!! THERE IS NOTHING ABOUT A SHOPPING SPREE U HAV TO BE READY FOR!!!
coolkids0987 2 years ago
@coolkids0987 This is a rewrite of Breaking Dawn? This is an AFTERWARD? A fan-fic? And please get your facts straight, Nessie DOES talk. She just prefers to show people things.
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 2 years ago
we know she talks but only when she has to so why would she if she didnt have to and it says after chapter 1 which means chapter 2 duhhh
coolkids0987 2 years ago
is that the whole first chapter?
teamjacob209 2 years ago
U DIE TEAM JAKE IS THE BEST!
teamjacob209 2 years ago
i love both edward and jake but when jacob has his long hair its just kinda weird i like it better when its short
coolkids0987 2 years ago
team edward or die!
lismis60554 2 years ago
team taylor is better then team robert but i agree that team edward is better then team jacob
coolkids0987 2 years ago 5
wowz thanks for doing this i rate 5 stars and im going to suscribe
VampireChick1231 2 years ago
o boy. lol
weinmj 2 years ago
COOL
XOXOXOX
missguitarhero1 2 years ago 2
gay
misterE2012 2 years ago
naww i wanted the summary!! ya lazy bum!!
kmaster271 2 years ago
Alice cant see Nessie's future and she cant see anything whilst Jacob is around. And he was in the house.. Soo. You got it wrong..
HyperMeg1 2 years ago
i love this vidieos that you make
happyhighschooler 2 years ago
these is 4 fun BellaxEdwardxRenesmee
topretty4words 2 years ago
hahahahhahahah.... funny!!
-miranda :o)
pinkpandamiranda 2 years ago
*** if
BellaxEdwardxRenesme 2 years ago
iof u guys r twilight fans get it rite!!!
Alice cant see Nessie's future cuz in the book Alice says she can see humans cuz shes been one before and she can see vampires since she is one!! find it in the book....i jus read that page last nite so ur rong!
BellaxEdwardxRenesme 2 years ago
this is really cool and all but is this actually what happens? im only on Eclipse here people!
Rockprincess7478 2 years ago
@Rockprincess7478 Ha! I wish!!! But no, this is simply a follow up series to the actual Breaking Dawn, completely fanmade aside from characters, and clearly only a fanfic.
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 2 years ago
this is relly cool!!!!!!!!!!!
but thers a problem....alice and see renesmee's future....so how come in one of the chapters u made it said alice can see renesmee's future??
if u wer relly twilight fans u wud remember that
BellaxEdwardxRenesme 2 years ago
@BellaxEdwardxRenesme Excuse me? WE REALLY ARE twilight fans, and we know that Alice cant see Nessie's future. This is becuase she is so attached to Jacob, however at the moment in the chaper you are reffering to, Jacob isnt around, and if you remember, Alice doesnt tell Rose or Bella and says "Uh, its nothing" becuase she still cant see it clearly.
SAVEMIDNIGHTSUN17 2 years ago
awesome....... =)
SummerLilic92 2 years ago
That was SO funny!
Jacob: how about you ask her if she actuallly wants to GO?
that was a riotQ!
GinnyPotter132 2 years ago
Lovinit.....more..more....
twilightlovinit 2 years ago
nice job :D
sammimontana 2 years ago
<3 it. awesome
AshtonLynnStovall 2 years ago
i thought it was funny
wchild56 2 years ago
u should make LOTS more vids!
CoolChick1130 2 years ago
omg i was cracking up when alice said - u and me taking nessie on her first shopping spree!
AngelsWings503 2 years ago
lol luv the ending shoutout thnks agen lol
Snoopy47123 2 years ago
Ahh this is kool i just kept smiling the whole time it was playing lol !!!!
TSwizzle101 2 years ago
1I love it. It's very well detailed, but not long enough. Aha ;D
ItsKeriHunny123 2 years ago
finnally i found a story where they dont skip her childhood
JoeJonasLover11 2 years ago
cool
marleneunique 2 years ago
love it! verry funny
pokemonink 2 years ago
it's really good
wostwitch 2 years ago
BOTH!!!!!!!!!!!!
naikeema1 2 years ago
great.. ^^
16KarlinaCayenne16 2 years ago
awesomes ^u^
anjuhleen95 2 years ago
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!
HiphopG92 2 years ago
that was amazing
1keyshiacole1 2 years ago
yh it was gud gr8 job .x
Jazzingmystyle 2 years ago
its good.....SAVE MIDNIGHT SUN!
jmesnapfeesh 2 years ago
love it <3
kacey4075 2 years ago
love it♥
x0zanessa0x 2 years ago
It's a really great series!!!
I love it!!!
SmartGirlD 2 years ago
deadly vid
TheDublinAngelz 2 years ago
its realy beautiful
alstargirls 2 years ago
awesome vid
TwilightCullensBlack 2 years ago
yay loved it
jen1ife2fer 2 years ago
awesome vid!!!!
03andriana 2 years ago
loved it :)
have a great day!!
kdani2345 2 years ago
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
danyelaelena 2 years ago
why would edward ask alice when they were going to shop?
xXxHoney01xXx 2 years ago 3
i loved itt!!
PeAcE48599 2 years ago
it was funny and i liked it. i always wanted to know what happens to everyone after breaking dawn.
historychick86 2 years ago
Really good. But maybe some ither music, it got a litle dramatic. But it was really good
tmabm93 2 years ago
i want the nexy episode :)
xdctvx 2 years ago
i love it!!!!!!!!!
xdctvx 2 years ago
This is really good! i can't wait for the next episode
edward1901em 2 years ago
luv it! next eppy!
XxcheeringizmylifexX 2 years ago