Real life drama. This definitely reflects how greed and power motivates the minds of humans in our current day and age. Driving men to be emotionless, all for the root of evil. Plot, theme and underlined message. You guys did a great job in bringing a piece of dark America to the forefront. Keep up the great work.
A little too preachy to appear more real but it expresses some very good points about the housing mess and the economy. Not sure whether a more appropriate title would be the Gangster or Loan Shark.
The Marxism of Political Correctness taught in our schools, the Media's conditioning of political correctness, and the push for broad unfettered multiculturalism has served to starve our sense of national identity and to fear speaking the truth lest we offend or evoke conflict. It's time to stand tall, strong, and reject the policies and politics of liberalism and defend our democracy.
You blame bush for this? It's like blaming Adolf Hitler for the september 11 attack. Even though bush is not a popular guy, this flawed system was created way before he or his father took over president.
very very true...god is the only one that can make somehing out of nothing thats why the worlds out wack cuz no one believes in god and no one searches for advice that god can offer...
The finalists HAVE been notified. Perfecto! is in. To all of you, including myself, who did not receive notification, congrats on making some kick ass short films and merry christmas!!!
wow, u completely missed the point of this short. He committed suicide by overdosing. When you overdose you don't die immediately you slip into a coma and often have a final dream before death. The scene with the banker is his final dream. The banker killing him is a metaphor.
i like this vid alot but the only flaw i see (and im not sying this to rip on anything) but a life insurance fund is void and wont be paid if the holder commits suicide....
that being said, its not a bad short.
well written, well shot, etc.
ps check out our submission to ProjectDirect, "For Life Or Pie"
Thanks for watching. We did a lot of research on this subject. Many insurances companies do pay out even if you do commit suicide, but only after X amount of time. Hence our quote, "read the fine print"
Actually, if you have an insurance policy for more than 1 year, it does cover suicide. It only doesn't cover when you commit suicide within 13 months of purchasing the policy. FYI.
Wow I hope this competition doesn't come down to how many people you know, cause I don't know anybody. Nice work by the way you should watch me vieo, It's called IceBreaker tell me what you think...
Hey guys that was good. the sound picked up alot of amb from the room, the keying on the green screen needs to be fixed, but the whole story line was great good job
What you have here is a well-executed idea. In that, it was nice to see somebody care as much about sound as visuals. I understood your characters...kudos!
Music was also good, not predominant. And shots were framed particularly well during the black and white scenes. However, the introduction could have been lit a bit better - even a well aimed desk lamp could have given your scene some more emotional context (especially with digital...you have a lot of leeway).
It's very nice to see that you thought ahead about sound as well as image. Vocals were clear, present - I understood what your characters were saying. The music stood out while not becoming overbearing.
Visuals work as well; specifically the black and white segments. The introduction is nicely framed, but the colors and lighting are both a bit bland. Adding a nice key in there can really spruce things up in a good way. Overall, a well shot film that stands out just a bit. Good job.
Ok maybe im stupid or something BUT I didnt understand shit from this movie , just that a dude is shot and a chick is crying ... the messages is stupid like the bad things that companys do or what ??
the dude pictured in his dream what it would be like if he stood up against the bank and then he found out so he took and overdose of pills(the orange tube) and his wife freaks out cause he is dead ;P
WOW, AMAZING. FOR SOMETHING DONE IN 48 HOURS, R YOU KIDDING ME? THIS IS GREAT, THERE IS NO ECHO LIKE YOU GUYS ARE SAYING, MAYBE YOU SHOULD CHECK YOUR SPEAKERS. The actors were good, they seemed to play out their roles great. In my opinion out of the sun dance videos this is one of my favorites for sure!! Excellent work you guys!
Awesome man! Thanks for putting all these videos up, you guys crack me up! So, did you do this for a film class? or just for fun?
Mikey78227 2 years ago
wow that was quiet good great ending i think :)
s7t7u7a7r7t7 2 years ago
Dope short once again. Wicked idea. So true with the commentary.
JONJAYTV 2 years ago
Money is Debt and debt is money , If there was no debt there wouldnt be any money
BankOFganja 3 years ago
Reading all these comments are hilarious 2 words
GOOD
ACTING
very good acting
x3Gunman3x 3 years ago
money is debt.lol
what a cruel game.
andrewakaroyal 3 years ago
ashton kutcher?
andrewakaroyal 3 years ago
Real life drama. This definitely reflects how greed and power motivates the minds of humans in our current day and age. Driving men to be emotionless, all for the root of evil. Plot, theme and underlined message. You guys did a great job in bringing a piece of dark America to the forefront. Keep up the great work.
mediaconnection2g 3 years ago 2
A little too preachy to appear more real but it expresses some very good points about the housing mess and the economy. Not sure whether a more appropriate title would be the Gangster or Loan Shark.
chiyerano 3 years ago
Banker is Banker
ytuser2yahoo 3 years ago
Good Banker
ytuser2yahoo 3 years ago
typical american mentality, always blame others for what they have done wrong themselves. you should know better, there is no free lunch in america.
JXjohn 3 years ago
Amazing!
theseventhsociety 3 years ago
The Marxism of Political Correctness taught in our schools, the Media's conditioning of political correctness, and the push for broad unfettered multiculturalism has served to starve our sense of national identity and to fear speaking the truth lest we offend or evoke conflict. It's time to stand tall, strong, and reject the policies and politics of liberalism and defend our democracy.
Dillestman 3 years ago
This is so true. Look at what this world has come to. THANKS TO BUSH.
sugar2spice4u 3 years ago 2
You blame bush for this? It's like blaming Adolf Hitler for the september 11 attack. Even though bush is not a popular guy, this flawed system was created way before he or his father took over president.
sydneywhz 3 years ago 2
very stylish and a good subject
antnhec 3 years ago
that was really good guys nice work keep it up!
Doug212MLG 3 years ago
Nice video
Halocuber 3 years ago
very very true...god is the only one that can make somehing out of nothing thats why the worlds out wack cuz no one believes in god and no one searches for advice that god can offer...
doodleman100 3 years ago
The finalists HAVE been notified. Perfecto! is in. To all of you, including myself, who did not receive notification, congrats on making some kick ass short films and merry christmas!!!
keenanmartens 3 years ago
this video is whack!
Aherosxtrial 3 years ago 3
I love your guys videos, PETER ROCKS!
moldytac0 3 years ago
nice! check out "On Vacation" if u have a chance
lawrencechenfilms 3 years ago
ROFL, WHAT DID U DO! OMG
IBlacKTissueIPkz 3 years ago
very good.
sslego 3 years ago
good stuff, i dug it too.
Check out WHITE COLLAR CRIMINALS project direct. If you get time.
WeaponXTI 3 years ago
srupid how they tried framing him for suacide by overdose as he will have a bullet wound >.>
didnt quite think about that did ye>?
Devil1Css 3 years ago
wow, u completely missed the point of this short. He committed suicide by overdosing. When you overdose you don't die immediately you slip into a coma and often have a final dream before death. The scene with the banker is his final dream. The banker killing him is a metaphor.
w2pi 3 years ago
I dug it. Really good.
Check mine out if you get a chance. "Today I'm Tobias".
I'd love any criticism you may have.
deadmannequins 3 years ago
Interesting style choices. 48 hours? That's impressive - way to make it happen.
If you get a chance check out our Project Direct short "Hangman". Think you'll dig it and love to get your feedback.
perlerogrimmnon 3 years ago
Cool video!
Feel free to check out mine, Closet Party. good luck. oh and make sure to watch in HD as well
white1rc 3 years ago
Hey guys great job!!! I love the stark white BG. Great stylistic choice, and very cool hook at the end. Very impressed. Gooid luck with everything.
LK
lkrost 3 years ago
Fast turnaround guys, congratulations.
If you get a chance check out my film, NEXT DOOR.
benrelf 3 years ago
i like this vid alot but the only flaw i see (and im not sying this to rip on anything) but a life insurance fund is void and wont be paid if the holder commits suicide....
that being said, its not a bad short.
well written, well shot, etc.
ps check out our submission to ProjectDirect, "For Life Or Pie"
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
Thanks for watching. We did a lot of research on this subject. Many insurances companies do pay out even if you do commit suicide, but only after X amount of time. Hence our quote, "read the fine print"
thanks again for watching.
peter
w2pi 3 years ago
Hey Peter, when do you get the results? Good luck to you :-)
ninikb 3 years ago
Actually, if you have an insurance policy for more than 1 year, it does cover suicide. It only doesn't cover when you commit suicide within 13 months of purchasing the policy. FYI.
btoks197 3 years ago
Good story.
YourtubeReviewer 3 years ago
wow im suprised how it was Written, Shot and Edited in 48 Hours. but its pretty good .. everything from w2pi is good!!!
MegaDeathHawk 3 years ago
awesome..
pipedude23 3 years ago
That was really good.
Shaggy72 3 years ago
Great work.
Check out my entry NEXT DOOR
benrelf 3 years ago
Good job guys. FIGHT THE POWER!!!
Check out my submission "AMERICAN HAIKU".
Thanks for your time.
Lokeyno1 3 years ago
Not too shabby peter
38JCP35 3 years ago
share this with everyone guys.
starrwarz 3 years ago
Images and content are very interesting!
Check out my short entitled, Today. It also speaks of man's struggles in today's world. I'd like to hear your opinion.
Nice job.
Good luck w2pi!
VideoMedium 3 years ago
The content and images are very interesting. Good film. Check out my short film entitled, Today. It also speaks of man's struggles in today's world.
Nice work w2pi.Good Luck!
VideoMedium 3 years ago
how do you export in HD .. five minutes..
and keeping it under a gig
tebbutttt 3 years ago 2
great work as always guys
soultaker 3 years ago
Wow I hope this competition doesn't come down to how many people you know, cause I don't know anybody. Nice work by the way you should watch me vieo, It's called IceBreaker tell me what you think...
JoelLaFlamme 3 years ago
Really awesome video! Great message and great photography.
The acting could have been a little better but great job all the same. :)
DanielleMcOrmond 3 years ago 2
Hey, great job man!
If ya get the chance, check out mine "On The Bench".
Cheers!
ACombatFilm 3 years ago
Great outlook on what some people are going through these days.. nice job
woochyswilly 3 years ago 3
Excellent work... The ending had me. The soundtrack was perfect!
freshair345 3 years ago 4
awesome, XD
jaksplitter 3 years ago 2
Hey guys that was good. the sound picked up alot of amb from the room, the keying on the green screen needs to be fixed, but the whole story line was great good job
TheDeathbeam 3 years ago
Woochy and Pete!!! Awesome Job!!!! amazing! (its emily by the way!) yay! :)
emcdon1 3 years ago
5 ***** =)
cristhyam 3 years ago 2
Nice!!!
Ekyo666 3 years ago 2
awesome vid hope to see you in the finals
keenanmartens 3 years ago 2
awesome stuff, hope to see you in the finals
keenanmartens 3 years ago 2
What you have here is a well-executed idea. In that, it was nice to see somebody care as much about sound as visuals. I understood your characters...kudos!
Music was also good, not predominant. And shots were framed particularly well during the black and white scenes. However, the introduction could have been lit a bit better - even a well aimed desk lamp could have given your scene some more emotional context (especially with digital...you have a lot of leeway).
Good luck!
MBBarnett 3 years ago
Very nice! But Mr.Albatross made a fair bit too many hand gestures.
thirion1850 3 years ago
It's very nice to see that you thought ahead about sound as well as image. Vocals were clear, present - I understood what your characters were saying. The music stood out while not becoming overbearing.
Visuals work as well; specifically the black and white segments. The introduction is nicely framed, but the colors and lighting are both a bit bland. Adding a nice key in there can really spruce things up in a good way. Overall, a well shot film that stands out just a bit. Good job.
MBBarnett 3 years ago
That was pretty awesome, 4 stars! Keep it up SyF!
videogamer494 3 years ago
genius
toonrunedudehobby 3 years ago
i shared this with every person on myn contacts =]
starrwarz 3 years ago
this ain't bad but syf's just a legend
hoogblondbier 3 years ago
Rated in honestly 4 stars
guitarpoison 3 years ago
shot really well. i think it's great.
dancingbearfilms 3 years ago
Thought it was very unique.
I feel like a Youtube whore but, if someone would like to see my video I would appreciate any input.
=S
DRW90 3 years ago
Ok maybe im stupid or something BUT I didnt understand shit from this movie , just that a dude is shot and a chick is crying ... the messages is stupid like the bad things that companys do or what ??
MyEpicVision 3 years ago
the dude pictured in his dream what it would be like if he stood up against the bank and then he found out so he took and overdose of pills(the orange tube) and his wife freaks out cause he is dead ;P
surv1ver 3 years ago
WOW, AMAZING. FOR SOMETHING DONE IN 48 HOURS, R YOU KIDDING ME? THIS IS GREAT, THERE IS NO ECHO LIKE YOU GUYS ARE SAYING, MAYBE YOU SHOULD CHECK YOUR SPEAKERS. The actors were good, they seemed to play out their roles great. In my opinion out of the sun dance videos this is one of my favorites for sure!! Excellent work you guys!
pszczolka84 3 years ago
Great job guys, keep it up
l2ob 3 years ago
everything is great, just to be semi picky, audio has hardcore echoes. But once again awesome!
KarackAzul 3 years ago
good job :)
VforVerdin 3 years ago
just seems it relies too much on the technology.
nucleargarden 3 years ago
keep up the good work! :-)
rocksofspades 3 years ago 2
I have two comments, DON'T PICK UP THE RED PHONE
And I don't get the end really, could someone help?
Zaljinzoo 3 years ago 2
WTB Sequel :P
Favorited.
chaossaga 3 years ago 3
Nice
Keep up the good work
ChromePenguin 3 years ago 3
prettey cool
pache336 3 years ago 3
Very nice Hopefully theirs a sequel
Vspro 3 years ago 3
AWSOME WORK Id love to see a sequel, will there be one?
Watchurassfo 3 years ago 2
if this vid gets enough hits... spread the word!
w2pi 3 years ago
Good work.
PhabioRAM 3 years ago 2
Awesome WOrk, This is definitely sun dance material
l2ob 3 years ago
Awesome WOrk, This is definitely Sun dance material.
l2ob 3 years ago
I better be in the next one! Let's make a Polish action adventure starring myself. A Polish Rambo would work. Call me Rambosiewicz!
KobeKat69 3 years ago
Dude thats a fcuuking a cool idea but i should be the Polish Rambo
TheInternationalMan 3 years ago
thats really cool.
its so true..money comes from thin air and banks loan it out and charge you to pay them back the same amount and interest..its just not fair..
its ruining this country even more than it already was.
starrwarz 3 years ago
pretty good
pantelisOeO 3 years ago
very good, i look forward to seeing what you produce in the future, good luck with everything.
OLCTrigga 3 years ago
technical advisor..syf the giver noice, I like the movie too, keep them coming!
mark14009 3 years ago
good job fellows
imaburro 3 years ago
Pretty good.
RadiantHearts 3 years ago
yeh, nice one (Y)
i find it funny how you always call him syf :D
oofa3 3 years ago
haha awesome, this rocks :D
i loooove w2pi
Shoooob 3 years ago
hmmm, cool
alaskaboy101 3 years ago
Nicely done. I enjoyed it. =D
ExedEyes 3 years ago
first
roflwhatatube 3 years ago