Okay, apologies for being rough in advance, but I believe in honesty when critiquing. The concept was excellent, even if the title was a bit misleading, but poorly executed, primarily due to choreography. At no point did I believe in the characters. The sneakers were a bit off-putting (if humourous), and the random quotes detracted from the overall effect. Finally, if your credits are longer than your movie, you may want to rethink things ;). Keep filming, though - practice makes perfect!
No actually spider man cant die, why you ask, well in the comics by marvel he gets his eye ripped out and arm and dies, iron man carries his body to an underground casket but when the rest of the heros arrive spiders had carried his body and ate it and a cacoon like a real spider was underneath the bridge gwen died on and he came back with nightvison and stronger and had 8 legs growing out his back so yea, he will keep comin back
I Think that your films are great but i wish they could be longer although Youtube has a 10 min. limit i think u should split your movies into a few videos, this one rocked but i wish it was longer though and had a final fight , nice cliff hanger though, flash crossover i wish had him fight joker but that was great, carman sandiego and tobias diamond were both perfect.
It was a great ending - though I'd be lying if I said I didn't kind've want my own fight scene with him haha (not counting potshots from across the alley). Good stuff
I liked it but felt it was too short to have any impact, the fight scene was very "ehh" and the blue-and-white Nike shoes was just plain strange. Still for no budget, it was impressive and I liked it.
Great short. It has everything that makes a Spider-Man story...take away quotes or ideas beyond characters, fighting, villains, and ofcourse Spider-Man's witty mouth.
The nikes were a nice touch IMO. They made me wonder, "Hey, what is going on here?" So by the ending it all came together. I'm a new fan!
Thanks for watching and commenting on, "The Death of Spider-Man" so quickly! The credits were probably blurry because the video was still processing. It is a lot clearer now that the video is done processing. Thanks for the good feedback.
As for another Spidey-fan film, a Black Cat fan film is around the corner. Maybe Spider-Man will make a cameo. :)
Not bad. Liked the setup and everything. This should've been a lot longer though. Plus, I didn't get to see the closing credits at all. It was very blurry and hard to read. In any event, hope this isn't the last we see you do a Spidey fan film.
haha spidey needs to lose the beer gut and those goofy shoes. pretty bad
justin88182 5 days ago
This fucking sucks. Just like the rest of your shit.
Spidey doesn't wear fucking sneakers.
Don't quit your day jobs. The Irate Gamer makes better videos than this and he fucking sucks.
snake2006 1 week ago
i luv spidamans sneakas
TheYoungARTISTFTW 1 week ago
Spidey wears Nikes
MTFAMV 5 months ago
nice trainers spidy lol
mentalmason1 6 months ago
Okay, apologies for being rough in advance, but I believe in honesty when critiquing. The concept was excellent, even if the title was a bit misleading, but poorly executed, primarily due to choreography. At no point did I believe in the characters. The sneakers were a bit off-putting (if humourous), and the random quotes detracted from the overall effect. Finally, if your credits are longer than your movie, you may want to rethink things ;). Keep filming, though - practice makes perfect!
Snickerf 7 months ago
Spider man sold suit shoes because he poor
bunnychaser2000 7 months ago
When did Spiderman start wearing shoes?
THEGATESPRODUCTIONS 9 months ago
That the "Web of Shadows" voice wasn't it?
SonicStantz 9 months ago
Finally!!!!
Dapwnzer5000 10 months ago
nice vid. and nice spidey ending.
theXtreme1man 10 months ago
this shit is ggayyyy but that broad with the big hips and tight body!!!! MMMMMMMMMMMMM would tear that pussy up!!! cum in that shit like 45 times
IsItOnTab 10 months ago
lol rubbershoes xD
xiaoli26 1 year ago
spider man is too epic to die bad guys shld really figure that out by now
MrNoobthenub 1 year ago
hey great job and omg wit those sneakers thats strret fighter spidey! lol!
misho457ify 1 year ago
No actually spider man cant die, why you ask, well in the comics by marvel he gets his eye ripped out and arm and dies, iron man carries his body to an underground casket but when the rest of the heros arrive spiders had carried his body and ate it and a cacoon like a real spider was underneath the bridge gwen died on and he came back with nightvison and stronger and had 8 legs growing out his back so yea, he will keep comin back
FTWzombie 1 year ago
@FTWzombie i have no i dea wat u said lol
misho457ify 1 year ago
It was okay. But the costumes could be better. plus Mike could have had more lines. Still it was okay.
spidey8vader 1 year ago
NIce!! check out my spider-man fan film please! it's called rise of the symbiote^^
you will like it for sure!!
mickandgreg 1 year ago
it was so good. i hate the guy that makes a ten minutes limit. it make cool movies go to RUIN. anyway great job
TheArases 1 year ago
at first i was like spiderman is fat and has reboks on... then i was like these crackas are running around the ghetto playing dress up.... wtf
vaskar1 1 year ago
sorry nvermind
TheMarkshot 1 year ago
very very good, just one thing, why tennishoes
TheMarkshot 1 year ago
that was great! (though I feel sorry for the poor fellow who was killed by Kraven due to a mistake...)
spider394 1 year ago
I Think that your films are great but i wish they could be longer although Youtube has a 10 min. limit i think u should split your movies into a few videos, this one rocked but i wish it was longer though and had a final fight , nice cliff hanger though, flash crossover i wish had him fight joker but that was great, carman sandiego and tobias diamond were both perfect.
equilibriumFilms100 2 years ago
Oh my fault. That wasn't the real Spidey. Nice cliffhanger for an ending, though, when the real Spider-Man showed up.
gmarvelous7 2 years ago
It was a great ending - though I'd be lying if I said I didn't kind've want my own fight scene with him haha (not counting potshots from across the alley). Good stuff
SquareRootof0 2 years ago
At around 1:17 or 1:18 did Spidey punch that guy in the nads?
gmarvelous7 2 years ago
dude short
jokeronfiyahh23 2 years ago
o so that guy didn't have the spider senses to warn him, i was wondering.
the fighting scene were rly silly and there's no ending which sux too i think.
still nice work
Broockle 2 years ago
wait so this was the full movie?
FireKracker44 2 years ago
This was it. Thank you for watching it. :)
InfluenceFilms 2 years ago
spidey wears pumas? lmao
izai0429 2 years ago
Fun, man, fun.
Which is exactly what any Spidey franchise should be.
Thanks for letting me help out.
-mv
mikesotheremail 2 years ago
I love how Kraven looks like a pimp!!!
shishogan79 2 years ago
Haha yeah man I had fun w/ the role. Glad you liked it
SquareRootof0 2 years ago
I liked it but felt it was too short to have any impact, the fight scene was very "ehh" and the blue-and-white Nike shoes was just plain strange. Still for no budget, it was impressive and I liked it.
CxMxAlex 2 years ago
Great short. It has everything that makes a Spider-Man story...take away quotes or ideas beyond characters, fighting, villains, and ofcourse Spider-Man's witty mouth.
The nikes were a nice touch IMO. They made me wonder, "Hey, what is going on here?" So by the ending it all came together. I'm a new fan!
SuperManDCUni 2 years ago
this is terrible. The shoes are terrible.
SelfDestructiveEnt 2 years ago
Hey Kraven. Has anybody ever told you you talk too much?
JHowRides2Night 2 years ago
Hooray for Spidey!
MsHarlyQuin 2 years ago
Wish it were longer, but great job
onyx081 2 years ago
Thank you for those kind words onyx081. I'm glad you liked it!
InfluenceFilms 2 years ago
Great job as usual! Wish it was longer. Also, the sneakers made me lol. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not :P
Looking forward to Carmen Sandiego!
RenegadeKin 2 years ago
Thanks for those good words RenegadeKin!
InfluenceFilms 2 years ago
Thanks for watching and commenting on, "The Death of Spider-Man" so quickly! The credits were probably blurry because the video was still processing. It is a lot clearer now that the video is done processing. Thanks for the good feedback.
As for another Spidey-fan film, a Black Cat fan film is around the corner. Maybe Spider-Man will make a cameo. :)
InfluenceFilms 2 years ago
Not bad. Liked the setup and everything. This should've been a lot longer though. Plus, I didn't get to see the closing credits at all. It was very blurry and hard to read. In any event, hope this isn't the last we see you do a Spidey fan film.
MarkOneFilms 2 years ago