Oh man is this a great piece. I love the vocal lift at the end of the first line and how the guitar responds to it. Great ascending "oh" a couple lines later.
I envy your ability to construct a harmony. I don't know if it is the melody, mixing or just something about your voice, but they are so magical, vibrant.
Nice low lead in the interlude and a great momentum slow afterward. Love the reverse ending.
@Oswlek hey thanks for the positive comments, very thoughtful as well....
am doing a version of the song with the mourning kitchen and noraw18 - already recorded, in fact, and mourning michael is the producer/ mix man as well as playing on the song (which he did the bedding track for, if that's the right term).
Hi Keith...back for another listen of this most amazing song. So well composed and performed...the guitar is perfect and the vocals are just superb. Just a great tune brother. Have a Merry Christmas my friend.
@birkuscircus yeah i heard u on the radio show as well, was just saying to peter at mystonic the other day, she de man! disturbing that u like the video, though....
@PatrickGMoran thanks for commenting, i like the harmonies as well, ha-ha! but am changing 'em a bit - re-doing all the vocals and turning the guitars down cos they seem to overpowering, relatively...such a fusspot.
@blindsidedpoets thanks, and thanks for liking the video in which nothing happens! apart from a visibly high lint factor floating around in my bedroom.
@ThePatheticClub cheers, mate. will take a lot at more of ur stuff today; i noticed there are different stages to ur input? the at the west song/video seemed not as lo-fi as i remembered u were....! but i'm lo-fi myself, - ho! ho! - so it ain't a criticism.
very good, music doesn't need video anyway, sometimes it's better to hear a song for the first time without visual distraction. (video killed the radio star?) subbed your channel and hope you keep writing more. 5/5
Congrats on a thousand view!
TheEthosProject 10 months ago
Oh man is this a great piece. I love the vocal lift at the end of the first line and how the guitar responds to it. Great ascending "oh" a couple lines later.
I envy your ability to construct a harmony. I don't know if it is the melody, mixing or just something about your voice, but they are so magical, vibrant.
Nice low lead in the interlude and a great momentum slow afterward. Love the reverse ending.
A masterpiece, Keith.
Oswlek 1 year ago
@Oswlek hey thanks for the positive comments, very thoughtful as well....
am doing a version of the song with the mourning kitchen and noraw18 - already recorded, in fact, and mourning michael is the producer/ mix man as well as playing on the song (which he did the bedding track for, if that's the right term).
theawkwards 1 year ago
This is so good Keith!!! Love it!!! Kate
kate285 1 year ago
@kate285 thanks for your kind words, kate, am always grateful for positive feedback.
cheers,
keith.
theawkwards 1 year ago
Hi Keith...back for another listen of this most amazing song. So well composed and performed...the guitar is perfect and the vocals are just superb. Just a great tune brother. Have a Merry Christmas my friend.
PatrickGMoran 1 year ago
@PatrickGMoran thanks for commenting again sir. you have a good xmas as well,
cheers,
k.
theawkwards 1 year ago
This is great Keith, I thoroughly enjoyed it :D
iwearmyjamsinsideout 1 year ago
@iwearmyjamsinsideout belated thanks for commenting, though it occurs to me i may have commented back already on ur page.
keith.
theawkwards 1 year ago
HOW CAN THIS HAVE ONLY 210 VIEWS!?!
mystonicradio 1 year ago
@mystonicradio BETTER BUT STILL NEEDS ANOTHER 300 VIEWS!!! FACEBOOK!
mystonicradio 1 year ago
@mystonicradio hey i must've missed this comment somehow - belated thanks, peter, and thanks for posting to facebook as well.
k.
theawkwards 1 year ago
Beautiful song and singing...saved to favourites
CCMusicComposition 1 year ago
@CCMusicComposition many thanks, it always helps to have positive feedback...
keith.
theawkwards 1 year ago
This is beautiful--heard it on the mystonic radio show. I liked the video too. :D
birkuscircus 1 year ago
@birkuscircus yeah i heard u on the radio show as well, was just saying to peter at mystonic the other day, she de man! disturbing that u like the video, though....
cheers,
keith.
theawkwards 1 year ago
musically sublime.
building
great tune.
mystonicrecords 1 year ago
@mystonicrecords thanks again, sir -
keith
theawkwards 1 year ago
@theawkwards on todays radio show
mystonicrecords 1 year ago
@mystonicrecords aw, thanks for that! will check the radio show out and do the obligatory preening of myself....!
cheers,
keith
theawkwards 1 year ago
This is a beautiful song. Very well written. Love the harmony vocals.
PatrickGMoran 1 year ago
@PatrickGMoran thanks for commenting, i like the harmonies as well, ha-ha! but am changing 'em a bit - re-doing all the vocals and turning the guitars down cos they seem to overpowering, relatively...such a fusspot.
thanks again,
keith.
theawkwards 1 year ago
You know, the video is perfect for the tune. Beautiful.
blindsidedpoets 1 year ago
@blindsidedpoets thanks, and thanks for liking the video in which nothing happens! apart from a visibly high lint factor floating around in my bedroom.
respect -
keith
theawkwards 1 year ago
Very very nice....
gerbilho 1 year ago
@gerbilho good to hear from ya -
keith in aberdeen
theawkwards 1 year ago
Love it!
xoVaruna 1 year ago
@xoVaruna thankyou for commenting. off to finf out who u are now...!
keith.
theawkwards 1 year ago
Such self deprecation. Such good songs.
ThePatheticClub 1 year ago
@ThePatheticClub cheers, mate. will take a lot at more of ur stuff today; i noticed there are different stages to ur input? the at the west song/video seemed not as lo-fi as i remembered u were....! but i'm lo-fi myself, - ho! ho! - so it ain't a criticism.
thanks again,
keith
theawkwards 1 year ago
very good, music doesn't need video anyway, sometimes it's better to hear a song for the first time without visual distraction. (video killed the radio star?) subbed your channel and hope you keep writing more. 5/5
RyanUnplugged 2 years ago
love the words in this song nice work once again!
stalkerbitch2 2 years ago
Great work. Thanks for the post!
jamesgeorgeblackburn 2 years ago
ta for the comment, sir, every little helps!
keith.
theawkwards 2 years ago
nice!
theawkwards 2 years ago