Not a big fan of the whole "it was just a dream" kind of endings. The second twist was abit odd too Cuz having two plot twists doesnt really work most of the time. One negates the other, and since the whole dream sequence is already negated by the reality sequence. No one really noes wat to make of the third sequence but i feel u kind of wanted it to be left ambigous. But again, for a 2 day effort its solid. Keep it up, try to stay away from cliche plot twists. Good luck, 4/5
Pugh Austin Austin it's Barboza..I didn't know ya had it in you
lilrockinboy 1 year ago
lol that kid goes to my school
bigflearoy77 1 year ago
lol... melissa told me tht austin got in trouble for saying a bad word in here... tell austin i said hi lol!!
Tiffanirokz7 1 year ago
good job, i got into it from the point where he woke up.
VylettRain 1 year ago
brilliant work! 5 stars
AvEryBadApPLe 2 years ago
This was a truly great experience for me when I watched this.
I can't even sum up what I feel.
It was epic.
dabeshu 3 years ago
i know austin tell him tim said hi
sk8rboy528 3 years ago
dude austins a good actor and your vids r pretty cool
sk8rboy528 3 years ago
Not a big fan of the whole "it was just a dream" kind of endings. The second twist was abit odd too Cuz having two plot twists doesnt really work most of the time. One negates the other, and since the whole dream sequence is already negated by the reality sequence. No one really noes wat to make of the third sequence but i feel u kind of wanted it to be left ambigous. But again, for a 2 day effort its solid. Keep it up, try to stay away from cliche plot twists. Good luck, 4/5
CellarDoorFilm 3 years ago
is that your little brother?
NickJ4life44 3 years ago
I Liked the Kids acting!
glolady 3 years ago
The twist was a bit... i don't know, and the acting from the kid was "meh".
But it's hard to direct kids, and the story did pull on my heart strings, very good camera work and editing. Just a good story all around.
Best of luck my friend
-D R Westphal
DRW90 3 years ago
why did you upload it twice?
tilldeath420 3 years ago
"why did u upload it twice" lol
narutoguypersonkid 3 years ago
because i spelt rachel's name wrong in the first one. i spelt it Rachael. lol
brijaxxx 3 years ago
good job.
A lot different from your usual stuff.
But its nice to know that youre well rounded and can do any type of genre.
llr0080 3 years ago
Hey how come you uploaded this twice?
Filmaker92 3 years ago
yea why did u upload it twice lol... i love watching ur videos though
DeathIsNear906 3 years ago
Why you upload it twice?
TheMagicTard 3 years ago