Anyways, I thought this was cute and creative. One pet peeve - a friend would never say - "Aren't you a nurse?" - it would be - "But you're a NURSE!". Perhaps that's one of those things that would get caught in 72 hours!!! Nice job.
The plot is nonexistent- the dialog is phony- the sound is poorly dubbed- the cinematography is predictable and looks like it was done by a high school student - the set up to the jokes were rushed and the punchlines were wrong- several shots are not in focus- the acting makes me cringe - the music's attempt to be funny is Juvenile- the required line of dialog is awkward- first scene gimmik is poorly shot and just straight up a bad/predictable idea.
It had funny moments. the ski mask guy, and human bb gun were the best. This film makes me think of Family guy. Overall kinda corny tho. It had a REALLY strong beginning. but for most of the film Im like... '_'
had its funny moments, but overall waaay to cheesy.. like when Bob fell from the boat it was almost as if you were begging for a cheap laugh, and it seems like it was lip synched,cause their voices sounding louder than they were talking, at least i noticed something off about the way they spoke ...
I loved the story within a story, within a story idea.
dw3541 1 year ago
Really funny!
lepkegurrah 2 years ago
hey pretty good
you could add your film to one of those online film contests like yobi film
RockinVideosRSweet 3 years ago
Good work. Had a lot of personality and some enjoyable characters.
nodicefilms 3 years ago
Anyways, I thought this was cute and creative. One pet peeve - a friend would never say - "Aren't you a nurse?" - it would be - "But you're a NURSE!". Perhaps that's one of those things that would get caught in 72 hours!!! Nice job.
MediaProductionBox 3 years ago
eh, its better than a lot 48 hour films but its still nothin to write home to mama about
ManJuicer69 3 years ago
This is just horrible. No way around it.
The plot is nonexistent- the dialog is phony- the sound is poorly dubbed- the cinematography is predictable and looks like it was done by a high school student - the set up to the jokes were rushed and the punchlines were wrong- several shots are not in focus- the acting makes me cringe - the music's attempt to be funny is Juvenile- the required line of dialog is awkward- first scene gimmik is poorly shot and just straight up a bad/predictable idea.
bradt105 3 years ago
It had funny moments. the ski mask guy, and human bb gun were the best. This film makes me think of Family guy. Overall kinda corny tho. It had a REALLY strong beginning. but for most of the film Im like... '_'
Clanmemberkalvin 3 years ago
excellent, thanks
02837456 3 years ago
had its funny moments, but overall waaay to cheesy.. like when Bob fell from the boat it was almost as if you were begging for a cheap laugh, and it seems like it was lip synched,cause their voices sounding louder than they were talking, at least i noticed something off about the way they spoke ...
sebasz919 3 years ago
that's ok.
yuthchack 3 years ago
love it!! great video!
uminnesota 4 years ago
well done, very fun.
Thecultofsia 4 years ago
Great job! I can't believe you did that in a weekend.
I loved the line "Do you think he's the one because he lived?" :)
bpziegler 4 years ago