Johnathon Hovis

[lolrusman]

it me a while to understand what was on his face but then i realized what "dought syndrome" ment

nice vid 5 stars

[ImaginationMaker]

thanks very much positive criticism is welcome here

[ImaginationMaker]

Yeah the text does flash quickly, but i dont know why. It was good fun making it. I wanted to take a serious documentary style and give it a comedic edge.

[8thNotesAndTapShoes]

I like how the name on the tombstone clearly isn't Warbut Hovis... you'd think you might just use the name that was there... oh, well. nice movie anyway.

[eatmynarcotics1]

it's good, but i can't read the writing at the end. xD it's too fast. i doubt anyone can read it unless they pause. =p

[crackers3071]

I thought it was serious at first, and that was like a breathing-thing.

Then I saw it looked like toast, and this weird voice was in the background.

I finnaly got it! Dough!

Gosh, I'm dumb

[Lfoggy]

I can't understand a single word in this and it very weird but all in all it funny cause a man walks around with bread on his face

[danieljmcdowell]

Hmm. I was waiting throughout all the sombre black and whiteness of it all for a comedy payoff at the end along the lines of: "so have you ever considered just taking that slice of bread off your face?" Oh well! Well done anyway. There are some nice shots on show. I am suitably impressed.

[elementell]

Newgrounds sucks.

That is all.

[lolrusman]

wut duz that have to do with anything?

[elementell]

Who cares.

[kirsty0136]

dom showed me this, its soo good and funny! looks like a real documentary, almost feel sorry for him! well done i love it :D x

[dom01943]

Absolutly amazing actually looks like a proper documentary and has a humorous and sad tone 2 it brilliant :)

[BlackAndrew]

I don't like the smell of toast either