Intentionally ambiguous? Hmmmmm. Okay. I guess that is one of the characteristics of art. Otherwise, art wouldn't be open to interpretation.
By the way, seems you are also learning to speak German. Or maybe just speaking German tongue twisters. Anyway, you may be interested in doing a Google for programs called Balabolka, by FunnyWords & Language Reader by Authorsoft Corp. They are free TTS (text to speech) programs you may find helpful. Also visit bytecool com/voices.htm for needed engines.
Thank you for the response video and feedback! =) I like the imagery in the two line changes you made, with the beautiful simile of the wind. I find the lines a little long to say aloud without breaking the flow of the rest of the poem though. I think in the world of poetry the will can be allowed to stand separate from the mind, or rather be merely one part of the mind, allowing the rest to be free. And in my poem whose will it is referring to is left ambiguous - is it the speakers or societys?
Intentionally ambiguous? Hmmmmm. Okay. I guess that is one of the characteristics of art. Otherwise, art wouldn't be open to interpretation.
By the way, seems you are also learning to speak German. Or maybe just speaking German tongue twisters. Anyway, you may be interested in doing a Google for programs called Balabolka, by FunnyWords & Language Reader by Authorsoft Corp. They are free TTS (text to speech) programs you may find helpful. Also visit bytecool com/voices.htm for needed engines.
rhetoricalmonkey 4 years ago
Thank you for the response video and feedback! =) I like the imagery in the two line changes you made, with the beautiful simile of the wind. I find the lines a little long to say aloud without breaking the flow of the rest of the poem though. I think in the world of poetry the will can be allowed to stand separate from the mind, or rather be merely one part of the mind, allowing the rest to be free. And in my poem whose will it is referring to is left ambiguous - is it the speakers or societys?
TheRavenOfPoe 4 years ago 3