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From: MzSkribble
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  • "Disbanded" A very impressive piece of rap prose, you spoke a lot of truths.

  • Hi hun your sounding in fine fettle, A lady surely of some mettle.

    You wield the word like some ancient prophet of old renown

    and yet to see you is to see beauty standing proud

    Although I have not tasted the pain of the overseers whip

    the feelings you arouse they bind me in your grip

    If merit followed power of the spoken word

    like a Phoenix rising from Nubia's ashes you would be seen and heard

    Not by some but by all as that which dwells within defies the mould

    I MzSkribble Behold.

  • @ooglebydoogleby Wow, Oogle.... This is quite possibly... the most touching comment I've ever received. Thank you so much for your genuine affection. *kiss*

  • @MzSkribble Its all good. I hope you are well and life is treating you good.

  • *Smiles* You did a Wonderful job.

  • UR AMAZING !

  • @tyelaw75 thanks, darlin' :-)

  • You're so amazing! I wish I could write and read spoken word as well as you. :)

  • Thank-you, honey. Please, whenever you're next on subscribe to my channel.

  • OMG I got CHILLS!!!! 5 stars!!!!!

  • For this gift I am truly grateful... all praises and honor to the most high.

  • "you become the bait, that pulls you in initially"...Wow, very passionate and powerful. "Thee" best poem I have heard in many years. [standing ovation]

  • @tomboi247clothing wow... thank-you sistah... I appreciate that!

  • I SNAP everyTIME I view this!!!! I would like to use this video during my focal group sessions with teen girls (I have a non-profit). We should talk!

  • Yes... we should! Get at me, please. I'd love to help...

  • Gosh that was excellent! I am always in awe of those who can flow and write!!! Out of your mouth flowed the truth and pearl of wisdom and knowledge! Magnifically wonderful spoken words!!!!

  • Thank-you for your view and comment. I appreciate you!

  • Aw, man. That was sooo good. You got me over here in tears. I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke. Whew!!!! That was by far the best performance so far. The confidence!!!! The conviction of your words that cuts right through the bullshit and pierces the heart with truth. The motivation to tell the truth by any fuckin means neccessary. I am soooo proud to know you. You are my lost soul... the lonely, misunderstood, out of the box type bitch. Go head wit yo bad self. (Clapping and whistling)

  • Thank you so much, beloved. :-)

  • Yah don't really want to know how many times I have listen to this poem. Girl I am going to singing it next. Lol! I outta here! Much Love!

  • lol... Much Love Africa! muah*

  • I lovEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS PIECE! Damn girl!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!

  • I love this work.. Its very true and had to be spoken.. When i hear this its like always u speak what im thinking.. Wild how we connect in such ways.. Love u boo keep up the good work. ITS SOOOOOO TRUE..

  • :-) thanks honey bunch!

  • SPEECHLESS! And leaving a comment would be under rating you love it 5 stars I know you will be loved by many if given the right chance great

  • Thank-you honey. You inspire me.

  • So can I tell you I am so proud of you on several accounts.. first.. You represent the "Big Gals" in full force with Elegance, Poise and Don't Fuck w/Me! Attitude... Ha ha! Second.. Your energy says "Sistahs Get Your Ignorance In Check"! Thirdly ... Your Enunciating Ass Is Just "The Real Deal" no bull shit! It is just what it looks, sounds and acts like.. "Not Pretty Just Life".. Go on Girl.. Keep Goin On!!

    Soft~N~Pink

  • Muah! Thank-you, darlin'. And, I will...

  • I'm so proud of you.

  • WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • My GOD!!!! I'm in tears .... Your craft....no your GIFT should be televised and "forced" upon the masses like the lastest fucking LOREAL commercial!!! Pardon my french but BITCH YOU ARE THE TRUTH!

    One Love,

    Tam

  • hahaha! Thanks so much Song Bird! You flatter me, lovely!

  • p.s. when u spit that fyah - ur not alone- u speakin for the voiceless and for all those who feel u and is a walking personification of your poetry. b/c what u said in that poem is how i feel- often when it comes to sistahs i meet. we need fyah elements like u sista for seeds to spout.

  • im so glad you created this piece- a few videos ago u were talkin about ur frustration/discomfort w/ going to certain hood poetry spots and the vibes u picked up.. so you spoke ur peace w/ this piece. it was FYAH. I like the part where u were saying how (paraphrasing here) some sistahs may judge you b/c of the way u annunicate ur words like u got sense.....i resonanted w/ that ...and...Metu Neter?.....wooooooo *in jamaican accent* "BU-LLET ! BU-LLET !" lol.

  • You're absolutely correct, Roots. Your memory is perfection. I'm smiling because its so flattering to know that there are some people out there who are REALLY listening to me... and draw the connection when I later write a poem. I'm so grateful for you... I so appreciate you.

    Thanks for commenting as always, Roots. Much love, honey.

  • you went INNN on this piece LIVE...it totally takes new meaning on stage...i loved it..

  • Aww thanks, lion. Yea I agree that it takes new meaning. It has changed quite a bit since I first read it to you guys from my bedroom... but the essence of writing is indeed re-writing..is it not? :-) Thanks for your lovely comment, Lion. I appreciate you boo.

  • Gwaan Girl..tell it.

    Nice drop sistah, bravo!

  • luv you!

  • Incredible. Graceful. Strong.

  • HAPPY BIRTHDAY QUEEN!!

  • Happy Motha Fuckin Birthday! ALWAYS enjoyin your work! PREACHE MAMI! PREACH!

  • yEAH!!!!!!! YOU HAD MY UNDIVIDED ATTENTION......HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

  • Fantastic delivery 5*s.

  • love it--5*/fave

  • WOW...I love it!

  • omg great super video u go girl u r number 1

  • You go girl. Happy Birthday!

  • WOW! You did that. I'm totally speechless i just need to stop typing because I'm in awe of your talent.

  • yo..yo...yo...(smiling) you are doing your thing Queen

  • for real!

  • lol.. awe thanks, Sarkazz. I'm trying baby. But it would seem that I'm busting loose... and I feel nothing less than divine. Thanks so much for commenting, love.

  • still loving this piece!

  • i second that!

  • damn...that was FIYAH!! I like this piece, one of my favs from u girl I ran it back twice!

  • My sis your presence is outstanding and the message is the light us as sisters have long awaited. Spit girl Spit girl and don't you STOP!! Do you hear me! ;-}}

  • lol... YES MA'AM I HEAR YOU! And I won't stop honey, I promise. As long as I'm of sound mind and remain breathing, I swear to you i will keep on spitting. Thank you so much for watching and commenting.

  • You betta say that!!! Say that!!! I Love it!!! "often before I can tell you who I be, you have already prejudged me!" WHAT!!! I love that!!! This is the ish right here!!! It's your birthday but I feel like I got the present with this one!! Love this sista!!

  • *muah* Thanks so much momz. I love you, girl!

  • "convinced that of your trust I am not worthy" U better spit! Love it!

    "Making it impossible 4 the God in them to connect with God in me" Say it!

    ..."though we mirror each other perfectly" Hun this is deep!

    Dang! "But B*tch We been had problems cause Ya common sense been robbed and..." haha!

    So Hard!!!

  • Girl you are so gifted.

  • I am but a reflection of you, sistah. So...thank-you.

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