Gazal Akhtari Bai Faizabadi

[abduranvi]

Wah!!!

Yey ghazal hai bahut maiyneykhez, aur mein alfaazon ko taqreeban samajh chuka hun, lihaza mein iss ghazal key khoobsurat ashaaron ko jalad hi likhun gaa, ji.

Shukriya, janaab.

Er Ashok Bhalla Surrey BC Canada

[56riazali]

Na qaabu mein hai dil mera, na chain mein zabaan meri---

koi ho raazdan mera to keh de daastan meri.

This period produced great ghazalkhwan. Kiya adaigi hai, kiya alfaaz o khayalaat hain, kiya music hai aur kiya ghazalkhwaan hain. Allah Allah. Bahut hi khoob.

[IMIRZA777]

Masterpiece.. Thanks.

[SaiyedSarawaN]

AKhatarii Begam Faizabadi is same as Begam AKhtar

[iftikharqazi]

what a song and salute to ambindia

[ambindia]

natiq lakhnavi was the poet. she sang more than a couple of his gazals.

[saz9297]

bahot hi umda ghazal. bahot mehzooz hova. shukria

[ambindia]

this is on one of the 4 cds of her megaphone recordings released by that company .

[vinaypande]

what a beauty!! where did you find this??? raipur?

[abiehakhawaja]

beautiful absolutely breathtaking:P

[ambindia]

thank you so much for deciphering the 4the couplet. any more information about who the poet Naatiq was?

as i hear it the 3rd couplet goes...

sharar o barq o shama o gul ho ya parvana o bul bul

etc....

[mahakavi]

Aap sahi haiN, meire sunNe meiN ghalti hui hai.

Ma'afi cHaahta hooN.

Jamal

[mahakavi]

Wah wah, Jyoti Saheb Kya achchi ghazal sunwaai hai aapne. Bahot bahot shukriyah. Na qaabu meiN hai dil meira, na kahney meiN zabaN meiri Koi ho raazdaaN meira, tO kah de daastaaN meiri Maz'e par qissa aaya tha, ke nazm'e zindagi bigRa KahaN par khatm kar di, be'wafa ne daastaaN meiri SharaaroN par qasam gul ho, ya parwaana ho ya bulbul Jise hai yaad jitni, kah raha hai daastaaN meiri ZabaaN se jo ada ho jaaey, yeh qissa nahiN aisa unhi ka dil kaheiga, unn se Natiq* daastaaN meiri