Omg if you kept the verse the same in volume and then on the chorus go loud and distorted like fuk yeh by the vines it would sound so perfect. Add drums and the occasional scream it would be baller!
I have "Real player", a programme for playing and downloading videos,so what I do is, download the video and then transfer it to my cellphone(Sony Ericsson W610i),which automatically creates an mp3 file.
haha so i saw this video come up under my subscribed people's action, and i was wondering what the heck this was lol and then i watched your video and i knew why i subscribed! u are awesome! 5 stars!
Great song! I notice though that the songs you write tend to be somewhat repetitive until the end. Around a third of the way through it really felt like there should be a deviation (sooner in the song) to bring you back to that main chorus. other than that great song! Also.....I agree with the suicidal dream request.
wow, i have been watching these videos since the beginning. you are so amazing and i hope you make it big someday. keep making vids becuase im here to keep watching them. rock on.
awesome sound... kinda a tracy bonham vibe in my opinion... you have some of best originals out there - I just wish the lyrics had something I could sink my teeth into. Great job though... rock on...
Another great video. Just went on to your profile because I was thinking you haven't uploaded a new vid in a few few weeks, and there was a new video!. How weird! Your voice didn't sound shaky...at least not to me. I'll be looking out for the MP3 of this when its posted. x
you rock
roach5904 1 year ago
I like your songs! but they always sound like the same..try to use other chords and another melody ;-)
but you did a good job anyways! greets from Germany ;-)
Zimt18 1 year ago
This is awesome, you did a killer job, rockin' song little lady!!!
phemohilia 1 year ago
@feymuz,
why don't you stop bitchin' & enjoy her talent?
i think you did great girl[:
Watthafuxupjordan 1 year ago
youll be the one who brings grunge back to life!
wannaberocker2 1 year ago
wow you are great
the best thing i ever heard
areal240 1 year ago
In the words of Peter Griffin : FRIGGEN SWEET!
lordessoftherings 1 year ago
damn this song is cool,
it would bloody rock in heavier version,
prolly some metalcore/screamo^^
rly good job^^ me likey!
Psiho007 1 year ago
RuleZ2k7>>>
I think they need an:::::
ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!
button.
which i do btw. Go Zombiezz!!
Kiu
~~Marshmellow
IKnowYourFuture 2 years ago 2
sounds like something Nirvana would make =] =] =]
EmoZombie503 2 years ago 3
youtube needs a like button lol.
RuleZ2k7 2 years ago 9
I'm on a straight
line to intentions
I'm on a straight -
I'm on a line to what I hide ....
very nice lyrics, singing, and music. Enjoyed those last few lines a lot.... and really the whole song.
gapucc88 2 years ago
this song has a very nirvana feel to it, and I love Nirvana... so.. *thumbs up* ^_~
Bella4Chrissy 2 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
its just stolen basicly from nirvana.... so thumbs up for that.........:S
feymuz 2 years ago
uhhh dude I don't know any Nirvana song that sounds exactly like this. I am influenced by many many bands.
Zombiezz 2 years ago 9
If anything it is Alice in Chains in feel and delivery. Check out their acoustic stuff if you haven't before.
superfuntimehappy 2 years ago
Omg if you kept the verse the same in volume and then on the chorus go loud and distorted like fuk yeh by the vines it would sound so perfect. Add drums and the occasional scream it would be baller!
tommyx29 2 years ago
you remind me of kurt in a really weird way. lol
good job.
xNirvanaa 2 years ago
Very nice!
I like the rhythm? of this song!
Very different, that's what makes a song original! :D
Nice job =)
snuttan333 2 years ago
i hate most original songs i find on you tube... but that was great... KEEP WRITING
StillFallingBand 2 years ago 3
Very nice!
Nirvanaowns54 2 years ago
It is a beautiful song, and your voice is beautiful!
dominiquedv 2 years ago 2
I loved uu
your music/cover...
bloodboozee 2 years ago
This is amazing.
hollynicoleXcore 2 years ago
doesnt sound like an original, sounds like its one of many songs and not nirvana either
ricochetVendetta 2 years ago
Survival of the fittest was great, but this new song is awesome. You're great !!!!!!! :)
slavbg 2 years ago 3
i agree with the other comments how it's very nirvana like~ BUT i like it alot!
ProphetsKitty 2 years ago
I love U :*
bartekw123 2 years ago
kurt cobain!
very nice but i like the other original more...well that's just me..;) keep rockin!
grey41 2 years ago 2
wow i like this even better than your covers
sowatsume 2 years ago
i agree with the person who said reminds me of nirvana.
ConnorMatthewRyan 2 years ago 2
I can't believe you've been doing this for 3 years on youtube and we're not going to see you in a filled stadium in concert yet!
jjkehrley 2 years ago
reminds me of Nirvana
U rock!
akosijem2 2 years ago 3
nice! love the vocals at the chorus.
robertjamesdickinson 2 years ago
very nirvava great song your pretty good
corporatethief 2 years ago
wonderful : )
Rodjerico 2 years ago
@ gaboquinones,
it's a little "trick",man:
I have "Real player", a programme for playing and downloading videos,so what I do is, download the video and then transfer it to my cellphone(Sony Ericsson W610i),which automatically creates an mp3 file.
Simple as that.Hope I helped a little bit ;)
celebrant9 2 years ago
alright thanks bro
gaboquinones 2 years ago
nice
patz201975 2 years ago
MINNNNT
00sammywammy00 2 years ago
I watched all of your vids,they're great but this song.....man just rocks!!!!!!
I've already downloaded it and put it in my mp3 ;)
I hope you will always have as much inspiration,we really are in need of talented people.
Thank you once again.
Keep on rocking!
celebrant9 2 years ago
how'd you download it?
gaboquinones 2 years ago
Very nice Jess- full of Nirvana roots. I like it.
TheNebakanezer 2 years ago
your soo amazing. your voice your guitar playing and just eeverything its great
ineedanamedm 2 years ago
OMG, a TOOL Poster!!!!!!!! lol, great song btw
Jokamania 2 years ago
You are beautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllll *.*
LiukeDukes 2 years ago
you should put this on purevolume
im dying to show this to my friends
Varela562 2 years ago
you are so AMAZING!
would you merry me? plese xD
amm where are you from?
1AmitZ 2 years ago
I listen to this everyday ! If i heard this in a record store I'd SO buy it !
Rodjerico 2 years ago
la song è bellina tu sei stupenda
chitarristarockfolle 2 years ago
This ones my favorite
Rodjerico 2 years ago
Nice song, man.
puccakiku 2 years ago
Cool cool.
Love the new channel page!
Kway32 2 years ago
charming... or something like that
inmendham 2 years ago
lol, ur like a female version of kurt cobain... in a good way
ISXhereXEMILY 2 years ago 3
Sounds like pixies
silvernode 2 years ago
tabs plz?
XStratXOXMasterX 2 years ago
haha so i saw this video come up under my subscribed people's action, and i was wondering what the heck this was lol and then i watched your video and i knew why i subscribed! u are awesome! 5 stars!
XStratXOXMasterX 2 years ago
definately reminiscent of nirvana like verse chorus verse except heavier. i liked the lyrics as well great job.*****
ndargatis 2 years ago
You are soo talented :]
Love the lyrics. Your voice and guitar playing is amazing.
Sissy7x 2 years ago
sounds like it would be a nirvana song (love kurt cobain♥)
anywhoo...
great job (:
chickenstyle1234 2 years ago
-w- i really liked your song
x) nice job!
WiNeZ2 2 years ago
Great! I love it! (this is Lisa!) I am sending the link to the boys!
Greenwatergggrl 2 years ago
cool song
and u should do more covers like ur everlong cover that one i rly liked
Swifty543 2 years ago
You've done it again :)
can't wait to hear more of your work
punkyriffs 2 years ago
I love your songs! Well done! Hope we here more soon.
Androssan 2 years ago 2
Another great song thanks for posting that!!! I also agree with the Suicidal Dream
ryanjohnston82 2 years ago
Great song! I notice though that the songs you write tend to be somewhat repetitive until the end. Around a third of the way through it really felt like there should be a deviation (sooner in the song) to bring you back to that main chorus. other than that great song! Also.....I agree with the suicidal dream request.
flipphazer 2 years ago
Loveable song, very nice played
And your smile at the end, love it :D
Serellyn 2 years ago
kick ass!!
freekdrmmr 2 years ago
That was great! You should do more of your own work. Pretty cool.
Blake1Dylan 2 years ago
well done in deed
jonvongone 2 years ago
nice job, sounds beautiful
bunner24 2 years ago
wow well done u have a rockstar career ahead of you
johnnythebassist 2 years ago
Wow! Great original song! Love the lyrics! Well done! 5/5
Musicmancometh5150 2 years ago
Amazing
userh6478 2 years ago
so beautifull song, is realy cool!
Please, play later "Suicidal Dream" of Silverchair!
www90210 2 years ago
I'd buy it, nice harmonies and lyrics. Well written.
poobotsmellyweebum 2 years ago
I really like this. reminds me of foo fighters acoustic stuff.
jennyjenjenjenni 2 years ago
Sweeeeeeeeeet!
dbenzingers 2 years ago
amazing vocals yet again... and the poster in the background is godly.. tool wins epicly
nekonaru16 2 years ago
amazing voice!
wonderpope 2 years ago
Very impressive, I liked it a lot!
jtodd900 2 years ago
wow, i have been watching these videos since the beginning. you are so amazing and i hope you make it big someday. keep making vids becuase im here to keep watching them. rock on.
hpisaac77 2 years ago
Yeah I didn't here very much shakiness. I love some of the notes you hit too. I love your stuff.
xTxMcLeanx 2 years ago
awesome sound... kinda a tracy bonham vibe in my opinion... you have some of best originals out there - I just wish the lyrics had something I could sink my teeth into. Great job though... rock on...
Balboa515 2 years ago
Another great video. Just went on to your profile because I was thinking you haven't uploaded a new vid in a few few weeks, and there was a new video!. How weird! Your voice didn't sound shaky...at least not to me. I'll be looking out for the MP3 of this when its posted. x
xpoc 2 years ago
u didn't sound shaky at all jess =]
SerjTankianFan101 2 years ago 2