OMG great short clip. Just one suggestion. Find some epic original music. The movie music is fine but music from other would add to the creativity. Anyway great job, keep it up. :)
Very nice, choreography was good, camera work was good, effects were very realistic. 5 stars if we had stars anymore, instead I'll settle for thumbs up.
@ArtemisUnknown7 I don't normally make personal comments. I rarely ever do, but for you I thought I'd make an acception. I would just like to point out, that "The Force Unleashed" was released September 19th, 2008. This short film was uploaded April 9th, 2007 - and was shot 9 months even before that. We had no absolutely concept of the character before then. Impersonation? I think not. So if anything, Lucas copied ME (wink) heh. Therefore, your observation is coincidence. You owe me a thumb ;)
well done. Choreography wasn't as super-cool as some others, but was technically perfect. I loved it, very good form. Sensible, and some killer moves. I'm a martial artist and swordsman (and huge SW guru) and a few moves in there made me go "OH! Good one!" Good sound, good lighting, good tension. Excellent choices for who was who.
SUPERB!!!BRAVO!!!...very well made...honestly it was batter than anakin and obiwan...that was gay with low effects...and no action at all...very nice..i am impressed
Good video, over all. The choreography I thought was rather poor, but the effects and audio were superb, especially the lightning through the saber into his hand, I thought that was an excellent idea excellently executed. You guys made the right choice on who is Jedi and Sith as well, you each had the look for the part you played. Thumbs up.
Probably the best ive seen. And i've seen a lot. Just everything is of the highest quality AND it was entertaining. Job well done! If you guys had costumes and a story, hell might as well make your own star wars saga. How many people worked on this?
Just wanted to say I really dig the footwork in your film and the tense immediacy of the choreography. Few of the videos I've seen emphasize proper stances and footwork, and yours really caught my eye!
The pause at about 3 minutes in is very nice as well. Many duels do have a smooth escalation of intensity, but you've pulled that off rather well!
Just wanted to say I really dig the footwork in your film and the tense immediacy of the choreography. Few of the videos I've seen emphasize proper stances and footwork, and yours really caught my eye!
The pause at about 3 minutes in is very nice as well. Many duels do have a smooth escalation of intensity, but you've pulled that off rather well!
holy shit! you guys did such a good job! some of the suspenseful parts were killin me lol. and that kick to the jaw was pretty realistic! really complex choreography too. this is a total kiss ass comment but your vid is just kiss-ass-able lol
One of the more entertaining duels, wasn't so keen on the force-lightning but then again it's a pain in the ass to get looking "real". All in all, great job guys 9/10
What are talking about. It's not about acting or scenery coz it's not a movie. It's just choreography with lighsaber and some special effects. And it's one of the best work I have ever saw. Professional camera work, perfect rotoscoping, very good choreography.
Wooow, one of the best fanmade lightsaber duels I've seen so far and I've watched quite many. First video that was really star-wars like when it came to moves, music and such- Great job!
A majority of the video had really good footwork in the choreography such as stepping into an attack. But the swings need work. They seem delayed, memorized, and unfocused and not fluid. Attacks and defenses need to seem practical as well as being fluid.
Do you guys practice any sword art, cause your stances are pretty good?
Other than that, great effects and audio. I hope you guys really make a sequel.
Amazing Job! i plan to become a director some day, so i can really appreciate the work that went into this. I have done light saber chirography myself and i can say that your actors did an amazing job. What did you use for the effects? If its in the credits i didn't notice it, i looked. I use After effects and Premiere, did you use those? Ill be making my very own starwars vid sometime. + i have costumes :P
awesome fight. Just should have made the credits shorter...or sped it up or something. Especially since it was mostly the same 3 maybe 4 people doing everything.
The only reason you should have given us 4 minutes of credits is if it had a secret ending.
After all the effort, people could give the common curteousy of watching the credits, they worked hard at this and goes to show you dont need a billion dollar industrial budget to do it, how about you trying to do better?
Great choreography. This is the best lightsaber fight among Ryan Wieber fights. But you guys fight really strong style and you have fluent movements. Great camera work also. I like it. Favourite
Trevor should lost, the strike Jimbo made at 4:53 was a solid hit Trevor's arm should have been cut off. Don't get me wrong it was a great video, with excellent choreography, but as far as sword physics go a hard one handed strike to the arm would sever it leaving them stunned and unable to counter.
no.... it's the depth perception. the way the camera is angled it makes it appear that he is close enough to lop off his arm. I'm positive that the real distance only means his arm was just scraped.
vry nice. but i have to say im disappointed. y? whn some1 c's a video dats 9mins long they're expecting something dats @least 3/4 of it. 1/2 of the vid was to credit.
dont get me wrong i luv'd the duel. it kept me on the edge of my seat. wanted to kno wut the phuk is gonna happen nxt. then it ended halfway in2 it. shoulda used vast 9mins for production instead of credit (which can be done in the descrip also). i still like it but...
if you watch teh first video you see that ryan dies... then another ryan comes out of nowhere and kills dorkman.. thats because on the forum page they used to visit all the time there was an inside joke about all the clones of ryan because he was always dying in the videos he made.. so it was a running joke as to why ryan keeps coming back... dorkman however there is no explination for lol... good vids tho.. and on topic of this vid.. awesome job :D hope to see more soon
I demand that a sequel be made. This is just too sweet and trust me, you could do plenty more with your skills. One thing though: try to move away from the Force Push a bit. Other than that, no negative criticism from me.
vary nice! far better than the common trash you see made by kids with a computer and KB Toys lightsabers. the battle was pretty realistic and so were there attitudes. five stars!
This is two padawans fighting, right? They're not very powerful when it comes to using the force. One of them force pushes the other, and the guy only got pushed back like one foot.
Jjimbonius Maximus...... Sound like a spell from Harry Potter......
katomods1 4 weeks ago
good job : )
furydaniel 4 months ago in playlist Mais vídeos de JimNagle87
Trevor and Jimbo like Darth Maul
furydaniel 4 months ago in playlist Mais vídeos de JimNagle87
I still remember this epic day ! that i watched this
zaandarbrow 5 months ago
your almost up there with RV VS. DORKMAN
zaandarbrow 7 months ago
very good
Downfall9091 7 months ago in playlist THE BEST LIGHTSABER DUEL ON YOUTUBE
that was fucking awesome!!!
theomenccw 8 months ago in playlist THE BEST LIGHTSABER DUEL ON YOUTUBE
He was standing in front of him like, "do you want to suck my cock?"LOL!!!
freestylerandmc101 8 months ago
I remember watching this in 2007. a while after it came out. I still find it amazing. Great job.
singlericardo14 9 months ago
This video if good.
rOmEoMUstDi3 9 months ago
Dude tht was epic haha.
MegaGuitarman2011 11 months ago
Very good. But you needed an original ending.
ArchaonDeath 11 months ago
Wow this is Really really good
koolzz28 11 months ago
Wow this is really good! : )
koolzz28 11 months ago
Wow Epic I think ill post you to facebook thanks for showing that fans really can create awesome things
DarthVaderJ154 1 year ago
James, James!
wickedlament 1 year ago
OMG great short clip. Just one suggestion. Find some epic original music. The movie music is fine but music from other would add to the creativity. Anyway great job, keep it up. :)
jacobferret 1 year ago
Awesome Job ! are you guy that dies ?
CrazyLightsaberFreak 1 year ago
Very nice, choreography was good, camera work was good, effects were very realistic. 5 stars if we had stars anymore, instead I'll settle for thumbs up.
The42ndAirsoftLegion 1 year ago
that was awsome
agdollgirlsince2008 1 year ago
KICK ASS!!!!!
AndrewH1993 1 year ago
I'm sorry I hit dislike, but that was for the Galen Marek impersination at 4:11. Otherwise awsome.
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@ArtemisUnknown7 all you had to type was starkiller not his real name
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fleabone1972 1 year ago
@ArtemisUnknown7 Lol thats a reasin to dislike something.
351302084 1 year ago
@ArtemisUnknown7 I don't normally make personal comments. I rarely ever do, but for you I thought I'd make an acception. I would just like to point out, that "The Force Unleashed" was released September 19th, 2008. This short film was uploaded April 9th, 2007 - and was shot 9 months even before that. We had no absolutely concept of the character before then. Impersonation? I think not. So if anything, Lucas copied ME (wink) heh. Therefore, your observation is coincidence. You owe me a thumb ;)
JimNagle87 1 year ago 13
@JimNagle87 Ah darn it. *clicks like*
ArtemisUnknown7 11 months ago
@ArtemisUnknown7 what impersination? There was none? I've beaten the game 10 times and there is nothing similar.
SeleneJessabelle1262 11 months ago
thumbs up if agreed, 1:59 gay force push.2:19 awesome kick movemoment
toomertron 1 year ago
this fits perfectly with the two steps for hell song "he who brings the night" if you start from 1:18 look it up on youtube
clubhenco 1 year ago
great effects, great shots, great actors, great choreography, great music,
Congrats!
clubhenco 1 year ago
well done. Choreography wasn't as super-cool as some others, but was technically perfect. I loved it, very good form. Sensible, and some killer moves. I'm a martial artist and swordsman (and huge SW guru) and a few moves in there made me go "OH! Good one!" Good sound, good lighting, good tension. Excellent choices for who was who.
shidoshirayne 1 year ago
Do either of the actors take any martial arts classes?
Elnshaw 1 year ago
SUPERB!!!BRAVO!!!...very well made...honestly it was batter than anakin and obiwan...that was gay with low effects...and no action at all...very nice..i am impressed
Lupex19 1 year ago
Excellent effects and superb choreography guys 2 thumbs up!
Betamaster1 1 year ago
holy!!!! this video rivals ryan vs dorkman, i think.
PatrickProductions12 1 year ago
Good video, over all. The choreography I thought was rather poor, but the effects and audio were superb, especially the lightning through the saber into his hand, I thought that was an excellent idea excellently executed. You guys made the right choice on who is Jedi and Sith as well, you each had the look for the part you played. Thumbs up.
77Krugg77 1 year ago
that was really good
masnlb87 1 year ago
that was cool
how do u do the lightsaber thing
clonetrooper5002 1 year ago
Probably the best ive seen. And i've seen a lot. Just everything is of the highest quality AND it was entertaining. Job well done! If you guys had costumes and a story, hell might as well make your own star wars saga. How many people worked on this?
XxPhantomedusxX 1 year ago
who ever was jimbo was a gangster just because of his name
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Hey Trevor & Jimbo,
Just wanted to say I really dig the footwork in your film and the tense immediacy of the choreography. Few of the videos I've seen emphasize proper stances and footwork, and yours really caught my eye!
The pause at about 3 minutes in is very nice as well. Many duels do have a smooth escalation of intensity, but you've pulled that off rather well!
MTFBWY!
AlbertArtanis 1 year ago
Hey Trevor & Jimbo,
Just wanted to say I really dig the footwork in your film and the tense immediacy of the choreography. Few of the videos I've seen emphasize proper stances and footwork, and yours really caught my eye!
The pause at about 3 minutes in is very nice as well. Many duels do have a smooth escalation of intensity, but you've pulled that off rather well!
MTFBWY!
AlbertArtanis 1 year ago
Excellent!!
holl01 1 year ago
awesome job, epic battle ! nice one !
undertaker4fan 1 year ago
awesome
DBSstudios 1 year ago
cool
Qwerty39351 1 year ago
what camera did you shoot with?
CHEYENNE117 1 year ago
WOW
zaandarbrow 1 year ago
THAT WAS AWSEM
zaandarbrow 1 year ago
@ThePurpleSpartan depends on the sith. they might like the challenge. :)
mako209 1 year ago
Nice, you two are well skilled, nice look 4 the sith I'm gunna add this on my favourites list, got any other good duels?
addyaz91 1 year ago
THIS LOOKS LIKE IT IS BETWEEN STAR WARS EPISODES ONE AND TWO--1 the phantom menace- II attack of the clones
zaandarbrow 2 years ago
GOD i love this video
capigayleproductions 2 years ago
will someone make a fucking vid were a sith wins
1sketchy 2 years ago
im makeing a 3 part movie with the sith winging almost all the time,
its a work in progress though
should comne out in about... 2011
some time in september,
its just a gess though
and its gona be fricking sweat!!!
higle6 2 years ago
Really good, although its a bit wierd if Trever's the Jedi since he kindof fights dirty in the begining, but still good.
orochimarudono 2 years ago
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nice choreography very good
baruxy 2 years ago
Really nice choreography boys !!
Flassigm 2 years ago
i like this, RvD need to boss up if they are planning on beating yu guys
jrock7807 2 years ago
Excellent work... i must admit this is at RvD level.
jCkD4Ni3L 2 years ago
Great work.
This is one of the best I've seen.
Alongusernameable 2 years ago
thats was intense =]
estiknight 2 years ago
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U SHOULD HAVE DONE THIS WITH SWORDS!!! star wars isnt that cool!!!
microdasher 2 years ago
holy shit dudes, that was kickass!
are you going to make any more?
spargus11 2 years ago
that was pretty dam good!! nice one
DjSkrapi 2 years ago
EPIC FA.... no.. just epic :D
hypertruejedi 2 years ago
sooo good
theartisb 2 years ago 3
the force lightning is wat really made it really unique
utubedude71293 2 years ago
that was purely enjoyable
Fahstudios13579 2 years ago
one of my fav battles, look up final reunion and the sequal,
HartzyBoi650 2 years ago
Wow! This duel ranks right up there with RvD and RvB!
Zorc620 2 years ago 2
no it doesn't.
johnyc119 2 years ago
holy shit! you guys did such a good job! some of the suspenseful parts were killin me lol. and that kick to the jaw was pretty realistic! really complex choreography too. this is a total kiss ass comment but your vid is just kiss-ass-able lol
MetalFanMan91 2 years ago
One of the more entertaining duels, wasn't so keen on the force-lightning but then again it's a pain in the ass to get looking "real". All in all, great job guys 9/10
turbodude555 2 years ago
At 4:18 he looks like starkiller
Twolf98 2 years ago
super epic action awesomeness, Best starwars fight I've ever seen
ninjasnowman42 2 years ago 2
FREAKING AWESOME!!!!
AfterPractice 2 years ago
Nais Nais! Very nice indeed!
Lothomiras 2 years ago
One of the better videos on here as far as fighting and special effects.
SithLordKallen 2 years ago
the bad guy s face looks so funny hes trying too hard to be evil; sometimes using a sad or depressed expression will look more...menicing.
Gayo77 2 years ago
very nice great work mate
finchellen09 2 years ago
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acting sucks like rrly badly and the scenario isnt the best but your almsot at the star wars 3 graphs so good work
LunaticCookie 2 years ago
What are talking about. It's not about acting or scenery coz it's not a movie. It's just choreography with lighsaber and some special effects. And it's one of the best work I have ever saw. Professional camera work, perfect rotoscoping, very good choreography.
Filipsoon 2 years ago
WOW a 5 minutes credit.
youalldoit 2 years ago
guy in black looks like John Cena if he never worked out.
ArnyTheChamp 2 years ago
that was coooool good work
DvaisKila 2 years ago
trop trop trop trop trop trop trop trop trop bien fait!!!
leogalaad 2 years ago
That was awsome very awsome!
jckspacy 2 years ago
Awesome!!
vcrew41 2 years ago
good job guys, what vidoe editing software did you use and where did you get it?
M3chiron 2 years ago
i've watched it so many times and it is still good
singlericardo14 2 years ago
Nice Moves, cool Fights good Job guys !!!
LittleComedien 2 years ago
the most epic finishing blow ever
duelrunner 2 years ago
Wooow, one of the best fanmade lightsaber duels I've seen so far and I've watched quite many. First video that was really star-wars like when it came to moves, music and such- Great job!
SulleFang 2 years ago
what did you use for the lightsaber blades and sound effects?
yaoilover126 2 years ago
nice moves..
balangay12 2 years ago
In my opinion (its my opinion),
A majority of the video had really good footwork in the choreography such as stepping into an attack. But the swings need work. They seem delayed, memorized, and unfocused and not fluid. Attacks and defenses need to seem practical as well as being fluid.
Do you guys practice any sword art, cause your stances are pretty good?
Other than that, great effects and audio. I hope you guys really make a sequel.
AznDemonLord 2 years ago
well..i hope u make a sequel :(
Baskylas 2 years ago
about time someone used starwars music..LOL
Arrovv 2 years ago
yo this is cool
come to my channel and check out our sword fight vids there about as cool as this
wierdbros 2 years ago
great job
DarthShawn1256 2 years ago
GREAT VIDEO!
baseballrules2498 2 years ago
Amazing Job! i plan to become a director some day, so i can really appreciate the work that went into this. I have done light saber chirography myself and i can say that your actors did an amazing job. What did you use for the effects? If its in the credits i didn't notice it, i looked. I use After effects and Premiere, did you use those? Ill be making my very own starwars vid sometime. + i have costumes :P
ErikRAWR 2 years ago
Good video :)
92100Charlie 2 years ago
Excellent Video Congrats, Visit my channel and wait for my new video called Sith's Awakening
EXTERNALCOREWORKS 2 years ago
Good, but needs more conviction. Shorten the credits!!!
momus81 2 years ago
Awesome effects.
IsaiahRoe 2 years ago 2
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OMG why can't people make their own music to accompany their duels? And no Jedi would EVER taunt an enemy. Mediocre..
VampCoffee 2 years ago
lol seriously the credits takes as long as the video...
Psycnosis 2 years ago
that was great! good job guys!
lindsayfawn 2 years ago 2
Good ! :)
92100Charlie 2 years ago 5
Oh That's A Good Film
quangkatarn 2 years ago 5
EPIC!!!!!
liveinthebozone 2 years ago
great stuff!!!
but i must agree,credits are too long.
rankosant 2 years ago
Dudes well done that was fantastic
QuiGonGleed 2 years ago
EXCEPTIONALLY WELL DONE!
ShinraSamurai77 2 years ago
That was sick! 5/5
CSPGotoPrime 2 years ago
Awesome video. Red saber guy reminds me of Vader's apprentice.
Thebestusername2 2 years ago
awesome fight. Just should have made the credits shorter...or sped it up or something. Especially since it was mostly the same 3 maybe 4 people doing everything.
The only reason you should have given us 4 minutes of credits is if it had a secret ending.
shatteredglassart 2 years ago
That was sweet!!
AlexMarkivich 2 years ago
the Batte was great and all. Till the end. If your arm is chopped off you cannot stab anyone and then 4 minuetes of credits what thats just crazy
kaatinator 2 years ago
he didnt chop his arm of he skimmed his shoulder. But 4 minutes of credits is retarded. Most people dont even watch them.
JEproductions7 2 years ago
After all the effort, people could give the common curteousy of watching the credits, they worked hard at this and goes to show you dont need a billion dollar industrial budget to do it, how about you trying to do better?
QuiGonGleed 2 years ago
True true!
turbodude555 2 years ago
It's so freakin' awesome!!!
ryanstube01 2 years ago 2
Has the guy in black ever raped anyone before? :)
Shahe177 2 years ago
yes, me...
soccerkarer 2 years ago
yumyy.
Shahe177 2 years ago
Jimbo (the guy who has the red lightsaber) its galen marek!!
cybenick 2 years ago
can i ask , did you just use the handle, or did you have a blade to work with. ?
Bennieboos 2 years ago
they proboly had pipes for a blade
fightforlycanfreedom 2 years ago
Very good, no hesitations in the strikes, good effects, keep it up.
kratosthecodemonkey 2 years ago
it was perfect until the last 10 seconds. The ending is poor. Too typical.
whitemagick4 2 years ago
love this video.Especially the part when they run toward each other and jump and hit each others lightsabers
ThefieldGeneral84 2 years ago
fuckin awesome!!!! excelent effects and coreography.
Awersome!!! Excelent work!!! 9999/5
cybenick 2 years ago
Great choreography. This is the best lightsaber fight among Ryan Wieber fights. But you guys fight really strong style and you have fluent movements. Great camera work also. I like it. Favourite
Filipsoon 3 years ago
Awesome lightning at 4:13
OdinThor 3 years ago
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i think the song no more sorrow linkin park would sound good on this but still good vid
dabeel 3 years ago
No, Just no.
Shaft118 3 years ago
i like it but..... the part when the red saber dude hit at the blue dude, his arm should have come straight of
i mean a full hard stroke at the arm would have lopped the arm for a home run, not a clean cut
hartzy66 3 years ago
Awsome vid man,very tense near the end and classic ending...gd job!!!!
Knightcowboy89 3 years ago
Trevor should lost, the strike Jimbo made at 4:53 was a solid hit Trevor's arm should have been cut off. Don't get me wrong it was a great video, with excellent choreography, but as far as sword physics go a hard one handed strike to the arm would sever it leaving them stunned and unable to counter.
Shirodragoon 3 years ago
True Shirodragoon but no all strikes are meant to cuts someones astrimites off.
drkmidnighthavenodin 3 years ago
no.... it's the depth perception. the way the camera is angled it makes it appear that he is close enough to lop off his arm. I'm positive that the real distance only means his arm was just scraped.
Melensko 3 years ago
vry nice. but i have to say im disappointed. y? whn some1 c's a video dats 9mins long they're expecting something dats @least 3/4 of it. 1/2 of the vid was to credit.
dont get me wrong i luv'd the duel. it kept me on the edge of my seat. wanted to kno wut the phuk is gonna happen nxt. then it ended halfway in2 it. shoulda used vast 9mins for production instead of credit (which can be done in the descrip also). i still like it but...
4m30s footage
vs.
4m40s credit -- dats a lot of credit time.
ssbark 3 years ago
love the video and it's not slow like others. The lightsaber fighting is awsome.
tango0902 3 years ago
good job. awesome fight. : )
newtimesmedia 3 years ago
nice i wish crap like that was in the movie lol sweet job
brainpain73 3 years ago
Awesome!!!
OdinThor 3 years ago
if you watch teh first video you see that ryan dies... then another ryan comes out of nowhere and kills dorkman.. thats because on the forum page they used to visit all the time there was an inside joke about all the clones of ryan because he was always dying in the videos he made.. so it was a running joke as to why ryan keeps coming back... dorkman however there is no explination for lol... good vids tho.. and on topic of this vid.. awesome job :D hope to see more soon
supermario254 3 years ago
That shit was hard. Good shit
07Playboi07 3 years ago
I demand that a sequel be made. This is just too sweet and trust me, you could do plenty more with your skills. One thing though: try to move away from the Force Push a bit. Other than that, no negative criticism from me.
ThePurpleSpartan 3 years ago
Hay, Guys if anyone likes ROBLOX im making a movie on ROBLOX, but right now I dont have very good videos.
starbuck4619 3 years ago
Nice! :)
spiaccico90 3 years ago 2
vary nice! far better than the common trash you see made by kids with a computer and KB Toys lightsabers. the battle was pretty realistic and so were there attitudes. five stars!
manikill7 3 years ago
Can dis video compare to the RVD:2 ...Who kNOws but this videos AiiGHt
snikythug 3 years ago 2
wow this is really awesome!!
Ecmredsoxslipknot 3 years ago 3
cool dude.awesome vid
Sharku1994 3 years ago
HOly fuck awsome
imadude55 3 years ago
nice vid awesome fighting
berserker276 3 years ago
nice vid...but why dont they make a video that the sith win?
markonkos 3 years ago
This is two padawans fighting, right? They're not very powerful when it comes to using the force. One of them force pushes the other, and the guy only got pushed back like one foot.
GhostGrind 3 years ago
Maybe but jedi and sith can make a barrier of the force to cusion the blow of force moves.
lazerman278 3 years ago
really good special effects, and fighting
marineooola 3 years ago
definetly one of my faves...along with RVD series
tehpwner15 3 years ago
that was amazing! Nice work, it was very exciting and entertaining, and wonderful effects
AoiYukinoMisharu 3 years ago
you should make a trevor vs jimbo 2
jedimax3 3 years ago 5
Seriously. I'd love to see it happen.
GMike8591 3 years ago
How can he make a Trevor vs. Jimbo 2 if Jimbo was killed in part 1?
GhostGrind 3 years ago
ryan dies in ryan vs dorkman and they made 2
jedimax3 3 years ago
Fantastic Job Guys!!!! Awesome Duel!!
1liger 3 years ago
what video editor you used?
5star!!!
criminall4life 3 years ago
Bravo! Awesome fight, keep up the good work!
Lelindir 3 years ago