yeh the rhyming works fine now but getting the structure/grammar right is equally important if you want this to be seen or publicised, or the authorities or mass media will again laugh it off...
i think we could all agree the author wants to delivery an important message to everyone. I was just trying to emphasize the importance of error-free communication.
Lets demonstrate to Donald Tsang about what we want in clear and powerful message with no ambition.
MC Jin should listen to this.
diyjj1 1 year ago
GOOD分. .. .
Xplenovo 1 year ago
mate this is class are there any ways that I can contact ARHO SUNNY?
java17 1 year ago
Oh my God !!! you are great mate!!! Super Good Nei !!!
mickerica 1 year ago
好正,好鐘意個mv!!
dinerdisaster 1 year ago
Really nice it is
P.S. it should be "控訴" but not ”空訴”
mrgtennis 1 year ago
very nice!!
ktltk 1 year ago
wow, i can feel the vib!
jst a very minor reminder, should it be 'everybody goes'?
albertiso 1 year ago
@albertiso
'everybody go' is alright in this instance as it is an imperative sentence (see how it is followed by '話俾佢哋知,反對係大多數...“?)
could be the same for 'everybody know'
but 'dream never die' is definitely wrong! should be 'never dies' Hope ARHO SUNNY does see this
java17 1 year ago
唱得好! 支持!
kennethhon 1 year ago 2
如果改埋D錯別字就更perfect。
SunE6792 1 year ago
用一半藍色一半紅色做背景係唔係有深層意思
bb3321ss 1 year ago
@bb3321ss
政改海報都係紅同藍,我都想知點解要咁用?
diral93331 1 year ago
@diral93331 就係故意同政府一樣
Brianlampard 9 months ago
多謝晒唱同作e首歌既人!very nice!
堅決反對政制倒退方案!
zzbankdanzz 1 year ago
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唔知重可以聽呢類歌到幾時,個政府只係識講大話,大家再唔出聲, 我地下一代就真係乜都無啦.........
kimstaffe 1 year ago
唔知重可以聽呢類歌到幾時,個政府只係識講大話,大家再唔出聲, 我地下一代就真係乜都無啦.........
kimstaffe 1 year ago 3
@kimstaffe
政改通過左,下一步就係23條,到時就無得聽嫁啦!!
diral93331 1 year ago
唔知重可以聽呢類歌到幾時,個政府只係識講大話,大家再唔出聲, 我地下一代就真係乜都無啦.........
kimstaffe 1 year ago
政改最大問題係唔取消功能組別,重要加!!!加埋之後我地要再反對任何保皇黨既惡政都變左無可能,變得相當不公平,你地重支唔支持先?
diral93331 1 year ago 2
只須取消分組點票,民主已踏前一大步, 這只須本地立法!
ctip888 1 year ago
七百萬減五十萬,淨翻果D有幾多係支持政改呢?真係無人知,而且有幾多係無意見,亦無人知。不過,516出黎嘅人係確確實實表達出自己訴求。同時,D個訴求係極其堅定,就算只為盡公民責任,佢地自身都已經了解明白變相公投的內容,由此出黎投下鐵定一票的。至於果D係度同人講乜野自己未係一份子嘅人,實質從自己說話中已表明支持政改。既然係咁,無謂浪費時間,因為擺明一個無進步同翻炒嘅政改,重要刻意加多民選基礎,去覆雜化果個永遠只識否決修訂和政策,以及維護自己界別利益嘅公能組別,你都要講支持。所以,作為支持嘅你地住就係香港,但說話極不為自己身處嘅地方和下一代設想,他朝身受其害果陣唔好怨政府,唔好話無人提過任何反對意見,呢D係你地自己攞黎。
Cateagle 1 year ago 2
好正!!!!
heroes5 1 year ago
很有心,亦唱出我的心聲,我地先係大多數!
ddlo1984 1 year ago
million9413
Joined:
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心照
cometlalala 1 year ago
點解 D 保皇左仔無呢 D 創意?
teddyli 1 year ago
cool
cmkickoff 1 year ago
甚麼「五十萬只係其中既一少部份」,真係愚不可及,請再深入了解一下D五十萬人既意義,睇多幾篇文章,動動腦筋分析一下,最緊要係唔好俾人洗腦,自己諗多D啦!身為香港人,要對自己身處既地方和當權者的政策有所了解,唔好咁隨使地講出D咁輕率既說話,真係好肉酸。
marcoeravo 1 year ago
@marcoeravo Talk is cheap, result is EVERYTHING! see you after 6.23, bye!
million9413 1 year ago
@million9413 收啦你,狐假虎威咪呢 D 囉........... :-)
teddyli 1 year ago
@marcoeravo 你冇講過野囉..你冇講到"D五十萬人既意義"..你冇講到你對政策有d咩理解...更重要係你冇講到你點解反政改!!??
如果真係有心去理性討論既話...你就要講d實質既野黎說服我地呢d仲未表態既香港市民!!!
而且我冇講d"咁輕率"既說話.....我只係計左一條好普通既加減數俾大家睇姐....- -
applebowie 1 year ago
曾蔭權發表超錯反革命八股文章
/watch?v=VeGIKfpbIEQ
RichnGlad 1 year ago
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今次我們親中會投支持票. 看吧. 6.23將以3/4支持票通過! 高鐵 & 5.16 泛民唔肯認輸, 今次6.23 泛民將看到咩叫彻底失敗!
million9413 1 year ago
@million9413 你自己講完,唔知覺唔覺得醜……
果3/4支持票真係令人作嘔!點解香港變成咁架!= =
marcoeravo 1 year ago
任何社會, 任何民主社會都係少數要服從多數! 少數人搞既創意值得欣賞, 唔錯, 但係可以不理, 因為反對力量屬於 少 數 !!! period.
million9413 1 year ago
香港有至少七百萬人!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
五十萬只係其中既一少部份~!!!!
applebowie 1 year ago
@applebowie 咪係, 就好似某議員講: "你們當那幾百萬人死架?!"
million9413 1 year ago
大家send比o的共狗、保皇聽啦!!
diral93331 1 year ago 2
好正呀 有創意~
WGALX 1 year ago
做得好,少少錯
「襟蓋」應該係「冚蓋」
「妨似」應該係「彷似」
「空訴」應該係「控訴」
「神早」應該係「晨早」
「湧躍」應該係「踴躍」
Calcutec2009 1 year ago 8
讚!!有創意!強烈支持1
Amadhappyperson 1 year ago
CHING...1:53果度打錯字...
予-->矛
kcleungchris 1 year ago
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係,我係親中!唔親中唔通親英啊?英國都唔要你唔照你啦!香港又唔係一個國家。你又唔肯去外國做二等公民。你係中華人民共和國共產國子民,被共產黨軍隊保護緊,三十七年後共產同化香港,你唔親中親邊個?低能仔一班。
million9413 1 year ago
@million9413 咁你NOW返上去住啦...唔洗等37年後呀
honninglee 1 year ago
@million9413 一定要一黑一白咁型棍架?如果係,打官司咁好就好啦,冇灰色地帶俾D大財團玩,如果你搵到冇灰色地帶既例子先好講衣句唔親中唔通親英啊,仲有放尾係呀,唔係啊,啊係放頭既.
ANYWAY,香港確實唔係一個國家,但係佢有自治權,有自己既內政系統,而且身為俾中英管治過既異型的確有好多好煩既問題,地又少人又多,但係,我唔明你個邏輯,英國都唔要你唔照你啦,理由同例子?仲有唔係一個國家又點?垃圾句,有頭冇尾.睇你咁講野就知你答題唔多掂,如果係通識卷,你仲唔一仆一碌?
唔去外國做二公咁又不如問吓你點解唔番大陸過世?你咁鍾意大陸咪死番去囉,WFC.但係去到做二公又點?唔做又點?又唔加例子比較,又唔接前面,冇前文後理又冇例子都唔知你UP乜,到外國唔洗親中?定係有更自由既言論自由同更公正既法律?你想講乜?
第三,因為係中華人民共和國子民既子民,被解放軍保護,就要聽佢支笛?咁我地香港基本法俾我地既人權去左邊?仲有你個「共產國」居心何在?
我認共產係同化緊香港,但係咪又係多得班狗係度玩衣D死人政改先搞到咁,IF NOT,我唔認為會咁囉.點都好,你段野直曲難分,仲有最後係一班低能仔囉,1999
aesopi70113 1 year ago
@million9413 我地唔係親英, 係親民主
maleemaleehon 1 year ago
@million9413
1. 話知你親中,親東,定親西,總之你唔親中都唔一定要親英的,點解你一定要搵d野親下呢?因為要搵人「照」?
2. 「香港又唔係一個國家。你又唔肯去外國做二等公民。」老實講,完全唔明你呢句野的意思。香港的確唔係一個國家,但同人地唔肯去外國有乜關係?
3. 「三十七年後共產同化香港,你唔親中親邊個?」你係曲線咁講緊我地冇得揀下嘛?定係你講得,你生活係香港就一定要聽哂北京話事呢?到時真係咁的話,你唔好喊就得喇。。。話人低能。。。
Katsnjammer 1 year ago 2
@Katsnjammer 50年不變係假, 過渡期係真, 除非你唔想做中國人
him118 1 year ago
@him118
講個個人50年唔死都有可能真,佢死左,無人當真啦^^"
diral93331 1 year ago
@diral93331 我都唔明香港人明知香港仲有30幾年就玩完, 有咩咁多野好反對, 依家係經濟有咁差定係你地投資唔係必賺?
him118 1 year ago
@him118
邊個同你講香港30幾年後玩完?先知?
反對唔一定係為錢,可以為其他利益,而家大家就係為我地既下一代爭取緊利益!
diral93331 1 year ago 4
@diral93331
你覺得依家大陸有隻手係度搞香港政治有問題, 咁30年之後香港直情變左大陸點解唔係玩完?你下一代時香港已經唔再存在
him118 1 year ago
so good
andyandy2755 1 year ago
D THUMBS DOWN 應該係親中既人
kahochueng 1 year ago
你又知反對係大多數????查清楚先~~唔好老屈~
applebowie 1 year ago
@applebowie 50萬唔叫多?
1992ISSAC 1 year ago
你又知反對係大多數????查清楚先~~唔好老屈~
applebowie 1 year ago
第三身單數加s
dies, knows
emperordesola 1 year ago
@emperordesola
加左反而唔押韻~ 我倒覺得咁樣都冇問題!
BTW gd job
stephenlzq 1 year ago
@stephenlzq
yeh the rhyming works fine now but getting the structure/grammar right is equally important if you want this to be seen or publicised, or the authorities or mass media will again laugh it off...
java17 1 year ago
@emperordesola 好正呀
andyandy2755 1 year ago
拳拳到肉, 正歌!
winterwolf513 1 year ago
支持! 加油!
jason001084 1 year ago
加油!
goldfish050326 1 year ago
Excellent rap!
benand2005 1 year ago
好有水準嘅一首rap...
不過d錯字就離譜左d
mymymymyass 1 year ago 2
great job
tonycwy01 1 year ago
好正! Good job~!
Mirror615 1 year ago
Good job!
booagoo 1 year ago
好正呀!
p.s.
神早-->晨早
湧躍-->踴躍
ernus 1 year ago
好撚勁呀diu!! 支持!
aretkusu86 1 year ago
[認字特警]奸"予"
g200588 1 year ago
[認字特警] 控訴
afroelaine 1 year ago
一個字, 勁!!!
marslam0708 1 year ago
政改超錯
kendrickho 1 year ago 2
hahaha... very very very good!!!
OmNiYes 1 year ago
Awesome work! push!
domenicowong 1 year ago
Good!! Support!!
lamytsing 1 year ago
我想要MP3黎做鈴聲,請問有冇
lamyancomic 1 year ago
推到變成623主題曲
nosmas 1 year ago 22
@nosmas 講得岩!
diral93331 1 year ago
@nosmas 個個都一齊rap, 保皇報紙都要擺頭版la!
idmangqn 1 year ago
2 thumbs up~~~~!!!
ninjawwy 1 year ago
awesome~~~~~~
teddyli 1 year ago
thumbs up
byers033203 1 year ago
中哂point !!
政改超錯!!
alanbfung 1 year ago
好掂!!這個世界好彩還有音樂!
MrJunleung 1 year ago 2
wow
wow
everybody
go
博我睇唔到
跌入共黨圈套
pineappledam 1 year ago 2
其實everybody know 都冇咩問題,
可能係hip hop 用法,
因為lil wayne ,gucci mane 個d外國rapper
都講everybody know me
iloveu4everable 1 year ago 3
@iloveu4everable
not if you want to delivery your message in 100% correctness.
lets do it right from the beginning or we are gonna derail and become 超錯. Get it?
jimiman 1 year ago
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iloveu4everable 1 year ago
@jimiman
pls listen lil wayne - everybody know me
and also gucci mane - everybody know me
我眼見好多外國rapper都冇加S 如果呢個係文化
咁又有咩問題呢?
iloveu4everable 1 year ago
@iloveu4everable
clam down, mate
i think we could all agree the author wants to delivery an important message to everyone. I was just trying to emphasize the importance of error-free communication.
Lets demonstrate to Donald Tsang about what we want in clear and powerful message with no ambition.
jimiman 1 year ago
Good Job!! But it should be everybody know(s).
alejandroman1000 1 year ago
Please rap that day~Please, and let all ppl have clam , no point let them stop us to show our voice
andiesyau 1 year ago
Great video. N.B. should be 仿似。
kRiZcPEc 1 year ago
正呀喂~~
chunlun1980 1 year ago
係奸茅,錯打成奸予
wangyingz 1 year ago 2
@wangyingz
1:54
s045a0326 1 year ago
面對超錯政改,最好的表達訴求方法,就是用rap,歌詞到肉,說出我們市民的心聲,超讚!
tcshek 1 year ago 30
超好~歌詞同rap都好好~
wan1019 1 year ago
6.23 包圍垃圾會
小心柒頭皮扮暈
may1221a 1 year ago 2
Very Good but there're typos. Should it be 控訴、奸茅?
joaoli 1 year ago
A job well done. Great one.
This shit needs a remix.
also here a is reminder for the lyric writer, "GO GO EVERYBODY KNOW" isn't quite right, consider "GO GO EVERYBODY KNOWS"
jimiman 1 year ago
@jimiman you are right
WOW 讀 WAAU,如果你想講狗叫請用 "汪"
不過都做得幾好,CHORUS可以畀多D BGM
clpro 1 year ago
超正!617,619,623熱播xd!
rockytam0421 1 year ago
wow this is sick!!! deserve more views for sure
lotteboyhk 1 year ago
應該比多o的人聽^^
diral93331 1 year ago 2
Oh pretty nice..... this is not too 暴力 la gwa.. ppl sing a song je..
paulnok 1 year ago