Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 14: Revise the Bridge Lyrics)

[lisam805]

I predict an epic win.

[lisam805]

Most excellent.

[z92s]

i thought you were gonna do your wish??

turn it upp

[punchmyface]

I would have but Rivers said to stay away from "turning" because it's said so much in the new extendo chorus.

[laffypaulie]

The "lyric lyrics" are cool. Blowin out your speakers and what not. But the 80's Radio line is really not cool. SOrry.

[punchmyface]

I hear ya. We could always combine with someone else's backup lyrics, if there's something better out there.

[lisam805]

That's true. "80s radio" is nice. "We're not gonna change" or "turnin' it/crank it all the way", etc. would make good alternate background lyrics in place of 80s radio.

[rrradioactiva]

i like this version if only because it reminds the listener that the song is actually about SOMETHING.

the song is starting to stray a little bit.....

[fightforoledc]

I liked what you did here, I just peer-edited it a little bit, let me know what you think? FROM: Lip sync in the mirror. Rockin in your bedroom. Blowin out your speakers. Pumpin up the volume. YEAH. TO: Rockin' in the bedroom. Lip syncin' what I'm hearin'. Pumpin' up the volume. Blowin' out the speakers. ITS WHAT I HANKER FOR.

[Danlally07]

Not to be too mean, it sounds a bit cheesey but its the best repsonse i have seen

[z92s]

true that.

[l33tsoss]

Actually, I kind of like this idea. :)

Good job.

P.S, what movie is that last part from?

[punchmyface]

Thanks! The movie is Say Anything.