That was funny , But it was that kind jimmy carr laughter , shouldnt laugh but its funny to cross the line sometimes. The line about fancying your mom was very laugh out loud comedy
(cont) I'm not trying to be a jerk and I don't even care if you delete this after reading this, so long as you read it. My suggestion, as someone who just started doing stand up as well, scrap your act and write a whole new one. If you think this is the best you can do you should probably forget about stand-up.
No problem and thank you for the advice. I know what you mean about the forcedness. I'm not going to delete what you said because it's less positive than the other comments. Can you send me a link to see or hear some of your own material?
I don't know you so I can give a more honest review, its not very good man. I understand this was your first attempt and people don't know how hard stand up is, but your act just seemed a little forced. Obsene humor can be funny but just because something is obsene doesn't make it funny the bit about not being a masaganist but stabbing a woman for having a vagina...not funny dude, just awkward and dumb. You can even tell the guy with the camera didn't think it was funny.
nice one, the only advice i'd give is don't talk about taboo topics exclusively, try and, like, add in some non offensive jokes to get more people into the act. i think you came on a little strong there.
thanks beardysteve did you like it. i didn't want to come across as pollarded, you know how that is people misinterperate you as a fence sitter and your branded for life
I laughed, you succeeded.
russell111 1 year ago
@russell111 Thank you!
fastville 1 year ago
That was funny , But it was that kind jimmy carr laughter , shouldnt laugh but its funny to cross the line sometimes. The line about fancying your mom was very laugh out loud comedy
acebauer 2 years ago
(cont) I'm not trying to be a jerk and I don't even care if you delete this after reading this, so long as you read it. My suggestion, as someone who just started doing stand up as well, scrap your act and write a whole new one. If you think this is the best you can do you should probably forget about stand-up.
meb6216 2 years ago
No problem and thank you for the advice. I know what you mean about the forcedness. I'm not going to delete what you said because it's less positive than the other comments. Can you send me a link to see or hear some of your own material?
fastville 2 years ago
Thats a bit harsh dude, people are laughing. He got the best laughs of the night from what i heard.
BeardySteve1 2 years ago
I don't know you so I can give a more honest review, its not very good man. I understand this was your first attempt and people don't know how hard stand up is, but your act just seemed a little forced. Obsene humor can be funny but just because something is obsene doesn't make it funny the bit about not being a masaganist but stabbing a woman for having a vagina...not funny dude, just awkward and dumb. You can even tell the guy with the camera didn't think it was funny.
meb6216 2 years ago
i was the guy with the camera. i thought it was hilarious.
your move.
verhoevenrules 2 years ago
Lol, i forgot about this, whens the next show?
BeardySteve1 2 years ago
Good job fella!!!
stopmeltingme 3 years ago
hey thanks for the support
fastville 3 years ago
pretty good for a first show, ive heard some of the worlds most famous comedians bombed their first gigs
Supaduck0 3 years ago
thanks man.
i messed up towards the end.
trying to write the second set now, its hard but worth it
fastville 3 years ago
nice one, the only advice i'd give is don't talk about taboo topics exclusively, try and, like, add in some non offensive jokes to get more people into the act. i think you came on a little strong there.
Supaduck0 3 years ago
You've got to start doing to movies in two minutes thing again... Abridged Ghostbusters used to make me piss myself laughin...
woogster 3 years ago
thats actually a great idea. completly forgot about that. shall work on it next
fastville 3 years ago
Fucking CLASS!!!
ludwigsongs 3 years ago
I love coming across these lovely innocent, Morcambe and wise-esque comedy routines on youtube.
BeardySteve 3 years ago
thanks beardysteve did you like it. i didn't want to come across as pollarded, you know how that is people misinterperate you as a fence sitter and your branded for life
fastville 3 years ago