A Jonas Love Story:Rated R # 10 "No more suprises,Please"

[peanut0327]

Noel:Are the girls ok?

Joe:No more suprises,please...

Dr.Sanders:They SEEM fine...but it looks like you have been hit pretty hard there....

this one may have a slight chance of damage on his leg...but I can't see it well enough yet...

I thought they were GIRL twins, you typed his.......^

[MissButterfly37]

i thought htey were both girls...

[ra1de6d]

AAHH WERES THE OTHER ONE

[brittny98]

wow.! i think it is matts baby!!!:(( tht would suck if it is.

[nickjrocks14]

OMG did he say HIS leg

[ilovevladanddima21]

It's been a year why'd u stop I'm fuckin upset

[InMemoryOfErin]

i wanna kill that son of a bitch who did that!!! D=<

[theCherryb00m1]

dude you keep putting me in suspence lol:D

[littledottielove]

Please write chapter 11 D:

Im dieing here!!!

[onebigpurpleWHAT]

u know what sucks.. this video was made 7 months ago..and its a cliff hanger.

so really. what r the chances of there actually being and #11?...exactly

[JoeJonas11696]

Hey there ;)

I'll be continuing her story. Please tell everyone to read her stories, and then view mine. I will be continuing the well known Rated R Jonas Love stories. Hope you like them ;)

[XxprincesspopxX]

Oh, thanks! Geez, FINALLY someone steps up to the plate to do it! and yea ill let everyone i kno whats gonna be happening.

[JoeJonas11696]

your welcome :)

Let everyone know to check out my video. I'm typing episode 11 right now.

[pumpkinpuss1998]

stop it

[BellaClara99]

Aren't you writing more..?

Where's chapter 11..??!?

I'm like dying over here...

PLEASEE WRiTE MORE!

[XxprincesspopxX]

can i at least kno wat the surprise was gonna be? cause like it's killing me haha.

[therealRatedRstory2]

why arentu writing more?

[joejonasisamazing8]

C'on...make more!!!

[joejonaslova10102929]

it's her not he.

anyway its an honest mistake.

OH MY WHAT?

AHHHHH SOMEONE TELL ME PLEASE.

its agrivating me i keep telling myself wierd stories of whats gonna happen.

[joejonaslova10102929]

OMG OMG!

make more make more

soon soon

quick quick

is it triplets is it triplets

please please

hurry hurry

now now

i like saying things two time i like saying things to times.

[joejonaslova10102929]

im talking to myself.

[LuviDuvi95]

the title is no more suprises so why are yu leaving us with a cliffy lol

[katiexoxokitten]

there is another kid isn't there?!?!?!?!

[mahegiri]

Post more soon I'm craving for more and you do a great job

[MrsJonas44]

omj another!!!!!!!!

[joejonaslova10102929]

another what reply please

[princess456456]

omfg wats wrong wat happened?

[iluvashleyt32]

these are great u have to make more and tell us what happened u left us on a cliffie!5/5

[nickjonas7777777]

Godd make the nextt onee!!!! these are amazinggg!!!! I'm officailllly hooookedd!!

(: (:

[joelove1984]

post the next one!!!!!

[sweetfan8]

NEXXT

[skyesthelimit318]

come on more plz

[nickjonasiluvu10]

omg please post the next one!!!!

[girlyketchup]

please post the next one PLEASEEEEEEEE

[lindsaykeen13]

holy frickin god! why do these authors do this to us, the loyal readers???? post another!!!

[jonaslover296]

i agree i make a series with jb and cheetah girls (wierd match) and i just started this one and i never do this really unless i cant or dont have time on her page it says why though....

[pro1at1everything]

NEXT ONE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!1

[jbsoutadisworld2]

make the next one!!!! im dying

[katiexoxokitten]

OHMY CHEESEEE WITH THE CLIFFYS and the...HIS? WTF TRIPLETS..MAN THERE GOOOOD AND*punches air*GOOO KEVIN YAAAY

[MrsJonasxEfronx]

when are you gonna postt!! i cant waittt!! i love it!

[beautiifullme]

plzplzplz upload the next one

[ZANNESSARULE1234]

POST ANOTHER 1 I WANNA NO WAT HAPPENS

[JuicyGirl55]

omg UPLOAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[cutiepie5526]

its gunna b a baby whos dad is that asshole matt!

[LoveJoBros1]

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE­EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE­EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE put the next one on!!!!!!!!!!!

[Barbiepwincess8]

Moree plzzz

[wuzberry22]

make the next one fast plz

[wuzberry22]

plz make a nother fast plzzzzz

[Sammiebaby9407]

Triplets?????????? LOL

[bridgitOMGLIKEYAH]

2 MONTHS!!!!! POST PLEASE!!

[SOphieROcksHArder]

please post!!!!

whats gunna happen??

X

[TKCash]

Keep it going on! What happens next?? Come on this is getting great! Don't stop now!

[dreamer4life247]

oh come on dont leave us hangin like this make more please please please hurry hurry hurry up please its been like 2 months now! btw this is really really good

[hateskoolandfamily]

more more more more please more I want to know more about the twins please post more I'm on my knee's

[jobrosrock159]

come on!! its been over a month!!! you have 114 comments(well now 115 counting me) and we really want you to post!!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­eeeeeeeeeee?!?!

[MJOrules]

come on! theres 114 comments! make another!

[kittyqt314]

come on its been 5 weeks!! i really like ur stories so MAKE MORE!! IM LIKE ADDICTED YOUR STORIES ARE LIKE A T.V SHOW U CANT STOP WATCHING!!! plzz post :)

[iluvjoejonas122]

post? please??? its been 39 days since you posted!

[dimmima]

omg postpost plzplz :D

[alipink1234]

post more,damn it!!!

[jblovers234]

no please more!!!!! don't stop here

[titanic484]

Please post the next one!! It's been over a month!! please please please!!

[alleygirl102396]

plz write more im in suspense

[babybumxox]

OMFJ please please please hurry and post its getting good!!!

[LovexPeacexJonasBros]

what happened?!?!?!?!

[shelz94]

I'm woundering what happened? Is that the end of the seires? Cause it was amazing and now its stopped. I'm confused lol.

[pandabear992]

OH MY GOSH! GET IT OUT NOW! BEFORE I SEND SOMEONE TO KILL YOU!!

(I would never do that, but still! NOW!)

[leena1411]

OMJ!!!! These are really good!!!

PLEASE POST!!!

[emmy845]

OME! PLZ POST SOON!

lol

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i subbed!

[MovieMaker013]

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i subscribed

my stomach actually hurt when he hurt her stomach

[alexandra4joanna]

Yay Kevin!!! .. I´ve laughed so hard .. :D .. please post soon again .. Thanx

[kenola4]

ok plzz this issooo not rated R.

[lilmissmocha121]

omg plz post! its been a month

[titanic484]

It's been a month please post the next one!! I love them!!

[countpuffulalol]

whoo hoo go kevin!!

[imrandomxo101]

wow...omg!!!!this is like the BEST storie i have read ever!!!

[mrsjoejonas07]

hurry@!!!!!!1

[savannah987]

come on!!!! i wanna read the next one!!! hurry up PLEASEE!!!!! OMG THESE ARE SOO GOOD!!!

[coal101]

awesome job! i subscribed!

[JoBrosRule93]

I love these stories!!! Please post more soon!!!!

[iluvNickJonashesHOTT]

oh god please don't say it's triplets

[elliottmattie12]

omg these r awesome PLZ PLZ PLZ post another one FAST

[SongxxMusic]

my dads name is Dr. Sanders. :)

[vkvnjl]

POST PLIZ GR8 STORY :D

[rihannafans0]

POST! this is a great story!

[claireeleni6]

this is amazing! please post soon!

[DanyellepooDaners]

amazing and y have u been gone so long:( i love ur series and dat cliffie was pretay big and im dying to c please hurry! :) LLOVED IT

[BornxaxDisaster]

your series are amazing please make more there so good lol

[Grapefruitluvr]

hurry up and make more!! i am addicated to your stories!!

[natnat1633]

ohhh YEA GO KEVIN U KIK HISS ASSSSS

[randomsizzlers]

POST THE NEXT SOON!! :D

[jonas161921]

omg that was sooo good plz let the girls b ok! and r u sure that Noel is having girls cuz "the doctor" said there could b something wrong with HIS leg!!!!?????

[missmaymaymay]

what the oh my and did u hear the doctor said his leg are you sure she having twin girls

[iluvjoedangajonas568]

i am like shaking uncontrollably! scared of what might happnen!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhh! plz post more sooon!

[JonasLovatoluv]

OMG...i need to know what happens to the girls..post soon!!!!

[JONASYUMMY]

AHHHHH CLIFFIE!!!!!! I HATE THOSE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ POST MORE! LOL!! I know I know I beg to much LOL

[sportschick3695]

whats a cliffie

[omgitzJellyBean]

nonononononoononno plz not the babies

[ZashleyandTroypay3]

That was so great

[om6114]

Ahh why does college have to be so challenging? POST

[WildKingdom131]

OMG are you 4real a CLIFFY! OMG OMG! ITS 3:19 AM OMG.........AND YOU HAVE A CLIFFY *ROAR*

[CheekyGuts]

Haa,

Yeah, how DARE she!

[sparklesandall]

ON HIS LEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I THOUGHT IT WAS TWIN GIRLS is it gonna be a miscarrige??

[titanic484]

I was thinking the same thing!! Why would you do that??

[x0xpeacelovejonasx33]

omg please post more soon! :)

[iloverodeoforeverand]

post more!!!!!!!

[XObrittandbriXO]

moremoremoremore!! im so curios!

[KeirstenPaigee]

POST MORE. [btw imma new readerrr.]

[MusicRocksSocks]

omgg

pleaseeeeeee post moreeeeeee

[redgirlygirl4]

post next one soon please

[cheersapril]

Next one please!!!!!!!!!

[xxxjunoxxx987]

whats with the episodes ending the the doctor saying "oh my" haha i still love it and i wish the jb beat matt up more then that haha ok keep going and im still hyper lolz

[t08012530132k]

more!!!

[JonasBrothersx0]

lovee it :)

[jblover4everrrr]

OMJ! great series! i hope you post the next 1 soon!! love,Brianna!!!~

[xXxlilaimz506xXx]

Wow great series! whens the next one!

xxx xxx

[Isabelleziden]

More please!!!!

[megaphone102]

omg!!!! u need to post another one pronto!!!

[FuTuReMiZnIcKjOnAs]

post mooore quick i luv these storyzzz there great.......kant wait 4 the next 1...

[davidarchuletalover1]

there better not be triplets lmao!

[MrsNickj4lifee]

omg!!! moree this is getting good!!!

[roszeyred]

TELL ME!! girl you better tell me before i buy packs and packs of vicious bulldogs and warewolves and send them to your house!! I MEAN NOW!!

[luvinJOEjonas]

POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

[jonasfanz93]

POST IT ASAP =) and thxs

[ilovenickjonas13210]

oh no i hate cliff hangers please post the next one this is sooo awesome!

[2krystal5]

can i be an insane person who kills matt lol!! love ur series ur flip'n awsome at writing

[nickjonas612]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

moremoremoremoremoremoreeeeeee­eeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[NickJerryJonas12]

GOSH! i FREAKING HATE MATT! grrr he makes me so MAD! post soon please! it was killing me till this one came! post post post! =[ moreeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! i love love love it!

[justhink123]

moree! i hatee cliffs lmaooo

[LuvJonasBros4Ever]

AHHH HURRY! yay joes a hero * sigh*

[nicholasx3jonas]

GAH!

more!

[Jonasfamilyseries]

ahhhhhh joey to the rescue! thats my boy! haha but omggg intense much?! i loved it!! more soon!

love, n.

[MysteryJonasWriter95]

OH NO!!!!

more plz!

[joejluvr815]

o darn.just leave us hanging.lol.

[Maymay952]

i agree with haleylc. I HATE BARACK OBAMA!!!

post more soon please please please!!!!!!!!!

[nickjonasisminexx]

postt soonn

[haleylc]

uggg i HATE cliffs almost as much as that bi*** barack o-BAMA

[TheGirlfromyear3000]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! POST SOONIER!! Like you posted really late!

[MusicRocksSocks]

omjjjjjjjjj

pleaseeeeeeee post more

[JOEJONASisMYLIFE101]

omg. is one of them dead? OR ANOTHER BABY!?!? please hurry?

[TexasJonasGirl]

Please start posting more often!!!

[opbwithapples96]

UGHH!! why do you do this to me???!!!!

i need moreee like now!!!

love,

Rachel

[mitchiegirl123]

more plzzz

[jonasbrotherfan2]

omg

[Manda090800]

next one please im dieing here

[jazminbelleallen]

omg plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post i love ur storys and u havnt posted in a while!

[WannaBeARawrStar]

omgggg!

[nicehotticutieizjazz]

i was so happy when i saw u made another one but then u go and do cliffie on us ugh.... lolz

[irishdancer25]

what!? is it ANOTHER baby!? :] jk jk! BUT POST POST POOOOOST! please! NOW!!!!

[jonasbrothers004]

I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVA FOR THIS!

[MyShootingStarlight]

OMG!!!! PLZZ POST MORE SOON!!!

[unimmy]

ugh what happened!?!?

plz post soon!!

[CosmoGrl76]

hurry plz post next chapter

[LoveTheJoBros]

lightly rubbing her belly!!hahah i would love that rofl

[ButterflyxDream]

omg post soon please!!

[mrsnickjonas092294]

OMJ!!!!! POST MORE!!!!!! PLZ?!?!?!!

[joejonaslover75]

omg ! i love it hurry on chapter 11!! i wanna know what happens!!

[JONASLUVR012]

awesome series totally addicted

[NickJerryLuver]

please soon! you always do this!!! please more!

[xoxarualxox101]

no!, no clifies!!! post soon!!

[jbrokz]

hunny, u better post soon! itsd been like what, a month since u posted ur last 1?? plz don't leave me hanging!!

[SamanthaJoyBlack]

I love your stories. But, I hate the cliffies. LOL

[j0er0cksmyw0rld]

post soon please!

[horseluver4ever11]

stop leaving us at cliffies! i hate them! but other then that love it! can you post sooner so i don't have to go back and read the chapter before?

[iiTZzNESSAx3]

OMJ!

thanks for posttingg <3

please post more soon!

[JoBroLuvr42708]

OMJ!!! POST SOON!!!