8 hours filming for 4.24 minutes of video. Did anyone else wonder why he reloaded his rifle after he saw the tank? Should it not already have been loaded?
Hey, I appreciate the film for what it was, great work! However, the logistics here aren't working for me. As part of the audience in this film I was engaged at first (great) and as soon as he was shot and then kept running and I was taken right out of the film (needs work) and it lost credibility. Also why did he switch clips? He hadn't taken another shot. Just small stuff like fixed up would have added a lot to your film.
two things... 1st: never walk on roads and 2nd, at the barrel is hot so, i dont think u might be able to hold the barrel for like 3 secs.... BUT besides that, AWESOME short film..
Great work. The only thing that isn't flawless is the audio. Planes and tanks should sound louder, not as if they are far away. In this movie and in Losses as well the audio lacks reverberation and ambient processing which ruin the effects sometimes. In Losses when someone is shouting you can hear awful digital distortions. You guys should definitely delegate more time on positioning your audio in the scene. But it's only my opinion. Otherwise, thank you for these nice inspiring works.
I dont mean to be an ass... Or a mule teheeno. But the tank shown at 0:50 seems a lot more reflective than the tank at 4:09 . Seems like it had a lot of specular in the first shot. I really like this short film
Great Video Guys. Makes a LOT of other on screen war films look pretty pathetic. Keep up the great work and thanks for giving us low budget film creators inspiration. Shout out from I.C.S.Y Productions here in Cabo San Lucas B.C.S. Mexico
i only saw 2 wrongs in this amazing short, first the last part were he pulls his gun down before shooting him in his face, you would never do that, he totalley sweeped the muzzle across his face, you would hit it upwards and away from his face, second was the last kickback on the execution shot was a little to dramatic, wouldnt be that big its more of a lean back then a kickback in real life
your are seriously the best filmmaker on the internet. I can't wait to see a feature of yours or even "Tell". Honestly, someone with mucho dolores needs to see what you are capable of.
sweet vid, teh only thing i may say is with your soldiers (main character especially) maybe just throw some mud on his face, stain or tear up his shirt a little bit, little details like that will make this film even more realistic, but good work though, i'm diggin it
you pan things that doesn't have to be "panned" like the planes (obvious example). They pass from the front to the back and the pan is starting in the left side and ending in the right side. and some sincro not done. Just saying this for you to improve.
that was stupid, thermal cameras from the Abrams would spot him even trough that foliage long before he could hear an Abrams coming. Other than that and the dead dude breathing it was pretty smooth.
@Zachabay22 not trolling mate, I understand that its for fun, and I liked the vid, however i just wanted to point out something which was in my opinion a stupid, all do understandable, oversight. Btw, its more a technical correctness, that is a simple yet for this vid very undermining fact about an Abrams tank. Oh, and the breathing dead guy. Kiss ass comments are just not my style and are simply not productive, if someone wants to make armed combat vids he should count on constructive comments.
@HercegodSvetogSave kk thanks for clearing that with me and i just couldn't find a better word then historictly correct but thanks anyway and now i understand your thinking sry just had a blonde moment there
k i think he was spose to turn around and go out the other side so thats why he comes out on a field but i don't know im jest takeing a guess and 2 i seen that M249 that guy had it a airsoft gun that you cock but each time.and my friend has the M4 body uses
@Prim3StaR at 1:12 he did a tactical reload, you dont need to pull back on the charging handle in order to "cock" the weapon because there is one already in the chamber, this is primarily used when youve fired a couple rounds from a magazine and want to have a fully loaded one ready and at 1:26 its a modified low ready stance with the weapon, mainly used when on maneuvers for a long period of time with anticipated enemy contact.
The main guy is pretty bad, as when he is shot, he doesnt emote any sense of pain, and yet he can still operate pretty fine. Even if a character is a bad ass who would claim bullets dont stop them would still show a sense of pain. Bad Acting on his behalf. He is certainly the weakest actor on the show
Some nice work! Narrative sucked a bit.. But some really nice cinematography and quick tempo editing! loved the hand held camera! Almost paul Greengrass style..
Just so u know kids, next time you get shot, just put some toilet paper or some other shit ur wearing, and it will fix your damage within 2 seconds :D
@TehHumblePie You obviously know nothing about producing a film. Movies take at least a year or two for only 90 minutes of footage. If you've ever made a film that was at least marginally good, you'd know that it takes a VERY LONG time.
8 hours filming for 4.24 minutes of video. Did anyone else wonder why he reloaded his rifle after he saw the tank? Should it not already have been loaded?
Britishman00 1 week ago
Josh has a future in acting and I really mean it like a mix of Tom Cruise/Daniel Craig/ and maybe a hint of Gerald Butler
humdoghero 3 weeks ago
This one is a lot better than Losses.
misterkevinoh 1 month ago
What's your editing tool
NUBSgoneWILD1 1 month ago
Holy shit, the part where the guy shot him scared me so mucho,
EpicSauce12345 1 month ago
The new sounds sound really good.
And you should consider making a 200 round belt box for that m249.
I wanted to get the same model for filming.
lukeyu2005 2 months ago
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RyansBriefs 2 months ago
3:49 3:56 never forget rule #2. double tap.
HighPriceComedy 2 months ago
@Lehman1989 Physical camera is a little done-to-death imo.
ThePathular 2 months ago
@Leadman1989 Eh, comment below. Kinda spelled your name wrong though.
Sorry.
ThePathular 2 months ago
this is great be sure to check out my video :)
ImAw3some1 2 months ago
Some blood on the screen from the head shot would have been nice.
Leadman1989 2 months ago
Hey, I appreciate the film for what it was, great work! However, the logistics here aren't working for me. As part of the audience in this film I was engaged at first (great) and as soon as he was shot and then kept running and I was taken right out of the film (needs work) and it lost credibility. Also why did he switch clips? He hadn't taken another shot. Just small stuff like fixed up would have added a lot to your film.
Great job though! Cool video
danielMgogolin 2 months ago
Double tap to make sure.
supermario12 2 months ago
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InfanitPictures2010 2 months ago
really great work! you guys are amazing!
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LostDreamsFusion 2 months ago
some body listend to their seargent
shadowgem2000 2 months ago
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this looks better than some modern films ive seen
shadowgem2000 2 months ago
Bruno's the biggest hard scoper...
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InfanitPictures2010 3 months ago
HE BREATHES 4:01!
Yoyuyi999 3 months ago
single shots give me a break!
PSJukkis 4 months ago
nice james bond run.
PSJukkis 4 months ago
two things... 1st: never walk on roads and 2nd, at the barrel is hot so, i dont think u might be able to hold the barrel for like 3 secs.... BUT besides that, AWESOME short film..
pyrodudewasa 4 months ago
is this shot in florida? this looks like florida? is it? IS IT?!
CicconeYouth04 4 months ago
@CicconeYouth04 Yes, they live in Florida.
EthanFilms 4 months ago
wow, i con't believe filmriot accepted my video response. Thanks guys!
InfanitPictures2010 4 months ago 32
@InfanitPictures2010 Same here, they're awesome aren't they!
MasterLife695 4 months ago
why would he go round with an empty mag and change it wen he sees a tank
StMinerman 4 months ago
How did you get that music? Did you make it or did you just put bits in from royalty free?
TheAwesomeGuyTV 4 months ago
This is amazing but i think personnally you should have a opening titles explaining whats going on but i know you guys done it for medal of honour.
jokersgamecast 5 months ago
Great work. The only thing that isn't flawless is the audio. Planes and tanks should sound louder, not as if they are far away. In this movie and in Losses as well the audio lacks reverberation and ambient processing which ruin the effects sometimes. In Losses when someone is shouting you can hear awful digital distortions. You guys should definitely delegate more time on positioning your audio in the scene. But it's only my opinion. Otherwise, thank you for these nice inspiring works.
VsLavaman 5 months ago
@VsLavaman the audio is just fine, it never loses the effect to me. You must be looking extremely hard
InfanitPictures2010 4 months ago
@InfanitPictures2010 i agree, the audio sounded fine
jhonTD 4 months ago
good.... but Losses was way better!
enjarcher 5 months ago
1:40 shouldve gone for the headshot
alpha493 5 months ago
Would be a good promo for some AEG.
tekknorat 5 months ago
nice
cornieliuscrunch 5 months ago
First Film Riot related thing I ever saw. Now I'm watching every episode of Film State, Film Riot, and all that fun stuff xD
HeyitsDJCarr 5 months ago
where do you get the soundtrack?
GiancarloCC7 5 months ago
Josh is beast
GrayLeeStudios 5 months ago
you guys should try to work together with Freddie Wong sometimes. That would be freaking awesome!!
MrCrazyFreerunner 5 months ago
mad2rassss
HyaPure 5 months ago
this should be called 2 guys 1 tank
PolarBearJS 5 months ago
This tank came from the wash. it is very shiny.
SrStakeholder 5 months ago
I dont mean to be an ass... Or a mule teheeno. But the tank shown at 0:50 seems a lot more reflective than the tank at 4:09 . Seems like it had a lot of specular in the first shot. I really like this short film
skinVISIBLE 6 months ago
why would you walk around with an empty magazine? 1:06
MarineCorps1776 6 months ago
@MarineCorps1776 it might not be empty just low in rounds so he switched to a full mag..
guestboy12 5 months ago
@guestboy12 still, why would you wait till you see something to change it, change it asap
MarineCorps1776 5 months ago
MegaConmaster All is fair on love and war ;D
Gir77661 6 months ago
Yea. Really. Sorry man. But war is never fair. Other than that, YOU TOTALLY KICK ASS MAN! WHOO!
MegaConmaster 6 months ago
best work
HassanSualeh 6 months ago
how did you pull focus in the warehouse right before the knife fight? 2:52
goalieboy6 6 months ago
Great Video Guys. Makes a LOT of other on screen war films look pretty pathetic. Keep up the great work and thanks for giving us low budget film creators inspiration. Shout out from I.C.S.Y Productions here in Cabo San Lucas B.C.S. Mexico
MrJuanjgmtz 6 months ago
Great Video, only thing I saw was the unnecessary execution shot at the end, hadn't he already got shot to the head ?
NeorageCrow 6 months ago
I say EPIC! :D
Thsiscool 7 months ago
Where's FPSRussia when you need him?
PAYBACKaiw 7 months ago
"Remember, switching to your pistol is always faster than reloading."
ItAreMe 7 months ago 115
@ItAreMe cod 4, as quoted by Gaz
Gencturk92 1 month ago
@ItAreMe Sounds familiar ;))
Exchiefboy 1 month ago
Awesome love this!!! Nice cam n colour
residualeffect44 7 months ago
nice video...BRAVO!!!
Rapidsfilms 7 months ago
Wow this sucked bad. Everything was so predictable and the main character was godplayer. Also wtf with the sneaky tank?
XIIIMastershotIIIX 7 months ago
meh, a little over emphasis on recoil, watch some real guns being fired ;)
sound effects are wayy off... muzzle flashes need more environmental effect smoke/blurs of light.
the tank is super quiet, same with the low flying jets.
Clarkizh 7 months ago
I can understand why the m4/m16a4 carbine was semi auto but why the light machine-gun?
flyingmonkeyman1 7 months ago
@flyingmonkeyman1 accuracy.
Murderwink1 7 months ago
i only saw 2 wrongs in this amazing short, first the last part were he pulls his gun down before shooting him in his face, you would never do that, he totalley sweeped the muzzle across his face, you would hit it upwards and away from his face, second was the last kickback on the execution shot was a little to dramatic, wouldnt be that big its more of a lean back then a kickback in real life
nny5342 7 months ago
awsome
KHALSAPRO 7 months ago
3:40 he should have gotten Sleight of Hand
InvinciblePie424 7 months ago
Josh is my new hero
Acki122 7 months ago
@dVentureMovies No dude, no.
tdivv41 7 months ago
good work
Bhaichacha 7 months ago
Ryan i would love to see one of your movies on the big screen
Choltik 7 months ago
3:56 : Double Tap
RusskieHunter13 7 months ago
plzzz more movies.you are very good
estonia2010 7 months ago
where do get the music?
BennyG0 7 months ago
This reminds me of my days nam
Dirty13rown 7 months ago
whats not to like about this.......................... who ever unlike this i wish their arms and legs to disappear lol
onlydiff 7 months ago
Quake 6 Arena
Patryk737 7 months ago
3:53
And that's when I'd usually rape the spacebar while swingin' mah knife :P
ElizaDay08 7 months ago
3:14 - 3:22 Shots were EPIC. Moves were HOTTT <3<3<3
ElizaDay08 7 months ago
your are seriously the best filmmaker on the internet. I can't wait to see a feature of yours or even "Tell". Honestly, someone with mucho dolores needs to see what you are capable of.
sflan93 7 months ago
where do you get your sfx?
mattsbars 7 months ago
nice ;)
erkutacar 7 months ago
Much better sound effects. I thought the last one's weren't very good fro the gun fire... These are much better.
Frenziedhawk 7 months ago
WOW!! where can i get the tank fx thank u
CRAZYcodfan6 7 months ago
airsoooft))))
sinigami72 7 months ago
nice airsoft gun!!!
Mrawesomeball 8 months ago
I liked it, but the muzzle flashes were too small to be very realistic I thought.
Fireice1337 8 months ago
I love the Jets flying overboard***
IbscottEd 8 months ago
sweet vid, teh only thing i may say is with your soldiers (main character especially) maybe just throw some mud on his face, stain or tear up his shirt a little bit, little details like that will make this film even more realistic, but good work though, i'm diggin it
LittleFechtion 8 months ago
2:30 camper with bad aim lololol.
CommunistSpyware 8 months ago
Baby Muzzle flash! LOl!
ZeroEndZone 8 months ago
If you have use a stabilizator it would be much better
ProductionsArrogant 8 months ago
By the way guys, great job! I was wondering if you could put how you did the jets, and action roll into the doorway in a video?
TheNoobShredder 8 months ago
Laugh My Ass Off (LMAO) This movie has such an original title!
TheNoobShredder 8 months ago
what editing software did u use?
problemboys2230 8 months ago
I love this short film its really good but i notice one thing how the hell can you have a tank sneak up on you.
MrKr0be 8 months ago
@MrKr0be probs during the fight with the knife dude or while shooting at Bruno
SadGothEmoKid 8 months ago
the guy with the beard and the mg, his gun has way to slow rate of fire
ghillie278 8 months ago
@ghillie278 shit REALLY?
YeahSweetLemonade 8 months ago
@YeahSweetLemonade yes
ghillie278 8 months ago
youtube.com/watch?v=0cc_xeiKJOY
dontexistpictures 8 months ago
Cool!
MrBlomu 8 months ago
you have a lot of sound issues dudes!
just saying.
you pan things that doesn't have to be "panned" like the planes (obvious example). They pass from the front to the back and the pan is starting in the left side and ending in the right side. and some sincro not done. Just saying this for you to improve.
noffadas1 8 months ago
why is there always a guy with an MG?
*needs scopes*
btw, nice action short.
TheDailyNewsPost 8 months ago
That was really good :)
1474Joseph 8 months ago
well cool :)
1474Joseph 8 months ago
this is no soldier...more like mercenary
yguanhooi 8 months ago
He sound whored him
MightyKlutch 8 months ago
3:50 Hi.
Zaplockid 8 months ago
who camps in the middle of nowhere by themselves with a machine gun. what is this, call of duty?
it was a bit ... extreme and seemed kind of fake but the filming itself was great.
leeknivek 8 months ago
Awesome!!!!! What programm for sp effects was used?
ArtJorgeCom 8 months ago
Chuck Norris can make better Muzzle Flashes using a type writer.
TheSpunk45 8 months ago
This, is well cool! :P
V3Parkour 8 months ago
@1:43
Fucking campers.
DerHund57 8 months ago
omg what a shit xD why did he reload at 1:07?
Ggabor93 8 months ago
could u guys make a sequel?plz pretty style
gmodded 8 months ago
Modern Warfare 8, on the Xbox 1260.
tdivv41 8 months ago 75
@tdivv41 Modern warfare 8 is still going to use the same engine, believe me. Same graphics, same gameplay.
Just like new map- and weapon pack.
FinnishGaming 7 months ago
@tdivv41 You forgot the PS 10 and the PC Overlord.
awakenedZeratul 7 months ago
@tdivv41 battlefield 4 on ps3
BF3 RULES
diogosushi 6 months ago
@tdivv41 Xbox 1440
RokugakiSama 6 months ago
360p for saftey
codmw2maniac100 8 months ago
awesome visual effect.. and great job. keep it up your doing work guys..
filmingXpert 8 months ago
awesome vid
infernodude3 8 months ago
Hey man,
I love your videos and I love the color correction in this video.
Can you please tell me how you made it or can you give a download link to the magic bullet file???
I hope for answer
ThePrenian 8 months ago
this is bullcrap and i mean it
Ivona1000deani 8 months ago
good video, especially considering you didn't spend any money on it.
BlueBeret57 8 months ago
that guy was a bad shot...
PKRJAETC 8 months ago
that was stupid, thermal cameras from the Abrams would spot him even trough that foliage long before he could hear an Abrams coming. Other than that and the dead dude breathing it was pretty smooth.
HercegodSvetogSave 8 months ago
@HercegodSvetogSave dude its just for fun you want to make a historicly correct video then do it yourself don't go trolling on other peoples videos
Zachabay22 8 months ago
@Zachabay22 not trolling mate, I understand that its for fun, and I liked the vid, however i just wanted to point out something which was in my opinion a stupid, all do understandable, oversight. Btw, its more a technical correctness, that is a simple yet for this vid very undermining fact about an Abrams tank. Oh, and the breathing dead guy. Kiss ass comments are just not my style and are simply not productive, if someone wants to make armed combat vids he should count on constructive comments.
HercegodSvetogSave 8 months ago
@HercegodSvetogSave kk thanks for clearing that with me and i just couldn't find a better word then historictly correct but thanks anyway and now i understand your thinking sry just had a blonde moment there
Zachabay22 8 months ago
k i think he was spose to turn around and go out the other side so thats why he comes out on a field but i don't know im jest takeing a guess and 2 i seen that M249 that guy had it a airsoft gun that you cock but each time.and my friend has the M4 body uses
theguy466 8 months ago
Hahaha cartoon tank.
Nuixx1 8 months ago
@Nuixx1
3ds max not cartoon...
skaterchevy 8 months ago
wow! to think that this wasn't done by one of those big names. cool. film riot u guys rock!
MrPhinter 8 months ago
HOLY BALLSACK! FLYING SEVERED HEADS ARE FUN!
opkmaster0 9 months ago
LMG with an Assault rifle magazine...
SlayerLG 9 months ago
0:50 He is next to a road.
1:12 He didn't pull the bolt back to finish cocking his weapon.
1:17 He emerges from cover, but is somehow now in a field. Wasn't he next to a road before?
1:26 Who the hell holds a weapon like THAT!?
Prim3StaR 9 months ago
@Prim3StaR YOu be Trollin you troll! freddiew and RWJ will kill you!
Reeclan 9 months ago
@Prim3StaR at 1:12 he did a tactical reload, you dont need to pull back on the charging handle in order to "cock" the weapon because there is one already in the chamber, this is primarily used when youve fired a couple rounds from a magazine and want to have a fully loaded one ready and at 1:26 its a modified low ready stance with the weapon, mainly used when on maneuvers for a long period of time with anticipated enemy contact.
BlueBeret57 8 months ago
Grand Theft Auto: Film Riot
Agent850 9 months ago
thumbs up if you wanted the guy ho jnam called brad pit to be shot by tank and go flying lol.
therslsw 9 months ago
BEST WAR SHORT EVER!!!!!!! I know the main character normally plays sort of comedy type roles i have seen but he did a get job for this war short!!!!
REBELINDIAN91 9 months ago 27
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vannaeboteona 9 months ago
Did look like brad pitt for a second , anyways this is some quality work! amazing guys well done
TheTimeLordAnthony 9 months ago
der video ist schelcht muahhahaha
CraftBookHelp 9 months ago
@CraftBookHelp ...nicht
Battlecry45 9 months ago
hey guys i made a war short myself and i kinda need some feedback... let me know what you think, and thanks
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d1zzrap 9 months ago
Who is the bad guy? :D
Patryk737 9 months ago
The main guy is pretty bad, as when he is shot, he doesnt emote any sense of pain, and yet he can still operate pretty fine. Even if a character is a bad ass who would claim bullets dont stop them would still show a sense of pain. Bad Acting on his behalf. He is certainly the weakest actor on the show
Isle0fRed 9 months ago
@Isle0fRed like maby if he was chuck norris id be like ok thats relaistic but no hes not
AlwaysProProduction 9 months ago
I want this movie on dvd NOW Ryan
Btw, Major Badass Army Josh = Super Hot and Sexy Josh :3
SadGothEmoKid 9 months ago
Some nice work! Narrative sucked a bit.. But some really nice cinematography and quick tempo editing! loved the hand held camera! Almost paul Greengrass style..
randyridgway 9 months ago
Awesome.Are u going to make a Movie?
sprudrats 9 months ago
At 2:55 I was like "OH SHIT"
awesome :D
29thFallschirmjager 9 months ago
Wo! Very nice!
Check also my homemade movie: "The Ambush - Homemade action movie/Short film"..
What do you guys think?
hokyks 9 months ago
that was actually pretty good!
gheisari1 9 months ago
Just so u know kids, next time you get shot, just put some toilet paper or some other shit ur wearing, and it will fix your damage within 2 seconds :D
MrRiffz 9 months ago
were do you get you sound effects from .....
thumb up so he can seee!!!
ps3HelpingHand 9 months ago
@ps3HelpingHand no
ibilliedyourmomhard 9 months ago
@ps3HelpingHand just watch some other film riot episodes.
TheFrameHunters 9 months ago
when i saw the tannk i was like L-O-L unlucky
tomtomtom123able 9 months ago
This is awesome...
jonathanmarvens 9 months ago
Shot for eight hours, edited in two days, 4 minutes of footage. Fail.
TehHumblePie 9 months ago
@TehHumblePie You obviously know nothing about producing a film. Movies take at least a year or two for only 90 minutes of footage. If you've ever made a film that was at least marginally good, you'd know that it takes a VERY LONG time.
SirWilliamMonocle 9 months ago
@SirWilliamMonocle I know that, though I didn't think it would be the sort of statistic you would draw attention to?
TehHumblePie 9 months ago
LOL shinny abrams ?
justazim1 9 months ago
WRONG CHOICE FOR AN ABRAMS Tank . lol thats a friendly lolzzz
goddamnboy1 9 months ago
dang that was awesome!
HondaFmxBikeRider 9 months ago
''really'' - that made it sound soo crap.
08CJ09 9 months ago
Hey Ryan, please tell me a web where i can get some good weapon sounds
Tenaguer 9 months ago