Need to make your fights faster... it was too slow.... the choregraphy didn't look real and you guys didn't move at all.... when people fight they don't stay stationary with that... you also need to get yourself some sound fx for blocking and punching.
I like the transporter style ending and that shot near the dead guiy's arm as you walk out was cool. You need to have your camera move though... tripod shots are only good for certian shots.
well ya'll can just kiss my ass!!! i would like to see ya'll do a video they cant all turn out good!come on its a homemade video!! -- brittany --
blackroses4you 4 years ago
Don't do that Brittney. Have you seen their videos? They're good.
Anthony573 4 years ago
Need to make your fights faster... it was too slow.... the choregraphy didn't look real and you guys didn't move at all.... when people fight they don't stay stationary with that... you also need to get yourself some sound fx for blocking and punching.
I like the transporter style ending and that shot near the dead guiy's arm as you walk out was cool. You need to have your camera move though... tripod shots are only good for certian shots.
Make lots of close ups as well.
dardrex777 4 years ago
1LonelyEskmo what the He** lol just kindding we all know it's you SWINK!!.. anyways sorry for picking on you and btw tony nice job...kudos
blackroses4you 4 years ago
no commesnt!! dude tony the ending best freaking ending every !!!
1LonelyEskmo 4 years ago