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  • Em would kill this :P

  • rubbish beat

  • Can I use this on a mixtape?

  • erm gud only thin u need 2 duy is introduce base its not a *beat* unless it has a beat if u no wat i meen. dnt mind mosta de haters even thow the lyrics r kinda wack. just keep practicing

    

  • /watch?v=RDOyQbz-3zk

    look at my first rap video on YouTube, subscribe if you like it :D

    I'll post more later, probably tomorrow..

  • leave me be,

    0:59

    (im honstly, bending the policy),

    mytholigy sallow the antibotics suicadal pcsyologly/

    fuck a kamakise im karasiene to body heat/

    summen hell from the shevels deliver the demon inside of me/

    no apoligies, strickly canniblesitc deeply imprisioned

    in my own mind the darkness is my cliness

  • 0:11 - 0:44 hurt my ears....

  • canniblistic my mudar intentions/

    psychotic goals buggin outta control mind defenceless,

    Final Redemption canniblistic- contaminated 

  • OMFG THIS TRACK IS PLATINUM FUR SHOORE

  • is sounds like looooong intro :)

  • yeah i cant see why not mate.... let me know how you wana do it. whats the project.

  • hey mang i heard this beat and its insane dude, after the first listen i had something worked out for it, could i use it on a project im working on, id give you full credit for the beat, lemme know asap

  • that sounds alot like go to sleep by eminem

  • here is a quick decision, steady precision ,on deciding wither to keep you dead or still livin, im not some wanna b or straight street criminal, i am investigated descriminated mind blowing subliminal, you've never felt the quake of the still water that i shake, your only half baked so step off before your rhyme is raped, you can never beat me my mind is too heavy of a burden, coming on corrupted like when the nazi's hit the germans, you never seen this shit, so hardcore i make the clocks tip.

  • BETTER GET QUICK get to shittin yah pants trick we mad men straight from the front gates of the basement insane to the core soakin up horror like a rag with chloroform crazy jason scene with me the lead freakin people out til they scream im bleeding please not me all i tried to do was leave applebees you ran across the table like marines overseas we the beast's seeing that u be diceased if you not freely beating mc's in crazy ways make the base line recede listen for the hellish rap creeds

  • too high frequency on that synth, it's killing my ears, try to equalize

  • this beat owns

  • go to sleep by eminem nice

  • @usmaniii786 thats what i was thinkin!

  • Life is like a prison i'm still doing time. It's been 3 years since i made a rhyme. I'm barley making a dime. I'm mentaly declined. Lyricaly inclined. no record label i'm still unsinged. in the gutter is where i can be found. so give me a reason. for me not to treason. a lyrical punch so painful that bitch is wheezing. the flow is increasing. so fuck ou all if you dout me. i know i'm shit so enjoy and nice beat

  • voll der billige scheiß digga

  • no offence but that shit sounds like a dog whistle.

  • what if some mother fucker made this beat and told that this is eminem's

  • even know ur coming up i gaurentee you if u called shady records eminem might use it for a freestyle beat he would pay u cause my homie did that he called shady records and cashis bought a beat from him for 70 bucks and he was charging just like 40 but cashis gave him 70 and it was just for a mixtape but u might not get to meet him or mabey u will but either way u can make money

  • trash

  • GO TO SLEEP a little bit

  • tight shit

  • a little repetetive.. but isee your vision. keep workin on it man

  • Is it me or does this have a hint of Doe Rae Me in it?

  • Yo! I used that same loop bro! And the whole time I played the beat I was imagining Em spittin over it.

  • sounds fuckin bad man....

  • if you want sick hip hop beats checkout my page! i do not charge for beats! EVOLV

  • pretty gud

  • in my opinon he could have added a lil more the beat is to necked

  • this is the go to sleep beat.

  • @kace842 ha haa

  • haha what?

  • the production is less than mediocre. the beat gets really, really boring. this sounds nothing like anything eminem would EVER rap on.

  • i like it :\

  • kill the trance organ

  • trance organ been fine ..it made him and fifty rich

  • @lulem400 what the fucking main melody? lool whats he gna be left with... a drum beat?

    you must be dumb.

  • @AkbarTheAK I got three thumbs up - you have none - when you get four or more get at me - this beat sucks

  • @lulem400

    oh sorry its just im pretty to the whole youtube warfare thing... i ddnt realise were gladiators and we are judged by thumbs up... its just that even if the beat is shit just say the beat is shit. dont tell him 'kill the trance organ'

    weirdo...

  • @AkbarTheAK I guess you missed the this beat sucks comment at the end - thanks though

  • SOOOOOOOOO BLAND

  • this shits bland like bread and water, im married ta the game so ill c u at the alture, rap needs a new step, its called real shit fuck the critics get it

  • this is the go to sleep beat

  • no its similuar

  • this isnt a shady beat

    its someone tryna get fam of shady

    dummy up fuck

  • im soo signing up for that money makin scheme ,,,,,, sounds sick , thanks alot!!

    and have you made anything offa it??

  • were can i get this beat at?

  • This is similar to "go to sleep"

  • shitty dont want to here that on eminem cd

  • i dont know Eminem could make it good with his lyrics!

  • this is the go to sleep beat

  • could be better

  • You still need a little more practice :)

  • wen the drop comes add stronger snare & bass line, then add a transition to the hook w/ 1 or 2 mor instruments in the bak but really good melody

  • crap

  • you need to bring a drop in this beat man , and it needs a bassline riding, sub sounding i would say, also another hook to break it up, other than that its good

  • the beginning was good but it gets too repetitive, make it a little heavier and switch it up a bit at 0:11 . . . good try tho

  • Great Start but get's too repetative. The Drop is weak . Keep going at it. You have all the right elments so far.

  • yo it aint bad man whats with all the hate?

  • Tell u what is annoying,listenning 2 ya shit wanna b lyrics on ya shit as fuck cover songs."im a true Mc,im not a thug..so show me some love" what d fuck! D difference ShitRyder,i just make beats 4 a laught,i dont pretend to b a producer of any sort. U do & lets face it u cnt rap,u obviously cnt produce as u use oder artist stuff & Lyricist my Ass so actualy what can u do?Grow up,u 34 yr old wanna b faggot.

    Nxt time u got a problem, address me 1st b4 u try 2 make shit a public issue

    Bitch!

  • @jdrc01 u mad bro?

  • lol....almost there kid.

  • Goooood stuff man keep it up

    Dr has better beats but this is alright bro

  • thnx man, got loads beats like this one, might put them on here, will c.

  • dre dosent make wack amateur beats dick lick!!! this shit was done on some wannabe beat makers computer it blows big dicks enough said

  • hey! whats with the shit mate! i just make beats as hobbie ok, bit of fun in my own time. i make £40 G's a year so the only one that sucks cock here is u! peace

  • you tell him JD

    this shit is sick.

  • i really like the organ, gives a nice dark feel to the beat.

    1 thing. Make the drums more prominent, you dont have to speed the drums up necessarily just make them hit harder.

  • this shit suck

  • You dumb lmao? This is theshit im using this for twm in the change rooms to get my team ready for our rugby game wooo sick fucking shit

  • you are using my beat for your team in the changing rooms? thats kool! what team is that?

  • thats a nice beat, but its hard to tell with rap beats since it ahs to eb complimented by the flow of the lyrics.

    I like it though, alot.

  • i dont like the highbells u used..its pretty annoying..anyways u need to work on the drum pattern..

  • this is good

  • sporatic fully automatic short bursts of gunfire that coraborated with the beat would be the perfect final touch

  • no it wouldnt

  • So much potential in the beat on the real tho about 20 seconds in you need an explosive drop and a sped up drum line and maybe an added gunshot or two put in creatively added in where you see fit. I would even consider spendein sum on it if it ended up sounden like I hear it in my head. I would fux with it and not just drop it without at least an effort.

  • tnx for the advice! i have actualy worked on the beat and i have a version which has got a bit more gun fire and is a bit qicker, will added on you tube at some point. tnx

  • More instruments and a different drum kit and it might pass for alright

  • Sounds more like a Funeral or Church service music!

  • try difrent drum or just make another beat ;)

  • this is good for about 20 seconds then you need to pick it up to a rapping pace if you know what i mean, when its like this its immpossible to freestyle but good for something writtin or slower

  • LOL beta never dropped

  • how could i have made it dropped?

    ive got a few versions of this beat that i ve messed arond with bt havent put on her yet.

  • Oh and a new song he made was :eminem trick trick who want it..But is not from album..

  • nice

    yo who made this beat?

  • meh... stop putting songs and write new song new song new beat or having a relapse..Ne album comming in 1 month and somthin, The song:i am having a relapse was just a freestyle to understun that king ins on his way back..

  • im having a relapse wasnt a freestyle, I dont know where everyone is getting that idea, listen to the song, its mastered and layered vocals, they dont do that to freestyles!!

  • Well is not look like freestyle but not looking like normal song anyway..all think is freestyle cos somthing like that they said at Shady45..Well who cares eminem is comming back thats the good

  • Eminem said it was a freestyle. Go listen to an interview, he said it was a freestyle he worked with over night.

  • Extremely annoying listening to the same repeating organ. It annoys the piss outta me. Could do better, but it takes time ... I know. HaHa.

  • hahaha the beat never dropped

  • yeah right,

    there is no way im gonna sit here and believe slim when from the illest beats like Amityville, The Way I am, etc. all the way down to THIS weak stuff.

  • THIS IS ONE OF THE SONGS OF HIS NEW ALBUM

  • what song from the new album is this one called?

  • idk but all i knwo his comin wit a new album

  • its fucking tight at first but then its just the same needs something every 8 seconds or so dont know about making beats just add some shit to it and it will be tight

  • ermmm..

  • this beat is wack. Need a better drum sequence. Keep trying but dont say is Em's beat

  • no way this is a shady beat rofl i got better beats than that com on ... stop posting this garbage

  • its ok but it could be better if you add more or a change from the same sound to something faster. idk it needs something it was ok tho.

  • i love this beat

  • tnx man! still to perfected! but thats why its on here to get some comments.

  • It's goin to sound raw. I like the organ

  • This is 1 of the best beat ive heard

  • sorry, but thumbs down! nuttin could help this. start from scratch and trash this one. you'll do better next time, cause you couldnt possibly do worse.

  • fuck 50 cent in end he doest give middle leader seat to eminem.. fuck 50

  • u need more drive the synth is nice and all but it needs a little more steady bass to snare pop

  • this is not a good beat

  • so why is it not a good beat? if your gona diss it tell me why? how could i make it better?

  • hit me up f u can hook me up with reason 3... good beat keep up the work

  • the drum beat was not good at all. .the synth was ok,but you should try to have more melody. .like 50 cent,Lloyd Banks & Eminem - Dont Push Me. .now that's a heavy beat:)

  • It's a good beat

  • The synth pattern sounds like a typical Eminem beat. I would have liked to hear more snare. It would have been cool if you would have incorporated the gun being loaded as part of the rhythm.

  • i c were ur comng from with the sneare, and the gun loading was smthg i was think about,great! tnx

  • what program did you use to make this?

    sounds rly good

  • reason 3, from Propellerhead.

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