* added in a brief insert shot of whoever was texting each other, that was a little bit confusing, but still not bad.
* allow the music to finish a chord progression or fade out at a less abrupt time.
* jump cuts r now acceptable for vlogging, I personally (& hope others do to) think jump cuts should be avoided for narrative films, unless it's on purpose for artistic/stylish reasons. Easy to simply cut to a different angle.
That was really really good for a 1st project! A LOT better than the majority of humans could do.
The acting was well done as well, wasn't flat, over-the-top- or too "reciting lines"-ish as a lot of young actors tend to do. Spot on 90% of the time!
@Shaggy72 Thanks for both your comments. Nick McCue who appears in this movie plays the role of the Elvin Captain in LTD Productions' upcoming fantasy-adventure movie "The Elpis Orb" for release in April 2012. He also worked camera and did editing on LTD's "The Bike". Tammie is one of the five writer/directors on "The Elpis Orb" movie.
My only 3 notes would be:
* added in a brief insert shot of whoever was texting each other, that was a little bit confusing, but still not bad.
* allow the music to finish a chord progression or fade out at a less abrupt time.
* jump cuts r now acceptable for vlogging, I personally (& hope others do to) think jump cuts should be avoided for narrative films, unless it's on purpose for artistic/stylish reasons. Easy to simply cut to a different angle.
Still, Good job overall tho! Keep it up!
Shaggy72 4 months ago
That was really really good for a 1st project! A LOT better than the majority of humans could do.
The acting was well done as well, wasn't flat, over-the-top- or too "reciting lines"-ish as a lot of young actors tend to do. Spot on 90% of the time!
Shaggy72 4 months ago
@Shaggy72 Thanks for both your comments. Nick McCue who appears in this movie plays the role of the Elvin Captain in LTD Productions' upcoming fantasy-adventure movie "The Elpis Orb" for release in April 2012. He also worked camera and did editing on LTD's "The Bike". Tammie is one of the five writer/directors on "The Elpis Orb" movie.
LTD4Kids 4 months ago
@LTD4Kids As I watched the video, I was like "Jason looks familiar". When I saw your comment, I realized why. This was good video by the way.
MrWaterwatcher 4 months ago