That was really good guys. I saw a few mistakes here and there with the combat and of course music would make a big difference, but damn, for a first film that was an awesome effort. I look forward to your next one.
Very good for a first time. With the top comment i agree, needs music. One quick tip I can say that I know works wonders from projects for school and stuff i've worked on with other people is instead of setting the camera somewhere, have someone hold it and move around with you for certain shots. This gives it that "actiony" look and tends to, imho, seem like things are moving faster. But overall this is one of my fav lightsaber duels
Just a few recommendations: The lack of music throughout the film is very noticeable and adding music would help set the tone for each individual scene. The first scene where you are receiving your orders also could have been made more attention grabbing with more camera angles rather than 1 still shot. The lightsaber battle was impressive, but you can subtly tell it's rehearsed due to a lack of aggression in the fighting. Good start, but plenty to improve on. Keep makin videos!
@Idraragelol Thanks for the input, it's in the description, I was unable to make my own score and I refuse to use music that is not mine. Choreograph was only done by the "recruiter" and the "agent", no professional help was in this film. Everything from acting, filming, post-production, choreograph, and so on was our first time. Not to mention that only one camera and 3 people made this film with no film school or graphics education, we all have just a normal High School Diploma. We'll learn.
@theohiograssmen being the other person in this film, I feel to mention footwork wasn't an issue until about a month before filming, where Levi noticed it was too bland without it. footwork is also probobly the hardest part to memorize
The choreography was pretty good, some of the punches were sold really well. A bit of fake blood would have sold it even better, however I enjoyed the video a lot. Any plans for sequels?
Thank you for reminding me how essential background music is
JDBW 1 month ago 3
@JDBW Glad to help lol, don't make the same mistake.
Calonqwasage 1 month ago
Nicely done!
Pug40 1 month ago
That was really good guys. I saw a few mistakes here and there with the combat and of course music would make a big difference, but damn, for a first film that was an awesome effort. I look forward to your next one.
Arkapok81 1 month ago
Very good for a first time. With the top comment i agree, needs music. One quick tip I can say that I know works wonders from projects for school and stuff i've worked on with other people is instead of setting the camera somewhere, have someone hold it and move around with you for certain shots. This gives it that "actiony" look and tends to, imho, seem like things are moving faster. But overall this is one of my fav lightsaber duels
AsRobbieStandsLiving 1 month ago 3
@AsRobbieStandsLiving Thanks for the comment, we'll keep that in mind! Spread the word please.
Calonqwasage 1 month ago
@AsRobbieStandsLiving I like you lol
KadenShade 1 month ago
Just a few recommendations: The lack of music throughout the film is very noticeable and adding music would help set the tone for each individual scene. The first scene where you are receiving your orders also could have been made more attention grabbing with more camera angles rather than 1 still shot. The lightsaber battle was impressive, but you can subtly tell it's rehearsed due to a lack of aggression in the fighting. Good start, but plenty to improve on. Keep makin videos!
Idraragelol 1 month ago
@Idraragelol Thanks for the input, it's in the description, I was unable to make my own score and I refuse to use music that is not mine. Choreograph was only done by the "recruiter" and the "agent", no professional help was in this film. Everything from acting, filming, post-production, choreograph, and so on was our first time. Not to mention that only one camera and 3 people made this film with no film school or graphics education, we all have just a normal High School Diploma. We'll learn.
Calonqwasage 1 month ago
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TheDarkstar010 1 month ago
very creative, i enjoyed it.. your footwork is very good!
theohiograssmen 1 month ago
@theohiograssmen Thank you, our first time.
Calonqwasage 1 month ago
@theohiograssmen being the other person in this film, I feel to mention footwork wasn't an issue until about a month before filming, where Levi noticed it was too bland without it. footwork is also probobly the hardest part to memorize
KadenShade 1 month ago
@KadenShade Fun times lol
Calonqwasage 1 month ago
Good job Levi hope to see more
TheDarkstar010 2 months ago
@TheDarkstar010 Thank you.....who are you?
Calonqwasage 1 month ago
The choreography was pretty good, some of the punches were sold really well. A bit of fake blood would have sold it even better, however I enjoyed the video a lot. Any plans for sequels?
Lucien0328 2 months ago
@Lucien0328 Who knows, spread the word about this for now!
Calonqwasage 2 months ago
Fantastic effects and story, great job!
spartanbryant 2 months ago
well done levi!!! you really did amazing on this!
19pirategirls97 2 months ago 5
@19pirategirls97 Yay! lol
Calonqwasage 2 months ago
Awesome job Levi!!! It looks amazing! The effects are great and I like how you left it open for the sequel!
kuroikagi 2 months ago
well that will be good when you get your musical keyboard...lol
thighhigh2 2 months ago
this is AMAZING! my full comment/break down of this short movie i have given on a comment post on your facebook levi, please have a read and look ^_^
05ekwong 2 months ago
naturaly, I died a horrible death
KadenShade 2 months ago 9
@KadenShade Ryan has a bigger streak, so no worries.
Calonqwasage 2 months ago 7
@Calonqwasage so far.
KadenShade 2 months ago
@Calonqwasage Needs music.......just saying......*^Sand King^*
ForgottenRaven 2 months ago