It sucks that you didn't win. You should of had the advantage being an abridger yourself but then again TeamDN was also in the contest. This is the last anime I saw in the anime club last year. I miss mommy. I miss her too waaaaaaaaaah. I'll get you ice cream. You promise? It's a moment in nature you rarely see. I'll be drowning my sorrows after work and be too s**tfaced to remember. Momoko sounds really weird. The hell? HERE'S JOCKY. I love Dawn of Sorrow :D. Do you kids ever SHUT UP?
Haha XD funny stuff, man, and a Syphon Filter: Dark Mirror music reference! Nice B-) I haven't seen any other comments on here that picked up on that yet...
Wait, wasn't the english dub itself an abridged series. I mean the show would make fun of itself. Oh well, pretty good abridged series good luck on that contest.
No an abridged series is condensing the contents of an episode ranging from 4:30 to 10:59 in length keeping various plot elements and exaggerating the characters' personalities for comedic purposes. The word you are looking for is comedy. The original was a COMEDY.
in a way it was.. not shortng itself. but the English script was WAY off the Origina.- like on Purpose- for goodness sakes they made the mother a Lesbian (or made lots ofLesbian Jokes about her_ that wasn't in the original LOL
You only saw the first episode, didn't you? Yeah me too. But MY GOD that was AWESOME! I mean SERIOUSLY this anime abridges itself and you took it one step farther. You're a F*CKING GENIUS!
I guess it came from using a little of the original episode jokes as possible. I spent my time playing around with the fact that everything about this show is a total cliche. Actually, I've seen the first four episodes and strangely enough I want to see more.
i don't think this one is the winner i just know this is very good and this one is much better than the one i did thats why i put that comment there sorry for the misunderstanding
This is definitely one of the best entries for hbi2k's contest I've seen. Though I think the background music in some parts was a little loud. The Ghostbuster's theme at the end was perfect.
I must admit, it would be crazy if this won, only because it's not in any genre as any other entry. Personally, I thought Guin Saga Abridged was amazing, and I'd find it odd if you still said this is one of the best after watching CheeseManJoe's one-shot.
The reason why I picked this was because originally I wanted to do Ghost Hunt, but when I went to mall to search for it, it was out of stock. My friend Alucard54 was with me and suggested Ghost Stories, which was there and available. I went with it because Ghost Stories was already a comedy, and comedy is the hardest genre to successfully abridge, only Kaiser and Nowhacking have ever done this successfully. The challenge is finding the humor beyond the humor.
This is actually a very funny entry. The music was too loud to hear the dialogue though. Also your characters are kind of one-dimensional. But if you're going to continue this entry you have plenty of time to do some silly character development.
You know, I was thinking of what this anime's name was, because I never finished it. But thanks to you, I can now watch it. See that....abridgers make lives that much easier.
How is it possible to abridge Ghost Stories it's already like an abridge
formyanime 8 months ago
I'm shocked that thiers an abridged for this anime it's already like the funnest anime ever
fransueloken 1 year ago
3:15 whats this song!?
rebeldragon1 1 year ago
wtf i know the guys hat says 2001 but if yu read it a certain way it reads ZOOL(ZUUL) lolololololololol ghost busters reference
rudorot65 1 year ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I saw this in a show once i think i know what to do....Satsuki i saw your hair in a pony tail and i thought it was criminal LOL
haha haruhi joke
angelitaramos2102 1 year ago
Dude voodoo song name please I've been looking for it for like ever
Bloodlust69XD 1 year ago
I prefer the eng dub, nice try though
Rubbermonkeyfoo 1 year ago
Fun i like it
The anime is so sick i liket it
TheDeadCobra 1 year ago
Lol Funny Shit! Dude Your video are Awesome.
BadassLazerzSkullMan 1 year ago
yes i am stalking you.
AnIm3MaNgAFr3aK 1 year ago
you should done a school janitor willy (from the simpsons) voice for the evil spirit, he kinda looked like him
n8fleming 2 years ago
please continue this series please this show is fucking epic and this parody if stealler
allenwalker4th 2 years ago
the man with the hex
Wariorulesbaby 2 years ago
Really this series dub feels like an abridged series.
8BitAwesome 2 years ago
It sucks that you didn't win. You should of had the advantage being an abridger yourself but then again TeamDN was also in the contest. This is the last anime I saw in the anime club last year. I miss mommy. I miss her too waaaaaaaaaah. I'll get you ice cream. You promise? It's a moment in nature you rarely see. I'll be drowning my sorrows after work and be too s**tfaced to remember. Momoko sounds really weird. The hell? HERE'S JOCKY. I love Dawn of Sorrow :D. Do you kids ever SHUT UP?
twilightwindwaker 2 years ago
i loved the dub of the series, it was like the very first abriged series of anime even thought it was an official dub. XD
Vildrek 2 years ago 7
lol nice
Bolanos912 2 years ago
That was pretty good!
amberace 2 years ago
Lol! That was great and they were all jokes I got.
bootyrific 2 years ago
nah gabage the one in the anime expo was WAY better!
teddy8a 2 years ago
omg i love this show. (the real dubbed one.) and this was cool too.
ScytherFanatic93 2 years ago
XDDD hahah
Ynnepchan 2 years ago
Awesome Fatal Frame reference at 3:02
stevens16e 2 years ago
Excellent job! The dad was hilarious, and the music use was great! 6/5 if I could. How long did you make this in?
Kakarot307 2 years ago
14 hrs with some breaks, this includes writing, acting and editing.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
lol, Awesome job! idt any 1 could be funnier than the english dub but you wer close
ShadowyInsect21 2 years ago
Roflmao! It gets exposure for the anime, and manages to make it even more hilarious! Good luck with this series.
Juria316 2 years ago
Haha XD funny stuff, man, and a Syphon Filter: Dark Mirror music reference! Nice B-) I haven't seen any other comments on here that picked up on that yet...
DMCrocks91 2 years ago
what was the song at 3:18 / 5:47
PHOENIXzxc 2 years ago
the man with the hex
Wariorulesbaby 2 years ago
This is so messed, its funny!
Chronos371 2 years ago
Wait, wasn't the english dub itself an abridged series. I mean the show would make fun of itself. Oh well, pretty good abridged series good luck on that contest.
whenimolder28 2 years ago
No an abridged series is condensing the contents of an episode ranging from 4:30 to 10:59 in length keeping various plot elements and exaggerating the characters' personalities for comedic purposes. The word you are looking for is comedy. The original was a COMEDY.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
Oh, thanks for the verification for me, but still a good abridged one shot.
whenimolder28 2 years ago 4
in a way it was.. not shortng itself. but the English script was WAY off the Origina.- like on Purpose- for goodness sakes they made the mother a Lesbian (or made lots ofLesbian Jokes about her_ that wasn't in the original LOL
acinom18 2 years ago
Excellent job
Locuseater 2 years ago
You only saw the first episode, didn't you? Yeah me too. But MY GOD that was AWESOME! I mean SERIOUSLY this anime abridges itself and you took it one step farther. You're a F*CKING GENIUS!
blacklight206 2 years ago
I guess it came from using a little of the original episode jokes as possible. I spent my time playing around with the fact that everything about this show is a total cliche. Actually, I've seen the first four episodes and strangely enough I want to see more.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
wow. I actually kinda feel bad for you now.
blacklight206 2 years ago
How so?
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
Nevermind, just forget I posted anything.
blacklight206 2 years ago
i guess with this abridged i'm not going to win the contest owell it was still fun nice episode dude
deathcomeseasilyX 2 years ago
What makes you think this one is a winner?
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
i don't think this one is the winner i just know this is very good and this one is much better than the one i did thats why i put that comment there sorry for the misunderstanding
deathcomeseasilyX 2 years ago
Yeah, while winning would be nice, what I really want is exposure.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
ya i hope my blackabridger account gets exposure too and i am sorry for the misunderstanding
deathcomeseasilyX 2 years ago
This is definitely one of the best entries for hbi2k's contest I've seen. Though I think the background music in some parts was a little loud. The Ghostbuster's theme at the end was perfect.
deathfox602 2 years ago
I must admit, it would be crazy if this won, only because it's not in any genre as any other entry. Personally, I thought Guin Saga Abridged was amazing, and I'd find it odd if you still said this is one of the best after watching CheeseManJoe's one-shot.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
I finally noticed the referance at 3:00 - 3:05
U got that from Dead Raising didnt u?
Twilightdueler13 2 years ago
"Not before I clean myself" XDDD!
Zegit 2 years ago
dude i love the ghost busters references
lantean10 2 years ago
lol dead rising refrance
ps. sorry if i miss spell it
wolfpackattack 2 years ago
hehehe... Castlevania.
Twilightdueler13 2 years ago
Actually, the English Dub of the anime is like an abridged series itself.
I wanted to abridge this originally, but I think that the English dub already did it for me =P
Pretty good though, the music is a little bit too loud over the voices, but other than that it was pretty cool. =)
Magmabear 2 years ago
The reason why I picked this was because originally I wanted to do Ghost Hunt, but when I went to mall to search for it, it was out of stock. My friend Alucard54 was with me and suggested Ghost Stories, which was there and available. I went with it because Ghost Stories was already a comedy, and comedy is the hardest genre to successfully abridge, only Kaiser and Nowhacking have ever done this successfully. The challenge is finding the humor beyond the humor.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
You cant make fun of Ghost Stories. The English dub is already making fun of the anime itself. Its like making fun of a clown.
Franzy3000 2 years ago
bravo sparda. beyond words
matalvis 2 years ago
Turn down the music a bit, so we can hear the dialog. But Good job over all.
mishtastic1 2 years ago
This is actually a very funny entry. The music was too loud to hear the dialogue though. Also your characters are kind of one-dimensional. But if you're going to continue this entry you have plenty of time to do some silly character development.
G102Y5568 2 years ago
Those characters weren't one dimensional, they were cliches. The more you know.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
lmao pretty good very good voices and good jokes so many great enteries you all win in my book lol
omegareaven 2 years ago
what the name of the song when the demon first appererd
allenwalker4th 2 years ago
the man with the hex
Wariorulesbaby 2 years ago
Some of the music drowns out the dialogue, but this was really funny.
carsonnik 2 years ago
You know, I was thinking of what this anime's name was, because I never finished it. But thanks to you, I can now watch it. See that....abridgers make lives that much easier.
XGx23 2 years ago
Your voice for women is hilarious 5/5
Ale7Returns 2 years ago
That may be, but I think the Dad's voice was the funniest... for the minute he was in.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
yeah he was as well just the voices you do for women are hilarious
Ale7Returns 2 years ago
The "Is the scary man gone" line was the HARDEST line to perform. Outtakes may be appearing on my account if Sparda will allow it.
Alucard54s 2 years ago
Just be sure to subtitle in my "coaching"
XP
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
"Don't cross the streams!" that sounds so familiar...
XxNozdormuxX 2 years ago
ghost busters
itachiRoXurSoX 2 years ago
i think this might be the best entry i've seen so far
Scourgemaster93 2 years ago
LOL I loved the English Dub of this, is was so random...
what no gigity, gigity?
X3
Awesome job ^^
RogueAbridger 2 years ago 2
It would have been too obvious.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
Definitely have some experience in abridging here. Of course I wouldn't be a subscriber if you didn't :)
kaosboy13 2 years ago
keep this series going please i love it
allenwalker4th 2 years ago
Dead rising reference 3:01 dude this kicked ass XD
Bloodlust69XD 2 years ago
Thanks! I used Paint Shop Pro 7 for that section, and Paint Shop Pro Studio for the Title Card.
Alucard54s 2 years ago
Please make more!
grabnaur 2 years ago 2
Well, I personally would love to do that.
But, again, with Sparda being the writer, Its up to him. I'm just the voice actor/Idea pitcher.
Batter up!
Alucard54s 2 years ago
Epic xD
Agroarx 2 years ago
LOl This was epic . Great job
ChimeraYuri 2 years ago
You really think so, because I totally stepped out of my genre for this one.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
Its always good to step out and grow a little
ChimeraYuri 2 years ago
Hmm... I believe I shall reflect upon your statement.
SonOfSparda13 2 years ago
LOL. very cool...:D
Jossuah 2 years ago
i love this show
HHH1993 2 years ago
that was pretty good but the music kept mufiling the voices
dermysgreat2 2 years ago
nice :D well done !
Thejakman 2 years ago