clearer mic for the singer? or sing with more life, don't be afraid to open your mouth and lengthen vowels and/or to scream (the ends of your lines sound like they're cut short). I guess distance yourself from the mic a bit and then scream, if you don't want to sound too loud. Other than that, y'all are really good! And for the singer, sorry, I don't mean to rag on you, you have a lot of potential and I want you to realize it.
Ten seconds is too long for it to be only on one side in the intro. Other than this, I enjoy it composition-wise. Sonically: your noise floor is too high. I hear clipping on multiple occasions. The vocalist's voice would be better suited with a brighter microphone, it is completely lacking high end. The second guitar tone is good, but the one that starts the song is weak and thin. Your bass needs to be more compressed so that it can come through the mix, it is being masked by the drums.
Ich muss euch echt loben. Der Song ist wirklich gut und vor allem eine gute Stimme. Am Anfang finde ich ist etwas viel Instrumental aber das ist ja Geschmacksache. Ich Wünsche eurer Band auf jeden Fall viel Glück und den großen Durchbruch ;)
Hey, ihr macht das schon ganz schön gut würd ich mal sagen! Aba irgendwie müsst ihr nochn bisschen an der videoquali arbeiten. Sonst isses echt toll! Und hamburg is nich ma sooo weit weg von mir... ;-)
When I listen to this song, I feel like driving by car along the coast during summer
Really nice stuff, even if the quality is not as well as some records from Rise Against for example .. but don't get me wrong it's really great and you did a very good job by writing this song :)
... eh. nothing really spectacular or new. Try finding a new sound and refining it if you wanna stand out from the millions of other pop-rock bands out there
Good job! I like the rythm but the voice doesn't suit the music. For your next song you should try something that would fit the singer and try to involve a but more lyrics (people usually like to sing the words to a song). Well goodluck!!! ;)
to clarify, you're not a bad singer (whoever you are haha), it just didnt fit the genre and recording of the song as well. but if you see a problem with it, it shouldnt be too much to change. if not, keep rocking.
the beginging sounds to much like some other song, add a bit more beats to it and up your lyrics to be a bit more up beat and you got a hit but besides that this song is cool i loved it from the start keep it up
I can tell it's not been touched by a vocal equalizer, and of course there is a couple of notes in there that isn't good, BUT the overall song is really good in my opinion. I would pay money to come watch this is concert tbh ^~^. Keep singing!!~~~KaNe
too much music in the beginning. its good to have an introduction, but not too long. also increase your vocabulary, that will definetly make you stand out :) its not too bad
Uhhhh..... Is this suposed to be The Offspring - The Kids Aren't Alright? Except with shitty untrained vocals and toned down instrumentals? Also did the world really need another SHITTY FUCKING SKA BAND? Why did you change good lyrics to some FUCKING MELLODRAMA about your loser girlfriend? I wouldn't say anything normally but you ass holes random solicited me through my Youtube mail. Get some fucking talent, style, and purpose ass holes because this dive bar act is a fucking joke.
to be perfectly honest, i love the music itself, but i am not so fond of the singing. it may be... the quality? or it may just not be my style, you know? because the singing is good, don't get me wrong, but i just don't think it really goes with the music. i'm sorry, but i really do like the music
nice...its preaty awesome sounds like a song that would go on tony haw lol! if u know wut i mean it has like that diffrent punk rock sound XD i think its awesome
your actually pretty good
Starling1996 6 hours ago
Cool!!!!!!!!!!!
EgyptianGoddess9409 8 hours ago
not bad
hailyjo12 3 days ago
sounds cool
TheBubbels97 3 days ago
Nice =)
jorikjori 4 days ago
very well done
Brittanyrogers13 5 days ago
awsome
ExO39 1 week ago
nice )
MadGamesInc 1 week ago
i like the music but i think his voice could either use a little work or speak more clearly or with more volume. overall tho it was good :)
tinkerbaby1994 1 week ago
great job man, keep rocking! i hope you have succes
chemudle 1 week ago
fucking awesome!
Kampfbanane1000 1 week ago
dope!
Joakim370 1 week ago
clearer mic for the singer? or sing with more life, don't be afraid to open your mouth and lengthen vowels and/or to scream (the ends of your lines sound like they're cut short). I guess distance yourself from the mic a bit and then scream, if you don't want to sound too loud. Other than that, y'all are really good! And for the singer, sorry, I don't mean to rag on you, you have a lot of potential and I want you to realize it.
ayanome 1 week ago
Realy good ;:=
DerAussenseiterFa100 1 week ago
Wooow. I really like this. Keep up the good work guys. :D
AngelDivin14 1 week ago
Ten seconds is too long for it to be only on one side in the intro. Other than this, I enjoy it composition-wise. Sonically: your noise floor is too high. I hear clipping on multiple occasions. The vocalist's voice would be better suited with a brighter microphone, it is completely lacking high end. The second guitar tone is good, but the one that starts the song is weak and thin. Your bass needs to be more compressed so that it can come through the mix, it is being masked by the drums.
link2luke 2 weeks ago
I like it guys. Keep it up, you sound good.
YSSxSorna 2 weeks ago
This song is not the greatest
1sing2sing3 2 weeks ago
this is indeed very different. I kind of like it! not bad at all I give it a 7/10 nice sound and beat good.
anonymousperson020 2 weeks ago
Liked it... Until he started singing
WolfGangPaco101 2 weeks ago
@WolfGangPaco101 his voice fits perfect to the sound.. whats up with u?
OGrice 2 weeks ago
@OGrice Ur right his voice fits perfect but the lyrics dont, i thought it was gunna be screamo not some pop crap
WolfGangPaco101 1 week ago
i subscribed and they hung him again (॓_॔)
adam11nick 2 weeks ago
COOL! I will more! ; )
MinecraftLPer1 3 weeks ago
so cool!
Jumper1155 3 weeks ago
The die is cast... you guys are awesome!
Traban25 3 weeks ago
nice man :)
I have to admit that i wouldnt buy it because i am a Metalhead but the band has some chances to get big ;)
DrEsSlA1996 3 weeks ago
wow very proffesional-like,ur gonna go far :)
ambersillenesz 3 weeks ago
:3
Vampiresax 3 weeks ago
Nice song but I hate that sick death scene.
LUONG4YAHWEH 3 weeks ago
@LUONG4YAHWEH what death scene? the guy is just picking up his flowers;) :D
rollercoaster478 3 weeks ago
Good
SHEaTVa 3 weeks ago
Good job!
LILI76982 3 weeks ago
Awesome!
Kampfbanane1000 3 weeks ago
Nice! \m/
XxMarge 3 weeks ago
This was actually surprisingly good! Keep up the work :)
ILOVEMUSIC2331 3 weeks ago
d-_-b awesome.....awesome to the max lol
lolrawr19 3 weeks ago
Wow! this is awesome! Not Bad.
MrDyno577 3 weeks ago
Not bad
sarahnk100 3 weeks ago
oh...i really like it.....
terant123 3 weeks ago
Lol sex is a tag
Shawnrules819 3 weeks ago
Omg this so good didnt expect it to be this good
Shawnrules819 3 weeks ago
Sounds good to me :)
Kieran494 3 weeks ago
hey dis song rocks i love it!!!
gothgirl5524 3 weeks ago
I thought it was pretty good. I would listen again!!
musicisthebest763670 3 weeks ago
Actually the guitar parts for this are extremely similar to The Kids Aren't Alright by The Offspring, especially the riff from 0:45 to 1:05.
FeederForLife 3 weeks ago
Sorry man, I'm a thrasher. Can't listen to this type of stuff without throwing up.
VengeanceAfter 3 weeks ago
you guys are pretty good. imma check out your live version in a few. I'll prolly comment on that too.
OliBleed 3 weeks ago
Ich muss euch echt loben. Der Song ist wirklich gut und vor allem eine gute Stimme. Am Anfang finde ich ist etwas viel Instrumental aber das ist ja Geschmacksache. Ich Wünsche eurer Band auf jeden Fall viel Glück und den großen Durchbruch ;)
1803Manni 3 weeks ago
@1803Manni All I understood of that is "Song Band ;)", which is pretty much my review too.
FeederForLife 3 weeks ago
u guys r really good!
TheMalfoymaniac 3 weeks ago
Fun to listen to! :)
LayLay32 3 weeks ago
Good song!
pobedennyy 3 weeks ago
Hey, ihr macht das schon ganz schön gut würd ich mal sagen! Aba irgendwie müsst ihr nochn bisschen an der videoquali arbeiten. Sonst isses echt toll! Und hamburg is nich ma sooo weit weg von mir... ;-)
LPTobs 3 weeks ago
not my type of music. but this is cool :)
1892839389482908424 4 weeks ago
nice song ^^
lolrawr19 4 weeks ago
Great Job!
sc682941 4 weeks ago
When I listen to this song, I feel like driving by car along the coast during summer
Really nice stuff, even if the quality is not as well as some records from Rise Against for example .. but don't get me wrong it's really great and you did a very good job by writing this song :)
Blubberattack 4 weeks ago
adorableee :))
franceeetamere 4 weeks ago
nice stuff (;
1995Proskater 4 weeks ago
pretty good....
TheNinjamaster2012 4 weeks ago
nice demo, good job
RickyMcFate 4 weeks ago
... eh. nothing really spectacular or new. Try finding a new sound and refining it if you wanna stand out from the millions of other pop-rock bands out there
Ravenboi22 4 weeks ago
where are you from guys?
MrNiclas1998 4 weeks ago
Sounds like every other band from this style. Be more original! You have the talent to do great things!!! Good luck!!! :-)
7689568 4 weeks ago
not bad, keep up the good work! btw, the voice could be a bit convincing, not so greengay-ish
16Angelo10 1 month ago
NICE !!!!! like it ^^
1engelhase1 1 month ago
Ausbaufähig
SirLightspeed89 1 month ago
Good job
SirKlabbaut 1 month ago
not just a compliment...it has realy a touch of goodness
Alooow94 1 month ago
awesome rock music, but not so really my taste. I like hard metal stuff
aw55550 1 month ago
very fresh, very peppy and very very original :)
i liked it... good job!!!
adilovemetal 1 month ago
Not my type of rock but nice work im more metal but again nice work
TheMetalMilitia144 1 month ago
KOOOOOL
shriekan234 1 month ago
nice song x) ...!!!!!!
spikezkid022 1 month ago
finnaly something i can listen too
1970DRT 1 month ago
great guys!
IWANAROCKYEEEAAAA 1 month ago
chatupline, awesome song, yeah, i suscribe :D
guitarherogamerful 1 month ago
cool
adrian27031995 1 month ago
Sweet!!
kovalevsasha1969 1 month ago
nice drumer!!
ms09876543211234 1 month ago
NICE!! :D
trollishmetalhead 1 month ago
Vocals need to be a bit higher in the mix. a little bit. and the vocalist hits a few bad notes a few times, but its not bad. i will await more.
gerbile3 1 month ago
not bad =D
luiz52545856 1 month ago
great riff, think the vocals need to be lot rougher, like Leatherface or something. Just my opinion but. good luck with it. I thumbsed ya.
SimonCowellrecommend 1 month ago
Not bad! Like...:D
glamrockcowgirl 1 month ago
Not bad thanks for the tip!
ShadowCloudXLR8 1 month ago
good stuff!!! nice work
clownass2010 1 month ago
This is good,
reminds me a little of fall out boy :3 <3
MissEmerald97 1 month ago
Rad. Hope to see more in my sub box soon.
shadowfootball1 1 month ago
thanks for sending this to me ^^ i love it its awsome and cool ^O^
DeidaraIsBestKATS 1 month ago
sounds a lot like the Offspring
91nickt 1 month ago
hmm.. not bad.. not bad at all..
lolzgym 1 month ago
Good job txh for sending me it
mikeytheSk8r 1 month ago
goodsong. great job
:)
imafarmerinmalaysia 1 month ago
Great stuff! Thanks for sharing :)
kingofkeyboards 1 month ago
It's awesome !!! I really love this song ! :) I love the guitar melody :p
MsGreendaypunkrock 1 month ago
this is epic!!!!!! awesome inspiration for my band! :)
krisko2k 1 month ago
I like it! More please!
zoey8346 1 month ago
Sounds good, send me more!
MichaelJPMITCHELL 1 month ago
well this is kinda good:D
vili605 1 month ago
needs a vocal equalizer but it sounds great. something i would really want to see in concert
LucasV5656 1 month ago
nice dude
dsdkis 1 month ago
All is just a joke - yea ^^ Hmm I think good
Desfaqhunter 1 month ago
really nice and catchy song
prateek752 1 month ago
Good:)
anthonyr014 1 month ago
It sounds good. Vocals are also good. People just got too high standards nowadays. They want everything to sound like "this" and "that".
Keep on rockin'!
schnuppable 1 month ago
nice song really its great but vocals sound anoying dont suit the style
metalkingbeast6 1 month ago
great! so glad some1 sent this to me :) its a nice song
996Mitja 1 month ago
reminds me of foo fighters , dunno why :P
TrickerSkate 1 month ago
Need to work on your vocals . BUT It sounds awesome!!
LOLHeberLOL 1 month ago
It sounds awesome!! Reminds me of offspring :D
HRiggott25 1 month ago
Good job! I like the rythm but the voice doesn't suit the music. For your next song you should try something that would fit the singer and try to involve a but more lyrics (people usually like to sing the words to a song). Well goodluck!!! ;)
rymama17 1 month ago
need to work on your vocals a bit. but i love the rhythm and the riff.
but im really into heavier bands like pantera,sepultura, not really my style
lcarlosist 1 month ago
Pertty good, tho the recording seem Kinda off. Still good
Vindarfromblackan 1 month ago
this video sucks more balls than your mom at happy hour.
thetrollking124 1 month ago
to clarify, you're not a bad singer (whoever you are haha), it just didnt fit the genre and recording of the song as well. but if you see a problem with it, it shouldnt be too much to change. if not, keep rocking.
again, good demo dudes!
robolitious 1 month ago
i'm not a huge fan of the vocals personally, but it might just be the way they go with the recoring of the instruments. good demo though!
robolitious 1 month ago
This was really good! Ima sub at once!
mrkakan34 1 month ago
Subbed ^.^
MrMojoPB 1 month ago
Thats great but I found heavier things like metallica and children of bodom better but this song is great to relax :D
Grohl4Foo 1 month ago 3
this is awsome\,,/
demonfox1626 1 month ago
to much music , not alot of words , not my style .
snoopyZzable 1 month ago
Muuuito booa ! , só postar mais qlqr coisa ! vaaleu \w/
GianMoraes10 1 month ago
i absolutely love this song it is amazing please send or post more
DarrenCrissIsSexy1 1 month ago
the beginging sounds to much like some other song, add a bit more beats to it and up your lyrics to be a bit more up beat and you got a hit but besides that this song is cool i loved it from the start keep it up
HayamavsHitachiin 1 month ago 2
dude this some good music man keep going!!!
DamCrooksta 1 month ago
I can tell it's not been touched by a vocal equalizer, and of course there is a couple of notes in there that isn't good, BUT the overall song is really good in my opinion. I would pay money to come watch this is concert tbh ^~^. Keep singing!!~~~KaNe
LordxOfxCorruption 1 month ago 10
Not my style man. The intro is too long for a song with minimal lyrics. There is room to grow, but you gotta spend more time on your songs.
SquireKoMa 1 month ago
dude thanks for inboxing me.. i like it:)
bonjoursisi 1 month ago
too much music in the beginning. its good to have an introduction, but not too long. also increase your vocabulary, that will definetly make you stand out :) its not too bad
xXkKayyllaXx 1 month ago
sweet. awesome. fantabulous!!!
targetofhearts 1 month ago
Wow pretty thanks for inboxing me!!:)
HBieberfever3 1 month ago
its ok.......not my fav.....<3 :)
fangandmax123 1 month ago
I loved it! So glad you inboxed me
Xrawr4cookiesX 1 month ago
cooooooooool
thescottishkitten1 1 month ago
This has been flagged as spam show
awesome song ;D
Anmantaku 1 month ago
i really like this send me moree..
napierbailey123 1 month ago 5
i love it!
meekie1234 2 months ago
man this is pretty sick. loving it.
the beginning could use a little drum beat though
jakeharding22 2 months ago
You got a sick sound man!And who ever is on the guitar is fucking amazing!
animerulessodeal 2 months ago
My kinda music :D
Me likes :D
RipMjLove 2 months ago
thats some good shit man. bit offspringy but cool
wikeymike 2 months ago
@wikeymike Since you mentioned it, it definitely kinda reminds me of The Kids Aren't Alright by The Offspring. S'not bad though
XxxRisingAgainstxxX 1 month ago
this is really good!
vampprincessof2010 2 months ago
The intro sounds little empty . but its awesome !
MattiaImWaiting1990 2 months ago
awesomeness
kandy172 2 months ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dinoman2002 2 months ago
kool song :)
supersha36 2 months ago
Awesome, Great song :)
EpicSkater11 2 months ago
the guitar rif sounds like kids arent alright from the offspring
sybergaus 2 months ago
There good, i dont know about you guys but there good.
taybowers1 2 months ago
Nice song! :D
Acurrucao1 2 months ago
there good
emo6666die 2 months ago
Uhhhh..... Is this suposed to be The Offspring - The Kids Aren't Alright? Except with shitty untrained vocals and toned down instrumentals? Also did the world really need another SHITTY FUCKING SKA BAND? Why did you change good lyrics to some FUCKING MELLODRAMA about your loser girlfriend? I wouldn't say anything normally but you ass holes random solicited me through my Youtube mail. Get some fucking talent, style, and purpose ass holes because this dive bar act is a fucking joke.
chronicleone 2 months ago
not bad :)
thehahalol1998 2 months ago
great beat
dooms412 2 months ago
Not bad at all. The vocals could do with being a bit louder, but apart from that this is pretty impressive.
QEhsyozsqhbj 2 months ago
Oh, this song is amazing! =)
emogirl5793 2 months ago
The instramental music is fricken awesome. You may want to up the volume oft he singer .It gets overshadowed by the instraments.
FilmMasterUlrich 2 months ago
Awesome Song :)
pinkfuzzbucket 2 months ago
not to shabby lol :)
cherry767 2 months ago
Thanks for sending this to me! It sounds great, into seems a little too long to me though, but its nothing to complain about
ScarRavenInk 2 months ago
Sounds great!!
Kirscheis202 2 months ago
You know.. Some things are more beautiful than you first thought.. Really love this one!! :)
lovelysmileygirl 2 months ago
Nice Guys!
Keep it up! :D
keep practicing and you'll get better you see...
XMattVeilx 2 months ago
Great👍
ExO39 2 months ago
Just a little quality problem, everything else is amazing
kennetonsonic 2 months ago
Great!!! Simple, and Cool... Nothing more to Say.. !
viiniciuseb1039 2 months ago 2
Self-made? Wow!
9Hastalavista9 2 months ago
pretty good eh. got a fairly long intro haha. sounds alright
XxAshgirlxX 2 months ago
not bad but keep practicing
Mattias8 2 months ago
Well done.
RedWolf764 2 months ago
Awesome :D
redheart5410 2 months ago
to be perfectly honest, i love the music itself, but i am not so fond of the singing. it may be... the quality? or it may just not be my style, you know? because the singing is good, don't get me wrong, but i just don't think it really goes with the music. i'm sorry, but i really do like the music
lonelyjuliet101 2 months ago
Sounds kind of like Papa Roach, I LOVE it!
OurVoiceOnTheWorld 2 months ago
its ok
mrsmythy01 2 months ago
nice...its preaty awesome sounds like a song that would go on tony haw lol! if u know wut i mean it has like that diffrent punk rock sound XD i think its awesome
metalafi 2 months ago