I felt like in school again. That was really long time ago, so you can understand my enrapture while listening. Absolute simplicity. I've forgotten these things, but now it is coming like a help from nowhere, in my work. Sincerely Thank you, sir. :)
Out of all of the comments yours was the most direct, concise and flattering and I am gracious enough to accept your thanks. To be honest I am so pleased that it can be of some assistance. With lots of people it's the not knowing what a story consists of and how to put it all together that holds them back. This is just a recipe and what you make with it is up to you.
Out of all the books I've read or stuff I've found on youtube, this is the best explained and simplest approach I've ever heard to assembling a story, thankyou Tony!
I'm not much of a story writer but do enjoy to read. I had an idea to write a story but couldn't finish it, so I started a webstie called STORYJOIN It allows you to create stories with other members. You start a story and others finish it for you, it's fun to see how the story ends.
This video demonstrates the basic techniques of creative writing with great clarity. I cannot thank you enough for emphasizing the characteristics of the voice rather than the mundane, "said, said, said." Your use of adjectives for descriptions of scenery is remarkably vivid; I could "see" what was taking place, as if I were there experiencing it myself.
I had been putting off revising my novel. Now I know why ... I was waiting for inspirational instruction. Thank you for sharing :)
That is so kind of you to say such great things about the video.
From your site I see that you are a transcript editor. Use the experience to your own advantage, as you will know, people talk in broken sentences and that can give a 'reality' to any dialogue, that II find is sometimes missing in novels.
Another good tip, thanks, Tony. You're right, that's how people talk, and also they interrupt and speak over one another, et cetera, cetera. I'll incorporate that in my diaogue revisions.
I hope you'll be inspired to create and post more creative writing videos :)
Once again thank you very much, it does make it all worthwhile that what I do is seen of some use. There are several other DVDs about writing, plotting, character and setting on the interwonderweb. I used to record people telling me about their lives and that was where I heard how people 'really' speak and not a series of perfect, in order words. All the very best. Another tip is from Lauries Lee, he said that all writing should be tested by saying out loud.
Nice. Hey, my channel has many free lessons in writing, from plotting, to show and tell, to creating suspense. Just click my nick, and then browse my playlist. People say they've learned more from my videos than they ever did taking writing courses. That makes me feel good.
Feel free to post a video response of one of your videos.
Hey Tony , i deeply appreciate your miniature 10minute tutor! :) I'm 15 years of age and tomorrow morning , i will be sitting a creative writing exam. Your video has given me insight and enlightenment to creative writing. You also have boosted my confidence. And for that , i thank you! :)
The 5 W's are the analysis of the story and the "How" is the practical act of writing as explained in the later part of the video. I often get 'Which?' as another one of the questions. This is purely and simply a quick analysis of writing for children. I really liked your channel.
Thank you so much for these kind words.
thebanj 11 months ago
I felt like in school again. That was really long time ago, so you can understand my enrapture while listening. Absolute simplicity. I've forgotten these things, but now it is coming like a help from nowhere, in my work. Sincerely Thank you, sir. :)
keebordcowboy 11 months ago
the style of the narration is indeed very important
samridawaser 1 year ago
Out of all of the comments yours was the most direct, concise and flattering and I am gracious enough to accept your thanks. To be honest I am so pleased that it can be of some assistance. With lots of people it's the not knowing what a story consists of and how to put it all together that holds them back. This is just a recipe and what you make with it is up to you.
Thanks again
thebanj 1 year ago
Out of all the books I've read or stuff I've found on youtube, this is the best explained and simplest approach I've ever heard to assembling a story, thankyou Tony!
emanmark 1 year ago
thank you for this. i'll take the advice to heart.
teethstainedred 1 year ago
The most creative answers are hidden in just six questions - Who, What, Why, Where, When and How.
Thanks for sharing.
davekrunal46 1 year ago
@ storyjoin Checked out your site STORYJOIN and loved it.
catawba909 1 year ago
I'm not much of a story writer but do enjoy to read. I had an idea to write a story but couldn't finish it, so I started a webstie called STORYJOIN It allows you to create stories with other members. You start a story and others finish it for you, it's fun to see how the story ends.
storyjoin 1 year ago
This video demonstrates the basic techniques of creative writing with great clarity. I cannot thank you enough for emphasizing the characteristics of the voice rather than the mundane, "said, said, said." Your use of adjectives for descriptions of scenery is remarkably vivid; I could "see" what was taking place, as if I were there experiencing it myself.
I had been putting off revising my novel. Now I know why ... I was waiting for inspirational instruction. Thank you for sharing :)
12thDecember 2 years ago
@12thDecember
That is so kind of you to say such great things about the video.
From your site I see that you are a transcript editor. Use the experience to your own advantage, as you will know, people talk in broken sentences and that can give a 'reality' to any dialogue, that II find is sometimes missing in novels.
Good Luck
Tony
thebanj 2 years ago
Another good tip, thanks, Tony. You're right, that's how people talk, and also they interrupt and speak over one another, et cetera, cetera. I'll incorporate that in my diaogue revisions.
I hope you'll be inspired to create and post more creative writing videos :)
12thDecember 2 years ago
Once again thank you very much, it does make it all worthwhile that what I do is seen of some use. There are several other DVDs about writing, plotting, character and setting on the interwonderweb. I used to record people telling me about their lives and that was where I heard how people 'really' speak and not a series of perfect, in order words. All the very best. Another tip is from Lauries Lee, he said that all writing should be tested by saying out loud.
Tony
thebanj 2 years ago
Thanks for sharing this! very interesting, so clear!
MissAnnaIlustration 2 years ago
Nice. Hey, my channel has many free lessons in writing, from plotting, to show and tell, to creating suspense. Just click my nick, and then browse my playlist. People say they've learned more from my videos than they ever did taking writing courses. That makes me feel good.
Feel free to post a video response of one of your videos.
architectus777 2 years ago
Hey Tony , i deeply appreciate your miniature 10minute tutor! :) I'm 15 years of age and tomorrow morning , i will be sitting a creative writing exam. Your video has given me insight and enlightenment to creative writing. You also have boosted my confidence. And for that , i thank you! :)
GlazeBoiX 2 years ago
i remember you from when i was 11 or summin, ya proppa mint ^_^
RockinSaffie 2 years ago
thats some good advice. well organized
tedtedtedtedted7 3 years ago
Great video!
solradrecords 3 years ago
Thanks a million Tony for sharing this. This is really great stuff- can't wait to bring it into the classroom.
froghoghog 3 years ago
Wow. Thanks so much for that. It's often hard to work out whether what you post on YouTube is what people want to see or is of any use.
Tony
thebanj 3 years ago
wow!i've found a video that would help me improve my writing as well as my teaching.thanks a lot..
ugay27 3 years ago
The 5 W's are the analysis of the story and the "How" is the practical act of writing as explained in the later part of the video. I often get 'Which?' as another one of the questions. This is purely and simply a quick analysis of writing for children. I really liked your channel.
thebanj 3 years ago
And 'How' ... did it happen.
BlindLemonJaffaCake 3 years ago
Many thanks. A very good video!!!
fungbryan 3 years ago
thanx i learned something ^_^
Earlo45 3 years ago