I heard about this on Coast to Coast and I couldn't beleive it.This is really scary and disturbing ,and the murder castle and what they found there is unbelievable.
Interesting, but the talking was super fast, and the audio in places drowned out the words. But this is otherwise a very educational and well written piece. Thanks! A solid B.
Englewood is still well know for its random murder to this day. Although they are currently more associated with spending too much time having jungle sex in MOTELS.
2 film productions are in process of making this story into a movie. tom cruise' company cruise/wagner productions and leonardo di caprio's production company in which he plans to star in the film.........i wonder whos film would be better
hm they should make a modern movie about his "death hotel". it is very interesting that he was able to build a hotel with all these boobytraps in it and go undetected for so long.
read the description.... it clearly says that it was a history fair project. would a college have something like this? no.. its obviously for high school
If you want to present something, at least make it sound exciting, cos you make it sound very boring, don't mean to offend, just to advice, as this is a very interesting story.
ima fan of killers because they are in most cases amazingly smart and they are proof that human race is the most violent sick morbid and intelligent animal ever
ran the turbo charger for a spell towards the end of naration there girly. Sounded like they pointed at their watches and threw up the rushit sign. How can Red watch this and not want to have one last take to patch up those little flubs of rhythum? im glad to have learned more of HH HOLMES. Now i dont feel so alone in this worldsfair.
The grounds are said to be heavily haunted .. animals do not walk past the property of their own volition but cross the street. Ghastly screams are heard etc.. investigate 'murder castle +holmes +haunted'
you should read "devil in the white city" its the whole story of holmes and of the design of the world's fair. It's really good. written by alex haley.
yeah, I know, I had too read that and roots for school. I just got the authors mixed up. Haley wrote roots and the malcolm X biography. but yeah, I just typed it, and then I looked at the book and I was like whoops.
Ha ha No Prob! I was thinking Haley sounded familiar..duh. Honest mistake! I started reading Devil...because years prior I was going through stome stuff of my grandmothers and I found a ticket for the 1893 Columbian Expo. Now that I've read it, I cant get enough. Im going to drive to the city one day this fall and investigate all of the sights that one can still see!!
The fey-lisping narration kills the power of this fine video. He sounds rather like the narrator in a John Waters film. Should re-dub it so it doesn't sound so "Queer Eye."
They did excellent. I pass by 63rd and Wallace from time to time. And it so not what it once was. Nothing but crime and poverty now. This was Chicago's 1st serial killer. Good Job on the story.
we have to understand that the narrators are still young very young and maybe they were nervous. but yes they narrated too fast its like speed reading.
The narrators dont add to the drama of the story. They talk too fast, the delivery is dull and matter of fact, completely in contrast to the story. Also scanning down the photos and not stopping is annoying, learn to stop the rostrum shots. Not a bad effort, just needed more thought and would have done better in the comp
a tattoo of a serial killer...wow...and people dont recognize it...you are so clever..
sorry, lol...thats just the stupidest tattoo i could think..
lol- i just think of the poeple who would compliment you on that- bunch of death obsessed teens not bright enough to realize they are living out the suburban cliche ... wow....serial killer tattooo...how scary....makes you look really culture smart and cool....believe me ...lol
Excellent! And if you want to read more about Holmes, read the book "Devil in the White City" by Erik Larson. It talks about Holmes and also the construction of the World's Fair buildings and what happened at the Fair.
I uploaded filmmaker John Borowski's complete in-depth documentary on Holmes that is over an hour long. Watch that if you want a little more information on the story. This short documentary here is a good overview though. I enjoyed watching it. Thanks balbuf.
The narrators were run through a processor that removes the spaces between the words - usually used in car commercials for all the legally required disclaimers. The actual writing isn't bad, but the amateurish narration really detracted from the story. That, and a stand-up being interrupted by an L train. If that happens...go ahead and shoot another fricken take people! Professional voice talent isn't that expensive.
We didn't use any processing, we just sped up the intro and conclusion to fit within the 10min time restriction for the competition. The main narration has no speed adjustments. This was school project so professional narration was not a priority or a necessity. We wanted to keep the 'L' interrupted shot because it drew attention to the tracks that were still in use from the time period, and the train passing matched the narration about the trains pretty closely. Thanks for watching!
Thanks! The intro and conclusion had to be sped up to fit with the time restriction for the competition. And I believe youtube has a time restriction for uploads as well. We would have definitely preferred a slower narration. We even had to cut a lot of the script.
I heard about this on Coast to Coast and I couldn't beleive it.This is really scary and disturbing ,and the murder castle and what they found there is unbelievable.
Thermionman1970 8 months ago
This queen doing the narration is the worst!
glawsny 1 year ago
Was H.H. Holmes the grandfather of John Holmes?
excalibur203 1 year ago
Damnit, those Jack The Ripper pictures get me every time :(
windcloud7 1 year ago
Excellent!
BetsyThorpe 1 year ago
goddamn this was the shittiest narration i have ever seen on anything.
jsbeard18 1 year ago
The female narrator is aweful and takes away from the quality of the presentation.
Tony63909 1 year ago
Interesting, but the talking was super fast, and the audio in places drowned out the words. But this is otherwise a very educational and well written piece. Thanks! A solid B.
JustinSage 1 year ago
Made scarier by the ginger kid who coldly reads the floor plans @ 3.40
ishman2983 1 year ago
Dead women can't say "No."
ItsMrPumpkinhead2U 1 year ago
Holmes is a Legend!
HomicidalAxe 1 year ago
Chicago still has a problem with serial killers.
1958debs 1 year ago
Englewood is still well know for its random murder to this day. Although they are currently more associated with spending too much time having jungle sex in MOTELS.
zacatetas 1 year ago
Love this video, you did a magnificent job of it.
Will you be making more vids like this?
Rosiercentral 1 year ago
Talking to bloody fast, spoilt the whole documentary.
mus139 1 year ago
good job! Yeah i never heard of this guy either. Thanks for posting it.
ddlaurie01 2 years ago
leonardo di caprio's version of this story would be much better than tom cruise's.
RistopherChrobin 2 years ago
Chicargo is still a shithole. Only fame they have is Oprah.lol
JLR902 2 years ago
fuk you. your trailer park is shit too
attackthekayak 2 years ago
wow this guys fucked
Skolfield13 2 years ago
I'm 52 yrs. old & it's hard for me to believe that I've never heard of this guy before.
littlejeffmo 2 years ago 2
2 film productions are in process of making this story into a movie. tom cruise' company cruise/wagner productions and leonardo di caprio's production company in which he plans to star in the film.........i wonder whos film would be better
hollywoodsaint57 2 years ago
Wow, very well done, guys!
drkreepy1 2 years ago
4:58 is that the song out of the old lord of the rings cartoon?
weepingwell 2 years ago
powjgfjkf
clinten93 2 years ago
Good job!
ThomasMorton99 2 years ago
Creepy ass motherfucker
ScorchinBeats 2 years ago 2
hm they should make a modern movie about his "death hotel". it is very interesting that he was able to build a hotel with all these boobytraps in it and go undetected for so long.
enigmatically 2 years ago
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utterly low budget and unprofessional was this a project for your Jr, College?
Jackthemeat 2 years ago
read the description.... it clearly says that it was a history fair project. would a college have something like this? no.. its obviously for high school
melgi0 2 years ago 2
Thank you for putting this up-most interesting.
benawl 2 years ago
ugh hung in the same month as my birthday :S
EMOxMAKEUPxROX7689 2 years ago
I think they did a nice job on this. Don't be so critical folks. It was very informative and they used a lot of great visuals. Nice work.
travelswithmyaunt1 2 years ago
Not to good sorry but it could have been better
richardtassey7777 2 years ago
If you want to present something, at least make it sound exciting, cos you make it sound very boring, don't mean to offend, just to advice, as this is a very interesting story.
AMTHGF 2 years ago
I am writing a song on this man
can anyone out there send me anything
on him WE would greatly thinkyou.
ladythom 2 years ago
already been done. h h holmes the dysfunktional family
emceeschwartz 2 years ago
they speak progressively faster they mustve had a time limit.
good vid though well done
infinityLTFS 2 years ago 4
beastly
DROSHIT 2 years ago 3
I passed by the location of the hotel the other day, maybe I will post up some area photos of what is now very ugly.
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ima fan of killers because they are in most cases amazingly smart and they are proof that human race is the most violent sick morbid and intelligent animal ever
MurdalandJuggalo 3 years ago
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MurdalandJuggalo,
fvck your mother, you stupid cvnt
usernameindc 3 years ago
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what the fuck is this v substituted for a u? You fucking cunt.
SpencerStrike 3 years ago
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Fuck your mother too Spencer. Mind your own business you little twat.
utubeindc 2 years ago
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fuck you juggalo bitch
codyc73 2 years ago
Sin dudas que este tipo estaba ree loko... pero tbn hay que decir que era un genio.. las cosas que se le ocurrian...
pisapisuelat 3 years ago
ran the turbo charger for a spell towards the end of naration there girly. Sounded like they pointed at their watches and threw up the rushit sign. How can Red watch this and not want to have one last take to patch up those little flubs of rhythum? im glad to have learned more of HH HOLMES. Now i dont feel so alone in this worldsfair.
sawedge 3 years ago
why do these amateur documentary makers all sound like raging queers?
anticlimatic21 3 years ago 5
this was a good documentry...except the narrators talk waaaay to fast. sounds like they drank alot of red bull. other then that its well done.
monkaymelly22 3 years ago 18
@monkaymelly22 He was probably so scared that he wanted to hurry up and finish reading it.
glasscitadel12 1 month ago
Ach ja der gute alte Holmes
BanderanWo311 3 years ago
i actually work right across the street from this place!!!!
djdottieb 3 years ago 4
The grounds are said to be heavily haunted .. animals do not walk past the property of their own volition but cross the street. Ghastly screams are heard etc.. investigate 'murder castle +holmes +haunted'
PigsCanFly99 3 years ago 2
The narrators sounded like auctioneers.
shapeepster 3 years ago 5
must have wanted to keep it under 10 minutes.
eers2ya 3 years ago
balbuf how did you get the corpse photo's of the prostitues?
good video, Im a big fan of Herman Mudgett.
yomi1896 3 years ago
You're a "fan" of a bloody murderer? Pray to God that you or your loved ones never have to face what his poor victims did!
shapeepster 3 years ago 11
Good job, I assume you used Windows Movie Maker?
Arandie 3 years ago
impressive. good information.
The Devil In the White City. A great non fiction novel written by Eric Larson. Check it out . i think you will really enjoy it
sacsac06 3 years ago 4
This was a good project.
It would've been better if you slowed your speech down, even if it wouldve taken two videos.
I understand that you had a time limit on the project though..
At least you got your point across.
Otherwise, not bad..
LadyLifeless 3 years ago 4
you should read "devil in the white city" its the whole story of holmes and of the design of the world's fair. It's really good. written by alex haley.
bsandtherest 3 years ago
nvr mind, thats malcolm x.... dunno why I got them mixed up. ral author is erik larson
bsandtherest 3 years ago
very funny coincidence if you consider the title of one book and the subject of another.
bsandtherest 3 years ago
The Devil in the White City was written by Erik Larsen...
ichbinthor 3 years ago
yeah, I know, I had too read that and roots for school. I just got the authors mixed up. Haley wrote roots and the malcolm X biography. but yeah, I just typed it, and then I looked at the book and I was like whoops.
bsandtherest 3 years ago
Ha ha No Prob! I was thinking Haley sounded familiar..duh. Honest mistake! I started reading Devil...because years prior I was going through stome stuff of my grandmothers and I found a ticket for the 1893 Columbian Expo. Now that I've read it, I cant get enough. Im going to drive to the city one day this fall and investigate all of the sights that one can still see!!
ichbinthor 3 years ago
lay off the kid.
it was a class project.
if you can't do better - leave the kids alone
DAWSONCAT 3 years ago
good video but very very disturbing individual
Dw4ttz 3 years ago
Very good
RIVERVEIW1967 3 years ago
the voice-over is infuriating. He should be narrating adverts for underpants.
BOYZEEE1 3 years ago
It's been tampered with and sped up to either seem more impressive or fit a time limit. Either way it's really annoying.
FlickerFilmPictures 3 years ago
most disturbing individual, ever.
Milkybuns 3 years ago
nice work
eLeCtRiCrEtArD 3 years ago 2
The fey-lisping narration kills the power of this fine video. He sounds rather like the narrator in a John Waters film. Should re-dub it so it doesn't sound so "Queer Eye."
unclealand 3 years ago
I think this documentary is very well done..
sonali1230 4 years ago
well done!
jl2box 4 years ago
i meant for the presentation that these kids done!
jl2box 4 years ago
They did excellent. I pass by 63rd and Wallace from time to time. And it so not what it once was. Nothing but crime and poverty now. This was Chicago's 1st serial killer. Good Job on the story.
Damianplaza 4 years ago
we have to understand that the narrators are still young very young and maybe they were nervous. but yes they narrated too fast its like speed reading.
megatedxzx 4 years ago
how could they be nervous reading a script? im 17 and i dont get nervous reading something at my house...
drummergrl92 3 years ago
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haha no kidding.
TuxxyThePenguin 3 years ago
The narrators dont add to the drama of the story. They talk too fast, the delivery is dull and matter of fact, completely in contrast to the story. Also scanning down the photos and not stopping is annoying, learn to stop the rostrum shots. Not a bad effort, just needed more thought and would have done better in the comp
linclinc5 4 years ago 3
this is a pretty good video balbuf. i enjoyed it!
scrambledpenis 4 years ago 2
a tattoo of a serial killer...wow...and people dont recognize it...you are so clever..
sorry, lol...thats just the stupidest tattoo i could think..
lol- i just think of the poeple who would compliment you on that- bunch of death obsessed teens not bright enough to realize they are living out the suburban cliche ... wow....serial killer tattooo...how scary....makes you look really culture smart and cool....believe me ...lol
plastiktrash 4 years ago 3
Read the book The Scarlet Mansion about Holmes.
avonlea77 4 years ago
So how did you guys do in the competition?
Duragorr 4 years ago
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i have Herman Mudgett tattooed on my leg and people always ask me if its my great grandfather...they dont know who he is =\
shaitan9 4 years ago
The only thing wrong with this video is that the narrators speak to quickly, speak more slowley and it would have been better.........
mush1955 4 years ago 7
erm, great effort, good video, but there is LOADS of infomation missing and this just seems like a pretty 'normal' case, which, of course, it was not
TheLubeGuy 4 years ago
Excellent! And if you want to read more about Holmes, read the book "Devil in the White City" by Erik Larson. It talks about Holmes and also the construction of the World's Fair buildings and what happened at the Fair.
LivingDeadGirl1981 4 years ago
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The narrator is annoying...he sounds like he's trying to be feminine or something...
aftereight01 4 years ago
I uploaded filmmaker John Borowski's complete in-depth documentary on Holmes that is over an hour long. Watch that if you want a little more information on the story. This short documentary here is a good overview though. I enjoyed watching it. Thanks balbuf.
abschied222 4 years ago
Well done! Ineresting and loaded with information. A+ Thanks for sharing.
StraightUpBitch 4 years ago
The narrators were run through a processor that removes the spaces between the words - usually used in car commercials for all the legally required disclaimers. The actual writing isn't bad, but the amateurish narration really detracted from the story. That, and a stand-up being interrupted by an L train. If that happens...go ahead and shoot another fricken take people! Professional voice talent isn't that expensive.
k8fan 4 years ago
We didn't use any processing, we just sped up the intro and conclusion to fit within the 10min time restriction for the competition. The main narration has no speed adjustments. This was school project so professional narration was not a priority or a necessity. We wanted to keep the 'L' interrupted shot because it drew attention to the tracks that were still in use from the time period, and the train passing matched the narration about the trains pretty closely. Thanks for watching!
balbuf 4 years ago
The narrators talked way too fast, but it was good otherwise.
19Ayumi76 4 years ago 8
Thanks! The intro and conclusion had to be sped up to fit with the time restriction for the competition. And I believe youtube has a time restriction for uploads as well. We would have definitely preferred a slower narration. We even had to cut a lot of the script.
balbuf 4 years ago
Very Good. I am currently reading The Devil in White City. Great Job! I am also from Chicago
sableindian 4 years ago
great vid.
kudos
Murkrust 4 years ago
i wish the castle was still around i would have loved a tour. even if it cost me my life
knowlife 4 years ago
wow...i could only watch 1 minute of this ........the narrator sounds um.....unmanly
pritikiti412 4 years ago 3
Woah so cool
ihavebackflips 4 years ago