Plutonia (Reach Machinima)

[PhoenixAshes]

Watched a couple of your productions now and I can safely say that your battle sequences are always pretty well done. You utilize the camera pretty well and your music implementation is decent. The story though...No one's motivations (if ever stated) ever make any sense. The dialogue is sometimes contradictory, doesn't flow at all and can become downright nonsensical; "We either fight for ourselves or die for our planet." Those 2 options aren't mutually exclusive and that's just one example.

[SmallProductions1]

@PhoenixAshes Maybe because I'm not as experienced as other Directors. I'm still learning and aim to improve.

[PhoenixAshes]

@SmallProductions1 Good to hear. I wasn't trying to be malicious btw. Those are just some areas that need improvement. Good luck in the future pal :)

[SmallProductions1]

@PhoenixAshes Thanks :D

[halo30543]

I can voice act now

[ibn1287]

@SmallProdutions1 ibn0428

[ibn1287]

Ah I'm not in the credit...fuck it

[SmallProductions1]

@ibn1287 Did I miss you out, sorry what was your GT? :)

[lazyfireball7889]

How did you make the elites not attack you?

[Animealeus]

@lazyfireball7889 Its a custom game

[PhragPlus]

Are you making a sequel to this? I really enjoyed watching it

[SmallProductions1]

@PhragPlus More likely to be a prequel :D

[GoManFootball45]

that reminded me of avatar whic was a good movie so that means goood vid

[SmallProductions1]

@GoManFootball45 Haha thanks :D

[GreekSugarBoii]

this is awesome work dude, get in contact with machinima and make MORE! :) :)

[koolc52]

You know this is kinda like AVATAR im not going to lie.

[NovaDudek35]

BOB:D

[FreakinnPersonn]

Hey, I was wondering, could you maybe help me with a machinima I'm making? I already have the first wo episode's scrips written down. I just need body actors and maybe voice actors.

[SmallProductions1]

@FreakinnPersonn I might be able to body act for you, maybe not voice acting.

[Megaproductions302]

@SmallProductions1 nice Caboose line "My name is Michael"

[FreakinnPersonn]

@SmallProductions1 That would be great! Just add me on Live and we could get it going, my GT is the same as my YT username.

[KeelahSelai]

LOL "Boo!"

[MrL0N3W01F96]

This was amazing if you want any help my gamertag is L0N3W01F96

[Overachieve12]

This is underrated



[halofanS052]

amazing!!!! if u need people in a machinima just send me message (gamertag IVIANI3E4RP1G)

[VersionMy]

This is amazing!

[SmallProductions1]

@VersionMy Really? Thanks :D

[HalfMoonStudios1]

Man that was amazing. It had really good camera work not mention I loved how each character referred to each others past. Love the suspense. Would love to see a prequel if possible. I would love in your machinima if possible. My GT is HalfMoonStudios. Add me if you can thanks for the great job on this video.

[ClassicPredator1]

Cool Machinima!

[DemonForger]

You sit have just earned yourself a subscriber well done

[dallesnake]

@DemonForger Make it 2

[SmallProductions1]

@DemonForger Thank you :D

[TheZandRproductions]

Well done!

[MrWazabiBros]

Hey Bro good job. Nice voice acting and sound/ Also got story :D

I subbed :D

[SmallProductions1]

@MrWazabiBros Thanks :D

[xMeimox552x]

This was amazing. Beginning just blew my mind!

[fuattack]

I think this is a spoof of Avatar

[HoodedHD]

IF THIS WAS LONGER AND IT WOULD BE IN THEATERS!!! :)

[Neekatron]

only criticism would be take your time with the story... so much potential but i as many else suggest in these comments felt as if it went too quickly. Very good though! <3 for the friendly elite voice actor omnomnom

[117alcatraz]

Why does it looks like they are on a halo at 4:45 when they are supposed to be on a planet???

[SmallProductions1]

@117alcatraz Didn't mean for that to happen. There wasn't much else scenery to look at so...yeah :D

[TrigramsProduction]

@SmallProductions1 Did he really just say that ? See, these comments i delete and have a nice Pm sent to the moron who posts them...use damned Logic why its there...cause its part of the M<ap and you simply cant avoid and account for it all the time!

[TotalMachinima]

Good work smallproductions as always.

i really enjoy it (:

[SmallProductions1]

@TotalMachinima Thanks :D

[JuggernautHunter02]

@SmallProductions1 You still haven't replied to me about being a writer dude. o_O

[SmallProductions1]

@JuggernautHunter02 Add me on Skype, details in my "about me" section. We'll discuss it there.

[JuggernautHunter02]

@SmallProductions1 I don't have a skype...

[SmallProductions1]

@JuggernautHunter02 Do you have any method of contact?

[JuggernautHunter02]

@SmallProductions1 Nothing besides YouTube.

[SmallProductions1]

@JuggernautHunter02 May be hard but sure.

[GirlieSpartansClone]

lol crouch then flashback

[LongEaredFoxGaming]

you sir are a god

[SmallProductions1]

@LongEaredFoxGaming Not yet I'm not...lol thanks anyway :D

[TheFutureElements]

I know who disliked on your vid.........

[SmallProductions1]

@TheFutureElements Yup :/

[MinecraftingNinja]

@TheFutureElements

who?

[TheFutureElements]

@MinecraftingNinja Digital Virus, I believe and the people from Machinima Box Office.

[hardrockcafe786]

@TheFutureElements

someone who didnt like it fag

[TheFutureElements]

@hardrockcafe786 Did you really call me a fag......?

[SmallProductions1]

@TheFutureElements Stop getting aggravated.

[TheBuddy223]

Hey I having idea for Machinima can any one help its called alpha sqaud

[Vincentjet11]

Definitely to short. My head was spinning the whole time. This would be great if have a second part or lengthened the video. You need to add more scenes explaining the story.

[tommyandryan2010]

well done sam its a great vid and what did you think of my ship?

[fshq3]

plz let me be in your videos my GT is GhostRage17

[PhenomRoyalty]

the war scene camerawork needed a little patching, it felt a little claustrophobic because you need to establish a space, not just jump in to close angles, a few far angles would have been nice. it would also make the environment seem bigger which would make the scene become more epic. overall 7/10 :DD

[Jakehoc1997]

Crammed to much in and to short, but still cool

[TheBrothersMachado]

what you making next sam? - Marc MachaLdo x)

[KILLSWITCHstudios117]

seems legit seems legit

[PhragPlus]

ARE YOU FREAKING SERIOUS!? IT BUFFERS AT 18:57! F-UUUUUU AT&T!!!!!!

[williamiswill]

story and feelings moved a little bit too quickly, but other than that, it was very entertaining. 

[KEVmuffins]

dude the voice actor for the elite is amazing! sounds like something from a huge hollywood film!

[machinimaster101]

he's got my exact armor!

[FlamingProductionz]

Dude... just amazing ;) 

[Awak3n3dDarkn3ss]

Personaly I think arbiter617 should stick to being a human.

[weshistories]

If you ever need help with body actors add me, my gt is weshistories. feel free to add me :D

[Diesel24caStudios]

OMG..THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!

[Cavalier753]

Jason is an amazing voice actor. Just saying what we were all thinking.

[Awak3n3dDarkn3ss]

You trying to do a Avatar theme here?

[SmallProductions1]

@Awak3n3dDarkn3ss Not on purpose, but it may have come across like it is.

[Awak3n3dDarkn3ss]

@SmallProductions1 Still a very well done machinima.

[DarkPengiunMurders]

@SmallProductions1 What's the name of the song at 16:00 during the serious shots and the song at 16:20 when the Zealot Elites come out?

[SmallProductions1]

@DarkPengiunMurders The 16:00 one is Heart of Courage - Two Steps from Hell. The 16:20 one is Strength and Honor - Immediate Music.

[RisingDummies]

I wanna help out if you make another Machinima. What's your GT. Mine's MidnightShadowC

[SmallProductions1]

@RisingDummies Added you :D

[BattlePro3]

dude this is just so well made almost so good as Rise of the Spartans From Arbiter617 and B.O.N.E that voice acting also cool.

i liked the camera angles all was very well timed: The camera angel, voice, and music!

on a scale to 1 to 10 i give this an 11!

[KSINOBLE7]

@BattlePro3 BONE is not even close to this.

[BattlePro3]

@KSINOBLE7 so? i like it :)

[KSINOBLE7]

@BattlePro3 Never said you couldn't. Just saying that BONE is a solid 3/10 and this is around 7/10 possibly higher.

[BattlePro3]

@KSINOBLE7 thats your opinion my opinion is that both are good but RotS is the best :)

[MultiRudkin]

I came.

[ThunderwolfX]

Yeah, I'd definitely like to see a different part. Maybe a prequel would be good.

[RedbirdxStudios]

You can tell you put a lot of effort into this. Superb cinematography. The storyline progession was faster than it should have been, but still very entertaining.

[MegaBlackvortex]

outstanding work this is good keep up the good work

[Tier0Productions]

Very good machinima I actually clapped at the, can't wait for more!!!

[SafOverShot]

Nice,btw is it finish?And can you invite me if you these videos please?Cuz I really wunna help you and stuff.BTW whats XSUBZERO1X channel?

[haloguy101ful]

best show ever !!!!!!!!!!!

[darkhero1002]

make another

[MasterMusic98]

nicely done :)



[InnocentBlaze686]

YES IT'S FINALLY HERE YESSSSSSS!!!!

[VelocityClanStudios]

I really liked the camera work and editing, and the basic idea was good. It just felt that it didn't have enough back story, and everything moved too quickly, you never really get to know the characters. Still nicely done though :)

[SmallProductions1]

@VelocityClanStudios Thanks for the feedback :D

[Pyronado]

15:49 I love the t-bagging elite xD

[darkhero1002]

@Pyronado o know right

[darkhero1002]

@Pyronado i meant i know right

[hotjedichick]

I really did like this video but I really couldn't understand what was going on very well

Other than that good job

[1Hydraulic1]

this is good bt rozzak just sounds a bit too high on his voice

[727Magician]

Voice acting was awesome. Great Job.

[eyejah0]

Great video I real love how the marines armor is spot on

[grottyawesomo]

Will there be more

[Giantwjw]

Partv 2?

[TheJoebing]

Amazing dude! Well done! :D

[DemonicVeteran]

Song when Michael and Rozak talk for the first time?

[ThunderwolfX]

Yeah after watching it, I kind of wish there was more to it (which is a good thing because I really liked the idea) :)

[lekgolocrap]

that smelled delicious

[Batdude36]

The dialogue and camera angle was good, however I felt like it was too short.

[Mikeman361]

I really liked it however i feel it was kind of a spin off of avatar XD

[redvsbluefan1013]

@smallproductions1 you killed Fido at 13:58 RIP

[kanecub9]

Fantastic Movie. The plot, the actors, and the music (plus for the Mass Effect music) all were brillant. I cannot wait for your next project, in which I hope I can be a part of. 5 out 5.

[TheZeddProductions]

Greatly written;amazing camra angles and a great tie-in to a story that is shown through the eyes of a great machinima director. I love it. Great job Sam.....

-TheZeddProductions

[SmallProductions1]

@TheZeddProductions Thaaaank yoouu! :D

[Rorsers]

@SmallProductions1 You can do it! very well made though.

[MarcMachinima1]

badass :3

[DopeLilMac408]

Tht was an Amazing 21:15 minute movie lol I like how wen the scenery is all peaceful an then out of nowhere an battle just begins..An it probably suk to be the tht body actor who miss bein on yt.Anyways awesome video!!! :D

[joelhemingway1]

Amazing :D

[LordHalo12]

EPIC!!!!!

[J80Kar]

@SmallProductions1 I enjoyed this machinima. A short Halo Reach version of Avatar in my own opinion

[KILLERTVmovies]

this is a very good machinima. keep up the good work!

[JOHNNYBOI145]

Good job, have you seen my trailer to my Zombie Chronicles movie?

[FrequencyFilms]

The movie was great but, I agree with Trigrams since this is an original universe we need to see more depth in it. The movie should have been longer showing the Zolar clan, more conflict between Azeroid and Roazc, more of the experiment on Michael, and why the humans are there. It would have led to a much better build up to the end.

[MultiKillGamingHD]

Pure awesomeness. Interesting & enjoyable storyline. Epic voice acting. Great camera movement. Impressive! :D

[SmallProductions1]

@MultiKillGamingHD Wow thank you :D

[919Aron]

@SmallProductions1 i really enjoy it man, thank you for the great time  :)

[InnocentBlaze686]

@MultiKillGamingHD I would disagree, in my opinion this should've been a series, to me it was to bunched up everything happened to fast, it would normally take weeks for something like this plot line to happen

[MultiKillGamingHD]

@InnocentBlaze686

Yes, I agree. The machinima could have been a series divided by parts; however, you have to appreciate the work that was put into the creation of this. It was 21 minutes of awesomeness! You can't disagree that the storyline wasn't interesting & enjoyable. Although it went fast, hard work was put in the making of Plutonia. Appreciate this fantastic work of art and creativity! :D

[Corey2k10]

I Told Everybody that this video was going to be epic but did they listen no so ya go suck bitch's

well done sam well done

[SmallProductions1]

@Corey2k10 Thanks :D

[MachinimaFreelancer]

how are you able to organize good voice actors? especially the elites. i'm trying to organize voice actors and it's an hectic process

[SmallProductions1]

@MachinimaFreelancer Got lucky I guess, I appreciate my voice actors for taking the time to actually help :D

[weshistories]

Amazing,nuff said, you sir deserve way more views, seriously. keep it up

[SmallProductions1]

@weshistories Thanks dude :D

[Jba202]

That was Amazahhh

[SmallProductions1]

@Jba202 Naruto lesbians don't just fall from the sky!

[G4M3RV1DZ]

omg this is amazing im so glad its finally out ive been waiting ages

[SmallProductions1]

@G4M3RV1DZ Sorry for minor delay, glad you enjoyed :D

[G4M3RV1DZ]

@SmallProductions1 more than enjoyed that was one of the best machinimas ive ever seen

[SmallProductions1]

@G4M3RV1DZ Wow thanks :D

[G4M3RV1DZ]

@SmallProductions1 everything was sooooo good and that ending was soo epic but sooo sad it was perfect and felt real

[DrizzleMethis]

absolutely amazing !

[SmallProductions1]

@DrizzleMethis Thanks :D

[emile1619]

i remember when jack died by sub and confetty came out of him good times

[SmallProductions1]

@emile1619 Best part of filming...definitely :D

[TrigramsProduction]

Ill join Arby with his comment though id say it was to short to explore it all, i felt as if it all moved too fast, as a matter of fact it was 3 times faster then id like. Yes we get to the point, we get the entire charade but id much rather see this as 4 part with each part dedicated to each clan and 4th for the debacle they had. that mah 2 cents..or more like 10 dollars =)

Over all great camera was very good, i felt abit bored during combat scenes they lacked..variety for the most part.

[SmallProductions1]

@TrigramsProduction Ah ok, thanks for the feedback. More variety and slower scenes. Thanks again :D

[ComandrCoconut]

@TrigramsProduction I feel ya ghost!!

[Cypher157]

I like it the story was original and the camera work really good. The only criticisms I have are, I found it all to be a bit quick and I think that the scenes could have been longer but were long enough to get the story across, the fight scenes were good but I think that it would look better if everyone was behind some form of cover or moving to it (no one has stood still in a war zone since WW1 and that wasn't great when it came to casualties. I did like that you made the 'elites' peaceful.

[Cypher157]

@Cypher157 Also you forgot me in the credits. I was The Pale Kestrl in what I think was the last filming session.

[SmallProductions1]

@Cypher157 Ooops sorry.

[SmallProductions1]

@Cypher157 There wasn't really much cover.

[Cypher157]

@SmallProductions1 I know and it's you had a bunch of actors as it is so I don't blame you.

[warrenispi117]

awesome man ;)

[SmallProductions1]

@warrenispi117 Thanks maaaan! :D

[JimmyEganDavis13]

i forgot 12:46 arrow to the knee

[HaloFan1719]

GREAT work Sam!!!! I can't wait for more machinimas like Plutonia!! LOVE the storyline!! :DD Ohh and EPIC cast of voice actors!!

[SmallProductions1]

@HaloFan1719 Thanks dude :D

[JimmyEganDavis13]

glad I got to body act in it