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  • nicee

  • man like the music and lyrics. your good

  • you need to work on ur delivery.... its not really crsip...

  • Im have to roast, ur ass!! are u rapping in your dads office!!

  • @Blindjoo na man its actually my room but i guess u dont know wat its like to have accomplishments in your life because all of the plaques and awards are mine .. so before u try and roast do somethin useful bro

  • nice jew city star bling

  • heh, it's ok...

  • ayy dat was raw! "Cuz Wats 1oo pounds of gold without 1 ounce of respect "

  • real nice shit!! keep on going that way-tight flow!!!

  • U haven't made a video in a long time

  • hah this was sick man!

    5 stars

  • you found your voice your flow is ill. you could be saying the dumbest shit in the world but if you grab the audiences attention they will listen to you. You can grab.

  • you´re a loser AND

    a wanna be SHIT

  • you need to work 2-3 years on your flow and your skillz will be immortal ;)

    big propz dude

  • i agree, future favorite mac but he does need a lil work on his delivery. those lyrics were dope as shit.

  • good shit dude

    that was hard

  • good shit man the lyrics is tough

  • "if cash was the measure to your lyrical ability

    than bill gates will be ill sell a mill an be killin me "

    god damnnn. you are spittin the truth.. so fucking dope,

  • "Cuz Wats 100 pounds of gold without 1 ounce of respect "

    the bill gates line and this one are sick

  • this is still one of the hardest rhymes on youtube in my opinion

  • nah you are good man but you do need to fix up your syllables..itll flow way better and words will roll off the tongue way better..good stuff tho

  • stack bars intact to kill lines on some Tetris shit

    loved that line..this was dope man

  • this was ill still, sick shit

  • Dizzle lol. That was pretty damn good.

  • Nice job man

  • this is sick

  • madddd illl!!! every bar isz as hard as can be!! madd firee

    5stars!!

    +subscribe . . . you spit heat man keep it up

  • oh shit, i never even noticed it before, but i used your eclipse line in one of my songs. LOL no swagga jacking intended, I SWEAR i thought of that line on my own! haha

  • This is really good stuff. I'd keep a syllable count in mind to fix the rhythm of it, but the wordplay is sick and nasty. Can't wait to listen to more.

  • the rhythm is fine theres nothin wrong with it fuck a syllable count you crazy no offense but what you typed makes completely no sense

  • pretty good, especially the 100 pounds of gold line but your flow seems a little bit awkward to me in places. don't think im hatin' cause it's good just something i noticed. keep at it.

  • i listen to this shit everyday at least 3 times

  • fuckin fire city starz is dope as fuck

  • i cant stop listen 2 this man dope

  • pretty good

  • barely caught that lions line haha " you stay losing your the lions of this rap game " .. sickk

  • this ish was mad ill kid

    keep grinding

  • "cuz I spit exact skill rhymes when im wreckin shit

    stack bars intact to kill lines on some Tetris shit"

    HAHA dope

  • favorited :O

  • nice

  • your best one in my opinion. good shit man. bill gates line sick..

  • damnn man, i really like your lyrics still, keep it up honestly man, i really think you can make it somewhere if you keep goin at it. make a demo or something and get as many people as you can to hear, people who you think might have connections, know what im saying? trust me, you've got talent, keep going at it, and good luck

  • hey, nice freestyle :D your good

  • oh my fucking god

    do you .. ugh, do people know what freestyles are these days? its still the same, its FREESTYLE, thinking of rhymes from the spot. this, he wrote this.. he doesnt just think of that off the top of his head thats for baybehanna

  • yea u killed it my dude. appreciate the go hard in one spit shit.

    word

  • doooooopeeee!!!!

  • hella dope

  • Damn cuz, keep pumpin em out

  • damn homey....that shit was fire...good shit man keep it up

  • 5 starz

  • U rejects better Reflect

    Cuz Wats 100 pounds of gold without 1 ounce of respect .........true

  • luved it :D

  • uhm, holy shit batman

  • kill that shit homie

  • yo fuckin ill bro, and the instrumental is the shit from nas, great choice, dig the lyrics as well man, it was all around great. much love for this man

  • illmaculent lol dope ass verse...."if cash was the measure to your lyrical ability

    than bill gates will be ill sell a mill an be killin me " crazy ass line... CiTY STARZ

  • iight man i definitly feel this bro now u gotta check out my new series i started called spittin crack on my page! aha

  • That was ill man.

  • sick shit man

    you should record it next time

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