H I T - indie short film- (Dark drama)

[JMastriacovo]

Cool cinematography, I just uploaded my first movie on here and would like if people watched it, and let me know what their thoughts were. It's the first movie I've ever shot, cleaning my second in post right now.  Thanks.

[TheGarbageQuiltGirl]

Pretty good.

[sevenslaughter]

Love you video, check out my latest!!! keep it up!

[roshinishah]

Hey I am from the Usha Pravin Gandhi College Of Management, Mumbai, India..I really liked your film!We have an international short film making competition in our fest 'Aahan' coming up soon..Pls let me know if you are interested to participate..Waitin for your response!!

[AnimeLover1215]

All I can say is SOMEONE is going crazy ^^; Looks pretty good, though there is nothing really indicating that he is trapped between life and death, it actually seems like he's going mad with lonliness. Drags at a few part, but overall it seems like it would make a good trailer. What music was played? Especially in the end, the piano music was really great.

[Candyshooter]

It had an interesting premise, but kept dragging on. As others commented, I'd have preferred a more concise story and more concise action.

[Imaginethispictures]

the first scene is like the scene when he wake up in 28 days later

[owlbuo]

lol the music but great vid

[LukasMolander]

yeah what about the music? makes the movie funny in a way...

[shwizzman]

Kudos for the visual work, my advice is make it shorter though. Seriously, respect for doing it well and everything, but I didn't really get it, and it seemed but bit too long. But nice job putting together the material you had to work with.

[Seaartist]

Could have been worth it if you would've had a plot or anything resembling one..

[BONIFASI007]

Great filming, great editing, but could work much better on the plot. You got the Beginning, you got the development, but you need an ending. The ending is the most important part of a movie, this one did not have one.

Gave it 3 stars because i think judging your skills, this could be much better.

[riwajch]

anyone looking for a custom soundtrack for their short movies or anything for that matter reply to me. im starting a company that does custom soundtracks for 5 dollars for 1 song and cheaper if you want more. i also do sound effects.

[flizz5]

go fuck yourself..

i will pay u 1 buck and fuck your girlfriend...!!!

[samsevern]

WOW! Nice, nice, nice! And creepy, creepy, creepy, man!!! Super-excellento work on the sound design. Freaking AMAZING!!! :)

[PeterHammond020669]

I'll reserve my comments for later. Busy favouriting :)

[Jaeqo]

hahha your an idiot..

you commented anyway..

[Jashan17]

Teh pwnage

[remotelaura]

that was dumb

[Inafinus]

That was very impressive!

The filming techniques were rather wonderful :D

[kdogsupdogs]

Good work on that eeire pergatory like atmosphere. The violin helped it. I could see he was trapped in a from of hell but it dodnt say why. He looked mentally unwell. Very good job on getting me to ask my self all this about the man! 4 stars!

[harrison555]

Looks good. No. Looks great. But seriously, sort out the audio. And give it some substance.

[JoelMorehouse]

Totally agree. The audio started out fine, but as the film progressed, it seem to fit less and less.

[kiefer007]

GREAT but music could have been better. But what happend at the end does he find any one or what>?

[TargetPractice08]

When you said "dark," you weren't kidding. Haven't seen a film this physically dark since Brad Pitt and Morgan Freeman were trying to stop Kevin Spacey from killing sinners. Nice work. Working on anything else now? my film "Target Practice" just got into the NewFilmmakers series in NYC, screens June 18. You can check out the trailer on my site, would love to get your response.

[MEOSHABEAN1]

nice work

[martialartsjamaica]

The music is over used at points. Good otherwise

[martialartsjamaica]

I meant good cinematography. I wish there was a plot or story

[getcrazycrunk]

i like it. he is trapped, no oppurtunities to take on what he wants to do. hes not okay, hes sick, and in my metaphorically view. irl hes mentaly ill. i didnt liek the begining when he woke up, it looked to comfortable of an awakining. hes not comfortable in this place hes in so it didnt fit. i didnt like the banjo shit either. other than that, great picture (obvious credit to the camera) and good lighting and directing. kudos. but not many kudos. i like the voices too. more mental illness shit.

[Gentili90]

Hm, sorry, but nothing special. Good music, good picture, but ... the story? Where is the story? You need a good script before you'r going to shot something.

Don't take this too personally, it's only my point of view.

[berimbau10]

Thanx for all your comments, really apreciated! This was a production that never came to an end. He is a Hitman very guilty for his acts. Gets in an accident, wake up in that place and at the end he comes back from a coma. The part you can watch is in the coma state, he is trapped in the hallways of unconciousness can't get in or out of anywhere. Sorry to let everybody wondering and thanks for watching!

[RahRy444]

theres nothing really indicating that he's trapped between life and death, it seems to more like map the face of insanity. really good though.

[berimbau10]

Thanx for all your comments, really apreciated! This was a production that never came to an end. He is a Hitman very guilty for his acts. Gets in an accident, wake up in that place and at the end he comes back from a coma. The part you can watch is in the coma state, he is trapped in the hallways of unconciousness can't get in or out of anywhere. Sorry to let everybody wondering and thanks for watching!

[scottele46]

there was no story. nothing happened. cinematically it looked very cool but other than that i was left waiting for an ending that never came.

[1seanbean1]

man dude I have watched this like a bunch of times its addicting to watch, I dont see a flaw in it.

[1seanbean1]

dude you and me should film the second half of that video brother luv

[amackenzie223]

hey its rouge, good film dude

[1seanbean1]

haha, remember MM TOWAHH! on summer break dude haha good times I am comming back to bc in the summer with brad wellis you wanna hang with us

[1seanbean1]

Kick ass bro keep it up next film will be us working together!

[WikidClowdCreations]

Not bad. Very artistic, love the direction. Only set back is the lack of plot and the less-than-desirable pacing.

[mohatma21]

I like it better than most movies I have seen here.

[thegame998]

wow! and this is indie made?