the guy sounded like he hesitated, music with voiceover was a bad choice because they didn't sound correct together, the logo and music at the last few seconds was perfect.. and i liked the text when it brought up the point of being cost effective. Also it started out as a more of a technical training video for engineers rather than an advert that would be appealing to most people.
Hope you dont mind my comments, overall its very good but those points I felt were worth making.
Good job, I know you only had a few hours to make that. I'm thinking of entering the 2007 games in fastest building computer.
Rhimmer 5 years ago
the guy sounded like he hesitated, music with voiceover was a bad choice because they didn't sound correct together, the logo and music at the last few seconds was perfect.. and i liked the text when it brought up the point of being cost effective. Also it started out as a more of a technical training video for engineers rather than an advert that would be appealing to most people.
Hope you dont mind my comments, overall its very good but those points I felt were worth making.
turntablist2 5 years ago
Good job
walk888 5 years ago