I think that the Guitar part at the beggining needed to start on the first beat of the bar - Without the anacrusis, which would be working *with* the drum beat you set up, instead of being contrapuntal with it.
The Piano part seems off, also, because it doesn't seem Piano-y, to me personally, until the more complex parts - which could have just been quick broken chords // arpeggios. Hope this all helps!
I think that the Guitar part at the beggining needed to start on the first beat of the bar - Without the anacrusis, which would be working *with* the drum beat you set up, instead of being contrapuntal with it.
The Piano part seems off, also, because it doesn't seem Piano-y, to me personally, until the more complex parts - which could have just been quick broken chords // arpeggios. Hope this all helps!
Shoofleed 2 years ago 2
It's great! This sure brings memories!
PokeKITT2000 2 years ago
Meh, this one didn't work for me. Other ones are great, though.
Dynastico 2 years ago
NEEDS MORE COWBELL
OnyxLeo 2 years ago 8
no affence but a bit of a mess
but great try
keep up the good work
pukmin 2 years ago 6
No problem. I can take that criticism. It wasn't the best I made. In fact, I had another version that was better, but that was done months from this.
Thanks though.
playhacker 2 years ago
Kinda off tempo with the cowbell.
manomow 2 years ago
Thanks for that comment. This video, I felt, overall was off by a split second.
playhacker 2 years ago
You made my day.
AddSauceToIt 2 years ago
No problemo! Thanks!
playhacker 2 years ago
mine too.great job
tlay10 2 years ago
Thanks!
playhacker 2 years ago