You've got some of the lyrics mixed up at the first chorus, that should be the second chorus. First one is: So Pass Slowly, and carry me down. and render me lonely, when you're not around. second one is: Remember me only instead of 'and render me lonely'. Just some feedback ;-) But the overall performance is good, if you work hard you can start writing originals and make it to the big scene. Because your voice is very good.
Nice!
2Late2Exit 3 weeks ago
u get a like
MendingSilence 2 months ago
ur not playing it right ur missing sum notes in da intro check out my cover but hey ur way better singer then me :( lol
MendingSilence 2 months ago
You've got some of the lyrics mixed up at the first chorus, that should be the second chorus. First one is: So Pass Slowly, and carry me down. and render me lonely, when you're not around. second one is: Remember me only instead of 'and render me lonely'. Just some feedback ;-) But the overall performance is good, if you work hard you can start writing originals and make it to the big scene. Because your voice is very good.
Drygal1337 4 months ago
nicee dude. youve got an awesome voice.
SoulSocietyCinemas 5 months ago