Rise and Fall (Original Song)

[drunksingsheep]

I'm a Todd Rundgren freak...so this isn't much my cup o tea, HOWEVER (thumbs downers) You sound great and sing with real gut soul!

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Great recording quality!

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[torstenq]

Great song! *****

[steamrocket]

Glad you liked it. Thank you #:-)

[cbrb40]

Very cool. You got that Waits style here with your gritty voice and down to earth song. I loved it,great rhythmic strumming and great lyrics.

I really enjoyed it! :))

It was very short but so good!

[steamrocket]

Thanks for the kind words Rick. I might revisit this one day and flesh it out a bit more. Glad you liked the lyrics as they were quite different to my usual waxing.

I really enjoyed writing this one (being a Tow Waits uberfan), but Richard still thinks it's a comedy song!!! There's no accounting for taste #;-)

[karaokewoman4life]

Interesting lyrics.... I can relate to most of it from my younger years... hm... hehe... Nice job:) jackie

[steamrocket]

I guess the anonymous subject of this lyric could relate to it too. Poor little Robb (oops, nearly fessed up as to whom this "might" be about!) #:-)

[11thedogfather]

great job mate

[maxineshammer]

dont no who tom waits is but liked the song cool lyrics

[steamrocket]

Thanks for your comment.

FYI Tom Waits is ine of America's greatest off-the-wall performers, and responsible for Rod Stewart's hit Downtown Train. But check Tom's version out - it's amazing!!

[rhopen]

Very good. I hear Tom there for sure. Nicely done. -Ron

[steamrocket]

Thanks for the kind words. Now all I need are your guitar skills. And voice!!

[AnnoyingGirl66]

haha! im the 1st 1 to c this:). ummm check out my account and leave a comment! like the video! i play guitar 2!

[steamrocket]

Thanks for being my "first"! :-) I can never forget you now ;-) Most appreciated.