I found this hard to follow as a "trailer": if the camera view was more static, like watching from an audience menber's viewpoint, that might make it easier; the lack of props and the black fades meant i didn't have any sense of direction or space. Or perhaps that is what you going for? Perhaps some sharper editing would help too, to help sum up the journey ideas or the stories.
Eerie- like Shakespeare meets Rashomon, with more existential reflection. I'd like to see more.
jdonaldson64 4 years ago
I found this hard to follow as a "trailer": if the camera view was more static, like watching from an audience menber's viewpoint, that might make it easier; the lack of props and the black fades meant i didn't have any sense of direction or space. Or perhaps that is what you going for? Perhaps some sharper editing would help too, to help sum up the journey ideas or the stories.
simplekaty 4 years ago