As a warning given to Anakin, a douchebag chronically incapable of sticking to celibacy even after he chose it as a way of life, this isn't such a redundant caution.
The concept is ok... but the shot of Zam you use to intercut the two lines... Its a shot of her groin. Like if you were saying to the viewers "Look! She has no penis!" Im guessing you were trying to show that she is around threatining them.
Maybe a shot of the bar (similar to the one at 0:03) could work better.
As a warning given to Anakin, a douchebag chronically incapable of sticking to celibacy even after he chose it as a way of life, this isn't such a redundant caution.
boiledelephant 9 months ago
The concept is ok... but the shot of Zam you use to intercut the two lines... Its a shot of her groin. Like if you were saying to the viewers "Look! She has no penis!" Im guessing you were trying to show that she is around threatining them.
Maybe a shot of the bar (similar to the one at 0:03) could work better.
sansfi 1 year ago
@sansfi That shot's already been changed a while ago. :)
peacockharris 1 year ago
Because it's a she they need to be extra careful? -_-
Gradey6 2 years ago
Femme Fatale?
peacockharris 2 years ago
Sherlock Holmes Kenobi, I love it!
Concreteowl 2 years ago
Ha! Such a simple edit, but totally changes his character. What a jerk! ;)
Ripplin 2 years ago