The music seemed to really overwhelm the dialogue and that really took away from the scenes where there was any. I really like the last song, but I don't know if it really was appropriately placed and synced with the scenes; like it was merely plopped on the last third of the film like for effect. Acting was competent, but I think you did a fine job directing overall.
Well filmed, acting was "eh", and the script was meandering too much to really have a point.
JeevesReturns 3 years ago
Kind of a mess. Didn't seem to really go anywhere.
Elk4758 3 years ago
is this a comedy?
Mathew47 3 years ago
yes
eavangel 3 years ago
The music seemed to really overwhelm the dialogue and that really took away from the scenes where there was any. I really like the last song, but I don't know if it really was appropriately placed and synced with the scenes; like it was merely plopped on the last third of the film like for effect. Acting was competent, but I think you did a fine job directing overall.
xMLGxBXRxPROx 5 years ago
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I am working on a new sound version. I intended to not include so much dialogue. kind regards
eavangel 5 years ago
I'm really glad you consulted me so early in the editing. The result is stunning. Love your touch.
lurching 5 years ago
Merci beaucoup monsieur.
eavangel 5 years ago
Beautifully shot, cut and put together, great job!
coffeefilms 5 years ago
Excellent. I really enjoyed this story and how you put it all together. Keep making them and keep posting them...
nudgy 5 years ago
First short film of many hopefully. Very well done. Thanks for sharing this with us...
RecoverE 5 years ago
Heartfelt thanks. I will continue making more. Best of luck in all your endeavours.
eavangel 5 years ago