THE HALO WARS Episode 1

[117reconkiller]

This is very good and guys it was made before he strated using a capture card

[Chubbypunch]

sucks uber dickage go learn how to make machinima

[subliminalmesseges]

the only thing good about a tv quality crap is that if you wanted to make a machinima that was taken from a soldier's helmet cam then it would be fine, overall its sucks

[RazeAnimations]

Why are you whispering instead of shouting? just.. why...

[mastermizbot]

lol tv in backround

[holymoho]

wow really um good huhuhuh.....NOT this is for noobish mathas of fuckers how gayish not realistic all tht everything sucks.........................­.....if u could hook me up wit a cam ud be in imax 3d LOL

[Def3ns]

the jonas brothers are gay!

[Feeltheh8]

use bungie pro don't film the f-in tv, I can see the tv

[R3c0niC]

yo dude i got the new pinnical studio and wanna make awrsoem machinima can i remake this 1 but better ? THAT WOULD B AWRSOME

[Guthix90444]

@R3c0niC ur retarted y would u copy some one elses videos thats just gay

[lekgolocrap]

this is the most horrible shit ever

[pinkownageninja]

i hope you can read this cause i dont know if im ttiping it wight...im blinded by this shit!

[MrLeaff]

that was the greastesty vi3do 3v35!

[SuperBoomboompow7]

That just sucked

[legendarywar1]

oh my god the voice acting is so fucking bad its hilarious. wow dude, this was fucking horrible. do us all a favor and don't upload anymore of these, because my god they suck.

[pissedoffmexicandude]

you should quit making videos because this one suck major balls

[pissedoffmexicandude]

you should quit making videos because this one suck major balls

[pissedoffmexicandude]

terrible

[12cooldude]

FAIL!

[Titleification]

crap quality

[MrLeaff]

@Titleification lies

[TheAGSproductions]

The gray guy sounded like he had throat cancer.

[IpodxKiller]

I highly recommend a capture card. If you are serious then get one. Unlimited recording and all for about $100. As you can see everyone thought this was a joke. I can see you wish to keep making them so if you want to get people to take you seriously then buy a capture card

[OmegaHunter24]

That was so bad that it was good... lolwat

[SpartanElite095]

Oh my God that was fucking hilarious! xD

"They have found our SECRET BASE!"

"ahh! ahh!"

You are hilarious dude! This machinima is so funny!

Oh, wait...this was serious. *cough*

[d4rkfe4r]

is this supposed to be funny, if so then hahahaahhaahahahaha... if not then O_________________O

[AquaPhoenix2006]

Please tell me that's not a TV in the background

[oxThatxGuyxo]

SUCKS

[Magundy561]

this is a fake

[grandsaga]

*very fake and quiet* ahhhh ahhhh....

Wow.

[kandtanimations]

...wow. Your have improved. ALOT!

[chickenruler]

Absolutely terrible, but does show promise, off to watch episode 2!

[HaloRevolutionUltima]

THIS SCREAMS REMAKE.

[rhensley35]

fail

[flytrap1234]

no offence but the camara angles suck

[117Jorn]

The first one's a little bad, but I do see that you're getting better in other episodes.

[john542196]

sorry this video sukxs ass hell...no man dont do no more videos...dont perfect something that is already perfect..halo is kewl but u killed it!! sorry no good dude

[TheEricblank]

your machinimas have improved

[allthat555]

cool dude.

[Tenkagethewise]

despite the terrible qualitly, you did a pretty good start on this on. ^_^

[TheLizzard0]

Where's your capture card?

[MrKillerdie]

WTF srry but WTF y is it so bad u are making deus ex machina i no u all are seeing this but i am srry for chating this i am

[coltrms]

this is really bad, fall forever films is better than this, look it up guys, we are really good

[therko01]

No offense, but kind of crappy, but good job dude, it's still kinda good.

[NotReadyDrummer]

Wow man, voice is really bad and the quality is crap. Looks like you took a video camera and recorded it off the tv and talked over it...........The one dude sounds like he is holding in a gnarly shit

[spa00ner]

congratulations. you found out exactly what he did, retard.

[rybliz]

lol

[MrLeaff]

@NotReadyDrummer this was the best michima evefr1111!!!

[Darthvezon681]

I really hate the fact that you've included Star wars into the the series, it just really ruins it. P.S, did you capture the machinima using a game card?

[PolishedFilms]

I dunno where to start.... oh well.

I guess the first thing I'd like to say is for people to stop involving thier machinima "production" groups into the comment flaming (I googled all the above "production" names and no relevant results returned.)

Anyway, I will end up taking multiple comments but I suggest that you digest my criticism and don't make excuses (not saying you will, just being cautious. Im not trying to flame or rant, just trying to help you improve your machinima.)

[PolishedFilms]

Anyway, first thing, you have already gotten negative feedback for your use of a video camera in production. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh but NEVER, EVER, use a video camera for machinima. I shouldn't even have to answer why, my reasons are obvious. It usually looks horrible, although on this video, I have to agree, It looks better than other idiots who use a camera. The point is, If you're going to try to be serious about machinima. you should at the VERY LEAST invest in capture hardware.

[PolishedFilms]

Secondly, voice acting, I don't know how you did It, and it really doesn't matter. The point is it was a collosal failure. Once again, not trying to be harsh. You seemed like you were holding back your voices. If you are embarrased about other people hear you wait until nobody is home. It also sounded like you were whispering, and just all around it was bad. Follow these steps:

(Delayed response with comments until I get back, I've got to go)

[PolishedFilms]

Step 1: Always record directly to your computer. (Use a computer mic. If for some reason you don't want to use that or you don't wanna buy one, message me I have some alternatives, but the mic is your best bet.

Step 2: Redo your voices until they are PERFECT, I learned the hard way on Project Origin Chapter 1, that rushing voice acting is a terrible thing to do.

Step 3: Use real emotion, If you need to, before you record just sit down and imagaine yourself in the character's situation."

[PolishedFilms]

I have much more to say, but I will not waste comments, If you want more advice, contact me by message.

[spa00ner]

wow what an asshole. Maybe he's not that into making machinimas much so shove off. I know that if i wanted to make videos and stuff i would use a capture card. but what is the point in buying one if you arent gonna be making many machinimas anyway. Sure you give good advice but please dont boss people around. You are not the youtube king and never will be. He can do what he wants because he lives in a free country that lets you do what you want.

[XxFreakFighterxX]

omg YES!

[SupaKoopa1]

do you know where they sell capture cards? like at a store or something...?

[EliteSniper392]

You need a capture card man

[Hitbyabox]

bad

[MatthewVolquardsen]

wuts ur live acc.

[teronnie]

the first words r like so bad, its like ahhh...

[Halo3Watcher13]

That's a loooooooooooooooong intro dude lol it's cool

[Cr4zyd4wg]

could have better definition. really blurry.

[teothedemon]

Hi, i am from "Myth Light production" and i have to say that i would sugjest not stretching a scene!!!! Like the beggining credits!!

[ReconproductionsJDL]

Dude

Ever Heard the word "Too much infomation!"

Hi im doffys and i come from "noobs rule production"

I sujest Long Credits Cause I suck At Halo 3!

Thats what you should of sed

[teothedemon]

Wow, i guess i can take that as a insult!!

Ok u need a new production and Long credits take too long, and every that watches will get bored very quick

Aslo check out our new productions coming soon, Secret Gaming Productions =)......Myth Light Productions is now for everything outside of game and SGP is for everything in gaming, so u can see what a Pro production can do!!! We work for Machinima and GamVie

[NapieRash]

weird its all serious so he goes knees deep in the water acting like theres no water there :P and the star wars machinima? wtf? and there basically whispering and it only sounds like one player is talking

[rafandres123]

1. "A serious machinima" WTF

2. Creidts as long as hell.

3. A star wars machinima WTF

[Stevo752k8]

really bad start for the series omg first words were so shit read ahhhhhhh omg wtf ahhh really quitetly im come on put sum effert into it man

[bigwavedave4545]

A liitle bit long on the intro, but I really like this series. Not a bad job.