Pretty good, but here comes the constructive criticism
1. Speed up the frame rate. Everything you do looks too smooth. You need to make the film more choppy and the frame rate going a lot faster.
2. No fancy camera shots. People in the 20's didn't have the technology to be Orson Welles just yet, you need to keep your camera shots extremely primitive
3. Needs better captions. Your captions look very out of place and modern. Get rid of the fading in and out of the caption as well.
Pretty good, but here comes the constructive criticism
1. Speed up the frame rate. Everything you do looks too smooth. You need to make the film more choppy and the frame rate going a lot faster.
2. No fancy camera shots. People in the 20's didn't have the technology to be Orson Welles just yet, you need to keep your camera shots extremely primitive
3. Needs better captions. Your captions look very out of place and modern. Get rid of the fading in and out of the caption as well.
mmgcash522 8 months ago
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silentfilm2 11 months ago
It'd be better if you sorted out the frame rate - Old films tend to be quite fast.
EREproductions 1 year ago
nice job love the lil mini film
MusicBySav 2 years ago
lolz
dis waz kind of gay
not bad for starters
bhubbs89 2 years ago
I would love to know the titles of the music you used in this film.
gallatinlady 3 years ago 9
me too
SlimBiggins 2 years ago 5
I had great fun watching.
Enjoy!
nemrudag 3 years ago 2
Best project Ever!!!
VelocityCCX 3 years ago 2