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  • What are you guys complaining about the bass? This shit devastated my whole room. 2 pictures (luckily without glass) fell off the wall and my collected energy cans are lying all over the floor now =D

  • @Frostbite1003 All the bass came from the kicks, but the wobbles in dubstep are supposed to be mainly subbass which this song lacked.

  • try not to mix every sound to create one smooth song, always have one sound that invades the others and changes it up, also more bass (not to much) and provide a definitive drop at around 46secs - 1:06mins

  • This makes me wanna get in my car and hall ass!

  • I liked it actually won't lie.The beginning sound like wesshaka or something like that lmao was kind of a turn off though. I actually liked it :D. O and guess who subbed ^_^?!

  • @highimpact12 who are you kidding, trance died years ago and still sounds GAY AS HELL. FUCK TRANCE.

  • i actually kind of like this man, i like the squeeling sound in the back at 00:37 onwards but i dont like it at the beginning of the track, its a little bit cheesy. and the way it breaks down and gets torn up, i like it, its a little bit ambient in that it doesn't drive the beat forwards, but its cool. the soft synth chords in the background brings thoughts of Boards of Canada, and it makes be wonder about the possibilities of a heavy beat like this with with the nostalgic warm ambience of BOC

  • @lttlbrdCHANNEL The rest of the song is good too, like, it WORKS, but it doesn't really stand out at all like the squeeling semi-ambient parts. Hope my feedback was usefull, check out my Channel. I have some tracks of my own up too that I'd like to get feedback on!!!

  • Trance is the future of the music industry, not Dubstep... but if you're insistent upon doing more Dubstep then this at least, is an example of well done Dubstep: /watch?v=1tr1A8U1MiQ

  • @Highimpact12 Trance is the future of the elevator music industry.

  • Needs a more weight in sub-bass, too upper range focused for dubstep. Good work otherwise.

  • I praise your attempt so much but to make it a little better in my opinion i think that you should make the song a little more simpler with some harder beats because you have so much going on at one time but keep on going man i love your music and i subscribed... Good luck with your career and i know i will be supporting you every step of the way.

  • you gotta facebook page I can like?

  • It's like lounge music with a frog puking on the background. I LOVE IT!

  • This is some good shit, man...keep up the good work!

  • @suarezzftw....dont speak for everyone you shit.....its called CONSTRUCTIVE critism. Fucking coone besides i personally HATE skrillex with a passion and always have.... Before you say anything know your shit buddy

  • Yeahh if youre trying to make a skrillex effect with lasers.....DONT! skrillex is shit in my opinion.....but try adding more abient affects.....also yeah this really is dubsteppy....uhm the part before piano shouldnt be in there....not a good flow nd theres not many wobbles....change wobbles speed throught

  • Try finding really obscure/unkown vocal tracks and expirmenting with some catchy drop lines at the least. Also the track is not hugely dubsteppish, those without much knowledge won't really understand. And personally i'm not a huge fan of laser/robot noises, but that's just personal taste. Criticism aside, you're already a good producer. :) Keep going and experimenting along the way. The artists that appeal the most are often the ones that create their own path, not follow in others footsteps.

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  • Bro, try doing vocal dub step as well a crowd loves something that they can sing to/get stuck in their head, or a more high pitched tune to go with the excellent low bass to get a tune going if you know what I mean. sorry if this doesn't make sense.

  • @BeastZazult Sorry for the double post, you could actually try putting vocals on top of this track TBH. Good track!

  • needs more cowbell

  • @TheTrollmastergdog not to come off as offensive but dubstep has absolutely nothing to to with bass

  • @chasenchit Dubstep is built around heavily modulated bass lines....

  • Let me Google that for you. You sir are a champ.

  • @sjovmaiin Wut? This song has enough bass IMO.

  • By the way, you could make an entire new song out of 2:47. That shit would be hard. but you definitely would need alottt more bass.

  • Don't listen to these guys. This song is fucking beautiful. These idiots are just used to listening to Skrillex's brostep , which all of a sudden everyone thinks is real dubstep. Very calm very relaxing, i love it man. Keep it up, and you'll be getting tons of views from me and my friends.

  • @Suarezzftw uhh what? they're just trying to help him by giving constructive criticism..

  • it does need more bass for dubstep but i like its realaxing feel alot can i buy it

  • great

    

  • bro*

  • it needs more drops and stronger bass.... but its a good first attempt.. gotta give u credit for that, keep it up brp (y)

  • I love the drums, but you seriously need to work on the drops. No offense, everyone sucks at their first attempt, but this is by far one of the best first attempts I've ever heard. ;]

  • the beat is good, I like it, but the rest was just a constant noise to me, try playing around with the software a bit more, see what you can do

  • SIKk need more womp womps <3

  • You should be reconized!!

  • Its good. I like it...

    New computer Friday!!! i happy.

  • I like dis shit

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