What are you guys complaining about the bass? This shit devastated my whole room. 2 pictures (luckily without glass) fell off the wall and my collected energy cans are lying all over the floor now =D
try not to mix every sound to create one smooth song, always have one sound that invades the others and changes it up, also more bass (not to much) and provide a definitive drop at around 46secs - 1:06mins
I liked it actually won't lie.The beginning sound like wesshaka or something like that lmao was kind of a turn off though. I actually liked it :D. O and guess who subbed ^_^?!
i actually kind of like this man, i like the squeeling sound in the back at 00:37 onwards but i dont like it at the beginning of the track, its a little bit cheesy. and the way it breaks down and gets torn up, i like it, its a little bit ambient in that it doesn't drive the beat forwards, but its cool. the soft synth chords in the background brings thoughts of Boards of Canada, and it makes be wonder about the possibilities of a heavy beat like this with with the nostalgic warm ambience of BOC
@lttlbrdCHANNEL The rest of the song is good too, like, it WORKS, but it doesn't really stand out at all like the squeeling semi-ambient parts. Hope my feedback was usefull, check out my Channel. I have some tracks of my own up too that I'd like to get feedback on!!!
Trance is the future of the music industry, not Dubstep... but if you're insistent upon doing more Dubstep then this at least, is an example of well done Dubstep: /watch?v=1tr1A8U1MiQ
I praise your attempt so much but to make it a little better in my opinion i think that you should make the song a little more simpler with some harder beats because you have so much going on at one time but keep on going man i love your music and i subscribed... Good luck with your career and i know i will be supporting you every step of the way.
@suarezzftw....dont speak for everyone you shit.....its called CONSTRUCTIVE critism. Fucking coone besides i personally HATE skrillex with a passion and always have.... Before you say anything know your shit buddy
Yeahh if youre trying to make a skrillex effect with lasers.....DONT! skrillex is shit in my opinion.....but try adding more abient affects.....also yeah this really is dubsteppy....uhm the part before piano shouldnt be in there....not a good flow nd theres not many wobbles....change wobbles speed throught
Try finding really obscure/unkown vocal tracks and expirmenting with some catchy drop lines at the least. Also the track is not hugely dubsteppish, those without much knowledge won't really understand. And personally i'm not a huge fan of laser/robot noises, but that's just personal taste. Criticism aside, you're already a good producer. :) Keep going and experimenting along the way. The artists that appeal the most are often the ones that create their own path, not follow in others footsteps.
I like it. I'm trying to do dubstep, too. Listen to "Santa Clause is Coming to Dubstep" on my channel to see if it gives you ideas. It probably only needs a stronger drop or a more distinct tune. The deep "wub" that's most obvious at 1:50 is in a lot of dubstep and I personally always found that annoying lol. Other than that, it sounds good.
Bro, try doing vocal dub step as well a crowd loves something that they can sing to/get stuck in their head, or a more high pitched tune to go with the excellent low bass to get a tune going if you know what I mean. sorry if this doesn't make sense.
Don't listen to these guys. This song is fucking beautiful. These idiots are just used to listening to Skrillex's brostep , which all of a sudden everyone thinks is real dubstep. Very calm very relaxing, i love it man. Keep it up, and you'll be getting tons of views from me and my friends.
I love the drums, but you seriously need to work on the drops. No offense, everyone sucks at their first attempt, but this is by far one of the best first attempts I've ever heard. ;]
What are you guys complaining about the bass? This shit devastated my whole room. 2 pictures (luckily without glass) fell off the wall and my collected energy cans are lying all over the floor now =D
Frostbite1003 3 weeks ago
@Frostbite1003 All the bass came from the kicks, but the wobbles in dubstep are supposed to be mainly subbass which this song lacked.
WeMakeSuperLuckyFace 2 weeks ago
try not to mix every sound to create one smooth song, always have one sound that invades the others and changes it up, also more bass (not to much) and provide a definitive drop at around 46secs - 1:06mins
TheMuppenator 1 month ago
This makes me wanna get in my car and hall ass!
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I liked it actually won't lie.The beginning sound like wesshaka or something like that lmao was kind of a turn off though. I actually liked it :D. O and guess who subbed ^_^?!
mertz313 1 month ago
@highimpact12 who are you kidding, trance died years ago and still sounds GAY AS HELL. FUCK TRANCE.
TootAzraq 1 month ago
i actually kind of like this man, i like the squeeling sound in the back at 00:37 onwards but i dont like it at the beginning of the track, its a little bit cheesy. and the way it breaks down and gets torn up, i like it, its a little bit ambient in that it doesn't drive the beat forwards, but its cool. the soft synth chords in the background brings thoughts of Boards of Canada, and it makes be wonder about the possibilities of a heavy beat like this with with the nostalgic warm ambience of BOC
lttlbrdCHANNEL 1 month ago
@lttlbrdCHANNEL The rest of the song is good too, like, it WORKS, but it doesn't really stand out at all like the squeeling semi-ambient parts. Hope my feedback was usefull, check out my Channel. I have some tracks of my own up too that I'd like to get feedback on!!!
lttlbrdCHANNEL 1 month ago
Trance is the future of the music industry, not Dubstep... but if you're insistent upon doing more Dubstep then this at least, is an example of well done Dubstep: /watch?v=1tr1A8U1MiQ
Highimpact12 1 month ago
@Highimpact12 Trance is the future of the elevator music industry.
zeanomourph1 1 month ago
Needs a more weight in sub-bass, too upper range focused for dubstep. Good work otherwise.
Apathyiscold 1 month ago
I praise your attempt so much but to make it a little better in my opinion i think that you should make the song a little more simpler with some harder beats because you have so much going on at one time but keep on going man i love your music and i subscribed... Good luck with your career and i know i will be supporting you every step of the way.
1223332210000 1 month ago
you gotta facebook page I can like?
lentspark 1 month ago
It's like lounge music with a frog puking on the background. I LOVE IT!
GamingLikeNoOther 1 month ago 17
This is some good shit, man...keep up the good work!
Ivellios45 1 month ago
@suarezzftw....dont speak for everyone you shit.....its called CONSTRUCTIVE critism. Fucking coone besides i personally HATE skrillex with a passion and always have.... Before you say anything know your shit buddy
CrackDWhip 1 month ago
Yeahh if youre trying to make a skrillex effect with lasers.....DONT! skrillex is shit in my opinion.....but try adding more abient affects.....also yeah this really is dubsteppy....uhm the part before piano shouldnt be in there....not a good flow nd theres not many wobbles....change wobbles speed throught
CrackDWhip 1 month ago
Try finding really obscure/unkown vocal tracks and expirmenting with some catchy drop lines at the least. Also the track is not hugely dubsteppish, those without much knowledge won't really understand. And personally i'm not a huge fan of laser/robot noises, but that's just personal taste. Criticism aside, you're already a good producer. :) Keep going and experimenting along the way. The artists that appeal the most are often the ones that create their own path, not follow in others footsteps.
TheMangasm 1 month ago
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I like it. I'm trying to do dubstep, too. Listen to "Santa Clause is Coming to Dubstep" on my channel to see if it gives you ideas. It probably only needs a stronger drop or a more distinct tune. The deep "wub" that's most obvious at 1:50 is in a lot of dubstep and I personally always found that annoying lol. Other than that, it sounds good.
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TheKHUE 1 month ago
Bro, try doing vocal dub step as well a crowd loves something that they can sing to/get stuck in their head, or a more high pitched tune to go with the excellent low bass to get a tune going if you know what I mean. sorry if this doesn't make sense.
BeastZazult 1 month ago
@BeastZazult Sorry for the double post, you could actually try putting vocals on top of this track TBH. Good track!
BeastZazult 1 month ago
needs more cowbell
kissmyoradora83 2 months ago
@TheTrollmastergdog not to come off as offensive but dubstep has absolutely nothing to to with bass
chasenchit 2 months ago
@chasenchit Dubstep is built around heavily modulated bass lines....
JARMOPOWER 2 months ago
Let me Google that for you. You sir are a champ.
sjovmaiin 2 months ago
@sjovmaiin Wut? This song has enough bass IMO.
JARMOPOWER 2 months ago
By the way, you could make an entire new song out of 2:47. That shit would be hard. but you definitely would need alottt more bass.
Suarezzftw 2 months ago
Don't listen to these guys. This song is fucking beautiful. These idiots are just used to listening to Skrillex's brostep , which all of a sudden everyone thinks is real dubstep. Very calm very relaxing, i love it man. Keep it up, and you'll be getting tons of views from me and my friends.
Suarezzftw 2 months ago
@Suarezzftw uhh what? they're just trying to help him by giving constructive criticism..
RockTahtBody 1 month ago
it does need more bass for dubstep but i like its realaxing feel alot can i buy it
TheTrollmastergdog 2 months ago
great
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daftpunkedz 2 months ago
it needs more drops and stronger bass.... but its a good first attempt.. gotta give u credit for that, keep it up brp (y)
daftpunkedz 2 months ago
I love the drums, but you seriously need to work on the drops. No offense, everyone sucks at their first attempt, but this is by far one of the best first attempts I've ever heard. ;]
PenguinzoMixes 2 months ago
the beat is good, I like it, but the rest was just a constant noise to me, try playing around with the software a bit more, see what you can do
Cr3wdy 2 months ago
SIKk need more womp womps <3
LBK4FREE 2 months ago
You should be reconized!!
nUrface777 2 months ago
Its good. I like it...
New computer Friday!!! i happy.
DJ700D 2 months ago
I like dis shit
MegaFlemo 2 months ago