@x3Kaya she's saying she doesn't under stand how he feels tough wearing his black and red (because he's a blood) when his body is covered with black and blues (bruses and bumps from being beat up and blue is a crip color which is the rival gang)
Back again, I haven't watched this video in a couple months...hearing it again i got goosebumps and chills all over again. I relate too much. Mad love and respect. She's so beast. <3
If only I had said half what she said to my brother, maybe then there would still be two of us to complete our twin set. If I hadn't been a coward and embraced him in an attempt to save him instead of turning my back on him like so many other did. If I had told him how much pain his was inflicting maybe he would have listen and not gone to fight that foolish fight that night and end up buried 6ft under the next morning. If only, if only...I had the courage to help him find his own...
And I bet you wonder if Heaven’s got a ghetto? Boy you will never know because, attempting to play God and pimping Mother Nature will never get you… High enough to get there.
Nah pajarillo, clr da smoke from ya head n listen again, cus is niggaz like u that she talkn bout, fools who think dat slaingin n gangbangin is a way of life. Fckn dumbass.
"because in hell you will no longer have your boys willing to die for you , just demons waiting to dance with you , holding out red roses that used to be white before they used them to clean up the messes you made when you were still alive"
"Because I don't understand how you see strength in your blacks and reds when you got blacks and blues tattooed all over you, so tell me..." GOD DAMN! LOVE!
“… Hell, you would no longer have your boys willing to die for you.Just demons waiting to dance with you. Holding out red roses that used to be white before they used them to clean the messes you made when you were still alive”
I have watch all ur songs and poetry over and over just ur swag and the delivery of ur poems and ur talent u have been blessed with so many talents I'm intrigued by ur talent
"Your firearms are to short to box with god."
-Talib Kweli.
She used this, and I approve.
RSnati0n09 4 days ago
...damn.....
pmparas91 5 days ago
wow...
JRiveraOfficial 1 week ago
William shakespeare probably watched this and liked it
THExBADxMAN 2 weeks ago
LoVeE It
candiea81 2 weeks ago
the best poem ever
zaniibaybee 3 weeks ago
Damn...Wow...That's a poet.
BecauseAlexWasBored 4 weeks ago
why dont the audience shut the hell up!!!
trey281000 4 weeks ago
this is oodddeee good
foxeyangel100 1 month ago
Wow
jasluc123 1 month ago
Wow
jasluc123 1 month ago
damn i actually snapped in front of my screen.
rich4rd00 1 month ago
this gave me chills... brought me to tears <3 shes soo talented.
MixedGirl404 1 month ago
still gives me chills. one of my favorites
NesseyRocks 1 month ago 2
She could be a really good actress..
JNDonohue 1 month ago
I'm always a fan of these poetry slams.... But this... This rises above anything I've heard.
lexiilightning 1 month ago 2
Beautiful, whether its the first time or the 100th time. <3
emmawade9 2 months ago 2
Amazingly powerful.
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CCWWriter 2 months ago
this brought me to tears. so fucking good holy shit
noraclairemiller 2 months ago
This shits fkn dumb haha
gangstas? pppffffttttt. ooooookay. and stop with yr ghetto accent.. it's annoying my god.
storystryke 3 months ago
@storystryke can't tell if troll
or just very stupid
Muffinmixable 2 months ago in playlist Favorite videos
The red roses line was so powerful.
OnlySticksAndStones 3 months ago
i been watching this everyday for two weeks, and im just so in love with it
PistoLove007 3 months ago in playlist Liked videos
That was so good:)
karenrules1000 3 months ago
i get the chills every SINGLE time i watch this. it so deserves more views then this
eyeheartmusic100 3 months ago
It makes me cry
jazzmania15 3 months ago
Wow. I started crying. Just, wow.
KailyeKat 3 months ago
"No longer having your brother willing to die for you, only demons waiting to dance with you!" Powerful : )
MusiqFreak0925 3 months ago
wow
rymcmanus 3 months ago
chills every time. EVERY TIME. this is insanity. love this so much.
juliettev1 4 months ago
Hit the spot. She's the best.... <3
breee1919 4 months ago
@x3Kaya she's saying she doesn't under stand how he feels tough wearing his black and red (because he's a blood) when his body is covered with black and blues (bruses and bumps from being beat up and blue is a crip color which is the rival gang)
michaeldasikeo 4 months ago
you are so amazingggggg
ehugurl113 4 months ago
could you explain to me what she's meaning with all those colours?
"And sometimes I feel you may be colorblind
Because I don’t understand how you see strength in your
Blacks and reds
When you got blacks and blues tattooed all over you so tell me
What set do you belong to when your lips are saying soowoo
And your eyes are swimming in Crip colored kisses mixed with hints of black lipstick"
x3Kaya 4 months ago
--> "Because that’s what they all are
Cowards who hide behind colors
Blue and Red type brothers who leave their sisters"
x3Kaya 4 months ago
@x3Kaya i wish i heard what she said after black lipstick :/
missMONEEEY 4 months ago
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thisisrachels 4 months ago
"attempting to play god and pimping mother nature will never get you high enough to get there." omg.
ayeeetim 4 months ago 2
rest in peace john, i love and miss you...
cayterr 4 months ago
I haven't seen this in about a year n watching it again I got mad chills and remember some things this is true poetry
calstate33 5 months ago
Back again, I haven't watched this video in a couple months...hearing it again i got goosebumps and chills all over again. I relate too much. Mad love and respect. She's so beast. <3
fxckenSTOKED 5 months ago
LOVE this poem but i fucking wish the audience would SHUT THE FUCK UP so I could hear the whole poem.
NMoenoa87 7 months ago in playlist poetry 46
I loooove this poem
neeshbish 7 months ago
No lie, I accidentally applauded in front of my computer screen. LOL...
JCDawghound 7 months ago 16
And she's bad too ? Oh yes :)
kiddwonderr9 7 months ago
Courage is not the absence of fear but the mastery of it this young woman reminded me of that with this piece.
nv88 7 months ago 3
If only I had said half what she said to my brother, maybe then there would still be two of us to complete our twin set. If I hadn't been a coward and embraced him in an attempt to save him instead of turning my back on him like so many other did. If I had told him how much pain his was inflicting maybe he would have listen and not gone to fight that foolish fight that night and end up buried 6ft under the next morning. If only, if only...I had the courage to help him find his own...
nv88 7 months ago 2
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nv88 7 months ago
Mad Respect! I get chicken Skin ( goose bumps) every time that I watch this. This really hit e in my heart, God Bless!
marine0wife 7 months ago
wow
SychBandiTh 7 months ago
beast she went in
YoSoloKSeries 7 months ago
Beautiful
TheRainchick 7 months ago
Shes Amazingg<3
MegaMoni13 8 months ago
I honestly cry every time I watch this video.
MangoFlavoured 8 months ago
I am speechless, incredible thats all I got to say. Almost made me cry.
XRENX123 8 months ago
For all those times that you pushed me from the doorway
Just to kiss the sunset with your piff
I prayed for your protection
Prayed that you’d never forget Mami and Daddy’s lessons
And how my love for you would never lessen
And I prayed that a bullet would never befriend your skin, I prayed
That someday you’ll understand that being a brave street soldier in the dark
Still made you a coward come sunrise
FirstLineRhyme 8 months ago
I freaking love her(no homo), her poetry speaks loud and clearly I have mad respect for this chick that I don't even know!!!!
lilTiadarealest 9 months ago
THIS WAS TOOOOOOOO GOOOD.
danikadotcom 9 months ago
Amazing
jeannabieber 9 months ago
Listened to daily. I love it so much, I memorized it. :)
SuperCrazySteph 10 months ago
amazing. just. i dont even kno what else to say
yeahImkels 10 months ago
this is fucking incredible
meacolumba 10 months ago
Amen
LilJ3rkbaby 10 months ago
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stfu bitch
GHOSTRONE 10 months ago
@GHOSTRONE You are a fuck.
HAVE A NICE DAY!
SuperNinja1 9 months ago
fucking deeeeep
painisbeautee 10 months ago 3
<3
mom5665 10 months ago
No one gives a SHIT what the fuck sent you here.
AcidSkywall 10 months ago 2
this is awesome :-D she is awesome
mrorange137 10 months ago 2
... that was fking intense
gerry12ac 10 months ago 2
I saw this just now. This is beautiful and so sad. It has so much meaning, god bless
KevinNivek10 10 months ago 2
deep
supdv12 10 months ago
Angel
mom5665 10 months ago
@pricetons#1girl wat skool u go to?
Dexterousification 11 months ago
beautiful.
dylanxmarie 11 months ago
Damn..... I'm speechless
KasumiiTV 11 months ago
My teacher showed us this in class ... Ur amazing.
pricetonsnumber1girl 11 months ago
so amazing, ive watched this so many times yet i love it even more everytime i see it. i can only hope to b this good one day. <3<3<3
musiclover12211 11 months ago
i Love this poem -3
queenheaRtLessx36O 11 months ago
I Love this video. My lil bro is going through this and this touched my heart!!!!
marine0wife 11 months ago
Amazing <3
GenesisY0 11 months ago
This is brilliant!
TherealG92 11 months ago
Anyone written down wat she's saying I wanna meditate on it pleeaaasssee
Dexterousification 11 months ago
And I bet you wonder if Heaven’s got a ghetto? Boy you will never know because, attempting to play God and pimping Mother Nature will never get you… High enough to get there.
cullantez 11 months ago
Talk about some really stuff I had chills the entire time
SammiTakinOffIn54321 11 months ago
this is just so amazing.
MxoxoA 11 months ago
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She's gone get shot one day
RAMBO10366 11 months ago
ive watched this like 5 times and i still get the chills.
therealmarkowen 11 months ago 47
you are freaking amazingly wonderful..
jushls 11 months ago
you're so amazing ! never stop
prettybOisObadd 11 months ago
OH MY GOD, THIS WAS AMAZING.
JCDawghound 1 year ago
What's the name of this poem? or Did she write that herself ?
sprungsterz 1 year ago
This is so deep.
missMONEEEY 1 year ago
Hi there.
I disliked this video.
(Braces himself against the torrent of hate).
Do you have any questions about myself?
NieProszeNie 1 year ago
@NieProszeNie blah blah blah troll troll troll
jushls 11 months ago
Mhmm, That was pretty dam impressive
Conc4pt 1 year ago
I love you.
brendipooh 1 year ago
This was incredible. The imagery is so haunting, the flow is so smooth, her voice is so perfect. I've been listening to this over and over.
taylormmeredith 1 year ago
amazing
pimpcoolyo 1 year ago
i wish they had a LOVE button
E1isa03 1 year ago 4
Wow.
PWNEDx3 1 year ago
So amazing!
Both the poem & preformance, wow
<3
kiikat 1 year ago
she straiiqht kiilled that shiit mann !
Leah17ish 1 year ago
Amjay T.T
I love herrr<3
aaron4801 1 year ago
geeeeeeeeezus.
VolcomTomatoe 1 year ago
powerful shit
kermit27k 1 year ago
God bless you. AMAZING
ayePRiiNCESS 1 year ago
AMAZING!
AmourSophia 1 year ago
that was fucking amazing .
franzella123 1 year ago
Nah pajarillo, clr da smoke from ya head n listen again, cus is niggaz like u that she talkn bout, fools who think dat slaingin n gangbangin is a way of life. Fckn dumbass.
jongon281 1 year ago
aw.. someone disliked. )=
laurendeeL 1 year ago 3
@laurendeeL
probably missed the like button lol
this hit mee hardd yo
she did good !!!!
ItsurGurlAshalay2008 1 year ago
that was too crazy! damm so powerful, felt everything she said
geero 1 year ago
This is powerful.
JuliaGuliaish 1 year ago
oh my gosh
Krekket 1 year ago
"because in hell you will no longer have your boys willing to die for you , just demons waiting to dance with you , holding out red roses that used to be white before they used them to clean up the messes you made when you were still alive"
one word , wow .
MrDiddy96 1 year ago 47
bitch think she gangsta ..O's up, dancin with devils
pajarilio 1 year ago
yo! Amjay's the realist.
d1gemini1 1 year ago
AMJAY .
thejy101 1 year ago
Amjay, wow...
you're incredible
FaceDisaster 1 year ago
Incredible.
amandastec 1 year ago
This is soooo amazing like wow... i can kinda relate to what you are sayin girl.... but the waaay that you said... woooow
H3av3n5N3gr0 1 year ago 2
how could someone dislike this?
jramos0601 1 year ago
Like I don't even have words for this but whoa
DanielleSnowx3 1 year ago
chills for 4 minutes and 36 seconds!
shirlaay1991 1 year ago
Shakesphere of this generation.
SwimmingInTheSahara 1 year ago 2
Omfg. This made me freeze dead cold. This is beautiful.. Just outstanding.
B2utiful23 1 year ago 4
Wow you are skilled and beautiful
Cupcakezzzzzzzzzz 1 year ago
wow shit, nice!
cancks33 1 year ago
damn that was amazing
wantsumbacon 1 year ago
I watched this so many times. My goodness. She is so amazing. That poem was amazing. I need to meet her.
hamncheese3 1 year ago
what is her name!!!! i wanna quote from this poem.
jazzawockeez1 1 year ago
what is her name? i would like to quote from this!!! its amazing! i
jazzawockeez1 1 year ago
@jazzawockeez1 - Amjay.
nicoleub27 1 year ago
@nicoleub27 oh ok, thank!!!
jazzawockeez1 1 year ago
Jaw-droppingly, amazingly, INTENSELY, perfect.
nicoleub27 1 year ago
I love this.
BaBii3J3SSiCA 1 year ago
this is beautiful *Snaps*
Razmarion 1 year ago 3
This is just beautiful. Just amazing. Had my skin tingling the whole time.
edwizardfull 1 year ago 3
tears in my eyes. damn girl!
nlocination 1 year ago 4
Seriously, chilled my skin.
Keep it up !
channykaalekahi 1 year ago
i know her in real life!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PeepBox 1 year ago
This touched my heart. <3
2wifeys4ever 1 year ago
"Because I don't understand how you see strength in your blacks and reds when you got blacks and blues tattooed all over you, so tell me..." GOD DAMN! LOVE!
hiwalanix3 1 year ago 6
“… Hell, you would no longer have your boys willing to die for you.Just demons waiting to dance with you. Holding out red roses that used to be white before they used them to clean the messes you made when you were still alive”
so amazing <3
majosoccer 1 year ago 114
That is so amazing. It left me speechless.
millionairrss267 1 year ago
seriously? she is amazing. i want to be her best friend.
whitetrashleyy 1 year ago
waiting at the bus stop, jamming to some hip-hop, checkin on my wrist watch, clock is running tick tock.
lauramoniquee 1 year ago 5
Truly amazing
Rinneh 1 year ago
I keep listening to this , over , and over and over again!
joshOHwin 1 year ago 6
no lie...
this is the most amazing SPOKEN WORD EVER!
watching her makes me want to make my performances stronger...
i admire this strong woman:D
panduhh7778 1 year ago 4
just inspirational
domguambomb 1 year ago
why do black people kill each other?
carlosHjrzz 1 year ago
@carlosHjrzz
LOL.
BradySwanDives 1 year ago
she has some mad skills that gave me chills.
wehtheduck 1 year ago
PREACH!! <3
noodlesriceandLAM 1 year ago
Holy FUCK.
polkadotzeaturfaceup 1 year ago
Damn,
ivyyysaurr 1 year ago
You got heart. *Goose Bums*
TheSeexybeast 1 year ago
Tumblr brought me to this video.
KiWiKaYla625 1 year ago 151
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@KiWiKaYla625 rules 1 and 2. rules. 1. and. 2.
ilikegreengiraffes 1 year ago
@KiWiKaYla625 Stanley brought me to this video.
lk0micho 10 months ago
very talented and deep meaning...DC are full of poets like you, my friend. Kudos and keep doing what you're doing.
NaeJusNae27 1 year ago
worth watchhing every second. damn.
LeaJcool 1 year ago
O_O holy sh*t that was RAW
Jayer35 1 year ago
this is dope beyond comprehension
elenaisohsoocool 1 year ago
She is amazing. I love poetry slams, and this is so incredible, it's like, chilling.
babytakemetothemoon 1 year ago
WOW!!! I have just been floored
arockystart 1 year ago
i love the blood motifs throughout...expert! really really strong
bluepinata 1 year ago
i am also a new fan :))
HiFEE4JC 1 year ago
I have watch all ur songs and poetry over and over just ur swag and the delivery of ur poems and ur talent u have been blessed with so many talents I'm intrigued by ur talent
amberpeckham79 1 year ago
i watch this video so much that i noe this poem its so inticing intricate and full of emotion its so raw nd real at the same time
dicolip 1 year ago
Powerful
tiffanynbailey22 1 year ago
i love this video it made me cry
randall723 1 year ago 4
heaven got a ghetto
Teck2hood 1 year ago