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  • "Your firearms are to short to box with god."

    -Talib Kweli.

    She used this, and I approve.

  • ...damn.....

  • wow...

  • William shakespeare probably watched this and liked it

  • LoVeE It

  • the best poem ever

  • Damn...Wow...That's a poet.

  • why dont the audience shut the hell up!!!

  • this is oodddeee good

  • Wow

  • Wow

  • damn i actually snapped in front of my screen. 

  • this gave me chills... brought me to tears <3 shes soo talented.

  • still gives me chills. one of my favorites

  • She could be a really good actress..

  • I'm always a fan of these poetry slams.... But this... This rises above anything I've heard.

  • Beautiful, whether its the first time or the 100th time. <3

  • Amazingly powerful.

  • this brought me to tears. so fucking good holy shit

  • This shits fkn dumb haha

    gangstas? pppffffttttt. ooooookay. and stop with yr ghetto accent.. it's annoying my god.

  • @storystryke can't tell if troll

    or just very stupid

  • The red roses line was so powerful.

  • i been watching this everyday for two weeks, and im just so in love with it

  • That was so good:)

  • i get the chills every SINGLE time i watch this. it so deserves more views then this

  • It makes me cry

  • Wow. I started crying. Just, wow.

  • "No longer having your brother willing to die for you, only demons waiting to dance with you!" Powerful : )

  • wow

  • chills every time. EVERY TIME. this is insanity. love this so much.

  • Hit the spot. She's the best.... <3

  • @x3Kaya she's saying she doesn't under stand how he feels tough wearing his black and red (because he's a blood) when his body is covered with black and blues (bruses and bumps from being beat up and blue is a crip color which is the rival gang)

  • you are so amazingggggg

  • could you explain to me what she's meaning with all those colours?

    "And sometimes I feel you may be colorblind

    Because I don’t understand how you see strength in your

    Blacks and reds

    When you got blacks and blues tattooed all over you so tell me

    What set do you belong to when your lips are saying soowoo

    And your eyes are swimming in Crip colored kisses mixed with hints of black lipstick"

  • --> "Because that’s what they all are

    Cowards who hide behind colors

    Blue and Red type brothers who leave their sisters"

  • @x3Kaya i wish i heard what she said after black lipstick :/

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  • "attempting to play god and pimping mother nature will never get you high enough to get there." omg.

  • rest in peace john, i love and miss you...

  • I haven't seen this in about a year n watching it again I got mad chills and remember some things this is true poetry

  • Back again, I haven't watched this video in a couple months...hearing it again i got goosebumps and chills all over again. I relate too much. Mad love and respect. She's so beast. <3

  • LOVE this poem but i fucking wish the audience would SHUT THE FUCK UP so I could hear the whole poem.

  • I loooove this poem

  • No lie, I accidentally applauded in front of my computer screen. LOL...

  • And she's bad too ? Oh yes :)

  • Courage is not the absence of fear but the mastery of it this young woman reminded me of that with this piece.

  • If only I had said half what she said to my brother, maybe then there would still be two of us to complete our twin set. If I hadn't been a coward and embraced him in an attempt to save him instead of turning my back on him like so many other did. If I had told him how much pain his was inflicting maybe he would have listen and not gone to fight that foolish fight that night and end up buried 6ft under the next morning. If only, if only...I had the courage to help him find his own...

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  • Mad Respect! I get chicken Skin ( goose bumps) every time that I watch this. This really hit e in my heart, God Bless!

  • wow

  • beast she went in

  • Beautiful

    

  • Shes Amazingg<3

  • I honestly cry every time I watch this video.

  • I am speechless, incredible thats all I got to say. Almost made me cry.

  • For all those times that you pushed me from the doorway

    Just to kiss the sunset with your piff

    I prayed for your protection

    Prayed that you’d never forget Mami and Daddy’s lessons

    And how my love for you would never lessen

    And I prayed that a bullet would never befriend your skin, I prayed

    That someday you’ll understand that being a brave street soldier in the dark

    Still made you a coward come sunrise

  • I freaking love her(no homo), her poetry speaks loud and clearly I have mad respect for this chick that I don't even know!!!!

  • THIS WAS TOOOOOOOO GOOOD.

  • Amazing

  • Listened to daily. I love it so much, I memorized it. :)

  • amazing. just. i dont even kno what else to say

  • this is fucking incredible

  • Amen

  • @GHOSTRONE You are a fuck.

    HAVE A NICE DAY!

  • fucking deeeeep

  • <3

  • No one gives a SHIT what the fuck sent you here.

  • this is awesome :-D she is awesome

  • ... that was fking intense

  • I saw this just now. This is beautiful and so sad. It has so much meaning, god bless

  • deep

  • Angel

  • @pricetons#1girl wat skool u go to?

  • beautiful.

    

  • Damn..... I'm speechless

  • My teacher showed us this in class ... Ur amazing.

  • so amazing, ive watched this so many times yet i love it even more everytime i see it. i can only hope to b this good one day. <3<3<3

  • i Love this poem -3

  • I Love this video. My lil bro is going through this and this touched my heart!!!!

  • Amazing <3

  • This is brilliant!

  • Anyone written down wat she's saying I wanna meditate on it pleeaaasssee

  • And I bet you wonder if Heaven’s got a ghetto? Boy you will never know because, attempting to play God and pimping Mother Nature will never get you… High enough to get there.

  • Talk about some really stuff I had chills the entire time

  • this is just so amazing. 

  • ive watched this like 5 times and i still get the chills.

  • you are freaking amazingly wonderful..

  • you're so amazing ! never stop

  • OH MY GOD, THIS WAS AMAZING.

  • What's the name of this poem? or Did she write that herself ?

  • This is so deep.

  • Hi there.

    I disliked this video.

    (Braces himself against the torrent of hate).

    Do you have any questions about myself?

  • @NieProszeNie blah blah blah troll troll troll

  • Mhmm, That was pretty dam impressive

  • I love you.

  • This was incredible. The imagery is so haunting, the flow is so smooth, her voice is so perfect. I've been listening to this over and over.

  • amazing

  • i wish they had a LOVE button

  • Wow.

  • So amazing!

    Both the poem & preformance, wow

    <3

  • she straiiqht kiilled that shiit mann !

  • Amjay T.T

    I love herrr<3

  • geeeeeeeeezus.

  • powerful shit

  • God bless you. AMAZING

  • AMAZING!

  • that was fucking amazing .

  • Nah pajarillo, clr da smoke from ya head n listen again, cus is niggaz like u that she talkn bout, fools who think dat slaingin n gangbangin is a way of life. Fckn dumbass.

  • aw.. someone disliked. )=

  • @laurendeeL

    probably missed the like button lol

    this hit mee hardd yo

    she did good !!!!

  • that was too crazy! damm so powerful, felt everything she said

  • This is powerful.

  • oh my gosh

  • "because in hell you will no longer have your boys willing to die for you , just demons waiting to dance with you , holding out red roses that used to be white before they used them to clean up the messes you made when you were still alive"

    one word , wow .

  • bitch think she gangsta ..O's up, dancin with devils

  • yo! Amjay's the realist.

  • AMJAY .

  • Amjay, wow...

    you're incredible

  • Incredible.

  • This is soooo amazing like wow... i can kinda relate to what you are sayin girl.... but the waaay that you said... woooow

  • how could someone dislike this?

  • Like I don't even have words for this but whoa

  • chills for 4 minutes and 36 seconds!

  • Shakesphere of this generation.

  • Omfg. This made me freeze dead cold. This is beautiful.. Just outstanding.

  • Wow you are skilled and beautiful

  • wow shit, nice!

  • damn that was amazing

  • I watched this so many times. My goodness. She is so amazing. That poem was amazing. I need to meet her.

  • what is her name!!!! i wanna quote from this poem.

  • what is her name? i would like to quote from this!!! its amazing! i

  • @jazzawockeez1 - Amjay.

  • @nicoleub27 oh ok, thank!!!

  • Jaw-droppingly, amazingly, INTENSELY, perfect.

  • I love this. 

  • this is beautiful *Snaps*

  • This is just beautiful. Just amazing. Had my skin tingling the whole time.

  • tears in my eyes. damn girl!

  • Seriously, chilled my skin.

    Keep it up !

  • i know her in real life!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • This touched my heart. <3

  • "Because I don't understand how you see strength in your blacks and reds when you got blacks and blues tattooed all over you, so tell me..." GOD DAMN! LOVE!

  • “… Hell, you would no longer have your boys willing to die for you.Just demons waiting to dance with you. Holding out red roses that used to be white before they used them to clean the messes you made when you were still alive”

    so amazing <3

  • That is so amazing. It left me speechless.

  • seriously? she is amazing. i want to be her best friend.

  • waiting at the bus stop, jamming to some hip-hop, checkin on my wrist watch, clock is running tick tock.

  • Truly amazing

  • I keep listening to this , over , and over and over again!

  • no lie...

    this is the most amazing SPOKEN WORD EVER!

    watching her makes me want to make my performances stronger...

    i admire this strong woman:D

  • just inspirational

  • why do black people kill each other?

  • @carlosHjrzz

    LOL.

  • she has some mad skills that gave me chills.

  • PREACH!! <3

  • Holy FUCK.

  • Damn, 

  • You got heart. *Goose Bums*

  • Tumblr brought me to this video.

  • @KiWiKaYla625 Stanley brought me to this video.

  • very talented and deep meaning...DC are full of poets like you, my friend. Kudos and keep doing what you're doing.

  • worth watchhing every second. damn.

  • O_O holy sh*t that was RAW

  • this is dope beyond comprehension

  • She is amazing. I love poetry slams, and this is so incredible, it's like, chilling.

  • WOW!!! I have just been floored

  • i love the blood motifs throughout...expert! really really strong

  • i am also a new fan :))

  • I have watch all ur songs and poetry over and over just ur swag and the delivery of ur poems and ur talent u have been blessed with so many talents I'm intrigued by ur talent

  • i watch this video so much that i noe this poem its so inticing intricate and full of emotion its so raw nd real at the same time

  • Powerful

  • i love this video it made me cry

  • heaven got a ghetto